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 RP Thread

Tell us who your characters are, what they want, their views and so forth

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Isurion was born under the rules of man. He accepted it, as did others. They had a strong community, they cared for each other and when they had fun they really had fun. Isurion was always adapt at fighting. A sword in his hand was as natural as the hand itself. He trained day and night because in his heart he knew that man would one day come and demand more than was possible...thay day came and the wrath within Isurion grew. He made a promise, his ultimate goal was vengeance against mankind in every way possible...and the Blight is such a way.

Modifié par Bebbe777, 20 octobre 2009 - 07:26 .


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I actually have pictures and backgrounds for all my characters in my da characters album if anyone wants to look :D

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Isurion does look like a determined individual. I think you did a great job capturing him. =]



I haven't written up or finalized all of my characters yet, but here are a few WiP's…

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As a nobleman's son, Aelkirko has been trained from birth to be a warrior, ready to fight in defense of his homeland and some day take his place at his brother's side. His position has given him many priviledges, but it has also offered him a unique perspective of the world at large: he can hear the threat of war approaching; he can see the oppression of the elves; he can sense the lies around him, and yet, has no real power to do as he believes to be right. His birth dictates that his brother will rule and he must remain loyal to the status quo.

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Aeniyer is a rogue at heart, always wishing to touch what is locked away, wishing to uncover what is buried, and wishing to explore the world outside the confines of her father's castle. That being said, she has no desire to steal or pickpocket, or indeed, carry anything she has no immediate use for. What she'd really love to do is be an adventurer. Her dreams have always been filled with fantastic visions of what the world must be like and how exhilarating life could be living as a traveling bard in the far reaches of another land.

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Hayan never had the chance to dream. She probably wouldn't even understand the concept of a fantasy. Life is hard and the only way to survive is by hitting harder than anyone else and not stopping until their heart is in your fist. Hayan's only ambition is to live to see tomorrow. No joy is worth having because it will only hurt all the more when it's taken away from you, her mother used to say.

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Ean is fiercely traditional and proud of his heritage, but has no great hatred for outsiders. To hate someone is to give them a place in your life, and he refuses to acknowledge anyone who will not accept him in return. Training the young Elves of the forest in the ways of survival and herbalism is his passion in life, though he is also an accomplished Duelist.

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Yanahi's focus throughout her life has always been on the protection of those too weak to stand up for themselves. She is a pacifist by nature and if possible, would spend her days as a traveling healer. In her heart she believes that everyone and everything can be saved, but in her mind she knows that everyone must walk the path they choose in the manner they choose to. She is eternally the optimist, but when it comes down to it, she is ready to do what is necessary for the greater good. Though unfortunate, a festering extremity must occasionally be amputated.

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Great idea of topic, it seems to be needed, as many people have already written that sort of stuff.

@ Bebbe777 : Isurion's story is quite terrible! Does this mean that he won't try to stop the blight because it destroys humanity? But the blight makes no difference between races. Interesting character, his look fits his personality.

@ Rivie: I'm gonna brows your album and post impressions!

Modifié par Purple Lady, 20 octobre 2009 - 07:45 .


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I have far too many characters to list here, I've spammed enough threads with them already, I have 7 blogs up atm for in-depth looks at personalities, planning on writing more, on time of my album which has brief descriptions of them all, which is in my signature.

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I'm glad someone finally made this topic - I'm surprised it's taken so long. I'll be sure to add my own character concepts when I get the chance.

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Purple Lady wrote...

@ Bebbe777 : Isurion's story is quite terrible! Does this mean that he won't try to stop the blight because it destroys humanity? But the blight makes no difference between races. Interesting character, his look fits his personality.


Isurion will try to use the Blight to damage the world of men as much as possible. At the same time he will try to stop it to save his brothers and sisters. He walks on a thin line. How much chaos can be released before it is to late to stop it.

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All of the ones posted so far look interesting! It's actually making me wish I could have a few of them as NPCs in my game. Especially: Isurian (Nova'd love picking on him, and I believe he'd have a comrade-in-arms in Rivie, although she'd attempt to temper the edge of that resentment), Aeniyer (Ritha would love daydreaming with her), and Ean (Rivie'd likely be a student of his).

Modifié par Rivie, 20 octobre 2009 - 08:28 .


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Here is one:

Talorn Mahariel - Dalish elf warrior - Supports his people, at any cost. Hates the chantry, whose crusade destroyed the Dale.
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Once, the elves were powerful and immortal, beautiful and peaceful, so says The Keeper, and so believes Talorn. As beautiful as his ancestors, yet mortal, he seeks to find all the lost lore, all the lost knowledge, so that one day, Dalish and city elves will rise, and impose their place and culture, never ever submitting to humanity.

Apart from defending the clan's territory, and the occasional brief (and often violent) encounter with humans, Talorn has never spoken to anyone than the other Dalish. As a warrior, he is convinced that Dalish clans must gather to be stronger, so that an army could be created, only way for the humans to respect elves and their religion. They could reconquer the Dale, and keep on worshiping elven gods, a strong army protecting them in case of an another crusade led by the Chantry.
Nice to his people, proud, seductive and born leader, he hopes and works for an elven revolution.

Talorn is a warrior, is very persuasive and uses the weapons of his people, dual wielded or bow







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I get the odd urge to pinch his cheeks, and I suspect he would despise me for it. He's got great looks, but his eyes and expression do give an impression of hardness.

Oh, thanks for your comments, by the way! You know... in Alicia's case.. your comment got me to thinking. I've only ever really pictured her as doing well in training, or otherwise decorative fencing, tournaments, and the like.  Things where it's more about skill (or show) than doing actual damage. I think actual combat, with death and spurting wounds... will rock her world. She'll be stunned and shaken, I don't think she's really mentally prepared for how brutal war is. She has an idea, but she can't really comprehend how it will actually be. I'm seriously wondering if she'll be the character I have that will break down at some point in the game.  Her determination will drag her through it all, but... yow.

The Origin events will likely put her into a heroic BSOD for a day or two.

Modifié par Rivie, 20 octobre 2009 - 08:34 .


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Named after Fen'Harel "the Dread Wolf. The trickster god of the old elven pantheon. In the same way as Statues of Fen'Harel are set aside from Dalish camps facing away, being named Fenn serves as a reminder to always be wary. Young but skilled learning all that he can from the keeper and several of the older hunters. like most elves he is skilled in archery and unlike most elfs the axe is his favorite weapon for getting up close.

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Right now he's working that "looking forward towards a brave new future" pose. He strikes me as young, but determined and a bit.. tired? As if he knows what's coming.

Seems you got the personality across pretty well!

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Very nice thread-idea :)


Daedhe Tabris, is an idealistic, freeminded and perky city elf, always trying to escape the repetitive and alltogether dull life of a common alienage elf. In her youth she was a troublemaker, striving for thrill and excitement, always getting herself and her cousins into trouble.
She was headstrong and proud and didn't allow anyone - let alone humans - order her around or treat her as a second - class citizen. She freely spoke about her ideals, her dreams and her philosophy and didn't even consider to silence herself in front of humans or more careful and silent elves... The climax of this pride was the tatoo, in honor of the Dalish elfs, which she still wears as a reminder of this time of her life. Maybe after one visited the city to trade?

But I guess at some point Daedhe realised that being an elf in a human world is not something about optimistic beliefs and proud ideals, but a still ongoing struggle to restablish their status in the world, and that many humans consider elves as a lower lifeform....
It was something that crossed her line, maybe, or something that put her into danger, but it changed her view of the world and made her more carefully and introverted, even covering her pointed ears behind her hair ....

Well... that's a sum up... sorry for the length. ;)

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Great stories everyone. Keep it up.

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Lucien is the second son in the Cousland family. Along with it comes responsibility and power. In his early days he had problems with authority, he went against his father and condemned Ferelden several times. As he grew older, this contempt against authority evolved into an urge to do good. At the dinner parties he often spoked about how Ferelden must evolve and become strong and not just the humans but also the elves and dwarfes. 
"Let Ferelden become a shining beacon, let us show the way with unity, sensibility and justice. Let us help the elves and aid the dwarfs. We can teach them so much and they us. Only then can we stand against the Blight."
Only the future will tell if Lucien will be able to create an alliance between men, elves and dwarfes and fight back the Darkspawn.

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Selene has always been different. As a child, while other girls read romantic stories, she used to read horror stories and books about the ancient mages. Selene loved the night and the darkness, she painted grim creatures that used to scare her mother to near death When she got older they detected she felt the Fade, she could become a mage. At the Circle of Magi she meet another world. A world were she could do good, help others and protect Thedas. But she also learnt there was forbidden magic, blood magic. With it she could become stronger, just like the ancient mages, she could help the world and herself with it. The only thing she needed to do was to make a deal with a demon. Will she become a champion of Light or turn to darkness and greed. 

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Rivie wrote...

I get the odd urge to pinch his cheeks, and I suspect he would despise me for it. He's got great looks, but his eyes and expression do give an impression of hardness.

Oh, thanks for your comments, by the way! You know... in Alicia's case.. your comment got me to thinking. I've only ever really pictured her as doing well in training, or otherwise decorative fencing, tournaments, and the like.  Things where it's more about skill (or show) than doing actual damage. I think actual combat, with death and spurting wounds... will rock her world. She'll be stunned and shaken, I don't think she's really mentally prepared for how brutal war is. She has an idea, but she can't really comprehend how it will actually be. I'm seriously wondering if she'll be the character I have that will break down at some point in the game.  Her determination will drag her through it all, but... yow.

The Origin events will likely put her into a heroic BSOD for a day or two.

Sure, don't even try to pinch his cheeks, unless you want to receive a mortal blow.

Concerning Alicia, my comment was not meant to disturb you, I think it is normal for a young, protected, female noble to look like this, and she'll certainly harden herself throughout the game.

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Oh, no, not disturbing at all. It just made me really look at her. She IS pretty sheltered, after all, and DA's story is a relatively dark one.  It'll be interesting to see how she does.

Modifié par Rivie, 20 octobre 2009 - 09:18 .


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Nice thread! After all the character creation-threads, it's nice to see what people had in mind when they came up with with their personal PC.



Up to now I have only figured out a background story for Hanik:



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The story can be found here if anyone is interested: http://social.biowar...25194/blog/229/

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(If somebody could tell me how to do the profile picture thing into the post body, I'd appreciate it. Otherwise, just look at my avatar)

(While I have taken every effort to ensure lore-ical accuracy, I cannot verify that the following summary/narration is 100% canonical. In those areas where my ignorance has let me miss a few lore-based details, I have only this to say: If the devs would come out and tell us more lore-things, then I wouldn't even need this disclaimer!  Image IPB )

Aileth Surana:


Aileth had been a curious elf, even in his childhood (despite how short it was, he often remembers his close relatives and time spent as a part of the alienage fondly). He got along with others easily, and was often the ringleader amongst his juvenile (and some might feel inclined to add the descriptor "delinquent") peers.  When he was finally considered old enough to wander out of the alienage, with the company of an older elf of course, he was ecstatic, as most children so easily are. His life, however, was not destined to be that of hard, menial labor like that of his fellows. On one of his first visits outside of the alienage proper, him and his accompanying group passed by a group of mages who had come to town with a group of Formari to sell their wares to the local teyrn. To his shock, and the alienage's great dismay, Aileth was proclaimed to have noticable potential as a mage.

He never had the chance to return to the alienage.

Wisked out of the city by one of the mages who had been with the Formari that very day, Aileth found himself plunged into a world lacking any sort of familiarity, without even the simple comfort that final farewells could have provided. While the teachings of the Chantry weren't completely alien to him (his natural curiousity had made him one of the more eager listeners that the Chantry priestesses had managed to willingly gather when they dared venture into the alienage with an armed escort, but, as his concerned family members assured the community, he was just a child, and more curious than devout), the culture present in the Tower that he was dragged to was still strange enough to leave him feeling lost and helpless.  After a long journey followed by a subjectively longer boat ride out into the magnificent lake with the tower at its center, he did not even find the comfort of a familiar race awaiting him.

While growing up in the alienage, humans hadn't really been much of a focus for Aileth. They, like adults, had just been large figures that would yell at you if you were somewhere you shouldn't be, eating something you shouldn't eat, or throwing something that you shouldn't throw. Now, though, with frighteningly few exceptions, he was an elf surrounded by humans, in a society patrolled, controlled, and cared for by the "human" (as he'd heard a few of the older elf children deridingly lable it) Chantry. While it took some getting used to, Aileth soon managed to feel at home with the Circle, and even managed to forge close friendships with other apprentices, who for the most part managed to overlook his non-human-ness in all the ways that counted.

His years as an apprentice were wonderful for a child with as insatiable a curiousity as Aileth was. He did well in his lessons, and showed more than a passing interest in the teachings of the Chantry (to the joy of several of the priests and even a few templars), but when he knew that nobody was looking, he managed to foster an equal, if not greater, interest in his elven heritage. For while others were able to see him (more or less) as human, at some deep level Aileth never forgot his heritage, and spent a lot of his free time learning as much about his brethren as he could. While still a young apprentice, he began to grow a secret, idealistic reverence and interest in the Dalish.  It wasn't until he was halfway through his teenage years that he began to grow disenchanted with the notion of riding around on ships that sailed on land, but deep, deep down he always perked up whenever the chance came to hear whatever stories he could of the Dalish wanderers.

His teenage years also brought other interests to the front of his mind.  Foremost among those was, of course, females. While there are rumors outside of the Circle of how informal social life is amongst the mages, the truth was, to Aileth, a dream come true.  Through his teenage years, he had two (and a half, he would frequently joke with his closest friends) "lovers"... he was never able to be like some of his peers, and make it a casual thing, but those few girls that he did get close enough to to feel comfortable with were frequently absent from lectures and meetings and, often enough to make a few good jokes, meals.  In the end, though, his relationships went the way of many young loves do, progressing from a fumbling passion to an awkward friendship to an even more awkward pointed ignorance of each other.

He was, apart from stories and legends, classes, friends, and girls, also developing an interest in intra-Circle politics by the time he was more than halfway through his teenage years.  To the chagrin of the priests who'd hoped that he would become a truly devout Andrastean, he showed little interest in the Loyalists, leaning more towards the Aequitarians or Libertarians.  As he matured, he began to grow out of his childish fear of the templars (at least, he managed to talk a brave talk when none of them were around), but still maintained an interest in the faith of the Chantry.  He still disliked the idea of a Circle completely bound to the Chantry, but felt that the Chantry's belief that mages should serve rather than rule to be not only functionally sound, but safer for the world at large. Despite these, in his mind, deep-seeded opinions, he was still changing, learning, and growing. Like many other adolescents, he flirted with the idea of rebellion, but never really managed to bring himself to become outspoken on any of his thoughts. While he would be the last to admit it, the right circumstances could still push him towards either the Loyalists or hard-core Libertarians, and despite a verbal willingness to shun interest in the darker sides of magic, they, like the Dalish, held a sort of secret untouchable fascination for him.

Adolescence, like childhood, soon passed him by, and the time grew nigh when many of his teachers started to speak to him about preparing for the Harrowing.  Like it did for most of the other students in the tower, the Harrowing held a great sense of mystery about it to Aileth. Some of the students spent a lot of time speculating about what it really was, and some of the story's thought up by Aileth became popular "bogey-man" tales amongst certain groups of younger students, but eventually fantasy would turn into reality, and Aileth began to grow nervous.  His rite of passage was, if the attitudes expressed by his teachers were any indication, growing closer by the day.



For those who don't want to read the wall of text:
Aileth is, in his own mind, a "good guy". He's personable, gets along with others easily, and is fascinated by stories and myths, regardless of subject or nature. He holds a secret fascination for both his elven heritage and some of the more unsavory aspects of magic (which will be shown by him taking many Entropy spells), but at the end of the day he likes to think that he's just another mage. Nothing extraordinary about him.

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I'll keep mine short.

Human Noble - Braeden Cousland hates his life as a sheltered second child of the Teyrn.  Every chance he gets, he leaves the castle and goes "exploring".  He dreams that one day, he will be able to leave his home forever and live in the wilderness with no worries or responsibilities.
In short - Smart and capable, but irresponsible

Dwarf Noble - Noric Aeducan takes his position as the King of Orzammar's son very seriously.  He is always seen patrolling the districts around the palace with his faithful bodyguard, Gorim.  He is also very loyal to his father, believing that his responsibility and hard-working personality will cement his status in the underground kingdom.
In short - Prideful, loyal, but he believes he should be in charge

Dalish Elf - Morion Mahariel has hated humans from afar, blaming them for the disappearance of his long lost sister, and has murdered every human that has ventured near his camp in cold blood.  He dreams that one day, the Elvhenan will rise again and his oppressed people will be free from tyrannical human rule
In short - violent towards humans, but friendly towards elves

Dwarf Commoner - Uri Brosca has adjusted to his life as a low-born casteless dwarf.  Uri always does what he must and chooses the alternative that seems more profitable, never taking into consideration what he believes is right.  Despite this, he is a very caring person to those who are close to him, and never holds grudges against his friends.
In short - caring and friendly, but does whatever he can to make money

City Elf - Tristan Tabris has always been a hardworking individual, doing what he is told without ever questioning why.  When around friends, Tristan is caring and playful, but his experiences with humans has left him emotionally scarred, and he harbors suppressed rage, knowing that one day, if and when a human mistreats him, he will regret it.
In short - friendly and gentle, but capable of showing rage when provoked

Mage - Onierus Amell believes he has mastered his gift of magic.  He hates the Templars for the oppression of his kind, but he also looks down on the Circle, believing they are holding him back from true power.  Secretly, Onierus searches for the secrets of banned tomes and spells when the watchful eye of the Templars is not near.
In short - condescending, craves power

by the way, how do I put pictures in my posts?

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Holy crap, Marik! You make me feel lazy! :blink:

I'm doing some more thinking on my characters, but I don't have time to post them up right now. I'll get to it sometime tomorrow.

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Yoozaa! You really put som effort into that story Marik. Very nice to see. Keep it up.

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We can make char blogs? How does this work? I really wanna do one for my dwarf/human chars

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Cypher0020 wrote...

We can make char blogs? How does this work? I really wanna do one for my dwarf/human chars

Hover your mouse on "My content" on the left, click Blogs then Compose new entry on the upcoming page and you are ready to share your story. Have fun! :)

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Yay, my wall of text -er, character background- is now conveniently located on my blog, and linked through my sig!

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Aelothk

Her concept started as an idea for a character's backstory that then got integrated into a DnD framework so it is kinda of fun that she seems to have broken out from that and is trying to stand on her backstory alone.

In the original story Aelothk is only her alias; her given name is Kathrinn.

The story goes that she was raised in a very martial noble family. Her family rose to the ranks of nobility by reputation of producing some of the greatest knights, warriors, and body gaurds. Typically for her family only the sons are expected to maintain the families reputation but occasionally a daughter will rise to the challenge (though they tend to never outstipe the sons). Aelothk turned out to be a combat genius--though not very brawny she had a natural head for battle and the agility to make use of her more observant perspective. As soon as she could pick up a twig a swing it like a sword she excelled past brothers 3 years her senior or more. This caused her father (the current head of her family) to holder in the highest regard amongst all his children--not only did she excel at her families true trade, she did so when she wasn't even expected to.  The caused some tension between her and her numerous brothers and she couldn't relate well with her sisters; so she lived to please her father.

Then one day in her teens she accidently killed her sparing mate--something that considered the greatest shame within her family. Killing in true combat is unavoidible--but the greatest fighters will beable to keep from killing anyone that they don't intend to. She failed at this. The combined shame and horror at actually having taken a life were too much. She fled her family and discarded her name--she lived by her wits and by her sword. However the incident continued to wear on her--causing considerable psychological damage. Her attitude toward killing became more and more accepting, eventually casually accepting, to the point that in a conflict murder often seems the easiest most simple solution to her. Her life outside of nobility also caused her to become disilusioned with social system and contemptuous of the nobility in general.

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That is about as far as I can go with the story. Many of the details that I have imagined are somewhat fuzzy right now (I'm at work operating on about 2 hours of sleep). And I haven't done any real research into how the Human Noble Orgin begins so I'm not sure how to integrate my ideas into the game's ideas.

But more or less Aelothk has become a somewhat sadistic sociopath--but she is a very clever armswomen with tons of street smarts.

She will probably NOT be my first play through character.

Ideally my first character would be an arcane knight type character but I'm not sure how possible that is :whistle:.