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[HeyBlade789]

This will be my episodic fan-fiction about a young officer in C-sec, please comment and tell me what you think,
a taster:
""Velan, eliminate that man, he knows too much" the figure said, his voice like steel,
"Yes sir" Velan the turian said,
"And make sure you can do this Velan, people who fail our operation find themselves in unpleasant situations", the figure walked into the shadows and appeared to dissappear."

Part 1:
http://social.biowar...7892/blog/4267/

Part 2:
http://social.biowar...7892/blog/4292/

Modifié par HeyBlade789, 15 avril 2010 - 11:57 .

[Blackbaron15]

Average enough but not gonna turn any heads.



No offense but I hope your next segment has something that hooks me in I got bored reading this about halfway through.

[HeyBlade789]

Part two up