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Echoes (illustrated) Very short story after the WC ending


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sylvanaerie

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I would like to thank TMP7704 for his lovely mods (this was inspired by one) and the Alistair fans who have posted and inspired me on the Alistair gush thread
A special thank you to Lady Damodred for Beta reading and supplying me with the snapshot I used for my drawing.  Her input has been invaluable for me and she gives me the courage to post angsty stuff.


Echoes

She walked through the crowded floor of the Landsmeet. People clapped her on the back and called her name, their faces smiling--her friends all happy. The Blight was ended, but she didn’t hear them. Instead his voice echoed in her mind.

“Sanest thing I’ve ever done.”

She walked out to the crowds and saw past them, not noticing the cheering all for her, the Hero of Ferelden. She heard only his voice still echoing in her mind.

“Have I told you that I love you?”

The bedroll where he once lay beside her still had his scent. At night she cried out, the nightmares still coming and she would reach for him--only to find his empty pillow beside her. And she would die all over again, his voice echoing in her mind.

“I’d like to say I threw caution to the wind at least once…”

She walked beside the formal procession that carried his ashes to the Anderfels for enclosure into the formal tomb prepared for him. Her head was held high, for she still had her pride, but in her breast her heart was shattered. Pride was hollow, but it was all she had left. And still she heard his voice echo in her mind.

“It’s always been the Wardens duty to end the Blight and right now, we’re the Grey Wardens.”

She walked the halls of Weisshaupt, a haunted ghost of a woman where once a hero lived--face pale, armor hanging loosely on a body now too thin to wear it properly. She knows he would be aghast, his sacrifice for her sake for naught, but her heart was dead inside her now. Her body would soon follow. And always with her, the echoes.

“So, the Grey Warden who slays the Archdemon…dies?”

And so does the one he left behind--unable to hear anything else but the echoes that were all she had left.

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Modifié par sylvanaerie, 04 juin 2010 - 01:42 .


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TotoroTori

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:crying:

*goes and cries in the corner* that was chocker...

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SurelyForth

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Dammit, syl. That was incredibly lovely.

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cmessaz

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Wow, good job. I am seriously going to need a counselor after today.

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Xandurpein

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Very sweet and sad. Very, very good job.

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nos_astra

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...

:crying:

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Lintanis

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Fantastic story, Think someones chopping onions eyes are watering

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sylvanaerie

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Thanks everyone for your lovely comments! It was really inspired by all the wonderful people on the thread. Just some things I had going on in my head with the recent posts.

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LadyDamodred

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And a thank you to syl for what she did with my snapshot! *squees*

I keep coming back to the nightmare section, where she wakes up and reaches for him and...

Yeah...  Image IPB

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 04 juin 2010 - 02:03 .


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MireliA

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That's so sad *sniff* :(

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Galagraphia

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 :crying: She should have had said 'yes' to Morrigan! :(
It's just heartbreaking!

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DamitJanit

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That was so beautiful and i believe what it would really be like. I think you expressed so much feeling in such a short story.. it was heartbreaking and i loved it!

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I had a similar story in mind. In the end she went to the deep roads early. Take down as many of the bastards as she could before being overwhelmed; that sort of thing. This version is way more heartbreaking and beautiful. She wilts like the rose she was given. *tear*

Thanks for this. I love reading continuations of the game!

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sylvanaerie

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Kitschey wrote...

I had a similar story in mind. In the end she went to the deep roads early. Take down as many of the bastards as she could before being overwhelmed; that sort of thing. This version is way more heartbreaking and beautiful. She wilts like the rose she was given. *tear*

Thanks for this. I love reading continuations of the game!


YES!  Very much so!  While I think I like the idea of going out with one last hurrah, I think were it me in this situation, I'd just have given up and 'wilted' away.
You're the first to get the rose connection Image IPB  Or at least no one else has up to now, and voiced it.