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[Schratty]

@ Y.H.: Stop being so crabby

@ Caladhiel: Katriona is very striking - I especially like the aggressiveness around her eyes. Not a huge fan of the tattoo, but that's just me Also, I'm sorry to hear about your toolset problems :/

@ Wlydsong: Can't wait to see some new designs

@ SeraphynAngel: Ariana looks noble and kind. A very nice design, for sure. I prefer the white hair, btw

@  Neveri: Aretha is - in a word - awesome. I agree with VirusCat that the thick lips work well with the overall design. A wonderful Gothic-y character.

@ mochen: Again, I just want to reiterate how amazing Tristan is. Don't listen to Mr. Grumpypants Y.H.

@ LadyAly: Hmm...George v2 was looking pretty good, but v3 looks really effeminate. His nose is a little odd-shaped and maybe a hair too long. You might also consider shortening his eyelashes and taking the shine off of his lips. He reminds me slightly of a previous character of mine: Vaughn. Vaughn was also intended to look like a womanizing, arrogant jack****.  Although, he wasn't so much a bratty noble as a daring troublemaker. I don't know if he'll you help at all, but here he is again:

Modifié par Schratty, 07 juillet 2010 - 04:49 .

[Tyrax Lightning]

Wyldsong: Spiffy Helm! Though it looks like it doesn't give consideration to short-Nosed people.



Neveri: I dunno if poofy Lips fit such an awesomely 'wild' design.



VirusCat: I'm willing to give the Eye Position change a try!



LadyAly: Now he looks like he's trying to keep a 'Poker Face' on him to hide his plotting & scheming.



mochen: *gasp* Alistair's evil twin brother! Or maybe not so twin... Need a side by side comparison between the 2.

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

Schratty: I don't mean to snap at you. Honestly, I don't.

but I'm gonna be damn crabby if I want to be. actual contributions <_< only ones I have really.



Unlike VC I don't give a sh-- if armor is sexified, but the vanilla exposed neck / chest is kind of stupid.



My "Morrigan Elf."

Modifié par yasuraka.hakkyou, 07 juillet 2010 - 11:40 .

[sailorsaturnz]

 @Neveri - Woah! I'm absolutely in love with Aretha! She pulls that hairstyle off nicely, which is something I can't ever manage with my characters.

@LadyAly - I'm digging the eyes on George!

@mochen - Mmm, Tristan is quite the looker! Wouldn't mind swapping Alistair for him, heh!

@SeraphynAngel - Although I do think both hair colors work, I definitely prefer the silver on Ariana. She's a very pretty Cousland!

I lurk waayy more than I post on here, heh. Anyways, here's some screen caps of my characters:

Alessa, my blood mage:





Moira, my assassain dualist rogue thingy!:




I'm creating a new character as we speak. Kinda having problems with her, then again I've been staring at the computer screen for the past 2 hours. :/

[Tyrax Lightning]

yasuraka.hakkyou: I wish you mentally get well soon! I've been mentally a bit under the weather too for awhile, but i've been striving to keep it outta this Thread. Noone needs my problems, except for my Toolset Troubles.

Both of them look spiffy! Elf morrigan might benefit from a tad more Cheek to fill out her lower Face just a smidgen, here's Canon Morrigan for reference:


sailorsaturnz: Alessa's exotic!

Moira is a cute, yet sly lookin little bugger!

Screenshot your unfinished Character from a few angles, & we can see what we can do for Feedback Aid. Goodness knows, i've been needing loads of it!

Speaking of which, I thought about the Feedback on Vashidan's Name, & maybe it does have merit... The goof off of his name could wear off partway through the Adventure, then what would he do? I'm not a tough bugger at Names.

So... Here's Conan Cousland, V3.0:



Of course, the renaming, just to get that outta the way, Eyes lowered to minimum Height, & tweaked the Eyes Back/Forward & Eye Squint.

Hope this finished up his Face, I think he will definitely want a Tattoo afterwards.

Modifié par Tyrax Lightning, 07 juillet 2010 - 02:35 .

[Tyrax Lightning]

Anri, V10.0:



Too many changes to list, by far... I really did bite off more than I could chew on Anri. I got serious professional assistance with this Revision. I'll repeat myself, Anri feels like a Community Project now. I woulda crashed & burned on her without all of your aid, all you awesome people!

I'm gonna be afraid to attempt another Elf for quite awhile... I have a hell of a lot to learn about 'subtelty', & 'patience'. Perhaps a 3rd thing as well, that slips my mind atm. (I hate my Memory.)

Maybe I still need to practice more on Humans.

Modifié par Tyrax Lightning, 07 juillet 2010 - 03:12 .

[Zeleen]

wow! had to scroll through a few pages to catch up!!
thanks everyone for the kind remarks on Zeleen... of my characters she's my favorite so far.

@ Tyrax... looks like Anri is done... she looks SWEET.. I like Conan but don't see any family likeness.

@sailorsaturnz.. Alessa is stunning, and from what I can see at the angle Moira is a beauty.
@Caladhiel .. your Dalish is awesome really nice composition...  I hope your TS is working properly now

@Petehog..  Your Asian girl on page 105 is the best so far!

@Wyldsong.. Riana.. man! she looks good in the helmet.. what armor is she wearing anyways?

@seraphynangel..  Ariana is very sweet and pretty, I like her better with the lighter hair..

@Never! Aretha.. wow, a very unique character.. I like her

@ VC...  Love all your "Asian inspired chicks"

@LadyAly.. about George, from the nose down his face looks a little "pinched"   Freya.. You absolutely captured the down-trodden look here..  Great design!  Terra v2.. I like the new tat & lighter color.. she's gorgeous!
@mochen..  Tristan.. the Bad Boy you want to take home Kane.. a capital BA on this guy (bad ****)  Twyla.. wow..innocence, beauty all in one.  Iona.. you wanted Ethereal, you got it!  your creations are awesome!

@Drewj1988.. not sure how to comment here..  my fave is #3

@Myra11..  I really like your blond character..

@Relshar..  you may want to lift her nose a bit and then the mouth and chin.

@Axekix..  your new CE is a real Cutie

@Klarabella.. Breanna.. looks like the toolset gave your character more character, I'd say improvement

@Schratty.. Love, love  Strom, but hate the outfit

@ YH.. you have some cool characters.. should show off more ofter

Modifié par Zeleen, 07 juillet 2010 - 05:07 .

[LadyAly]

@Mochen Tristan is indeed fantastic -  Y.H. seems to hate Alistair ??  Tristan is the second side, the black soul - and he is damn sexy  

@Y.H. I'm glad you don't like George. I don't like him, too. 
You know I like your Elf's, Rhaelynn is still badass  -
but honestly Morrigans face is too long for my taste - and she looks in this armor without the hint of a breast like a guy who attempts to be a female  - Sorry dear  In your upload Avatar she looks much better.
I guess you were for some reasons really grumpy last night  

@sailorsaturnz Pretty Lady's *thumbs*

@Tyrax   Anri is ... she looks ubercute now ... DON'T change anything !

@Zeleen - thanks for the compliments :happy:

@Schratty and all the comments - Pro and Contra - to George
 It gave me a grin - honestly. He shall not win a Model Contest - not at all.
So I think he is pretty realistic - some like him others despite him - 
Its like in real life - he is simple an a.s.s.h.o.l.e  and so I'm happy that some of you can't stand him *grins*
Tyrax has captured his personality very well. A shame for  Cousland isn't it ?
If  my design is able to radiate this personality then I guess i have done a good job 
Anyway - I will change the nose a little bit and his lashes shorten - but not more.

Modifié par LadyAly, 07 juillet 2010 - 12:07 .

[Schratty]

@ LadyAly: Haha, well I just assumed since he was a womanizer, you were going for "handsome".  Although, I've known some butt-ugly dudes who were up to their elbows in women. I think it has more to do with "charm" than looks...oh, and money. Lots of money

@ Y.H.: Haha, I'm gonna call you Mr. Crabapple from now on

@ Tyrax: My main suggestion for Conan is to push his mouth forward (on the profile view it looks like maybe it's a pushed a smidge too far back). I like his overall design, though. Very unique

As for Anri, she has undergone a metamorphosis like a caterpillar to a butterfly I think it's time for some dang in-game screens now!!!!!

Modifié par Schratty, 07 juillet 2010 - 05:10 .

[Axekix]

@Mochen:  I'm really diggin that "dark" Alistair design.  If he looked like that in game (and had a personality to match) he'd get used in my games a lot more

[nos_astra]

mochen wrote...
Ok, I started this design off as sort of an alternative 'bad boy' version of Alistair. But along the way it sort of morphed into something else. I guess I should give him a name so I'll call him Tristan.

This looks a bit like Alistair in his fourties.

[Neveri]

@ Schratty, Sailorsaturnz and Zeleen, thanks all for the kind words. :>



@ Tyrax Lightning, I just have a personal liking to poofy lips, but everyone has their preferences :>. Maybe she's just gotten hit in the face so much she's got constant swollen lips. <.<



Seeing as Aretha's game is over, I decided to make a new elf, Dalish this time. Tried to make her somewhat more femenine and a bit sad/vulnerable looking. And yes, again, poofy lips. I like them.



So, here is Annabel. Morrigan's robes might not make for the most practical fighting attire, but I do love them. And I think they suit her, dyed a bit lighter than their original state.

[Otherworld_Odd]

It's not a very big picture, because I clearly used my avatar. Lol. But I figured I'd post him for starters (I play on 360, in the process of downloading the character creator as I type this.) I'll remake him and post him later as a bigger picture file.

His name is Animus, an elven mage specializing mainly in Entropy and Blood Magic, who also specialized in royally destroying his friendship with every companion (besides Morrigan, go figure.) Didn't do it on purpose, it just turned out that way as I played his character. All in all, an evil guy who always tends to do the right thing at the end somehow.

Modifié par Otherworld_Odd, 07 juillet 2010 - 12:04 .

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

mochen: it's not you at all, or anyone here. it's my summer job.



Neveri: hmm. I'm not a fan of vulnerable elves (or the super poofy lips ), but that's entirely personal preference.

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

sorry for seemingly taking it out on everyone.

[Otherworld_Odd]

yasuraka.hakkyou wrote...

sorry for seemingly taking it out on everyone.

I just got here so you're okay with me, if that means anything.

Modifié par Otherworld_Odd, 07 juillet 2010 - 12:16 .

[LadyAly]

yasuraka.hakkyou wrote...

sorry for seemingly taking it out on everyone.

We all have those times:kissing:

[Schratty]

klarabella wrote...

This looks a bit like Alistair in his fourties.

You know what they say: men are like wine - they get better with age


@ Mr. Crabapple: Sorry to hear that *hugs* I, too, like your Morrigan elf. You did a great job capturing her likeness

@  Sailorsaturnz: I'm so sorry, I seem to have missed you the first time around Alessa is very striking: well-proportioned and elegant, but she also seems to have a certain darkness to her as well. Also, those white noble robes look excellent on her. Beautiful!

@ Neveri: I really do like the "bee-stung" lips. Although, I once got lectured by a complete stranger on the nexus for using them on a preset character. Ridiculous, but I digress Annabel also has a certain sadness to her, but I suppose that's fitting for an oppressed elf. Nice work

Otherworld_Odd: Well, it's kind of hard to get a feel for a character with just the avatar picture, but I am looking forward to some more pictures of Animus I have great respect for anyone who can pull off a decent elf - especially a male one.

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

Schratty wrote...

@ Mr. Crabapple

Ha. you're so funny <_<

[Wyldsong]

 Thanks for the thumbs on Riena all.

As for her armor, it's the warden armor as per:

http://www.dragonage...file.php?id=577

I need to work up some screenshots of her in action...downloaded the Paladin Specialization for her, and I am loving it.  Especially using Bless Weapon and having her sword glow like the sun.  That specialization is kind of what got me on the train of thought of coming up with more, since I am of the mind, the more, the better.  So far, I've got ideas for a Combat Psion, Demon Mage, and Brawler.  I've got someone helping me figure out the logistics of it all, and will hopefully have this stuff figured soon.  I'm not trying to reinvent the wheel or anything with these specializations, so basically no custom animations or anything, but I wanted to throw out a few options for people.

As for new designs...maybe after I get some specializations under my belt I'll finally work on my two Dalish Elves, Amage and Ianew.

@LadyAly - I agree with Neveri.  Your Cousland does look greasy, in a good character way.  Good work.

@Mochen - You are right, Tristan did end up being something else entirely.  Looks like he could be Alistair's father.  I like it.

@Schratty - Just FYI, I like your design on Vaughn.  I get the trouble maker, womanizing vibe there.

@Yasu - The Morrigan Elf is pretty close.  You captured that "I really don't give a s**t" look fairly well there.

@Sailor - I like Alessa, but she just doesn't scream Blood Mage to me.  She looks a little too pure.  But she is a beautiful character regardless.

@Tyrax - Don't give up on designing elves.  You've got something there.  It took me weeks to get my elf Tsyndria to get the right look.  The main comment I can think to add at the moment would be the tat.  It just seems a little "busy" for lack of a better word.  It may be a bit much.  Personally, for me, the blue on blue (hair and tat) is a little much.  Other than that, I'd say on the base facial structure, she is coming along nicely.

@Neveri - Some good screenshots of Annabel.  She does look sad=(

@Otherworld - I am on board with Schratty.  See if you can work up some in game screenies.

Modifié par Wyldsong, 07 juillet 2010 - 02:13 .

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

thanks for the comments on Elfy Morrigan all.

[Schratty]

@ Y.H.: Pfft, you know you like it I have a soft spot for curmudgeons. Sometimes, you just remind me of an old man standing on his front porch, shaking his cane, and yelling at kids to get off his lawn.

@ Wyldsong: Thanks so much!

Tristan's awesomeness continued... He kind of makes me think of what Alistair would look like years after DA:O if the pc hardened him and/or made the ultimate sacrifice - leaving him to rule Ferelden alone. Hardened by heartache and weathered by time.

Modifié par Schratty, 07 juillet 2010 - 04:45 .

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

Schratty: it wouldn't be a cane, it would be a shotgun.

[Schratty]

yasuraka.hakkyou wrote...

Schratty: it wouldn't be a cane, it would be a shotgun.

You, sir, are fantastic.