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[Xirbeus]

Nowshin wrote...

@Mochen: Seriously, wow. Subject zero looks so earth shatteringly awesome. If you're looking for critic, mochen, I'm afraid I can never give you that. :crying:Maybe I can take out the kids on weekends?

@Xirberus: I think I actually liked the intense color, made her look unique and fit very nicely with the hair and lip colors.

@Avatarhunter: Actually Aeron doesn't look that androgynous to me, despite her wide jaw and no-nonsense look there is something in her that makes me wnat to hug her. :wub:Excellent design anyway.
I hate that armor BTW:mellow:

@LadyAly: Mwarembi is really an exotic beauty!<3<3<3 But I think her tattoo is not complementing her face.

Finally did my rendition of Lady hawke, I didn't before because the scar everyone been using is bugging me, it's a SMEAR, not an angry deep cut. So tried my hand at tattoo making and camp up with this proud failure

I tried to conserve some features of the default Marian hawke, but widely diverged in others. The smear I tried to keep as close to original as possible, and the face structure too somewhat. But the overall look and personality isn't the same.


Meet Kiki, eccentric and full of energy to a fault. She is a good person, but being too impulsive and quick to blurt out what she's thinking,she's not someone one would put in a leading position anywhere. This fiery redhead prefers to shoot arrows first and ask questions later. Despite being quite beautiful, she is a total tomboy and drives her sister Bethany insane.


Anyway please tell me if you notice any problems with the tattoo. Front shot:

(Ignore the forehead thing it's just for fun:D)

Anyone remember the movie Josie and the ****cats, they made fun of the media and how they influenced are minds.

Nowshin, first of all very nice I like the total package, why ignore the forehead. 

Oh as I mentioned earlier, the red hair color is the new blonde. : )  love it:lol:

[Zeleen]

More designs.. yay!  So much good stuff!
 
@badboy64:
she is indeed lovely in those close ups – did you name her yet
may I suggest a little squinting of the eyes?
Cherry is sweet. And tough!
 
@Starlight:
ahhh Konimel never learned the golden rule of Dust Town… do unto others before they do unto you.. heh heh
Wow! Your Andreste’s are lovely.. my favorite is the Chantry’s version.. lovely pallet
I have to say I like the first v1 better than v2
Jin is a solid character.. I like how you shaped his eyes
Ethan v2 and Dominic.. lovely love story.. and lovely men
Lorren and Athoros – more man eye candy.. love the outfits..
 
@VirusCat:
Your Zev is very fetching,, I usually am not fond of the full-face tattoo but it completes your composition quite nicely.
 
@Meepichi:
I like your take on an American Indian..   were you depicting a particular tribe? Your pic has inspired me to do some American Indians… 
 
@mochen:
OK magic lady… how did you get the boy and bear together??


Subject Zero a bold creation.. I like the set of her mouth.. she looks like G.I. Jane. With that hair cut.. an intense beauty. Oh! Looking at adneate’s post I see what you were doing. Nice rendering indeed of “Jack”
 
@LadyAly:
Sazuka is just absolutely a cutie pie, adorable!
And such a sharp contrast to
Mwarembi… a creation from a burnout? She is a unique beauty.. the coloring of her tattoo corresponds to the lip color nicely.. lovely use of colors here again
 
@Tyrax:
nice screenies! I love the crown shot!
I still love Valerie.. slight change.. OK I thought she was fine as is.
 
@Saerwen:
A lovely interpretation of Leliana.. 
Thank you for the compliment on my fierce Hawke..  it would be nice if there were more manyl hair styles..  it's hard to get the color working for this mod..  but I do like the style.
 
@Schratty:
*blush* thank you for the kind remarks on my Lady Hawke
In Hee… a lovely slice of death! I love the coloring and facial structure.. just lovely!
 
@AvatarHunter:
*Aeron a stately beauty.. your rendering of true-to-life is utterly breath-taking
 
@Xirbeus:
Emi is a gorgeous creation.. a bold use of color that has paid off! I actually liked the original green of her eyes.
  
@Axekix:
your black Bryce Cousland is epic.. wonderful coloring and features.
 
@CdC:
*Bastet is a wonderful creation I love her freckles and that hair - it works on her!
 
@Nowshin:
what a stunning creation is your rendering of Marian Hawke.. I love the hair color you used.. what a gorgeous red! And it compliments your design perfectly. Are the little moles below the stripe part of the tat?

Modifié par Zeleen, 15 septembre 2010 - 04:21 .

[Nowshin]

@starlight and zeleen: i made the tat myself. The moles are part of it.

[Zeleen]

@Nowshin:

You my friend are one talented peep!

[Nowshin]

Thank you dear Personally I think the smear looks crappy still better than using a scar though.

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

my only suggestion about the smear would be to get rid of part of it on one side of the face, so it resembles more Destiny Trailer Hawke's smear.

[badboy64]

@Zeleen Her eyes are squinted at 68% already. Thanks for the compliment.:happy:

[Nowshin]

@yasuraka.hakkyou : Actually I based it on the female hawke concept art, so it's almost same on both sides.

[Starlight]

Xirbeus: Sorry for missing your post before. I think she looks fine already although the angel you have taken for the screenshot doesn't show the best of her. (I think the angel for your avatar looks better)

AvatarHunter: Yeah, the Archer Robe is really a fun piece to work with! At least there are some choices for males while there are a whole bunch of items for females only.

Zeleen: The male Hawke is nicely done. Though I agree with Saerwen that hair style can be annoying at times. It has its limitation and it doesn't match the character most of the time.

Which part of v2 Chantry version you don't like, the tattoo or the out-fit?

And, yeah, I really enjoy making male eye-candies.  The out-fit is sexy and it is a pleasure to see them half-naked.

Nowshin: I have to say that is a fine creation. Love your work!


Just more screenshots for Kohan....and Thorim!

Kohan
According to the historical records in countries like Fereldon, Orlais, there are dwarves migrating from undergroud to surfaces throughout the centuries. They may be dwarves from other cities who fleed from the Darkspawn invasion. They may be liberators who got fed up with the politics, caste system or other else in Dwarven community and want more freedom. They may be outcast whose house failed the power game within dwarven noble houses.  Or they are casteless who want to find better life over the surface. No matter what, they are all regarded as "Casteless" as they all lost their stone sense by living at the surface.

Kohan is from a surface dwarf clan who lives over the surface for centuries. He is determined and has a wicked sense of humor. He has heard a lot of stories about Dwarven community underground. In his point of view, why bother with a unfriendly community? He lives happily over the surface and doesn't desire to go to underground unless he has been hit on the head.

After he has reached his adulthood, he leaves the village and travels throughout the countries. Sometimes he will work as a part-time blacksmith or doing short mercenary contract if he is in need of money.

(An extension to the story of Prince Thorim - happy ending)
Kohan meets Prince Thorim in Denerim.

When meeting Kohan the first time, it struck Thorim that the surface dwarves aren't what he has heard in Orzammer, as does he doesn't fall off the sky and the sun doesn't fall onto the ground. Kohan seems to live happily at the surface. His wicked sense of humor is what Thorim really fond of. They start to hanging out, talking about everything they can think of and even go out to enjoy some adventures. Kohan is getting fond of Thorim and propose Thorim to stay by his side, which Thorim is happily obliged.

Thorim has one more reason to stay on the surface now.

Kohan


Thorim and Kohan





Ok...I can't help but write another romantic stories between Lorren and Athoros

Lorren and Athoros

Lorren is a minor lord with only a few farm lands and a castle as the properties. Athoros is the guard of Lorren and has swore the oath to serve Lorren, well, in many ways.

Athoros serves the meal for Lorren as Lorren claims he only trust the food served from him. He helps Lorren to dress up as Lorren claims he wants nobody else to go near him. He bathes Lorren as Lorren request. He even fulfills the desire of Lorren as Lorren says he loves him.

Athoros always wonder whether it is duty or something else that makes him oblige to every request of Lorren. He only knows Lorren has become the center of his world. It is painful to imagine a life without Lorren.

Lorren


Athoros


Lorren and Athoros


And I can't help but capture this naughty screenshots



It seems like I have written a lot of m!m love stories lately :happy:. To be fair maybe I will write more m!f and f!f love stories later on?

Modifié par Starlight, 16 septembre 2010 - 01:21 .

[dnlewis]

Only just started using the toolset. here is my first attempt, took me a few days to do

Alassiel, Dalish Elf Rogue.


EDIT: After eye squint.

Agreed she does look better now, not so much of a blank expression on her face

Modifié par dnlewis, 15 septembre 2010 - 06:28 .

[Zeleen]

@Starlight:
Thorim and Kohan are such a cute couple!
Lorren and Athoros - a handsome duo indeed
love your "naughty" screen shot..  an army of eye candy!
a side note..  how do you get the colored font?  it won't do it for me in the edit post window for some reason.
it let me copy colored text. but as soon as I submit...  the color is gone!

@dnlewis:
that is one nice elf for your first attempt
if you haven't already I would suggest squinting the eyes a bit.

Modifié par Zeleen, 15 septembre 2010 - 02:11 .

[Starlight]

Zeleen: Sometimes when you edit a post, it doesn't translate the BBCode well and it may mess up the code. I can make a new post with the standard form or edit it without any problem. Maybe you could check the code when editing post to see whether there are any wierd characters.

Also, which version of browser you are using? I have encountered a problem with Firefox 4 beta and it cannot translate the colored code of my signature. I have to switch back to Firefox 3.6.9 later.

dnlewis: Welcome! You Dalish elf looks nice! Though I'm not much a fan of long hair...

[Saerwen]

The first morph I ever posted up here was this one... Aranel

I lost her save game, I wound up playing her original game many times over, and while I was going through old screenshots and organizing old characters etc and getting all cool with a photobucket account I was inspiried to actually restart a new game with her. She did however cut her hair after her joining. As much as I love the long bangs.. ugh that pony tail makes me CRAZY!!! When I get a decent screenshot after the tower of Ishal I may post her again with different hair. I love city elves.  I also hope that my skills have improved!

Modifié par Saerwen, 15 septembre 2010 - 07:26 .

[Saerwen]

@dnlewis~She looks like an elf I would have had in Oblivion, nice work. But I would agree with Zeleen with the squinting of the eyes.

@Starlight~You and your man candy! Nice work, also good to see a happy ending for Thorim.


@Nowshin~I really like Kiki, and that is some nice work on her smear.


@Xirbius~(sorry if I am misspelling am editing this post can't see it) I liked your elf better with the brighter eyes, I am with Y.H on the lore side of the elf composition.  Also agree that a tattoo would be good as she is a Dalish, and I think that they are still considered children without the blood writting.  But cosmetically she is very easy on the eyes, those are just personal preferences, and not something you should take to personally.  I don't want you to think I am being nitpicky!  She is really great, love the red hair.


@Avatarhunter~ Your battlemaiden, Aeron her strong jaw, reminds me of the actress off Dexter, Deborah Morgan I think.. and she is skinny as a twig, but she has this really manly jaw.  I really like that design though, she looks tough.  You should take her on an actual playthrough!


@LadyAly~I was also unispired until I went thru those old screenies and found that old morph, I so loved that old character, and was mad mad mad that her playthru was gone!!!  Your morph is interesting.  Hope you become inspired again.

@everyone who commented on Leliana thanks, she was alot of fun to work on., she took on a life of her own.

Modifié par Saerwen, 15 septembre 2010 - 05:09 .

[dnlewis]

Thanks for the compliments & advice, will squint them a tad see how she looks

[Starlight]

Saerwen: Aranel looks nice! Though I think maybe narrow her jaw a little bit will be better?

Thank you. I really like to create man candies and write happy ending love stories (no matter how twisted it is:devil:).

The following is my latest work (click onto the image to see a larger version)

Wilson and Gaya
Wilson and Gaya met each other when they are working in Denerim. Wilson as a merchant in Market District while Gaya works inside Gnawed Noble Tavern. After closing the store Wilson will go to the Tavern to have a drink and also gather information or trends to determine which goods to import for the coming days. Then he meet Gaya. Actually, there are more beautiful ladies than Gaya. However, Wilson just can't get his eyes off her. If you ask him why Gaya attracts Wilson, he can't tell. Maybe her confidence? Or her temperament? Wilson know that he isn't rich and not good looking at all. He even looks fierce which scares people away sometimes. Nonetheless he try to talk to Gaya and his naive approach does get her attention. They start seeing each other and eventually they wed.

After they have married, Gaya resign the job and go with Wilson to travel around as merchant. When asked what's in WIlson attracts her, she says: "Although Wilson looks fierce, he is a really kind and nice gentleman indeed." "Especially in bed" She add to herself with a smile.

Wilson


Gaya


Wilson and Gaya



Elona and Oriana
Elona originally lives in alienage in Highever. The life inside Alienage can't say to be good but not bad at all as the Teryn of Couslands are somewhat nice to elves. However, things change once Arl Howe murder the Couslands Family and take over the castle. (One more reason to run Howe through a thousand times). He set up deals with the slavers and start selling elves as slaves. She manages to kill the slaver guarding her and escape. However, she is fire-branded which leaves a permanent scar on her forehead. Along the road of escape, she meets Oriana. Oriana offers help to her to escape from the slavers.

Oriana is born in Highever. She is an adventure type which can't really stay in a place too long. She goes out for adventure when she reaches adulthood. However, hearing the news of Howe's betrayal, she rushes back to Highever as soon as possible as her mother works inside the castle. According to rumors, most of the people inside the castle are possibily dead, her mother included, she swear vengence upon Howe. On the road to Highever, she meets Elona and helps her to escape from slavers. Knowing they have the same target, they join force to plan for vengence. There is rumors that the youngest sibling of Couslands manage to escape the betryal and become a Grey Warden, they will take the chance and try to contact the Warden.

Along the way for adventure, Oriana has a secret crush on Elona. However, as she doesn't know Elona's feeling, she hesitates to express it.

Will Oriana express her feeling?

Elona


Oriana

Modifié par Starlight, 17 septembre 2010 - 04:03 .

[Tyrax Lightning]

Starlight: Your Chantry Andraste V2 definitely looks the part! She's done! :happy:

Your Real Andraste is great!

Um... my apologies... The Sacred Band of Thebes is over my head... They would be best gauged by a gal.

Thorim & Kohan's still doing good!

Your 'naughty' Screenshot made my Eyeballs burn...

Wilson & Gaya look adorable together! They remind me of this FF 13 Song: Sunleth Waterscape

Oriana & Elona might make for an interesting story...

Xirbeus: Ahh, my apologies, I couldn't tell. I don't have good Eyes.

AvatarHunter: No problem!

Zeleen: Looks like a winning build to me! :happy:

dnlewis: Alassiel looks great for a 1st build! I think her Eyes should be narrowed a little, & her jaw should be narrowed a little unless she's intended as masculine. That's about it.

Saerwen: Aranel's changes are intriguing!

[Saerwen]

@Starlight~ I want her to have a wider jaw as she is a tough warrior type and also wanted to not stray to far from the original, but I can see where you are coming from with your critic.



@Tyrax~Thanks, I wanted to give her a hard life look from the alienage, with a little more exotic feel, her mom was Dalish, hence the violet eyes and the different tattoo.

[dnlewis]

Tyrax Lightning wrote...

dnlewis: Alassiel looks great for a 1st build! I think her Eyes should be narrowed a little, & her jaw should be narrowed a little unless she's intended as masculine. That's about it.

How's that look ?
thanks for the input btw all, must admit its almost as much fun creating the player, as playing the game

[Saerwen]

@dnlewis~She looks good. Yes I agree, I have tons of characters started just waiting to be played... waiting. lol

[yasuraka.hakkyou]

she looks great. *coming from an elf lover / perfectionist*

[Zeleen]

just peeking in from work... more lovelies...

and now I have more characters than games.. so I am switching them out.. play one for a while then play another in the same game...

[Xirbeus]

trying to find dalish tattoo that would fit for my latest, but as a dalish, if I remember right there is an issue if you use any other tattoo. hmmm... this will take some thought

[Saerwen]

@Xirbeus~you could use a non dalish and put it on a city elf, then use the face changer mod and put that character into your dalish toon's game.. just a suggestion.

[Meepichi]

Thanks to everyones kind comments on my native American!  He's not any specific tribe, just a general design.
I'll probably post another character here in the near future.


@Chairon - I like your Bastet. Very natural looking. Cute but not overly so.

@mochen - awesome as usual. Love your Jack.

@LadyAly - Mwarembi is very nicely done! Exotic and pretty.  Nice job with the tatoo too, it really adds to it.

@Nowshin - cute lady hawk rendition!

@Starlight - that's a bunch to comment on.  I'll just say nicely done!

@Zeleen - very manly man you've made there, I like him!

@dnlewis - Nice looking elf especially for your first time playing with the toolset.

Sorry to anyone I missed, there's a lot of stuff on here, heh.

Modifié par Meepichi, 15 septembre 2010 - 11:07 .