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t3HPrO wrote...

Remember, Mordin loves challenges. And if he could make birth rates an ENTIRE race drop through the floor, I don't see why he couldn't cure Miranda, who is ONE PERFECT WOMAN. And besides, if you can raise a man from the dead, who's to say you can't cure infertility?


The problem is that with the genophage, Mordin is working within the existing genetic code of the krogan. He's simply countering krogan evolution by clearing the genophage attack sites in their DNA. If Miranda's tumour destroyed her eggs, Mordin has nothing to work with. If Miranda doesn't want a test tube baby, the only solution at that point would be to create new fertile eggs, write in Miranda's genetic code, and implant them into her ovaries or womb (the latter solution would be a little impractical as it would have to be done over and over until conception).

If it's simply a matter of removing a benign tumour and having everything go back to normal, it doesn't even require someone like Mordin - just a half decent surgeon who knows what he's doing. That kind of operation shouldn't even be too expensive, considering the medical technology of the 22nd century.

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fongiel24 wrote...

t3HPrO wrote...

Remember, Mordin loves challenges. And if he could make birth rates an ENTIRE race drop through the floor, I don't see why he couldn't cure Miranda, who is ONE PERFECT WOMAN. And besides, if you can raise a man from the dead, who's to say you can't cure infertility?


The problem is that with the genophage, Mordin is working within the existing genetic code of the krogan. He's simply countering krogan evolution by clearing the genophage attack sites in their DNA. If Miranda's tumour destroyed her eggs, Mordin has nothing to work with. If Miranda doesn't want a test tube baby, the only solution at that point would be to create new fertile eggs, write in Miranda's genetic code, and implant them into her ovaries or womb (the latter solution would be a little impractical as it would have to be done over and over until conception).

If it's simply a matter of removing a benign tumour and having everything go back to normal, it doesn't even require someone like Mordin - just a half decent surgeon who knows what he's doing. That kind of operation shouldn't even be too expensive, considering the medical technology of the 22nd century.


True, but Mordin, being the genius he is, would likely create dozens of ovum just in case. And besides, your soulution sounds perfectly normal in the ME-verse.Posted Image

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I feel sad for Miranda :( Can BioWare make new DLC asap to make me feel a bit happier for her pleez? :D

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I find the personal-scale conflicts much more interesting than the main plot, which I find dull and am only putting up with for the sake of the personal plots.

Not surprising, since they didn't put much effort into it. The ME2 plot appears coarse and hugely underdeveloped for what it could've been. There are also very few characters directly linked to the plot in a personal way - strictly spoken only Legion counts. IMO, good storytelling interweaves characters and their personal problems with the plot, which makes both parts more interesting. In ME2, plot and characters are mostly disconnected, which leaves the characters mostly intact, but the whole seriously lacking.

I'm much more interested in how Mordin deals with his guilt or Miranda coming to terms with her creation. The SB plot was the only thread tha interested me and then, mostly for Liara's sake.

Mordin is actually one of the better examples, since his story illustrates an aspect of the ME universe. As would Miranda's if there was anything in it about her coming to terms with her creation. As much as I like her loyalty mission, it's one of the things I have only a limited patience with: a family story completely unconnected to any part of the plot or bigger aspect of the world. Which perhaps it wouldn't be if there was any noticeable impact on Miranda's perception of herself.

All in all, I don't mind that we're getting involved with characters' personal problems. I do mind if those problems are nothing but personal.

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fongiel24 wrote...

jtav wrote...

I'm used to shipping characters with fixed personalities. Shepard, as a blank slate, is harder to get attached to, and therefore harder to ship with anyone in the way I'm used to. He usually ends up a plot device, or I take him pretty far outside what the game permits. It's actually fun to use characters to bring out different aspects of her. Her Cerberus affiliation is much more dominant necause that's where the conflict would lie. With Liara, I focus more on her difficulty forming personal connections and the way they tend to blow up in her face (Niket) when she does. And I have more freedom when I'm not doing a canon romance. The downside is that I need to do the development myself, which means the stories are long and intimidating. It's much easier, if less satisfying, to write Shep/Miranda.

Your last point is interesting because I actually find it to be the opposite for me - it's more challenging for me to write Shepard/Miranda than Miranda/character x. Writing Shepard for me means starting from scratch from the blank slate Bioware has given me, almost like creating a completely original character. I can't assume the reader knows anything so Shepard has to be fully fleshed out before I can even begin to throw him together with Miranda. In a way it's frustrating because I have to establish a lot of the groundwork before I get to the good bits but it's also incredibly satisfying to put together a three-dimensional Shepard myself.

It's similar for me. I think I get Miranda mostly right now in my writing, but writing about any other character would mean I have to get as deeply into him or her as into Miranda, which I'm often disinclined to do. More work, but in the end easier, to start from scratch and use Shepard. It's also easier to mould him into what the story requires.

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I think it would be interesting if Miranda’s LotSB dossier is a part of her spy trade. Perhaps there is hidden data in the medical files she asks for.  She could also use iPartners to arrange a meeting with an informant or send them a coded message.  Finally, she could be trying to trick her father into thinking that there is a latent genetic defect with his cloned daughters so he won’t attempt to make any more.

That's a very interesting take on it. Maybe I'll incorporate that into a fanfic some day. Also a possibility for a cop-out just in case we don't hear anything about these things in future.

Of course, I could just be giving BioWare too much credit here…:blink:

Most certainly.

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Not everything is curable, or curable easily, even with 22nd century tech. If Miranda's eggs have been damaged, that's it. She isn't going to naturally create more. In a strange way, I wish it had been a malignant tumor that she'd had removed. It would be much easier to accept she's infertile. As I said, I accept the basic fact of her infertility. I rather like it actually, (From a narrative standpoint. On a more emotional level, I want the galaxy to give her a break)


Remember, Mordin loves challenges. And if he could make birth rates an ENTIRE race drop through the floor, I don't see why he couldn't cure Miranda, who is ONE PERFECT WOMAN. And besides, if you can raise a man from the dead, who's to say you can't cure infertility?

The question is how. Artificial gametogenesis should be no problem at all for 22nd century tech, but the fact would remain that Miranda is not *naturally* fertile. I think that would matter to her. For people like me who care about the transhumanism angle, the important aspect would be that Miranda is genetically fertile, i.e. that her condition isn't genetic. From that angle, it would be enough for the bigger picture if Oriana is naturally fertile, but since I do like Miranda (surprise), I want her to be happy with whoever she chooses to be with, lead a life that gives her the challenge she craves, including having children if she wants, or not, and have the role as a symbol for humanity's future at the same time. Once she's come to terms with how she was created, I think she'd appreciate the irony thereof.

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I feel sad for Miranda :( Can BioWare make new DLC asap to make me feel a bit happier for her pleez? :D



I hope so too. Posted Image

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Ieldra2 wrote...

t3HPrO wrote...

jtav wrote...

Not everything is curable, or curable easily, even with 22nd century tech. If Miranda's eggs have been damaged, that's it. She isn't going to naturally create more. In a strange way, I wish it had been a malignant tumor that she'd had removed. It would be much easier to accept she's infertile. As I said, I accept the basic fact of her infertility. I rather like it actually, (From a narrative standpoint. On a more emotional level, I want the galaxy to give her a break)


Remember, Mordin loves challenges. And if he could make birth rates an ENTIRE race drop through the floor, I don't see why he couldn't cure Miranda, who is ONE PERFECT WOMAN. And besides, if you can raise a man from the dead, who's to say you can't cure infertility?

The question is how. Artificial gametogenesis should be no problem at all for 22nd century tech, but the fact would remain that Miranda is not *naturally* fertile. I think that would matter to her. For people like me who care about the transhumanism angle, the important aspect would be that Miranda is genetically fertile, i.e. that her condition isn't genetic. From that angle, it would be enough for the bigger picture if Oriana is naturally fertile, but since I do like Miranda (surprise), I want her to be happy with whoever she chooses to be with, lead a life that gives her the challenge she craves, including having children if she wants, or not, and have the role as a symbol for humanity's future at the same time. Once she's come to terms with how she was created, I think she'd appreciate the irony thereof.


Possible, but then again, Miranda is desperately trying to have babies. Due to her being in love with Shepard, she'd most likely want to give up 'every last bit of herself' to the lucky b@$******, which means that she'll want to be pregnant with Shepard's kids. So I can definitely see her wishes overwhelming her desire to not have treatment. IMHO only.

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I agree, I don't think Miranda would want to have anything artificial about it.

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t3HPrO wrote...

Ieldra2 wrote...

t3HPrO wrote...

jtav wrote...

Not everything is curable, or curable easily, even with 22nd century tech. If Miranda's eggs have been damaged, that's it. She isn't going to naturally create more. In a strange way, I wish it had been a malignant tumor that she'd had removed. It would be much easier to accept she's infertile. As I said, I accept the basic fact of her infertility. I rather like it actually, (From a narrative standpoint. On a more emotional level, I want the galaxy to give her a break)


Remember, Mordin loves challenges. And if he could make birth rates an ENTIRE race drop through the floor, I don't see why he couldn't cure Miranda, who is ONE PERFECT WOMAN. And besides, if you can raise a man from the dead, who's to say you can't cure infertility?

The question is how. Artificial gametogenesis should be no problem at all for 22nd century tech, but the fact would remain that Miranda is not *naturally* fertile. I think that would matter to her. For people like me who care about the transhumanism angle, the important aspect would be that Miranda is genetically fertile, i.e. that her condition isn't genetic. From that angle, it would be enough for the bigger picture if Oriana is naturally fertile, but since I do like Miranda (surprise), I want her to be happy with whoever she chooses to be with, lead a life that gives her the challenge she craves, including having children if she wants, or not, and have the role as a symbol for humanity's future at the same time. Once she's come to terms with how she was created, I think she'd appreciate the irony thereof.


Possible, but then again, Miranda is desperately trying to have babies. Due to her being in love with Shepard, she'd most likely want to give up 'every last bit of herself' to the lucky b@$******, which means that she'll want to be pregnant with Shepard's kids. So I can definitely see her wishes overwhelming her desire to not have treatment. IMHO only.


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I think you misunderstood me. I don't think Miranda is desperately trying to have babies, that's not my interpretation of her iPartners activity. Not at all. The problem is that *if* she does want children, whenever that might happen (it may never happen after all), she'd prefer to have them naturally, not as a matter of principle, but because having to use advanced reproductive medicine will remove her even more from other, more "normal" women.

That raises the question, btw, of how much reproductive medicine the average woman of the late 22nd century uses when having children. I can imagine things are going not quite as naturally as people might believe.

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I just meant it in the sense that if given a choice between naturally having children (read; giving birth by herself) as opposed to seeking a donor of a sort, then I would imagine that she'd go the 'natural' route. I don't mean in the sense of working out whether she'd want her child to have genetic manipulation in the sense of whether or not to fix any genetic predispositions it may have.



Oh wait, that's probably not what you mean either... tired now... should take a nap... destroy universe later.

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t3HPrO wrote...

snfonseka wrote...

fongiel24 wrote...

I think it would have been interesting (and funny) if LotSB had included another entry for Miranda (if she was Shepard's LI), where she's awkwardly soliciting her sister for advice on her relationship.

ML: Ori, does the 'don't call until three days after the first date' rule still apply if the two people are on the same ship?

OL: Um... probably? I don't know. You were on a date?

ML: No, I was just asking a hypothetical question.

OL: ... It was Shepard, wasn't it.

ML: I'm just asking hypothetically! Do you think the first date is too soon to give it up?


OL: Err...Anyway I don't think I am the best person who can give any dating advices.

ML: Who asked for dating advices :huh:? I just asked an question...
OL: Realy? I wasn't born yesterday, sis! So how was the date :innocent:?

ML: How many times do I have to tell you? NOTHING HAPPENED !!!!
OL: OK. So nothing happened in the first date and you are frustrated about that. Now I understand :whistle:.....

ML: SIS !!!!!!!


ML: So...have you ever been on a date before?

OL: OF COURSE...duh. I'm not a nun.Posted Image

ML: Ok...so did you...um...you know...on the first date?

OL: OMG you got plowed by COMMANDER SHEPARD on your FIRST DATE! OMGLOLPosted ImagePosted Image You're AWESOME! Commander SHEPARD and you...wow.Posted Image

ML: NO!! SIS I DID NOT GET PLOWED OR WHATEVER ON MY FIRST DATE!!!

OL: Riiighhtttt...come on. I wasn't born yesterday. I KNOW you and Shepard got dirtyPosted Image

ML: NONONONO I DID NOT!

OL: Liar liar pants on fire!Posted Image

ML: Okay fine...we made love. Happy?

OL: OOOOHHH you and Shepard made passionate love all night long! OMG I'm SO jealous! Miri and Shepard sitting on a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! And then they M-A-D-E P-A-S-S-I-O-N-A-T-E L-O-V-E on the tree!

ML: STOP IT!!!

OL: Aww c'mon...that's so sweet!Posted Image

ML: And you're totally juvenile.

OL: ,,l,,

ML: What is that?

OL: Nevermind.

ML: ...WHAT THE!

OL: Oops gotta go!

ML: ORIANA LAWSON I AM GOING TO KICK YOUR BUTT WHEN I SEE YOU AGA-

[OL has disconnected]


"ML: ORIANA LAWSON I AM GOING TO KICK YOUR BUTT WHEN I SEE YOU AGA-" ---- Love that part !!!!!

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Maybe this is just me living precariously through my alter-ego that is Commander Shephard, but I should imagine that if he really did make passionate love to Miranda for any stretch of time, then Oriana should be damn jealous.. (of Miranda... the other contemplation while for some reason being incredibly hot is just plain icky).

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I just had a thought. Miranda's job would have been to bring FemShep back exactly as she was--including the ability to have children. I could see that being emotionally grueling for her and part of her praying the Lazarus tech eventually trickles down.

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fongiel24 wrote...

t3HPrO wrote...

Remember, Mordin loves challenges. And if he could make birth rates an ENTIRE race drop through the floor, I don't see why he couldn't cure Miranda, who is ONE PERFECT WOMAN. And besides, if you can raise a man from the dead, who's to say you can't cure infertility?


The problem is that with the genophage, Mordin is working within the existing genetic code of the krogan. He's simply countering krogan evolution by clearing the genophage attack sites in their DNA. If Miranda's tumour destroyed her eggs, Mordin has nothing to work with. If Miranda doesn't want a test tube baby, the only solution at that point would be to create new fertile eggs, write in Miranda's genetic code, and implant them into her ovaries or womb (the latter solution would be a little impractical as it would have to be done over and over until conception).

If it's simply a matter of removing a benign tumour and having everything go back to normal, it doesn't even require someone like Mordin - just a half decent surgeon who knows what he's doing. That kind of operation shouldn't even be too expensive, considering the medical technology of the 22nd century.


While I always thought that Mordin's ramblings about curing the ailments of various species entertaining, from a realistic point of view, I find it hard to believe that offhand he would be able to acquire such indepth knowledge of every species in the galaxy. I'll allow that he knows enough to be a general practitioner in the omega clinic, but his work on the genophage would probably require him to do research before he can sucessfully alter it. And don't forget he was also working off an existing template.

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I think you misunderstood me. I don't think Miranda is desperately trying to have babies, that's not my interpretation of her iPartners activity. Not at all. The problem is that *if* she does want children, whenever that might happen (it may never happen after all), she'd prefer to have them naturally, not as a matter of principle, but because having to use advanced reproductive medicine will remove her even more from other, more "normal" women.

That raises the question, btw, of how much reproductive medicine the average woman of the late 22nd century uses when having children. I can imagine things are going not quite as naturally as people might believe.


I don't think she's desperate to have a child either, but if the Collector's base is only a prelude to what is to happen in ME3, well I can buy that it's reasonable for human nature to want strange things, things they usually don't think of, when a possible end of the world looms near, or when it becomes almost certain Shepard will die on the last mission. 

I am piteously holding on to the term "progressive damage" honestly. If Bioware does nothing to cure her problem in ME3, I'm gunning for a miraculous conception despite that progressive damage. Cheesy and very improbably, but that's what natural conception is even at its least problematic-- a miracle of life. And we've seen a succession of medical miracles in ME already with Shepard's ressurrection, and another possible in-game one with Thane's Kerpal Syndrome.

I believe jtav mentioned before she read that most couples opt for IVF before womb implantation, the better to clean up the chromosomes and ensure the fetus is free of defects. I'd also imagine that most human women in the ME universe would be using some sort of contraceptive implant, which would prevent pregnancies and also do away with monthly periods. For women serving in the Alliance at the very least, since their ships carry mixed crews, that combined with high stress situations and close quarters would probably end up giving alliance high command a lot of headaches from all that unwanted pregnancies. Although Kasumi mentioning that a crew member got knocked up seem to suggest Cerberus doesn't really have that practice in place. Hah!

But that also begs the question: would parents be considered irresponsible if they decided to go totally natural and forego the genetic screening?

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jtav wrote...
I just had a thought. Miranda's job would have been to bring FemShep back exactly as she was--including the ability to have children. I could see that being emotionally grueling for her and part of her praying the Lazarus tech eventually trickles down.

That would depend on where you locate the medical report in time. She might not have been aware of her infertility back then.

Apart from that, no, I don't agree it would have been that grueling. Just the opposite, becoming aware of the possibility of a repair might have given her hope where there wasn't any before. Also, Cerberus would be interested in her being able to have children, so it should be possible for Miranda to concinve TIM to underwrite the costs, as long as it wasn't in the same order of magnitude as the Shepard project.

This is one reason why I don't think her infertility should be a continuing problem. She's already aware of the possibility for a repair. Pissing off TIM, though, might not have been such a good idea...

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This is one reason why I don't think her infertility should be a continuing problem. She's already aware of the possibility for a repair. Pissing off TIM, though, might not have been such a good idea...


Really all she lost was the monetary support Cerberus would be able to provide, as well as hard-copies of the Lazarus Project data. Remember that she basically WAS the Lazarus Project, even money says she remembers a good chunk of the tech and methods. Plus now she has Mordin to help perfect any re-fertilization projects. Mordin would be tickled to death to work on such a technology, it could be a way for him to feel like he's atoned for the genophage.

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Anyone want an excerpt from "Masks and Mirrors" (A Shepard vs. Miranda spy story set in 2178)?


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Ieldra2 wrote...

Anyone want an excerpt from "Masks and Mirrors" (A Shepard vs. Miranda spy story set in 2178)?


Yes please.

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Certainly.



This discussion is giving me an idea for an AU. What if TIM had offered Miranda a cure for her infertility if she survived and continued protection for Oriana even if she died, both of which would be contingent on her remaining an officer in good standing? It would be a very strong temptation to turn on a Paragon Shep. Miranda would be an Anti Villain/Villain Protagonist. Worth writing?


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jtav wrote...

Certainly.

This discussion is giving me an idea for an AU. What if TIM had offered Miranda a cure for her infertility if she survived and continued protection for Oriana even if she died, both of which would be contingent on her remaining an officer in good standing? It would be a very strong temptation to turn on a Paragon Shep. Miranda would be an Anti Villain/Villain Protagonist. Worth writing?


Personally, I would totally lose respect of Miranda if she puts her fertility issue, or even her sister in the foreground and betray the one person who can arguably unite all the different species into a cohesive force against the Reapers. Nothing can justify that.

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All right, here you go. Remember this is set in 2176 and Shepard is only 22! This is also an unedited draft.

“You’re sending me to infiltrate a high society party? You can’t be serious…uh…sir.”

Lieutenant Cyrus Shepard was dismayed. Out of the corner of his eye he dared a glimpse at the holoscreen detailing the offending assignment, as if by barely acknowledging it he could make it go away.

“Why not, if I may ask?”

The tone carried considerable amusement. Though why Commander Naman Rangarajan of the Alliance Navy department of military intelligence would be amused eluded Shepard. He stared at his superior incredulously. “Sir, I’m sure you’re aware of my background. I’m a street kid from the slums of Calcutta.”

“Wrong, Shepard”, said Rangarajan. “You were that street kid. Now you’re an N7-qualified operative. You might not know it, but your yearly assessments always mention your adaptability. That’s a rare quality and we intend to use it. Why do you think we’ve poured a master’s degree’s worth of etiquette, culture and history of several species into your brain during your training?”

Shepard felt his face growing hot. He had avoided these classes any chance he got, and hadn’t been particularly attentive. The result was he barely passed that part of his final exams.

“Uh…sir. I’m…well, let’s say I’m not feeling very adaptable right now.”

Rangarajan laughed. “You want to tell me you skimped on those classes? Well, here’s the surprise: so did almost everyone else. Nobody likes them. They’re not meant to be remembered in detail. They exist for the sole purpose of providing a framework for your future briefings.”

Shepard didn’t know if should feel relieved or even more dismayed. Relieved, because it meant he would get a refresher course, or more dismayed because it meant he couldn’t wriggle out of this assignment.

“Relax, Lieutenant. You’ll do fine. Now, please, if you’d pay attention to the briefing I’m trying to give you. I haven't got all day.”

“Yes, sir.”

Several images appeared in the holoscreen. Pointing at the picture of a nondescript interstellar courier ship, Rangarajan began to explain.

“This is the Alliance courier C345-Stargazer. Twenty days ago, it vanished in a pirate attack in the Ismar Frontier cluster. Or so we thought. It seems the attackers were aware the Stargazer carried classified information about certain Alliance operations I’m not allowed to disclose at this moment, and the acquisition of this information appeared to be their primary objective.”

He switched to the picture of an about 40-year-old Caucasian male human with tanned skin, short black hair and a black moustache, clad in an expensive business suit, at the side of a stunning pale-skinned brunette in a conservatively-cut but very stylish emerald-green sundress.

“Antonin Kolyakov,” said Rangarajan, “One of Earth’s most notorious black-market information brokers. Does legal business as an investment broker, which explains his wealth if you don't look too deeply. One of our assets believes he’s been contracted to decrypt the VI core the Stargazer was carrying. There’s no direct evidence, but his security has been stepped up and he’s hacked into several Alliance satellites targeted on his known sites. No idea how he knew about them, but fortunately his intrusion was detected. There’s a meeting scheduled with a Shadow Broker contact at Palazzo Danieli in Venice on the 11th, where we believe the decrypted information will be handed over. The location seems to indicate the contact is highly placed.”

“Who’s the woman,” asked Shepard, closely examining the picture to catch more details of her face.

“Ha,“ said Rangarajan, “thought she’d get your attention.” A dossier with a close-up appeared in another window. The face was uncommonly harmonious, almost as if sculpted, with a hint of dimpled cheeks keeping it from the boring kind of perfection. Her skin was unfashionably pale, but it contrasted nicely with her dark-brown, almost black hair and eyes. “Her name is Ione Bianchi. Despite the name, she’s not a local. She’s more or less in the same business as Kolyakov. Originally from Omega, Doctorates in computer science and xenobiology. Used to work on Aite as a professional escort – of the showpiece kind if you can believe the sources – and made a fortune from stealing her clients’ secrets and selling them to rival factions. When that got out, she had to flee. Kolyakov’s picked her up two days ago. We aren’t aware of any previous connection between them, but she certainly acts as if she was his girlfriend, not just a business partner.“

“Could she have any interest in this matter?”

“Unlikely. So far she's avoided anything that would've brought our close attention. From what we know about her past operations, she seems very aware of how far she can go. So keep away from her, its rumored she's a master at seeing through covers.”

“Hmm,” said Shepard. “From what you've told me, I probably won't recognize her anyway. Which brings me to my next question: how the hell will I recognize Kolyakov?”

“We have a surveillance camera in place. Its operator will make a photograph as Kolyakov leaves his suite to join the festivities. She'll send it to you via commlink. She'll also be able to tell you about who's where most of the time, but since she's located off-site she won't be able to backup you if things get difficult.”

Rangarajan picked up a datapad and handed it to Shepard.

“Everything I've told you is in in here, as well as the complete dossiers of Kolyakov and Bianchi, just in case, plus a floor plan and names and dossiers of everyone we know to be present. Your objectives: first, prevent the VI core and any information obtained from it from getting the hands of the Shadow Broker’s contact. Second, identify the Shadow Broker’s contact. Third, recover the VI core. We’ve got you an invitation to the masque under your usual cover. Unfortunately, our bean-counters have refused to underwrite the costs for a room, so you’ll have no home base.”

“Can’t really say I blame them,” said Shepard. “Aren’t the rooms at 2500 creds per night?”

“Yeah. But you’d think they’d consider the damage if this operation goes pear-shaped,” Rangarajan grumbled. “Of course, that won’t come out of their budget, so what do they care. Any questions?”

“Yes, Sir.” Shepard took the datapad. “I'll need some kind of...er...costume, don't I? I don't have the faintest idea of what to do about that...”

“Everything will be provided by your local contact. You'll find the address in your files.”

“Aye, aye, sir. That was all, sir.”

“Good. Dismissed.”

Shepard saluted and turned away. As he reached the door, the Commander spoke up again.

“One more thing, Shepard.”

“Yes, sir?”

“Palazzo Danieli is one of Europe's most valuable cultural assets, rebuilt with original material after the tsunami of 2090. Things could get very awkward with the local government, not to mention expensive, if it's damaged significantly. So, please, no explosions.”

Shepard managed to look chagrined. His reputation as military intelligence's 'demolition man' wasn't entirely undeserved, but he still thought people made too much of it.

“Yes, sir.”


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Very good, Ieldra. I can't wait for Cyrus and "Ione" to face off. And for the inevitable explosions.



Elyvern, I don;t think it's that farfetched. One of my pet peeves is that Miranda doesn't try to kill you if she's not loyal and you blow up the base. Forgetting that this is a game, the base should be more useful than Shep. Shepard is now being very detrimental to Cerberus interests. A Miranda who isn't personally loyal to her should try to kill her.