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You know, I think Bryce will be Arcane Archer when he grow up. The first one in Thedas!

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Galagraphia wrote...

You know, I think Bryce will be Arcane Archer when he grow up. The first one in Thedas!


That would be awesome, and fit very much with his personality- he will never be the type to enjoy getting close up to someone and hurting them. He would rather do no more than he has to and at a distance.

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Updated!



And don't even tell me if ff.net hides it, shank knifes it, or throws it up on your lap. I don't think I can take the pain.

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No it's there. And it's perfect *sob*.

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You really are a genius.  This is so perfect.

a) A mage named Gob!  You kill me.

B) I'm in love with Mercenary Alistair.  *hothothot*

c) A mob boss named Flip!  OMG!!!  :lol:  Where does this stuff crawl up from in your brain?

c)  Fiona... :crying::crying::crying:  'Nuff said.


Brava!  So much better than Anders sex.  (It had to be said. LOL)

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Addai67 wrote...

You really are a genius.  This is so perfect.

a) A mage named Gob!  You kill me.

B) I'm in love with Mercenary Alistair.  *hothothot*

c) A mob boss named Flip!  OMG!!!  :lol:  Where does this stuff crawl up from in your brain?

c)  Fiona... :crying::crying::crying:  'Nuff said.


Brava!  So much better than Anders sex.  (It had to be said. LOL)


I almost made Gob balding and utterly incompetent, but decided against it. 

I think Fiona wins my "I want to hug her right now" award. Poor Fiona. 

And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row." :P

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SurelyForth wrote...

And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row.:P


......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!   :bandit: What, I do?  Did.  Um, yeah....  *hides*

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Sandtigress wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row.:P


......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!   :bandit: What, I do?  Did.  Um, yeah....  *hides*


And that's how you get to rack up the big bucks as Addai's fanfic therapist, Dalish Specialist.

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SurelyForth wrote...

And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row." :P

ROFL  I'm glad to hear I wield such Cleanse power.  Keeping Anders away from Alistair one chapter at a time.  Oh God, I'm going to hurt something..

If Gob had come rolling up in a dog-powered scooter, that would have been too epic for words.  But the rest of your readers would probably have written tons of WTF reviews.

Ok, so that's it... NO living in sin in Orlais and eating cake.  Living in sin in the Free Marches and kicking ass is where it's at.  Since Idun has a red-marked copy of Undertow she likes to show Alistair, I'm sure she's taking notes.

Modifié par Addai67, 12 août 2010 - 03:20 .


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SurelyForth wrote...

Sandtigress wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row.:P


......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!   :bandit: What, I do?  Did.  Um, yeah....  *hides*


And that's how you get to rack up the big bucks as Addai's fanfic therapist, Dalish Specialist.


lol How did I get the role as yours then?  I only made Alistair a wandering drunk once, and that was by accident, I took it back the next day!

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Sandtigress wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row.:P


......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!   :bandit: What, I do?  Did.  Um, yeah....  *hides*

I've gotta agree; playing through your favorite origin repeatedly is hardly a daunting task. Come to think of it, I don't even know how many times I've played through mine...

Nice chapter. Image IPB

 I like that Ander's already getting to work at that whole 'hiding the fact Bryce is a mage' thing.

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Sarah1281 wrote...

Sandtigress wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

And you're one of the reasons I kept gratuitous mage sex separate! I actually thought "Addai will kill me if she gets this chapter instead of Alistair/Fiona. Well, kill me or make me play the Dalish Origin five or six times in a row.:P


......That's not a punishment, I do that for fun!   :bandit: What, I do?  Did.  Um, yeah....  *hides*

I've gotta agree; playing through your favorite origin repeatedly is hardly a daunting task. Come to think of it, I don't even know how many times I've played through mine...

Nice chapter. Image IPB

 I like that Ander's already getting to work at that whole 'hiding the fact Bryce is a mage' thing.


I've probably played through the mage origin close to 20 times. I really should want to punch Jowan in the face way more than I do.

And thanks! 

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More Fanart from Mel_Redux! This time it's just awesome:



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Title: Awkward

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That chapter was so heart breaking, that I feel I need to bring in 2 points of levity.

1.) I inexplicably picture Gob with a Justin Bieber haircut

2.) Right at a serious, sad point in the chapter, I inappropriately busted out laughing because of one line that reminded me of this:
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Modifié par Mel_Redux, 12 août 2010 - 08:50 .


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Mel_Redux wrote...

That chapter was so heart breaking, that I feel I need to bring in 2 points of levity.

1.) I inexplicably picture Gob with a Justin Bieber haircut


Now I'm picturing Gob with a Justin Bieber haircut and it's pretty perfect.

2.) Right at a serious, sad point in the chapter, I inappropriately busted out laughing because of one line that reminded me of this:
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I may have also thought of this picture when I was writing it. Maybe. Image IPB

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LOL. I am slowly infiltrating your brain...AND THE DAY IS MINE!!!

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 I want more Anders! :o
Though his appearance was short but stylish. If I had any children I would pay him to teach them.

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Galagraphia wrote...

 I want more Anders! :o
Though his appearance was short but stylish. If I had any children I would pay him to teach them.


There's a very Anders-centric chapter coming up soon. Yay!

Maybe. Image IPB

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Updated!!

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It's nice to see Brand realizing that not everything bad that happens to other people (particularly Alistair) is her fault. She really doesn't deserve that. I loved Anders' proposal. Image IPB

Also, while this has probably been covered in the story, I can't for the life of me remember why Bryce calls her Brand.

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Sarah1281 wrote...

It's nice to see Brand realizing that not everything bad that happens to other people (particularly Alistair) is her fault. She really doesn't deserve that. I loved Anders' proposal. Image IPB

Also, while this has probably been covered in the story, I can't for the life of me remember why Bryce calls her Brand.


Yeah, she's been alerted to her blind spot. It will take awhile for her to be consistently aware, though.

I actually never covered why Bryce calls her Brand- it's because she's always telling people to call her Brand rather than a title. He just picked it up from there. 

Thanks for reading!

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I thought Bryce called her Brand because nobody called her "mommy" and she seemed too serious lady to coo around him: "Say "mama" :) Looks like my guess was close to the truth :)



I love this chapter. I wonder if my Anders will ever tell Marina that he loves her. They spent about 10 years together and she's the only one who half-jokingly calls him "mon amour". I just can't imagine him saying this to her, it's too serious and they are serious only when they are in mortal danger. )))

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From your pictures, Gala, it's pretty obvious that he loves her ;). If he ever looked at me the way he looks at her in those I'd melt into a puddle on the spot.

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He loves her. Though he may be not aware of it or refuse to admit it to himself. It's complicated, because they have their magical bound and the words are unnecessary most of the time to express how they feel for each other. And this makes it hard for me to draw a comic about their strange relationship and I can't write about this too. :(

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ooh /rubs hands together. Last part has me all a jumping ;-)