Finally getting around to this slowly.
*snip*
It's cool.
But the use of the term 'the Game' is getting annoying.
Yes, we get it. But can you use other words that don't sound so showy?
Intrigues, for example, that's a good word.
(Yes I know it's an Orlesian term.)
Otherwise the prose is solid and it flows really well.
Especially if the delivery doesn't live up to its expectations. Then it just becomes extravagant in its meaning. Hence why I am always skeptical when BW delves into political intrigue of any level.





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