marquiseondore: For your 'took days' Elf, I think her Jaw needs narrowed a bit, & raised a bit. You might also need to raise the Mouth up a little after the Jaw is raised. Then we can see how she's faring afterwards.
Neveri: Ahh, ok. Dalish Leather will suffice then.
Hedera's 'Dalish Fascination' cover story looks plausible. If she was among the Elves working in the main city area like some others do, like for example a Tavern Waitress, she could 'overhear' Dalish info from gossiping travelers. I bet it wouldn't be hard for her to do the overhearing either as long as she doesn't fall behind in her work or do anything attention-grabbing.
VirusCat: Patience... It's normal for me to have less time for fun stuff on Weekends. (Yes, I know that sounds weird, but I have a weird life.)
megalust: Ohh, if only there was a way for her 'dark Eyes' to be set as normal Eyes, & have some kinda trigger cause her dark Eyes to 'light up' into her prior light Eyes she had before. That would be so cool!
With that said, her light Eyes suited her better, those dark Eyes make her look like her Willpower & Spirit have been crushed & she's lost all light in her soul... as if she may have fallen to & been possessed by a Demon. Consider getting Pineappletree's Vibrant Colors for your Eye needs, that Mod includes additional Eye Textures. I vouch for it's awesomeness! :happy:
NubianIbex: I agree with prior suggestions to small the Eyes, enlarge the Nose, & to add to these suggestions, also consider Tattooing her. Optionally, consider narrowing her Jaw just a smidgen, & moving her Chin forward a little.
tmp7704: I like that version of Marjolaine! She looks primed & ready for a seduction on an assasination target!
AvatarHunter: I'm not sure, but to me, it looks like Sahara's Jaw might be a little too wide for the Height of her Face. It may need narrowed a little. Also, consider giving her a smidgen more Cheek Width.
Vincent looks like the kinda guy that would be stern & dutiful, yet capable of being friendly in non-serious circumstances. He's got character, I think he's ready to go.
I'm impressed! It looks like ya gave Nicholai a large prominent Chin & made it work on him! He also has good character & looks complete.
Zeleen: ...

EEEEWWWWW!!!

Those Pigtails look GROSS on him! How could ya do that to him!!? I dunno about that Ponytail either... That can work on him only if ya switch his Weapon Focus to GreatSwords so he can possibly look kinda Elf Samurai. Otherwise, I have to give BOTH of those 2 Hairstyles a fail. My apologies if this is offensive. Consider a 'Wild' looking Hair for him instead, so he can look like a handsome, dashing wilderness dweller/hunter.
Quinton might just be done now... I don't see anywhere to improve.
Draden's got character! Though he looks in his 30s to 40s & that might look a bit awkward in the City Elf Origin.
LadyAly: Reisha still looks great! I think having her Lip Color match her Hair Color is working for her! She looks like a Noble Arcane Lady!

The non-Hair matching Lip Colors work too, but not quite as well.
Mayheem's lookin good, but I think it may be worth a try to enlarge his Mouth a little. That's about it.
mochen: I like what you're doing with Locien! I think he would work better if both of his Lips were narrow instead of just the upper Lip. Having a very thin upper Lip & a very poofy lower Lip looks kinda odd. Also consider narrowing his Mouth a little. He also might have a little 'Chimp Mouth' interfering with his looks, but i've never been able to figure out how this effect comes about or any guaranteed ways to deal with it, so I dunno how to advise ya there.
Bryony looks the part perfectly! Her Face in that Screenie suggests to me that she may have natural talent in sneakiness...
yasuraka.hakkyou: Your version of Leliana's adorable! Her 3rd Screenie's hilarious!

It looks like she's had over 10 Bottles of Alchohol & is totally plastered! Her 5th Screenie looks as if she's been angered & she's getting very cheeky-mouthed in retaliation!
Schratty: Patience, Schratty! I can't rush to stuff like this & blow off my rl stuff!
Modifié par Tyrax Lightning, 11 juillet 2010 - 05:47 .