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#2676
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Schratty: fair enough. I swear, kids these days...(tho I'm probably one of the youngest posters here. lol?).

first page I've started in a while too.

Modifié par yasuraka.hakkyou, 08 juillet 2010 - 01:55 .


#2677
Zeleen

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HELLLPPP!

I am working on my first Dwarf.. he's a Noble warrior.. so far I do like him but,

I can't get his beard to fit! It looks like he's eating his mustache . the toolset will not let me lower his mouth..

if I do and then put the beard on.. up his mouth goes.. what gives..



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I know he needs more work besides the beard issue

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#2678
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Sorry for the delay, I seemed to miss a lot since last night! Thank you everyone for the kind comments on Moira and Alessa! ^_^ 

@mochen - I say go for it, if you want to! Your characters have such a natural beauty to them, I'm quite taken with them! :D

I was going to post another character to try and get some feedback, but decided I didn't like her and scrapped it. Then tried making an elf...then scrapped THAT.  D: Hopefully I'll get another design up on here by work tomorrow, heh.

Modifié par sailorsaturnz, 08 juillet 2010 - 03:25 .


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@sailorsaturnz



You have to set the value of Oghren a bit lower. That will fix the beard problem.

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Zeleen

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@ Petehog... yes THANK YOU!

#2681
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My Characters:

Aedan
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Alim
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Duran
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Elissa
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Leonie
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Sangaril
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#2682
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Meet Vorand the "golden boy" of the Aeducans  **he is always 'well groomed**
I plan to 2h him.. but will be a strange way for me to play
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comments and suggestions always welcomed..

Modifié par Zeleen, 08 juillet 2010 - 04:04 .


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@Tyrax Anri is looking much better, the tattoo is very busy but if you're set on it then that is your perogative to do so. An adjustment I can recommend would be to try and balance her lips out a bit more, either expand the top part or draw up the bottom. Don't be too hard on yourself though it takes time and it's almost a constant cycle of revisions, I've redesigned characters many times over. My Spirit Healer Ama is probably the result of nearly 30 versions and 4 total redesigns, experience with the sliders leads you to develop more advanced methods of facial shape generation.

@Mochen If you want to I say release them as .mor files. In that state you retain control over your work but allow others to enjoy it as well. I released a few of my designs a while ago as presets, and dispite the constant requests for the actual morphs I didn't find it too bad overall. I think one time somebody ripped off my entire mod right down to how I did my pictures but they got banned before I even really knew what was going on. Even for a relatively limited designer like myself (all my characters are female!) I've got over 600 downloads. If you wanted to release your characters I'm sure they'd find an appreciative audience.

@Petehog I would say Version D is the better option. Sketch is a quite unassuming person, a nervous mage without anywhere else to go. He should very much retain a sort of neutral appearance without appearing overly masculine.

As for your Leliana morph, honestly I wouldn't bother myself. She's only a few years younger in the DLC and I used your version 11 SA Leliana in the DLC and she worked just fine. I can see an alternate hairstyle version, the one you picked would work quite well but facial geometry changes are risking it since she's still Leliana at the end of the day.

@DrewJ Your characters looks good, in general I'd warn against over complication of faces. It can be hard to balance agressive scars and elaborate tattoos, since they tend to really catch the eye. This can work to your advantage and disadvantage, personally I think the more simplistic designs I saw earlier for Sangaril were superior to the current direction you've taken her in. I thought the more harried look with the hair over her eyes, suited your mage better than the chasind-morrigan-witch look of her latest version. There's an old saying that in order for great art to be made it takes two people, an artist and a person to knock him out when it's done. That's not to say the new version is bad, but she already was fantastic and I don't know if I like the new one as much.

Leonie looks well done, an older bard from Orlais I'd say. As for Elissa I need a better shot of her face, I think she looks good but I can't really get a clear view. Your males look great, but I can't in good conscience give you advice since I don't think I'm any good at male characters.

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I have a very tired head with nasty headaches (( and no i wasn't drunk last night ;P )) - so will comment on all a bit laterz.



@Petehog - I played through and for me it is clear D, second place B

#2685
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 Alright, so before I go to bed I want to post some pics of my new character... well character in the making, heh. I'm trying to decide between these two hair styles/colors:

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The second one has to be one of my favorites, yet I can't ever get it to work with any of my faces! D: I dunno if it will work in this case though.
I'm also thinking about lowering the brows a bit, to make her look more stern/determined/angsty!

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This is "Pretty Boy" Loryck.. (he hates the nickname) He is a charmer and Noble women flock to him for his "bedroom eyes" a theif in the night so to speak
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Modifié par Zeleen, 08 juillet 2010 - 08:39 .


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Hello all,

I am new here. I thought I would share my most recent character.

Her name is Una and she loves to dual-wield daggers.

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Modifié par megalust, 08 juillet 2010 - 07:02 .


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Crabby Alistair version 2. I changed the face quite a bit to make him look tougher.

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Modifié par Petehog, 08 juillet 2010 - 06:47 .


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@Zeleen

I like the dwarf rendition you've made. It's well done.

In my opinion, dwarf males are the most difficult race to redesign. I haven't been able to design them with ease. I just hate that it resets the cheeks, mouth and jaw when I put a beard on a male dwarf.

@drewj1988

I like the look of Duran. He has a unique look to him and he doesn't look like any male dwarves I've seen so far.

Regarding Alim, he looks cool. Facial hair is a double-edged sword. It makes the design look more unique and makes them more aggressive. But it gets the disdain of those who are into lore.

@LadyAly

I think I may very well make it "D". It seems to be tallying the most votes right now and on Dragon Age Nexus. I hope you get well soon.

@sailorsaturnz

Pretty girl.I like the long haired version.

@megalust

Welcome. I believe your picture may not be showing up.

Modifié par Petehog, 08 juillet 2010 - 07:55 .


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aha! Crabby Alistair needs a hair cut... (JK) I like him!

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Petehog wrote...
Crabby Alistair version 2. I changed the face quite a bit to make him look tougher.

Oh, nice one. Me likey! Especially the haircut, somehow it works. (Maybe he should pull it back so it won't interfere with the fighting.) :lol:

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@ Petehog - Aha, evil Alistairs are fun to make! Regarding your Sketch redesign. I haven't finished playing Leliana's song yet, but I would vote version D. I think version C is a better design, but I don't think it would work for Sketch for some reason.

@ Schratty - Old man Crabapple is great! He's a cool design anyway, but as YH has inspired him it's even better! haha

@ Noir - Christie is very pretty. She has a calmness and looks very sure of herself.

@ LadyAly - *hug*

@ sailorsaturnz - The second hairstyle is better. She looks more unique. And very pretty too!

@ Zeleen - Loryck has a great look. You worked his personality into his face features really well :)

Thanks to everyone who gave feedback on my character release idea. I will do it I think. I'll hopefully get round to doing it before the weekend.^_^

Modifié par mochen, 08 juillet 2010 - 08:11 .


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All righty..D it is.

I'm going to sleep now.

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Modifié par Petehog, 08 juillet 2010 - 08:19 .


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Oh man!! Males are soooo hard..

This is Skelyr.. my male rogue Dalish..

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can you believe.. it took me hours to get this far with him!

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@Neveri Annabel  looks very fragile and vulnerable. I noticed the eyeballs having a very strange effect -they looking .. mmmh.. misty ?? 

@Noir201 Stunning, but strong - excellent !

@Otherworld_Odd Bigger screenies plz ? :)  

@Relshar Your dwarf Lady looks al ready much better - but I agree with Schratty. Raise her nose a little bit.

@mochen GO for it dear !!
@Schratty Your Mr. Crabapple looks fantastic - :happy: 
@drewji All your Creations are very good - but I <3 Leonie - old fashioned strong Orlesian bard !! Fantastic !!

@sailorsaturnz Version 2 looks pretty - I would use it, its a unusual hairstyle and works not often on a face. You made it work :) 

@Zeleen Both dwarfs are excellent with the written background *thumbs*
About Zelyr I'm not sure - something looks wrong - can't put my finger on it yet.

@Megalust I opened the picture :blink: where are her eyes ????

@Petehog ;) crabby Alistair V2 sees then always only the half danger - makes it easier to fight :D 

Thanks to you and mochen, but I guess the headaches wont go away today *sigh*

Modifié par LadyAly, 08 juillet 2010 - 11:26 .


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@ Noir, Christie looks very good, I love her eyes, she looks very confident.

@Zeleen, I think your dwarves are very well made, I love Vorand, I'm a sucker for a well groomed dwarf, hah. Loryck looks quite the ladies man, and a bit.. trustworthy. Your elf looks good as well, and yes, I can very well believe it took you hours to get that far, males are hard to make. :<

@sailorsaturnz, she looks very lovely, I think she looks good in both hairstyles, but the long one is a bit more unique.

@drewj1988, some nice designs there, but I think my favorite among the bunch is Duran, a different take on a male dwarf, and well made.


I tried to make me a human gal last night, something I rarely do, it makes me hate the character creation screen quite a bit most of the time. 
I ended up getting heavily inspired by a character from ''the Wheel of Time'' series, Berelain, a quite awesome noble woman, at least I think she is. 
Personally I'm quite happy about how she turned out, especially since I normally don't make humans. 

Berelain Cousland
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#2697
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@Neveri Oh - interesting design - where you got the cloth for her ?

I like her features, but the very dark eye make up draws too much intention. I would lighten that a little bit

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@ LadyAly, hm yes, I supposed Annabel does have somewhat misty eyes in those shots, they're not though, more, golden'ish. She looks the part of fragile and vulnerable, but she's more unstable than Aretha ever was. I blame the taint, it got to her brain before she got cured. <.<

As for Berelain, It's more the light that makes it look that dark, and seeing as I don't have the toolset, I can't go about changing things after it's made, and I've already gotten somewhat far into the game with her. The clothes are from http://www.dragonage...file.php?id=889 and dyed red with http://www.dragonage...ile.php?id=1390



Bit better shot of Annabel with some sun in her eyes.

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#2699
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CHECK THIS OUT

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:o Can't wait for that!

Modifié par mochen, 08 juillet 2010 - 02:48 .