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In this thread I propose to share some of my writings, specifically a few interesting extranet letters between Shepard and various other non-party NPCs from the first game who didn't otherwise send messages. The first two are, naturally, ones that've been put in the Liara support thread. More letters will appear here as I write them, including some interesting possibilities to come.

Anyway, on with the show!

Liara T'Soni wrote:

Shepard,

Thank you for your assistance on Illium. It's been a while since
we caught Nyxeris, and things are starting to calm down; I got
the last of the surveilance devices out of my office only last night.
I truly cannot tell you how much of a relief it was to see you again;
it saddens me that it couldn't be under better circumstances, but
we both know that some things are beyond all our control. The joy
at seeing you again, alive and whole, was almost overwhelming.
Now that I'm (relatively) secure here, hopefully I can explain myself
to you properly.

A month after the destruction of the Normandy, I received word that
someone had found your body, and was intending to sell it to the
Collectors. The contact I mentioned during our visits was the key;
he worked as a double-agent for the Shadow Broker and Cerberus.
A drell named Feron, he helped me to locate your body and wrest it
from the Shadow Broker just as this...thing...showed up to collect it.
In the fight that ensued, Feron and I became separated; while I tried
to get away with your body, he held the Broker's enforcers off long
enough for me to make a break for our ship. I still don't know what
they did with him...part of me hopes he is alive somewhere, but that
hope is dimming. Regardless, I know that the Shadow Broker does
business with the Collectors. Perhaps when your mission is done,
we can work together again to bring him down.

As I said, it was good to see you again, and I am glad at least that
Tali and Garrus are still with you. I would tell you to be cautious about
Miranda, but you've probably figured out already whether or not she is
to be trusted. I hope she is -- she played a large part in bringing you
back to me. That sounds so selfish to hear it aloud. Maybe someday
soon we will be able to embrace one another again, and all will be
made clear. Untill then, may the Goddess look kindly upon your journey.

Liara T'Soni

P.S.: I"ve included a letter I wrote to you shortly after I delivered you to
Cerberus. Hopefully it will help to explain things a bit more.


Liara
T'Soni wrote...

Shepard,

I don't know if you'll ever see this letter, but it just had to be written.
As I write, the Cerberus agents are loading your coffin into their ship,
to what destination I can only speculate. They say they can rebuild
you, remake you into the woman you once were. Only time will tell if
this is just one of their schemes; I cannot imagine what they may try
to do to you, or if what they promise is even possible.

The Goddess was kind to me when She brought you into my life.
Before then, there was only the work; I was isolated, buried in the
past, focused on rooting out the mysteries of the Protheans and
those who came before.I spent my time elbow-deep in the dust of
civilizations, the tedium interrupted only occasionally by a new find,
or the appearance of pirates, mercenaries, or the occasional outlaw
archeologist. Then, suddenly, you sprang headfirst into my life, guns
blazing, willing to kill and die to save me from being dragged off to
who knew what fate Saren or my mother may have intended for me.
You opened your ship to me, made me a part of your crew, but it was
more than that. You didn't just probe me for information and cast me
aside, you extended an offer of friendship.

I considered myself barely more than a child, but you treated me as
an equal; what is more, you opened me to the wider galaxy. It was
through our hunt for Saren and the Conduit that you helped me piece
together the meaning of my life. You helped me to experience what it
meant to live in the present, instead of sifting through the leavings of
the ancient ones. And more importantly, you showed me how to fight
for the future of all. Even when I was at my lowest, after Benezia's
death, you were there for me, guiding me, helping me to remember
the woman she once was, a caring and devoted person. I knew that
I must know you, help you if I could, be there at your side no matter
what might occur. When the worst happened, and I was not by your
side, it nearly broke me. That was why I did what I did, why I nearly
threw away everything for this one last chance to prove how much
you meant to me. I loved...I love you. I can never let you go. I hope you
can forgive me for doing this; I remember how hard you fought to halt
the experiments being undertaken by Cerberus. Those memories are
omnipresent, haunting me, mocking me for what I have done.

If you survive, if they give you this second chance, I hope that you can
forgive me. I have no one else to seek solace with, no one else who is
capable of understanding what we went through.


Modifié par Goodwood, 28 avril 2010 - 01:12 .


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Very nice.

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Ashley Williams wrote...

Commander,

After wrapping things up on Horizon, I was summoned back to
the Citadel by Anderson. It seems I owe you an apology. Damnit,
I'm not very good at these kinds of things.

Now that I've had a chance to go over the data and give a proper
account of what happened on Horizon, it's clear that I owe you my
life...again. That's not what's been bugging me, though. It's the way
I shot my mouth off at you when we met after the Collector ship fled.
When he gave me my next assignment, Anderson told me you'd
sent along some interesting stuff, and that you two discussed some
things. Suffice to say I don't know what the hell to think, but at least I
now know that you were playing straight with me. I don't know about
being able to serve with you again -- I suppose that ties in to whatever
it is you're doing out in the Terminus -- still, maybe someday...

I guess I never got over the shock of the Normandy's destruction, and
with you dead at that. After Ilos, it all seemed to be cake; we'd killed
Saren and destroyed Sovereign, and that seemed to be it. Even when
you gave the order to send the fleet in to save the Ascension, you had
me convinced it was the right thing to do despite my own misgivings.
I don't know, damnit. The Alliance not only buried you, but what we had
done as well; I guess part of me had hoped that you'd be able to swing
a few favors, influence some brass, and get Grandpa a fair hearing.
Then boom, you're dead, I'm promoted, and suddenly no one wants to
talk about what the Reapers really were. Seeing you again, on Horizon,
just ripped open what I'd thought to be a well-healed wound.

For what it's worth, you'll always be my commander, and Cerberus be
damned. Maybe with you around, some of them can learn that blowing
people's heads off at the earliest opportunity isn't the way to go, like how
you demonstrated several times.

It was an honor to have served with you.
Operations Chief Ashley Williams
SSV Orizaba, Fifth Fleet



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Good stuff.

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As I said in the Liara thread Goodwood, great work! I look forward to your future writings.

Edit: maybe you could post them in a new topic in the Ash Kaidan Liara group as well.

Modifié par morrie23, 28 avril 2010 - 02:47 .


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morrie23 wrote...

As I said in the Liara thread Goodwood, great work! I look forward to your future writings.

Edit: maybe you could post them in a new topic in the Ash Kaidan Liara group as well.


I'd like to separate them out and keep them to their own thread, this one here, because I'm hoping to have letters to/from other folks as well. In any case, thanks for the compliments!

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good stuff!! great job goodwood!

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Aria T'Loak wrote...

Shepard,

Just because Omega is overrun with egomaniacal nitwits
and mercs with delusions of grandeur doesn't mean we're
blind to the goings-on in the galaxy, particularly when things
like what we're seeing going on are happening practically
on our doorstep. So you actually went through the Omega-4
relay and lived to return? I must admit to being impressed.

I've got a proposition for you, if you're interested. Lots of folks
around here want to know what's beyond that relay; every fifty
years or so a cultist ship tries to use it, and of course they
never come back. Some say it's a paradise, which I suppose
is as easy enough to accept as any other theory -- it certainly
accounts for why those that try it fail to return. As for me, I see
it as a great way to get rid of some of the more bothersome
residents of the station. You may ask how I know it was you
who used it...well, let's just say you're not the only person with
whom people babble on about their life stories. But enough
about all that sentimental bullsh*t, let's get down to business.

I'm hoping that you'll share with me just how you were able to
access the relay. I don't want or care to know whatever it was
you found there, but I am willing to pay you handsomely for the
secret to successful navigation. Come by Afterlife some time,
and we can discuss the details...

Aria



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Matriarch Aethyta wrote...

Hey, Shepard,

If I'd known it was you waltzing into Eternity the other day, I'd
probably have slapped you. And then bought you any drink
you'd wanted. It wasn't easy, but I managed to dig up a lot of
interesting tidbits about you. That Verner idiot was a veritable
geyser of information, bless him. I don't think I'd have been as
gentle with him as you were, but you knew that already.

So, you're the one who saved the Feros colony? And they say
that you also killed Benezia. There's no gentle way to say it, so
I'll just come out and tell you straight -- you did the galaxy a favor
dusting her off. She'd had it coming ever since she'd ditched me,
and then hooked up with that maniac Saren -- I hear you finished
him off as well. Good f*cking riddence I say. Anyway, you should
probably know that Liara T'Soni is that pureblood daughter of mine
that I mentioned when you visited. It's still a sensitive issue with
me, which is saying something when you consider the sh*t that
I've seen in my lifetime. Damn, but it's good to see she's making it,
and that she had you to help her get through some pretty bad spots.
I know you're probably thinking 'well, why not tell her I'm her father?'
The quick and dirty answer is that you humans value family ties so
much more than we asari do. Liara is happy not knowing who her
father is; she doesn't need to know that I'm within spitting distance
of her office, slinging drinks for tourists and corporate b*tches, all
the while keeping an eye on her.

This letter was difficult enough to write, so you better not go off and
blab to Liara about what I've told you. I love her, but that's one more
layer of complexity I don't need in my life right now. In any case, I
hope you figure out some way to get the Council or somebody to
do something about the Reapers -- yes, I heard about that, too -- no,
it doesn't surprise me that they're trying to sweep it under the rug.
Ties in with what I said about those fools on Thessia.

Kick some ass for me, huh? And gimme a shout if you ever want a
wrinkly old matriarch to spin you a tale.

Aethyta


Modifié par Goodwood, 29 avril 2010 - 08:06 .


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Ooh, GW, that last one really had me going there. Very interesting! Course part of me was like, "I knew it!" I wonder why she wouldn't want to talk to Liara.

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Nightwriter wrote...

Ooh, GW, that last one really had me going there. Very interesting! Course part of me was like, "I knew it!" I wonder why she wouldn't want to talk to Liara.


Because sometimes, when you love someone, the only thing you can do is keep an eye on them from a distance...at least that's my take on it.

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If Aethyta is Liara's father, she caused Liara a good deal of grief and pain, never being in her life. When you talk to Liara she thinks her "father" did not want her, didn't want to bear the shame of having a pureblood daughter.

Why would she cause Liara that pain intentionally? And why would she suddenly start caring about Liara after all these years, keeping an eye on her and such?

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Goodwood wrote...

Ashley Williams wrote...

Commander,

After wrapping things up on Horizon, I was summoned back to
the Citadel by Anderson. It seems I owe you an apology. Damnit,
I'm not very good at these kinds of things.

Now that I've had a chance to go over the data and give a proper
account of what happened on Horizon, it's clear that I owe you my
life...again. That's not what's been bugging me, though. It's the way
I shot my mouth off at you when we met after the Collector ship fled.
When he gave me my next assignment, Anderson told me you'd
sent along some interesting stuff, and that you two discussed some
things. Suffice to say I don't know what the hell to think, but at least I
now know that you were playing straight with me. I don't know about
being able to serve with you again -- I suppose that ties in to whatever
it is you're doing out in the Terminus -- still, maybe someday...

I guess I never got over the shock of the Normandy's destruction, and
with you dead at that. After Ilos, it all seemed to be cake; we'd killed
Saren and destroyed Sovereign, and that seemed to be it. Even when
you gave the order to send the fleet in to save the Ascension, you had
me convinced it was the right thing to do despite my own misgivings.
I don't know, damnit. The Alliance not only buried you, but what we had
done as well; I guess part of me had hoped that you'd be able to swing
a few favors, influence some brass, and get Grandpa a fair hearing.
Then boom, you're dead, I'm promoted, and suddenly no one wants to
talk about what the Reapers really were. Seeing you again, on Horizon,
just ripped open what I'd thought to be a well-healed wound.

For what it's worth, you'll always be my commander, and Cerberus be
damned. Maybe with you around, some of them can learn that blowing
people's heads off at the earliest opportunity isn't the way to go, like how
you demonstrated several times.

It was an honor to have served with you.
Operations Chief Ashley Williams
SSV Orizaba, Fifth Fleet


(sigh)...if only this letter was, you know IN THE ACTUAL GAME  i would glomp that woman so hard rather than
blow her off, or reach for my gun...eh, next game

Modifié par foolish replica, 01 mai 2010 - 02:01 .


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Awesome letters. :)

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Great letters OP. They inspired me to write something of my own, something a little different from a standard letter. If it's a problem let me know and I'll take it down.

[quote]Shepard wrote...
Dear Mom and Dad,

Sorry I missed the last two anniversaries. I was hospitalised for a long time. To be honest, it's a miracle I'm in a state to write this at all. Lucky for me I take after you two; fighters to the end.


A lot's happened since I last wrote. I managed to track down that crazy s.o.b Saren eventually, and put a stop to him. By the time I caught up with him I actually felt sorry for him. Despite everything he did, despite Eden Prime and Feros and Virmire, ESPECIALLY Virmire, I couldn't help but pity him. He lost everything he ever cared about, everything he ever was, and became a puppet for something else. A slave. No matter what he did or who he was, he didn't deserve that. Nobody does. At the end I couldn't help but pity that turian, just like I couldn't help but feel a little bit of respect for how he chose to go out.


Of course, that wasn't the end of it. It seems like it was only the beginning. Saren was just the tip of a much bigger problem, a problem nobody else seems to care about. The Council has with it's usual tact and foresight "dismissed that claim", and the Alliance isn't much better. The only people who seem willing to face reality are ones who in a sane galaxy I'd be busy bringing in for trial.


I wonder sometimes what you'd think of my life, what you'd think of me. A Shepard turned soldier turned...whatever I am now. Spectre? Hero? Terrorist? I've been called all that and more. Would you even recognise me, see your son in the man who's been forced leave friends to die? Would you understand why your own flesh and blood was willing to sacrifice thousands of human lives for aliens? Or would you think me a traitor,  someone who didn't deserve the luck of having survived the attack?


I met another survivor on the Citadel. Her name was Talitha, but unlike me she wasn't lucky enough to be saved by the marines. I didn't recognise her. She spent 13 years, trapped and afraid in a pen unfit for animals. That was her life, the pen her home. Slavery her world. When she got out, she only wanted one thing. It wasn't revenge; she simply wanted to die. Seeing her brought back every memory I had about the attack; the smell of burning bodies, the sight of broken buildings. The sound the artillery shell made, just before it destroyed our home. It also confirmed every nightmare I ever had about what happened to those taken. When I think that there might still be people I knew or you knew out there, waiting to die...


It's fifteen years today since I lost everything in that attack. Since I lost you. Those fifteen years haven't been all bad. I've got someone I ove, even if I doubt she's the sort of person who would have fit in very well back home. I've got friends willing to walk through hell with me if I need them to, and the work I'm doing is important. Probably the most important in the galaxy. Every day I get the chance to help people, to make a difference. They even put my face on our colonial seal, God knows why. But despite all that I can't help but think of you, and that lucky kid who managed to live while his whole family died around him. I barely remember him anymore. Who he was, what he wanted to do. I guess I left him behind somewhere, on Akuze or Eden Prime or Ilos. Or maybe that kid, a colony brat from Mindoir, maybe he didn't survive the attack at all. Maybe who he was and who he might have been died there that day, surrounded by his family, and the person who survived was someone else. A different Shepard; one without a home.


I miss you, and if there is something else out there, some heaven or paradise or nirvana, I hope you're keeping a place warm for me. If this mission goes south I might be there with you soon.


Till next year,


Your Son.
/quote]

Modifié par LookingGlass93, 18 octobre 2010 - 06:49 .


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Goodwood wonders if he should have a go at more letters. In any case, that's a very nice one, LookingGlass93.

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I hope Goodwood decides to write more letters.

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Warning: Contains Retribution spoilers...

Councillor Anderson wrote...


--ENCODED MESSAGE KEYED TO UNIQUE SPECTRE ID--


Shepard,

Remember when you first returned to the Citadel and met with
the Council, and how, once the meeting was over, I told you that
I was 'too old to go running around the galaxy'? Well, it seems
as though I've got to eat my words. They don't taste all that good,
actually; you might say it's like trying to gnaw on a slice of baked
synthetic rubber, but that's beside the point.

To be frank, I don't know what the hell you've been doing out there
since we detected the recent use of the Omega-4 relay, and while
we don't have any proof, the general consensus is that it was you
who used it. This isn't why I'm writing to you, however. The real
reason is to keep you abreast of what's been going on in the so-
called "civilized" galaxy and on our end of the hunt for Cerberus. I'm
fairly confident that you have done what you feel is right in this regard,
so it doesn't feel like such a big security risk sending you this, even
though it's encoded. Along with this letter are briefing documents
that should spell out the ugly details about what I and others have
been up to for the past few weeks, but I wanted to let you know in a
more personal fashion so that you would at least understand where
I'm coming from on this.

Approximately a month ago, a former Alliance scientist and longtime
associate of the Ascension Project named Kahlee Saunders contacted
me with an urgent plea for help. An acquaintance of hers, one Paul
Grayson, had been taken by a Cerberus team and imprisoned. We've
only just found out that he'd been injected with Reaper technology, at
the Illusive Man's order, which was why he had turned into some kind of
super husk capable of taking out half a platoon's worth of mercenaries.
I was directly involved with helping the turians in taking down a huge
chunk of the Cerberus empire; it was during those raids that we first
encountered Grayson. I also happened to be on Arcturus Station when
he, no doubt influenced by the Reapers, broke into the facility and made
off with who knows how much data about the Ascension Project.

He damn near made mincemeat out of me before we finally got him.

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that your old captain's doing his
part, just like he always wanted to, even if he can't do it in support of you.
To be blunt, I wish you'd been there to help -- who knows how many lives
could have been spared with your expertise at our backs, ours and theirs,
no matter how you might now feel about me, Cerberus, the Council, or the
Alliance. I wish you the best of luck with whatever you're doing out there.
If you ever feel like coming by and shooting the breeze with an old soldier,
you know where to find me.

Councillor David Anderson
Cidadel Prosidium Embassies



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 Interesting fan fic.