Yours looks really accurate to the drawing. That's pretty neat. Both your characters look pretty cool, too. :happy:
This seems like a cool idea. I maybe went a bit overboard on it doing six people at once, but after I'd thought of doing one of them, it seemed odd not to do the rest of them... and I couldn't decide which ones to single out not to do.
So my entire first (and favourite) Baldur's Gate group follows, as they were at the end of the series, more or less; I changed clerics twice and thieves three times. I tend to play through multiplayer and make all of my own characters. It's not that I have anything against the NPCs exactly, I just prefer it that way.
Ithenrael Wyrmbane
The best drawing I have of him. (A lot of things about this drawing make me cringe now, as it's rather old, but unfortunately it's still the best one likeness-wise. He's the standing one, on the right.)
Neither of these, as you can probably tell by the drawing, really look much like him. The first one - well, I can never manage to make the male elves actually look
young, as in under-twenty-looking young. He should look to be around seventeen, in human terms. And there are some other problems. So I thought "Fine, I'll try and cheat and see if I can get it closer with the female elf". And it is closer, though not very close (and that would probably annoy him). If you sort of spliced the two (taking mostly the 'being male' from the first one) it would probably be reasonably close, though he still wouldn't be pale enough.
Ithenrael is a neutral evil grey elf sorcerer. In game, of course, that was just 'elf mage', but since I later have ended up playing all of these characters in a tabletop 3.5 game, I tend to think of him that way. He started out chaotic neutral, but fairly soon after he figured out that he was a Bhaalspawn he started going down the slippery egomaniac/power-hungry slope (and looked to be headed that way even before then). He still more or less tries to be a nice guy, but that doesn't mesh too well wanting to be the Lord of Murder. So evil he remains, if not very evil.
Retgar Nyatar
The best drawing I have of him. (He's the one on the right; Ithenrael is the one on the left.)
This one is a good deal closer, I think, though not quite right. He is in fact a half-elf, for one thing, and there aren't any half-elves in Dragon Age.
Retgar is a chaotic evil half-elf fighter. He isn't all bad; he, Ithenrael and Jarina grew up together, and he's always been a very loyal friend (especially to Ithenrael). He got progressively more mad as time went on, as his obsession with the madness inherent in the world tended to change his world view a bit. He is currently the Lord of the castle he inherited from his father, Lord Garrion Nyatar, which is where the group resides.
Jarina Demonslayer
The best drawing I have of her.
I couldn't get her nose or hair right, but other than that, it's fairly close.
Jarina is a chaotic neutral human ranger. Through the course of the game she was supposedly chaotic good, of course, but she never really was much, and Blackrazor and continued association with Ithenrael, Retgar and Gadragk didn't help anything. She's mostly a loner, and is very fond of wolves.
Gadragk Zarn
The best drawing I have of him. (He's the one on the far right.)
Not quite right, but I'm not sure how much of that is the completely uncharacteristic expression he's got on him here.
Gadragk is a chaotic evil human berserker. He is by far the oldest member of the group in terms of relative lifespan; in fact, his hair should be going a bit grey at the temples, but I couldn't do that, so... yeah. He used to work for Lord Nyatar before he went adventuring with the others, so he's known the first three for quite a long time. He is a rather savage person, but is also a brilliant tactician.
Moreniel Nightsong
The best drawing I have of her. (She's the one second from the left.)
All in all, I think this is probably the closest one by a fair margin. There are some things that aren't quite right, but they're mostly pretty small things.
Moreniel is a true neutral elven cleric of Ao (because at the time, I didn't realise Ao wasn't supposed to have clerics... so we mostly just ignore that). She tends to be fairly antisocial, only really getting along well with Xerelas for the most part. She was the second cleric, as the first cleric died at the end of the first game. She also gets along reasonably well with Ithenrael.
Xerelas Shadowknife
The best drawing I have of him. This one's mostly pretty good, though I've come to realise that I suck at noses in the character creator - and most of the time he keeps his face almost completely covered and wears a hood.
Xerelas is a chaotic neutral elven swashbuckler from a desert land. The party found him wandering around in Watcher's Keep after the death of their second thief (the first one also died at the end of the first game). He is a very good thief in addition to being quite a good fighter. He is obsessed with speed. He gets along by far the best with Moreniel, but has no problems with any of the group.
I appologise about the length of that. I'm afraid I have a tendency to talk way too much about my characters if you get me started.