Undertow- Fanfiction + Fanart (Updated 3/13)
#226
Posté 10 août 2010 - 06:05
#227
Posté 10 août 2010 - 06:20
Galagraphia wrote...
You know, I think Bryce will be Arcane Archer when he grow up. The first one in Thedas!
That would be awesome, and fit very much with his personality- he will never be the type to enjoy getting close up to someone and hurting them. He would rather do no more than he has to and at a distance.
#229
Posté 12 août 2010 - 02:14
#230
Posté 12 août 2010 - 02:51
a) A mage named Gob! You kill me.
c) A mob boss named Flip! OMG!!!
c) Fiona...
Brava! So much better than Anders sex. (It had to be said. LOL)
#231
Posté 12 août 2010 - 03:05
Addai67 wrote...
You really are a genius. This is so perfect.
a) A mage named Gob! You kill me.I'm in love with Mercenary Alistair. *hothothot*
c) A mob boss named Flip! OMG!!!Where does this stuff crawl up from in your brain?
c) Fiona...:crying:
'Nuff said.
Brava! So much better than Anders sex. (It had to be said. LOL)
I almost made Gob balding and utterly incompetent, but decided against it.
I think Fiona wins my "I want to hug her right now" award. Poor Fiona.
And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row."
#232
Posté 12 août 2010 - 03:09
SurelyForth wrote...
And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row."
......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!
#233
Posté 12 août 2010 - 03:18
Sandtigress wrote...
SurelyForth wrote...
And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row."
......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!What, I do? Did. Um, yeah.... *hides*
And that's how you get to rack up the big bucks as Addai's fanfic therapist, Dalish Specialist.
#234
Posté 12 août 2010 - 03:20
ROFL I'm glad to hear I wield such Cleanse power. Keeping Anders away from Alistair one chapter at a time. Oh God, I'm going to hurt something..SurelyForth wrote...
And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row."
If Gob had come rolling up in a dog-powered scooter, that would have been too epic for words. But the rest of your readers would probably have written tons of WTF reviews.
Ok, so that's it... NO living in sin in Orlais and eating cake. Living in sin in the Free Marches and kicking ass is where it's at. Since Idun has a red-marked copy of Undertow she likes to show Alistair, I'm sure she's taking notes.
Modifié par Addai67, 12 août 2010 - 03:20 .
#235
Posté 12 août 2010 - 03:20
SurelyForth wrote...
Sandtigress wrote...
SurelyForth wrote...
And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row."
......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!What, I do? Did. Um, yeah.... *hides*
And that's how you get to rack up the big bucks as Addai's fanfic therapist, Dalish Specialist.
lol How did I get the role as yours then? I only made Alistair a wandering drunk once, and that was by accident, I took it back the next day!
#236
Posté 12 août 2010 - 03:22
I've gotta agree; playing through your favorite origin repeatedly is hardly a daunting task. Come to think of it, I don't even know how many times I've played through mine...Sandtigress wrote...
SurelyForth wrote...
And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row."
......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!What, I do? Did. Um, yeah.... *hides*
Nice chapter.
I like that Ander's already getting to work at that whole 'hiding the fact Bryce is a mage' thing.
#237
Posté 12 août 2010 - 03:28
Sarah1281 wrote...
I've gotta agree; playing through your favorite origin repeatedly is hardly a daunting task. Come to think of it, I don't even know how many times I've played through mine...Sandtigress wrote...
SurelyForth wrote...
And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row."
......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!What, I do? Did. Um, yeah.... *hides*
Nice chapter.
I like that Ander's already getting to work at that whole 'hiding the fact Bryce is a mage' thing.
I've probably played through the mage origin close to 20 times. I really should want to punch Jowan in the face way more than I do.
And thanks!
#238
Posté 12 août 2010 - 07:08

Title: Awkward
#239
Posté 12 août 2010 - 08:47
1.) I inexplicably picture Gob with a Justin Bieber haircut
2.) Right at a serious, sad point in the chapter, I inappropriately busted out laughing because of one line that reminded me of this:
Modifié par Mel_Redux, 12 août 2010 - 08:50 .
#240
Posté 12 août 2010 - 09:02
Mel_Redux wrote...
That chapter was so heart breaking, that I feel I need to bring in 2 points of levity.
1.) I inexplicably picture Gob with a Justin Bieber haircut
Now I'm picturing Gob with a Justin Bieber haircut and it's pretty perfect.
2.) Right at a serious, sad point in the chapter, I inappropriately busted out laughing because of one line that reminded me of this:
I may have also thought of this picture when I was writing it. Maybe.
#241
Posté 12 août 2010 - 09:22
#242
Posté 13 août 2010 - 06:56
Though his appearance was short but stylish. If I had any children I would pay him to teach them.
#243
Posté 13 août 2010 - 07:39
Galagraphia wrote...
I want more Anders!
Though his appearance was short but stylish. If I had any children I would pay him to teach them.
There's a very Anders-centric chapter coming up soon. Yay!
Maybe.
#245
Posté 17 août 2010 - 03:57
Also, while this has probably been covered in the story, I can't for the life of me remember why Bryce calls her Brand.
#246
Posté 17 août 2010 - 04:14
Sarah1281 wrote...
It's nice to see Brand realizing that not everything bad that happens to other people (particularly Alistair) is her fault. She really doesn't deserve that. I loved Anders' proposal.
Also, while this has probably been covered in the story, I can't for the life of me remember why Bryce calls her Brand.
Yeah, she's been alerted to her blind spot. It will take awhile for her to be consistently aware, though.
I actually never covered why Bryce calls her Brand- it's because she's always telling people to call her Brand rather than a title. He just picked it up from there.
Thanks for reading!
#247
Posté 17 août 2010 - 07:18
I love this chapter. I wonder if my Anders will ever tell Marina that he loves her. They spent about 10 years together and she's the only one who half-jokingly calls him "mon amour". I just can't imagine him saying this to her, it's too serious and they are serious only when they are in mortal danger. )))
#248
Posté 17 août 2010 - 07:22
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Posté 17 août 2010 - 07:52
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Posté 17 août 2010 - 08:26





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