Cossack72 wrote...
Hope the dialogue is good for such a talk.
Shep: So Ash, how have you been since I've come back out of the blue and been with Cerberus? Still feeling a tad miffed?
Ash: I got better
I think I might break the monitor in half if it ends up resembling that
Development (in my critical opinion) takes smart writing. Some stories waste great amounts of time on character development and still fail to connect that character with the audience. Others give you brief insight into the character throughout and by the end, you are saying, I can identify with him/her. That's smart writing.
It can be done. To me, the situation regarding Ash/Kaiden reuniting with a faithful Shepherd in ME3 is a writers dream. Look at all the great fan fiction that has been generated for just such a scenario.





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