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Sounds good, I give some input soon I'm watching The Men Who Stare at Goats.

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It's done, please remeber that it's night in Holland (1:50AM) so they may be some stupid grammar mistakes:

I'll be using The Haloverse and the ME universe and some of my own idea's for UPSC
History of the UPSC universe:
After WWIII Earth was split in 6 big Unions (pic).
In 2050 Humans began to run out of fossil fuels, tensions between the Unions started to raise, it looked like Humanity would start fighting again and this time it could mean the end of the world. But then Frank Taylor, an ex-politician now a scientist of The Western Union
had finally finished his development of his project, nicknamed "The Priiize", that project wass a fully working and safe Hydrogen Engine that generated more power the a regular engine. Frank Taylor wanted one thing for his engine: earth should have a one united Government, the Countries can keep their culture and their Governments,
but their Governments will answer to the United Earth Government. Seeing that the only alternative was a war, the Unions agreed. Frank Taylor was choosen as the represantative of The Western Union. Since then there's always a member of the Taylor family in the UEG Council.

In 2123 Humans have developed a Slipspace drive for their spaceships. Their first generation of drives wasn't very fast, only 4-5 lightyears/day. UEG has decided that they should build a Military Fleet before they started exploring, so they formed United Priiizes Space Command, nobody knows why it's called "Priiizes" instead of Earth. UPSC had finished their first frigate at 4th july 2124.
They called it the Enterprise, just like the first Human sub-light speed ship that was built for exploration of Sol and the first Human Space Shuttle.
In 2130 Humans have discovered their first habitable planet, Reach. UPSC started colonizing Reach, they also stationed a Military Base there, just in case the Aliens are real.
After 2130 UPSc started to find more habitable worlds or easy to Terraform wolds.
In 2147 Humans started to replace their old bullet weapons with the high tech MAC rifles.
In 2367 Human Empire was 117 colonies big and their fleet counted 300 ships. On planet Shanxi Humans made a big discovery, there was a underground structure. Nobody knew who build it. The interior was silver with light blue lights and it was made of a very strong metal. But what Humans knew was that this structure was importanant, they've recovered strange crystals that served as data storage. On this crystal was information about a Slipspace drive,
a very advaced Slipspace drive. Whith help from the data crystals Humans have upgraded their Slipspace speed from 69LY/D (light years/day) to 343LY/D.
In 2398 Humans strange thing started to happen with Pharos (ice moon orbiting Tenatlus, one of planets in Epsilon Eridani System, the same system were Reach, the largest Human colony and second largest military base, is located). The moon started to melt and it was shaking and then the moon exploded leaving a strange structure behind. It had a strange spinning blue thingy. UPSC ships were sent to investigate.
But then suddendly 10 strange small ships appeared, UPSC Crazy Horse hailed one of the ships and they responded. A strange creature appeared on the screen, it was greyish it had mandibles and a head fringe. They started to talk in some strange language, but luckily UPSC translator also worked on Alien languages. The Alien said:
"I am Captain Zeharn from the Heavy Cruiser Krynonis, we come in peace!"
Captain Cole whispered to Admiral O'Neil: "Of course they come in peace, our frigates are bigger then their have cruisers" O'Neil smiled
The unknown species were called Turians, the uknown object that they arrived trough was called a Mass Relay.
They were more Mass Relays in the Galaxy and more Alien species.
At 7th July 2398 a human delegation arrived at the Citadel, they've suprised the aliens by arriving trough a Slipsspace portal, not trough the Citadel Mass Relay. The Council was intimadated by the UPSC, their ships were enormous and powerful and they didn't knew anything about Slipspace, so they've decided to give Humans a Council seat and treat them with respect.

Jacob Taylor serves in the Navy or Army we've to decide that, while his father is a Councilor (he's different in this universe)
It's 31st december 2426 at the moment the story starts.

UPSC Navy:

Fleet Admiral John Gash is the CO of the UPSC navy.

Fleet size: 700 ships

Flagship:
UPSC The Good Stuff
CO: Fleet Admiral John Gash
XO: Captain *Sand King, insert your name for your character here* Sand
class: Battlecarrier (heavy armed Dreadnought that also serves as a carrier and a troop carrier)
Lenght: 4km
Weapons:
Two front mounted prototype MAC's with a power of a 117 megaton each (It's a much weaker version then UNSC MAC's, because otherwise ME ships will be decmated with one shot) after one shot they need to recharge for 5 seconds
150 Archer missile pods, effective against armor, less effective against shields
1000 .50 AA MAC machine guns
Armor:
20m of polarized Titanium A armor
Ship AI: Claude

Major *LuckyIronAxe Insert your name for your character here* Axe, the ambassador of the UPSC

I'll do the Army part and the character profiles tommorow.

San King and LuckyIronAxe can you write something about you characters personalitys?



I'm going to sleep now, Admiral Gash out-_-

Modifié par gashgfjaskgfkagh, 10 mai 2010 - 12:28 .


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Major Allen Axe, a kid who has been given the honor and privilege of being thrown into the arena of quarian politics as ambassador for the UPSC. His success with his early negotiations with the quarians has given him an early promotion to major.



Personality wise, Major Axe is a mix of Ambassador Udina and Kaidan Alenko. He is fiendishly clever and willing to kiss ass for the sake of diplomatic relations, but has a kind and gentle core.

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Sand King wrote...

Sounds good, I give some input soon I'm watching The Men Who Stare at Goats.


That is an epic movie, so full of the good stuff.  I was sad when the goat got hit with the good stuff :crying:

Our Ambassador needs a speacial banner :o

Modifié par Festi, 10 mai 2010 - 01:56 .


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Festi wrote...

Sand King wrote...

Sounds good, I give some input soon I'm watching The Men Who Stare at Goats.


That is an epic movie, so full of the good stuff.  I was sad when the goat got hit with the good stuff :crying:

Our Ambassador needs a speacial banner :o


Yeah it's on my Netflix Queue should be watching it sometime next week.

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Hey I'll join up in the UPSC, Jacob is my homie

Modifié par Some Dude, 10 mai 2010 - 03:06 .


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There was a pretty brutal Troll Raid on the Talimancer homethread, As ambassador I was deployed as damage control and relief. I felt that the thread was thankfulf for my topic ideas and questions about fanfic, our two peoples became a little closer today I feel.

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Tryin to ally with the Talimancers?

Heavy risk... but I can see the priiize

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The Men Who Stare at Goats is the funnest movie I have seen in a long time.

On topic:

Colonel William "Teddy" King
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“Time on Mars tends to give a man...perspective.”

Deaths' head slapped right on his helmet. The death’s head rictus, jolly roger, and layer upon layer of black and gray armor is a man of deep spiritual convictions and respect for those he serves alongside. Has extensive experience in Close-Quarters Combat. The last time he visited Earth, the day before he enlisted.

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LuckyIronAxe wrote...

There was a pretty brutal Troll Raid on the Talimancer homethread, As ambassador I was deployed as damage control and relief. I felt that the thread was thankfulf for my topic ideas and questions about fanfic, our two peoples became a little closer today I feel.


Very good Major, we need their help and I hate trolls, I want to shoot them with Godd Stuff's MAC's

Festi wrote...
Our Ambassador needs a speacial banner [smilie]../../../../images/forum/emoticons/surprised.png[/smilie]

He will get one, but I'm too busy with finishing the UPSC universe. This week my weekend starts at thursday, so I'll have four days to work on the fanfic and the banner.

Sand King wrote...

The Men Who Stare at Goats is the
funnest movie I have seen in a long time.

On topic:

Colonel
William "Teddy" King
Posted Image
“Time on Mars tends to give a man...perspective.”

Deaths'
head slapped right on his helmet. The death’s head rictus, jolly roger,
and layer upon layer of black and gray armor is a man of deep spiritual
convictions and respect for those he serves alongside. Has extensive
experience in Close-Quarters Combat. The last time he visited Earth, the
day before he enlisted.


You'll be the commanding officer of the UPSC Marines on The Good Stuff, do you want to be friends with Admiral Gash or be more formal to him?
I'll keep Captain William Sand as Gash's XO and friend.

LuckyIronAxe wrote...

Major Allen Axe, a kid who has been
given the honor and privilege of being thrown into the arena of quarian
politics as ambassador for the UPSC. His success with his early
negotiations with the quarians has given him an early promotion to
major.

Personality wise, Major Axe is a mix of Ambassador Udina
and Kaidan Alenko. He is fiendishly clever and willing to kiss ass for
the sake of diplomatic relations, but has a kind and gentle
core.


It's the same as my idea for Major Axe!

I've written the Admiral Gash's profile and more info about UPSC army, but I need to write it on my PC first and then I'll upload it.

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gashgfjaskgfkagh wrote...

You'll be the commanding officer of the UPSC Marines on The Good Stuff, do you want to be friends with Admiral Gash or be more formal to him?
I'll keep Captain William Sand as Gash's XO and friend.

I think starting at being formal then turning to friendship works.

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Sand King wrote...

gashgfjaskgfkagh wrote...

You'll be the commanding officer of the UPSC Marines on The Good Stuff, do you want to be friends with Admiral Gash or be more formal to him?
I'll keep Captain William Sand as Gash's XO and friend.

I think starting at being formal then turning to friendship works.

Ok, I'll make him the new Marines CO, who replaced the old one after his death.

UPSC has also problems with Insurrection, only on a lesser scale.

What do you think of the story?

Gash's profile and UPSC weaponry will be online in a half hour.

Modifié par gashgfjaskgfkagh, 10 mai 2010 - 02:17 .


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I think the story is good. I think it would be interesting if there was character that was the child of Insurrectionist.

Modifié par Sand King, 10 mai 2010 - 02:21 .


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Sand King wrote...

I think the story is good. I think it would be interesting if there was character that was the child of Insurrectionist.

Good idea, I'll add him/her later in the story. I'll PM you when I'm done with Gash's profile so you can say what you think of him.

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Few years after first contact Insurrectionists started to recieve help from non council races that
hated the UPSC. Batarians are one of the races that helped them. Batarians
wanted the same star system tha UPSC wanted, UPSC had decimated their fleet
witout a problem.

The Council isn’t led by any of the four species, but because the Alien races doesn’t want to
****** off the Humans, so they agree on almost everything that the Human Councilor
wants.

Fleet Admiral John Gash

Age:  47

Place of birth:  Reach

Personality:  He’s a natural leader, that’s why he’s the Fleet Admiral. He hates Insurrectionists, because they’ve killed his father.  He cares about his men, but if he must sacrifice
them to complete, he’ll do it. He’s not married, he doesn’t have time for it
and sometimes he appears to be in love with his ship. He enjoys watching old
Sci-Fi series, he has a whole collection of them in his quarters, he also
quotes people from the sries his watches. Captain Sand is his closest friend
and his XO, Sand could get his own ship (Gash can give him one, he’s the Fleet
Admiral), but he rather stays on the Good Stuff as the XO of his friend.

Military career: He enlisted when he was 18, following his
father’s footsteps who died after his ship was destroyed by the Insurrectionists. The first ship he served on
was a frigate, UPSC Al Alamein. At age of 28, Commander John Gash was the XO of
a destroyer, UPSC Pegasus. Pegasus was a part of a small fleet (4 frigates, 2
destroyers and 1 cruiser) under command of Admiral Ackbar (I think I’m allowed
to include a small joke) that had a task to invastigate a possible Innie (Insurrectionists)  hideout, but they didn’t knew that were walking
right into a Innie trap. Innies had assasins on all ships on the fleet, they
task was to assasinate all officers to cause panic on the ships and then Innies
could take out the fleet without a problem. 
Most UPSC officers didn’t wore sidearms on their ships in that time, so
taking them out won’t be difficult. The assasins succeded at killing all
officers, except Gash, because he had his father’s  M9e  “MACnum”
with him and he knows how to use it. He hates to admit it but he enjoyed killing
that f*cking Innies. Because he was the only officer left he assumed direct
control (I’m sorry for this stupid joke) of the UPSC fleet and under his
command the fleet engaged the Innie fleet, they were outnumbered 5 to 1, but
they won, with only minor damage to their ships. For this Gash recieved a
promotion to Rear Admiral and his own ship, a Dreadnought , UPSC Yokohama. Gash
was one of the best Admirals and also one of the youngest. At age of 40 he was
promoted to Fleet Admiral after Fleet Admiral Cole had retired. Because of his
rank he recieved a new ship, a Battlecruiser,  UPSC The Good Stuff .

 

Staff Sargant Jacob Taylor is the son of Councilor Ronald Taylor, he’s skilled with AR’s, heavy
weapons (Spartan Laser, Rocket Launcher, Portable Guass Cannon etc.). He hates
when people treat him like he’s special because he’s the son of the Councilor
and he’s a Taylor. He doesn’t like politics. He serves on UPSC The Good Stuff.

UPSC weapons and vehicles
(only the important ones):


UPSC uses  MAC guns, they’re much more powerful and
accurate then Mass Accelerators, but they still use clips, like in our time.

Weapons:

Name                                  Clip size

 MAC-51f Assault Rifle     80

MAC-69g Sniper Rifle       10

M9e MACnum                   20

MAC-55SR Battle Rifle      40

MAC-74 SMG                     90

MAC-60h LMG                  300

Heavy weapons and
stationary weapons:


Weapon/Anti-Vehicle Model 6 Grindell/Galilean Nonlinear
Rifle (Spartan Laser)

Many variations of
the M-411Rocket Launcher

MAC-446H Heavy
Gatling Gun

Vehicles are pretty
much the same as UNSC vehicles, except that UPSC vehicles are stonger, use MAC
weapons and armored vehicles have polarized armor.

The SPARTAN II
project and ODST’s  exist in this
universe.
Spartans have their MJOLNIR mark VI armor.

What do you think?

Modifié par gashgfjaskgfkagh, 10 mai 2010 - 06:42 .


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Some Dude wrote...

Tryin to ally with the Talimancers?
Heavy risk... but I can see the priiize



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Some Dude wrote...

Tryin to ally with the Talimancers?
Heavy risk... but I can see the priiize

We shall be unstoppable!

Modifié par Nostradamoose, 10 mai 2010 - 06:10 .


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Jacob... so much of a nothing character even his fan thread has to talk about other things...

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Another heretic arises!



They must be purged!

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WilliamShatner wrote...

Jacob... so much of a nothing character even his fan thread has to talk about other things...


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WilliamShatner wrote...

Jacob... so much of a nothing character even his fan thread has to talk about other things...

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Sand King wrote...

WilliamShatner wrote...

Jacob... so much of a nothing character even his fan thread has to talk about other things...

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YES! THAT'S WHAT WE NEEDED!!!
THANK YOU COLONEL!

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Sand King wrote...

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The pic and the phrase don't match. 

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Teknor wrote...

Sand King wrote...

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The pic and the phrase don't match. 

It's the Jacob glare, it almost matches the power of The Adama glare, that's enough to scare someone off!

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Teknor wrote...

The pic and the phrase don't match. 

This better?
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