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Brand's life is falling apart in front of her, how is she supposed to react?

It's not HER fault that Bryce is a mage. It's not HER fault that she fell in love with Anders, who is also a mage, and its not HER fault that rumors started about them having an affair while she was still amrried to Teagan. She is a victim of circumstance, and frankly I think the fact that she can still breathe is a miracle. Everything she cares about and everything that gives her meaning is being ripped from her, through no fault of her own.

Add to that the fact that she was humiliated, in one of the few places that she should feel safe (liek Addai said), and its no surprise that she would self destruct. Her life's going to hell, there's nothing she can do to stop it. Why not help it along? It's a very real human reaction to a horrrible situation. Brand is human, not superhuman.


And  ANDERS helped in that humiliation. ANDERS! The person that SHOULD have spared her from it.  I didn't find it out of character at all when she basically said "F*** it all!" at the end of the chapter, even knowing he'd walk in eventually. Though I was hoping at some point it would be Alistair she fell in bed with, but that's ok:) .

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You know, having Alistair be the one she slept with instead of the Hopewalls could actually be the one thing that would make the situation WORSE...

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Sarah1281 wrote...

You know, having Alistair be the one she slept with instead of the Hopewalls could actually be the one thing that would make the situation WORSE...



heh, what Sarah said.  Totally. :wub:

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Sarah1281 wrote...

You know, having Alistair be the one she slept with instead of the Hopewalls could actually be the one thing that would make the situation WORSE...


I know that. I understand fully why it WASN'T. Kinda like I was kinda hoping to get a cd for christmas, but got something equally good instead.

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Lady Jess wrote...
And  ANDERS helped in that humiliation. ANDERS! The person that SHOULD have spared her from it.  I didn't find it out of character at all when she basically said "F*** it all!" at the end of the chapter, even knowing he'd walk in eventually. Though I was hoping at some point it would be Alistair she fell in bed with, but that's ok:) .

Well, Anders is Anders, he's not Alistair who discovered about where do babies come from when he was 20. He loves to discuss such things and, as Surely told us earlier, Brand never thought it was something bad either. He thought it would've been fun. And he also was drunk. And even when he's not drunk he's not the most tactful person in Thedas, I suppose they don't teach mages manners in the Circle.

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Sarah1281 wrote...

You know, having Alistair be the one she slept with instead of the Hopewalls could actually be the one thing that would make the situation WORSE...

Yes, that would have been clusterf*ck with a captial C.

Why do I still wish that's what actually happened.  LOL

I never thought of that, BTW!

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Galagraphia wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...
And  ANDERS helped in that humiliation. ANDERS! The person that SHOULD have spared her from it.  I didn't find it out of character at all when she basically said "F*** it all!" at the end of the chapter, even knowing he'd walk in eventually. Though I was hoping at some point it would be Alistair she fell in bed with, but that's ok:) .

Well, Anders is Anders, he's not Alistair who discovered about where do babies come from when he was 20. He loves to discuss such things and, as Surely told us earlier, Brand never thought it was something bad either. He thought it would've been fun. And he also was drunk. And even when he's not drunk he's not the most tactful person in Thedas, I suppose they don't teach mages manners in the Circle.

I just have to say that, having known monastic types, they know where babies come from despite having taken vows.  Image IPB

Sorry, big pet peeve of mine.  Celibate =/ idiot naif.

But I agree that Anders was just being oblivious in this situation.  It's part of what I found tragic about the situation, that he didn't read what she was feeling and that she didn't feel like she could talk to him or her family about it.

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I just have to say that, having known monastic types, they know where babies come from despite having taken vows.  Image IPB

Sorry, big pet peeve of mine.  Celibate =/ idiot naif.

I know that of course ;) 'twas a joke. Wynne's joke by the way.

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Galagraphia wrote...

Addai67 wrote...
I just have to say that, having known monastic types, they know where babies come from despite having taken vows.  Image IPB

Sorry, big pet peeve of mine.  Celibate =/ idiot naif.

I know that of course ;) 'twas a joke. Wynne's joke by the way.

Oh ok!  You do see that opinion around, though.

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Sarah1281 wrote...

You know, having Alistair be the one she slept with instead of the Hopewalls could actually be the one thing that would make the situation WORSE...

Yes, that would have been clusterf*ck with a captial C.

Why do I still wish that's what actually happened.  LOL

I never thought of that, BTW!


I won't lie, it was kinda supposed to happen. I even wrote the scene, months ago. But I've moved a few critical plot points around so a lot of the characters are in different places mentally than they would have been before. It still would have been a horrible clusterf*ck, but not nearly as breathtakingly bad as it would be in this version of events.

Modifié par SurelyForth, 01 septembre 2010 - 06:10 .


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I must add in Anders' defense (though I don't think he needs it) that the source of the problem may be a big difference between him and Brand. Her memories of the past cause her pain, and he prefers to remember only good things. Remember how he was telling Velanna that coming back to the Tower was not so bad because Rylock was glaring at him and he thought it was hot? He sees bright sides everywhere. Perhaps he thought that the funny story about Brand's sexy life would make her cheer up and be less grim about coming back. Perhaps he actually cared in his own way.

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SurelyForth wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

You know, having Alistair be the one she slept with instead of the Hopewalls could actually be the one thing that would make the situation WORSE...

Yes, that would have been clusterf*ck with a captial C.

Why do I still wish that's what actually happened.  LOL

I never thought of that, BTW!


I won't lie, it was kinda supposed to happen. I even wrote the scene, months ago. But I've moved a few critical plot points around so a lot of the characters are in different places mentally than they would have been before. It still would have been a horrible clusterf*ck, but not nearly as breathtakingly bad as it would be in this version of events.

Wait...so this version is going to be even worse than if she'd just slept with Alistair? Image IPB

I hope she didn't get pregnant...

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I hope she didn't get pregnant...

Though a non-mage baby would be an option... But that Hopewell dude is disgusting, nothing like bann "Sexy" Teagan, so I hope this won't happen.

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Sarah1281 wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

I won't lie, it was kinda supposed to happen. I even wrote the scene, months ago. But I've moved a few critical plot points around so a lot of the characters are in different places mentally than they would have been before. It still would have been a horrible clusterf*ck, but not nearly as breathtakingly bad as it would be in this version of events.

Wait...so this version is going to be even worse than if she'd just slept with Alistair? Image IPB

I hope she didn't get pregnant...


Maker, no. 

First Draft Brand/First Draft Alistair = Current Brand/Hopewells

whereas

Current Brand/Current Alistair >>> Current Brand/Hopewells.

And by "triple greater than" I mean "triple greater than suck".

Modifié par SurelyForth, 01 septembre 2010 - 06:41 .


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Okay, good. Seriously, I'm going to need to start having comfort food on hand for whenever you update. Image IPB

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Sarah1281 wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

You know, having Alistair be the one she slept with instead of the Hopewalls could actually be the one thing that would make the situation WORSE...

Yes, that would have been clusterf*ck with a captial C.

Why do I still wish that's what actually happened.  LOL

I never thought of that, BTW!


I won't lie, it was kinda supposed to happen. I even wrote the scene, months ago. But I've moved a few critical plot points around so a lot of the characters are in different places mentally than they would have been before. It still would have been a horrible clusterf*ck, but not nearly as breathtakingly bad as it would be in this version of events.

Wait...so this version is going to be even worse than if she'd just slept with Alistair? Image IPB

I hope she didn't get pregnant...


It may depend on your point of view. Think in terms of Anders, what's worse - emotional, drunk and a meaningless threesome or emotional, drunk and falling victim to those overwhelming emotions with someone where there are alot of unresolved issues. Anders might understand sleeping with Alistair more because of her emotional state because you could argue that she was so lost she just clung to something familiar and good from her past.

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SurelyForth wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

You know, having Alistair be the one she slept with instead of the Hopewalls could actually be the one thing that would make the situation WORSE...

Yes, that would have been clusterf*ck with a captial C.

Why do I still wish that's what actually happened.  LOL

I never thought of that, BTW!


I won't lie, it was kinda supposed to happen. I even wrote the scene, months ago. But I've moved a few critical plot points around so a lot of the characters are in different places mentally than they would have been before. It still would have been a horrible clusterf*ck, but not nearly as breathtakingly bad as it would be in this version of events.

LOL, wow Jess called it.  I could see that happening before the whole proposal thing, but actually I think it would be even worse than The Hopewell Affair.  Alistair would be severely messed up by it, for one thing, whereas now he's just... severely messed up from other stuff.  And it would have been harder for Anders to take than a casual, meaningless encounter.  IMO anyway.

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LOL, wow Jess called it.  I could see that happening before the whole proposal thing, but actually I think it would be even worse than The Hopewell Affair.  Alistair would be severely messed up by it, for one thing, whereas now he's just... severely messed up from other stuff.  And it would have been harder for Anders to take than a casual, meaningless encounter.  IMO anyway.


Brand sleeping with Alistair now would be unforgivable, I think. It would be cruel to all of them (Fiona included) and just...so, so bad. The amount of angsty weird guilt and backsliding involved would be almost impossible for me to write. 

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I would never forgive Alistair if he would sleep with Brand after everything. I belive he's still too good to do it.

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Well I'm sure if that happened it would be a variation on drunken stupor, too. Still, we dodged that bullet, so! *looking forward to next chapter and hoping it's not delayed by all the criticism*

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Well I'm sure if that happened it would be a variation on drunken stupor, too. Still, we dodged that bullet, so! *looking forward to next chapter and hoping it's not delayed by all the criticism*


Me too! I always get excited when I see a new chapter in my alerts:)

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Fluffy ass update. It's fluffy because Anders is fun to write and, frankly, we needed a break.

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Like! The recent episodes have been good but rather dark. Light and fluffy was just what's needed.

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That was nice. But now I want to stab bann "Sexy" Teagan for making Anders miserable with his presence. Can't wait to get to Redcliffe and that part with posessed Connor's mind control tricks.

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mousestalker wrote...

Like! The recent episodes have been good but rather dark. Light and fluffy was just what's needed.


Thanks! When I finished the last chapter, posted and immediately began writing this one instead of taking my customary 12 hour minimum break, I knew that it was something that needed to be done.


Galagraphia wrote...

That was nice. But now I want to stab bann "Sexy" Teagan for making Anders miserable with his presence. Can't wait to get to Redcliffe and that part with posessed Connor's mind control tricks.


Hee! But the jazz hands are why we love Teagan!