The Character Show Off
#5251
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 09:14
The only thing which is bothering me a little is the unnatural green eye color. I bet she would look much more awesome with more realistic green eyes.
#5252
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 09:32
LadyAly: I have posted two characters near the bottom of the previous page http://social.biowar...616/210#4787202, do you mind to give me some comments?
I plan to place the white Mord Sith robe onto the Chantry version of Andraste while dark Mord Sith robe onto the real version. What do you think?
AvatarHunter: Thank you for the compliment of the idea. Though I'm still weak on making female morphs, I will revise them a bit. I hope that I can make them looks better.
Yes, that particular faical structure is rarely used. You have put it into good use on Aeron and she looks exotic! Nice!
Modifié par Starlight, 14 septembre 2010 - 09:42 .
#5253
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 09:47
I know I'm a few pages behind but this design is absolutely gorgeous. I love it!Schratty wrote...
Charlie
This is my current WIP for an alternate (black) Bryce Cousland morph:

#5254
Guest_mochen_*
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 09:48
Guest_mochen_*
Your 2 boys are very nice.
@ LadyAly - Sazuka is different now for sure. Just like what I did with Mirabelle I suppose. The changes don't make the design better or worse, just different. She was so cute I don't think it is possible to make her any cuter!
Ah now you've done the thing with your Hawke, I think you were right the first time. He was very good, and the smirk gave him a confident look. Sorry about that.
@ Tyrax - I actually like Valerie. She's a good example of your personal style which is great and very refreshing. Her proportions look fine to me. You always manage to make faces that stand out...and it's not just the hair colour making me say that.
@ Saerwen - Nice Leliana.
@ Schratty - Good job with In Hee. She's a nice design. Whilst she doesn't really conform to the asian perception of beauty, I think she's cute, with a hint of danger in her eyes.
@ AvatarHunter - Aeron is interesting. I think her proportions are realistic and the jawline works. It's hard to give constructive criticsm on your designs. They are all so wonderfully normal looking. I will say you have an excellent grasp of proportions and every face you do ends up looking different from the others
@ Dave - She's a nice design, but I agree with LadyAly about the eye colour.. maybe something a bit more natural (petehogs green eyes maybe?) would help soften her face a tad, and make her more feminine?
Modifié par mochen, 14 septembre 2010 - 01:12 .
#5255
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 09:54
And thank you for your comment about Ethan and Dominic.
Modifié par Starlight, 14 septembre 2010 - 09:55 .
#5256
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 10:52
About the robe - I think this would fit perfect - black and white ! BTW - I thought the robe isn't dyeable ?
@Axekix welcome back - and with a strong design, too *thumbs* handsome guy he is
@mochen Hey - nothing to say sorry - it was worth the try to found out if it works :)but failed in the end I would say.
About Sazuka - it's not possible to make her exactly 100 % like in the CC - but let say she is grown up since the harrowing and the Blight;)
Modifié par LadyAly, 14 septembre 2010 - 10:56 .
#5257
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 11:28
#5258
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 11:36
Haha, thanks! I see you guys haven't slowed down at allLadyAly wrote...
@Axekix welcome back - and with a strong design, too *thumbs* handsome guy he is
@Charion: Bastet is a cutey. Nice work.
Modifié par Axekix, 14 septembre 2010 - 11:36 .
#5259
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 11:44
#5260
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 12:05
I don't dare to use the Mod's for, though. They always mess up my NaChaya
Modifié par LadyAly, 14 septembre 2010 - 12:08 .
#5261
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 02:29
@Mochen Thanks for the comment and I suspect if it is somewhat hard to critique my designs then I am getting my point across well. It took a while but it is nice to see that others can understand where I am coming from now with my proportions since most find them to be unusual due to no one else using this approach to face structures. I just look at it as uncharted territory that I decided to set up shop in and I am the only one living way out here.
Modifié par AvatarHunter, 14 septembre 2010 - 02:29 .
#5262
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 03:12
Axekix: interesting take on Bryce. I think he looks a little too squinty / annoyed in that shot, but could just be me. *shrug*
#5263
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 04:49
LadyAly wrote...
@Xirbeus Emi is a quite pretty Dalish design, nice armor, too.
The only thing which is bothering me a little is the unnatural green eye color. I bet she would look much more awesome with more realistic green eyes.
First of all Thanks for the quick feedback everyone. I whipped that morph fairly quick. In the most part I know a lot of the ranges in setting that would work for at least Elf and Human females. I haven't did to many dwarves and have handful of men characters.
Two things Petehog's Dragonage redesign, before it came out, we had a lot of work to do to pretty up everyone. Then he did work hard and BAM! most of the hardwork already done. When I did this I just realized the draco glossy lips textures. Must of fallen sleep on that one.
As for the eyes, I took chance with the old textures, normal texture with green eyes. So per your advice I changed her eyes to the new standard draco_greendrk03, I believe.
So see what you think, not sure if I accidently changed her skin color

Thanks,
Dave
#5264
Guest_mochen_*
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 05:08
Guest_mochen_*
Modifié par mochen, 14 septembre 2010 - 05:12 .
#5265
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 05:27
@mochen Wooooot ... what a design. She reminds me strongly at the wonderful Natalie Portman in the movie V for Vendetta
I still feel burned out and should probably stop to make designs - but today I met a beautiful woman from Kenia - and well - suddenly I wanted to make a Shamane, maybe Chasind ?
What is a real bad sign for the burnout --- I can't think of any story or background ...
but here is Mwarembi
Modifié par LadyAly, 14 septembre 2010 - 05:28 .
#5266
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 05:48
@Xirberus: I think I actually liked the intense color, made her look unique and fit very nicely with the hair and lip colors.
@Avatarhunter: Actually Aeron doesn't look that androgynous to me, despite her wide jaw and no-nonsense look there is something in her that makes me wnat to hug her. :wub:Excellent design anyway.
I hate that armor BTW:mellow:
@LadyAly: Mwarembi is really an exotic beauty!<3<3<3 But I think her tattoo is not complementing her face.
Finally did my rendition of Lady hawke, I didn't before because the scar everyone been using is bugging me, it's a SMEAR, not an angry deep cut. So tried my hand at tattoo making and camp up with this proud failure
I tried to conserve some features of the default Marian hawke, but widely diverged in others. The smear I tried to keep as close to original as possible, and the face structure too somewhat. But the overall look and personality isn't the same.


Meet Kiki, eccentric and full of energy to a fault. She is a good person, but being too impulsive and quick to blurt out what she's thinking,she's not someone one would put in a leading position anywhere. This fiery redhead prefers to shoot arrows first and ask questions later. Despite being quite beautiful, she is a total tomboy and drives her sister Bethany insane.


Anyway please tell me if you notice any problems with the tattoo. Front shot:

(Ignore the forehead thing it's just for fun:D)
Modifié par Nowshin, 14 septembre 2010 - 05:53 .
#5267
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 07:59
wow! some great new designs... I will have my work cut out for me when I get home tonight!
#5268
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 09:35
Saerwen: She's cute! She looks like a 'what if' Leliana if she had perhaps been a Bard that never took to Orlesian Intrigues & lived entirely by her traveling & entertaining alone!
Schratty: In Hee looks cute! She might be Companion-worthy!
LadyAly: Wow! Really? Her Face is still too long with her Jaw up .75? Strange... Anri didn't have to go through this... I'll see what I can do.
Sparta Old looks like he's enjoying the sight of hot lightly dressed ladies, the Sparta New looks like a Male Supermodel dressing up as a Spartan for a Photo Shoot. I suggest 3 changes: 1: Raise his Eyebrows a bit to give him a more serious look. 2: I don't think this Eye Shape is working on him, try one that has rounder Eyes, then maximize Eye Squint. 3: Widen his Nose Tip & Nose Bridge to make his Nose look more muscled, this is especially interfering with his Design, a Male Model Nose on a Character intended to be a mighty Warrior. Big Muscled Warriors have Big Muscled Noses. Hope this helps.
Mwarembi looks like an exotic beauty! I can imagine her having a similar personality to FF13's Oerba Yun Fang!
badboy64: No need for her to be bashful! Alistair's a baby, so she's gonna be the strong one!
AvatarHunter: Uh oh... it's happening again... Thread Division over how to tweak my Elf... It looks like i'm gonna need multiple V3.0s of Valerie...
Aeron's cute! She looks like the strict, no nonsense, by-the-book kinda person!
Xirbeus: My apologies, but to me, Emi looks like she might be a copy of one of the Elves Modeling the Phoenix Armory Mod.
Axekix: He's looking good, like a dignified, mature gentleman!
mochen: Many thanks! Looks like I should keep a copy of this Revision of Valerie then.
Your Subject 0 looks spot on perfect!
Chairon de Celeste: Bastet looks like a mischievous, spunky troublemaker! :happy:
Nowshin: Marian looks like a Ferelden Girl trying to live like a Chasind! & she's hot!
#5269
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 10:15

This is the original character in Mass Effect 2, as you can see Mochen really nailed it.
Modifié par adneate, 14 septembre 2010 - 10:17 .
#5270
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 10:39
#5271
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 11:12
CdC: Bastet looks nice! I especially like the angel taken in second screenshots.
mochen: Subject Zero is impressive! Although I'm not a fan of ME, she is stunning!
LadyAly: Mwarembi is exotic. I espeically like the choice of tattoo and out-fit. Which matches her features.
Nowshin: How could you put the dot onto her face? It doesn't looks like from any freckles mod...
ok...I put some of my latest work here. As I haven't got any idea about the background stroies yet, I will fill-in the stories several hours later.
(Click onto the image to see the larger version)
Andraste (Chantry Version) V2 <--- Thanks LadyAly for the suggestion of outfit

Andraste (Real Version) V2

Athoros <--- Thanks LadyAly and Nowshin for the introduction of this nice out-fit

Lorren

Lorren and Athoros

This is for fun. Here comes the Sacred Band of Thebes!

Kohan
Modifié par Starlight, 14 septembre 2010 - 11:14 .
#5272
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 11:29
Tyrax Lightning wrote...
Starlight: I'll see what I can do.
Saerwen: She's cute! She looks like a 'what if' Leliana if she had perhaps been a Bard that never took to Orlesian Intrigues & lived entirely by her traveling & entertaining alone!
Schratty: In Hee looks cute! She might be Companion-worthy!
LadyAly: Wow! Really? Her Face is still too long with her Jaw up .75? Strange... Anri didn't have to go through this... I'll see what I can do.
Sparta Old looks like he's enjoying the sight of hot lightly dressed ladies, the Sparta New looks like a Male Supermodel dressing up as a Spartan for a Photo Shoot. I suggest 3 changes: 1: Raise his Eyebrows a bit to give him a more serious look. 2: I don't think this Eye Shape is working on him, try one that has rounder Eyes, then maximize Eye Squint. 3: Widen his Nose Tip & Nose Bridge to make his Nose look more muscled, this is especially interfering with his Design, a Male Model Nose on a Character intended to be a mighty Warrior. Big Muscled Warriors have Big Muscled Noses. Hope this helps.
Mwarembi looks like an exotic beauty! I can imagine her having a similar personality to FF13's Oerba Yun Fang!
badboy64: No need for her to be bashful! Alistair's a baby, so she's gonna be the strong one!
AvatarHunter: Uh oh... it's happening again... Thread Division over how to tweak my Elf... It looks like i'm gonna need multiple V3.0s of Valerie...
Aeron's cute! She looks like the strict, no nonsense, by-the-book kinda person!
Xirbeus: My apologies, but to me, Emi looks like she might be a copy of one of the Elves Modeling the Phoenix Armory Mod.Though the Morrigan Glare Pic is cool! :happy:
Actually I based her from the photos from the Phoenix Armor set, the guy who created wouldn't respond to any communication. So I made my own version of the character for myself. Thought I would at least show her off. I feel I am pretty good at figuring out aspect from looking at a photo.
Dave
Axekix: He's looking good, like a dignified, mature gentleman!
mochen: Many thanks! Looks like I should keep a copy of this Revision of Valerie then.
Your Subject 0 looks spot on perfect!
Chairon de Celeste: Bastet looks like a mischievous, spunky troublemaker! :happy:
Nowshin: Marian looks like a Ferelden Girl trying to live like a Chasind! & she's hot!
#5273
Posté 14 septembre 2010 - 11:51
@Nowshin Well I suppose Aeron does not look androgynous because she isn't suppose to, she is not my attempt at an androgynous character heh, thanks for the comment though. As to be expected that is yet another interesting take on the lady hawke, I like the deep blue eyes and the hairstyle makes her look rather rowdy and devil may care like.
@LadyAly I concur, I am getting that burned out feeling myself. I have over 120 designs now as is so I may end up calling it a day soon enough. I am a fan of the different ethnic group themed designs so your newest here is a very pleasing concept to me, really like the skin tone and eye color choice you went with.
@Starlight Lol looks like you had some fun with that armor choice. Good touch ups on your andraste versions as well.
@Tyrax Yeah so it seems, I don't why your elf designs end up so controversial for some reason, hmmm. Thanks for the comment on Aeron by the way.
@Xirbeus the new green eye texture is a good look, much improved I say.
#5274
Posté 15 septembre 2010 - 12:59
He's in Quinton's game.. and well ...



I think I need to clean him up a little
dinner now and I will be back with comments.
Modifié par Zeleen, 15 septembre 2010 - 01:42 .
#5275
Posté 15 septembre 2010 - 01:18
wow, Zeleen, he looks fierce, Quinton who? No really, he does look good, rugged. I hope someone makes a better hair though, the Nero hair bugs the crap outta me.
pops out.
Modifié par Saerwen, 15 septembre 2010 - 01:19 .





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