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Manny Santiago

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In the process in making machinima using cutscenes and I'll need to get some feedback on this script I made for the first scene.

My main concern on this is because one of my voice actors is only available for a one-attempt visit. Anything helpful and constructive is greatly appreciated!

http://social.biowar...m/project/2742/

There's a .doc file in there.

EDIT : Should work. Always place a slash on the end when a URL ends with a number.

Modifié par Manny Santiago, 21 mai 2010 - 02:50 .


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Beerfish

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I get a Page not found error when I try and put that link into my browser.

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Manny Santiago

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Should work now. Use this project name to search for it also: "Project LOTF" (without the quotation marks)