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Renegade Shep generally isn't a touchy feely type of person so he is bound not to talk about how he feels. Personally I thought Meer was ok, it is just like what Enayasoul said, they really need to work on the facial animations (for both male and femshep), most of Shep's smiles are cringeworthy (worse one in my opinion is the look when you hand Chakwas the Serrice Ice Brandy). Course it's made even more creepy with the terminator face :P

I actually think the renegade path in the romance isn't bad, it fits Jack Shepard fine. He does care for Miranda, but he don't wear his heart on his sleeve and isn't one for getting emotional, not in view of anyone anyway. Though I have got it in my head that if given a chance to 'breakdown' he probably will in ME3. ('24 Season 3 ending style' although even in that he was on his own).

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MsSihaKatieKrios wrote...

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That's why I rarely ever play maleShep. Meer's delivery flops on its face real bad, so I just use femShep and Gibbed romance Miri.

It is funny. I usually play female progagonists. Here comes ME2 and gives me Miranda, so I must now play maleSheps as well, only to spoil the experience by giving me a VA who doesn't do emotions well. I've tried the femShep romance hack, but it doesn't work for me. 


How come it doesn't work?Posted Image

It works - technically. I meant that I can't get into an F/F romance with Miranda. It leaves me emotionally unengaged. I Don''t know why, it works well with Liara.

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I would like that he lightens the mood, but only if he also tell Miranda what he feels for her (and with a better voice acting). I hate when a guy let a woman open her heart, and don't have the guts to do the same thing.
And there is an another reason why I choose the Paragon path during the previous conversation : it changes the first line of the last conversation :

Renegade : What are you so afraid of? That you might actually start caring for somebody?
Paragon : I care about you Miranda, and I think you care about me.

Again, I don't like how he avoids to talk about what he feels for her. I know it doesn't mean that he doesn't feel something, but it's definitely not how I would play my Shepard.

Ah yes, I do understand that. Shepard is already so much the high-and-mighty one in ME2, that line mitigates things a bit, and the Renegade line reinforces it.

I wish the Renegade paths - in everything - wouldn't preclude showing any sign of vulnerability so decisively. I really love how the Renegade romance seems almost like their personalities clashing before finally coming together, giving you the impression of two strong personalities not used to giving in just because they happen to be attracted to each other, and drawing each other out to see where things will end. I also prefer the emotions being partly relegated to the non-verbal expression - it is one reason why I always choose "No promises": you get the hug there.

But - you do have a point. The complete absence of Shepard showing vulnerability if you consistently choose the Renegade options is not optimal.

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I believe some of you might not have seen this one yet - part of Strikor2115's fan art collection:



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Renegade : What are you so afraid of? That you might actually start caring for somebody?
Paragon : I care about you Miranda, and I think you care about me.p.

Got to stop lurking and pick up on this because I feel that this is a reflection of how some of Jack's dialogues are often interpted. Obviously your milage may vary, I personally feel that the Renegade dialgue options are Shepard deciding not to try diplomacy but instead trying a spot of poking. Taking an ice-axe to the ice-queen persona; hacking away at it and Miranda's convictions/hangups over her Mary-Sueness until he finally gets a reaction which is 'hers'. Hence her suprise; she's so used to keeping herself under control the passion she displays catches herself off gaurd.

...well. That's how I viewed it anyway.

If you're curious about the supposed similarity to Jack's dialogues, I was thnking the ones where Maleshep is accused of being smug/know-it-all like this one:
Jack: Leave me alone Shepard, I don't want this.
Shepard: You're lying.

In much the same way as renegade dialogues with Miranda, Shepard's (paragon iirc) dialogue with jack is (imo) not Shepard being a smug ****** but calling her out on her behaviour. Because Shepard knows that if either of them really wanted Shepard to stop they would make him.

As you might have gathered, I sort-of see Jack and Miranda as opposite sides of the same coin (to an extent anyway). Since I tend not to keep track of the Miranda thread I don't know if this comparison is a sore point so apologies if it is.

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That's an interesting take on the situation, Loki. I don't quite agree with the term "hacking", since I think it is done with more style and humor than it implies, and Miranda challenges him as well, but I agree that the spirit of that romance path is somewhat like that.

Regarding Jack/Miranda similarities: I don't think it's a sore spot, though I don't agree: IMO the fact that Jack and Miranda are polar opposites in personality overshadows any similarity they might have.

Modifié par Ieldra2, 10 décembre 2010 - 10:25 .


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I personally feel her walls of ice are rather thick-chipping away isn't going to cut it :P. (Also I swear no pun intended. >.> )



As for the Jack/Miranda thing, I don't pretend they're like sisters or anything for a second; just both have had their childhoods robbed, essentially (and in Miranda's case quite literally) built for a specific purpose the fallout of which is still plaguing them, but I won't argue the point. It's my personal view as I said.

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Excerpt from Persistence of Memory:

"I'm not talking about minor modification. They're building these children from the ground up to be better. They're taking the genes from their smartest scientists, their best operatives—whether the part of the family or not—and adding them to the gene pool. The perfect salarians." She leaned forward in her chair. "They're adapting technology first used by a human named David Ellison. Does that name mean anything to you?"

Father. Miranda froze. A salarian family had replicated the technology that created her. And she hadn't known about it. She hardly knew whether to feel disgusted or angry. She'd kept tabs on her father since her early teens. Knowledge had been the only power available to her in a world where her every acquaintance, her every movement, have been monitored and controlled. She hadn't been able to control the surgeries or the punishing training regimens that had turned her into what she was, but she could damn well know what they planned to do with her next and when. That knowledge had saved her from a fate worse than death when her father had decided that a sterile heir was worse than useless. It seemed preposterous that someone should be re-creating his experiments without her knowledge. David Ellison had guarded the technology used to create his daughters as jealously as he had guarded the daughters themselves. Theft of that knowledge would have sparked dozens, perhaps hundreds, of messages on his private information network. One of Miranda's spy programs should have caught this long ago. She shouldn't have been surprised. She shouldn't be hearing about this from Liara of all people.

Liara was watching her closely. She had to choose her next words very carefully in order to avoid giving away too much. Now wasn't the time to let her emotions rule her. There would be time to correct her intelligence failures later. "He donated generously to Cerberus until a little over fifteen years ago. He and the Illusive Man had a falling out over the organization's direction. The Illusive Man refused to budge, and Ellison stopped donating." There. The perfect truth, without any embarrassing personal revelations.

Liara seemed to deflate a bit. "I was hoping you'd be able to tell me what kind of man does...well, see for yourself." She held the datapad out to Miranda. "Coburn was kind enough to provide me with correspondence from some of the scientists working on the project. I believe he wants me indebted to him."

Miranda willed her hand to remain steady as she took the datapad. She was honest enough with herself to admit that she didn't really want to know what her father was up to now. It didn't matter what she wanted. She had to know. He might have tracked down Oriana, or he might have decided to create a new daughter. Miranda didn't really think so. Oriana was his "masterwork." He wouldn't to re-create perfection unless he had given up all possibility of ever finding his daughter. But if he had created another child, Miranda had a duty to find and rescue her. That duty wasn't abrogated by the Lazarus Project. She read.

As it turned out, she needn't have worried about other sisters.

Dr. Katriana Solheim: Have we corrected for the irregularities in the FMR1 premutation? Palon will have our heads if we give her a bunch of infertile females. Or worse, Nasanna will terminate us. I don't mean fire.

Dr. Timothy Galt: I'm not convinced the impaired ovarian reserve was caused by genetic factors. It could have been the neuroplasty. Must have played hell with her internal organs. The krogan stopped using it because it was killing off too many of them. I'm surprised the kid survived it.

KS: Just checked the damn things. I've heard too many rumors about what the boss does to her employees. And, while you're at it, let me know if there's anything that would lead to a predisposition to antisocial personality disorder. Four kids all diagnosed with the same thing. I'll give Ellison one thing: he's a persistent bastard.

TG: If they were even mentally ill. I've heard rumors about that guy and what he did to his kids.

KS: You watch too many vids. Now get back to work.

TG: Yes, ma'am.

There was more. Miranda read with dawning horror as the two scientists discussed her medical history—or at least her entire history until the age of sixteen—at great length. They knew her nervous system had been implanted with eezo nodules at age eleven. It had made her an exceptionally strong biotic. It had nearly killed her. Galt and Solheim had been able to figure that out even before they saw the postop medical reports. They speculated as to how much the previous operation they had given her the greybox had affected matters. Was the sociopathy due to some careless genetic tampering? They were desperate to explore every possibility. Anything to avoid the failure represented by Christine Miranda Ellison. The only saving grace seemed to be that they had no idea that she'd become Miranda Elizabeth Lawson and fled to a better life before her father could lock her away.

But they knew what he'd done before that. They knew about her infertility. And now Liara knew too.



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Thank you, jtav. I wonder how this will turn out. Will Liara find out? If yes, how?
A few points:

(1) A short flashback near the start of the second paragraph would underscore the impact of the discovery.
(2) I like how you show a lot of details about Miranda's past without really fixing anything. It gives her a richer background without infringing on the canon.
(3) What I don't like is that you interpret Miranda's reserved personality as having a pathological element. At least it comes across that way - you need to read very carefully to notice that you only allude to the possibility.
(4) I'm a bit confused. If Liara doesn't make the connection between the datapad and Miranda - and it seems she doesn't - then how can she conclude that Miranda is infertile?

And then the infertility....well, you did say I probably wouldn't like this part. No fault of yours, but this scene hits me like a hammer. I keep making up scenarios to circumvent the problem... only that your Miranda probably wouldn't even want to.
BTW, I do hope that the idea of Liara having asari children with Miranda *never* becomes a serious consideration in this story.

Modifié par Ieldra2, 11 décembre 2010 - 09:16 .


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It's nice, but I just wish that you'd actually make Miranda a little more despondent about her infertility. It isn't a small matter at all. And Miranda trying to cure her infertility would be more plausible than a Miranda who doesn't give a crap. Also, I've always thought that Miranda's name is real. I always thought it to be a scheme whereby in order to lure out her father's informants, TIM set Miranda up as bait, but tucks Oriana away very safely. So when the informants wanna find out about Oriana, they have no choice but to try using Miranda's name to find leads, and in the process, they reveal themselves and the TIM eliminates them, thus removing threats to his operative and his organisation, as we know that Miranda's father is against Cerberus. In that way, it would make more sense than just giving her an alias, and the threats are still not identified, and Oriana is in greater danger as there's no forewarning.

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Why should it be more plausible that Mirandaw wants to cure her infertility? If she doesn't want children and doesn't expect that to change, why should she give a crap? I find that very plausible. I do want it to be cured, but Miranda's wish is anyone's guess.

As for her name, Miranda has worked in the spy trade for almost 20 years. You don't do that carrying a surname around that connects you to someone well-known as the richest man on Earth. For your scenario, it would have been more plausible to let her cover slip on purpose when she wanted to bait her father, not on a permanent basis. Should "Lawson" turn out to be real, it'll likely be a result of gameplay/story segregation, to avoid confusion among players who didn't follow her story closely.

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It is absolutly clear that miranda tried to get pregnant. If she didn't want to get pregnant then she would never have gone to the prenatal in the first place. So don't come up with b*llsh*t that she just wanted to see what her options where in the future because your not going to the prenatal for that!



Why is it so difficult to accept that she wanted a child!

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Ieldra, just responding to your points:



(1) It would, but I'd find it hard to justify given that I've already establish Miranda doesn't flash back without conscious choice.

(3) What do you mean? The antisocial personality disorder is something Ellison cooked up. That said, she can "turn off" her emotions more easily because of how the greybox affected her.

(4) She has her suspicions and connects the dots in the next paragraph



As for Miranda's infertility, notice that I made a few changes to cannon. She's known about her infertility for much longer. Therefore, she's had a much longer time to come to terms with it. She will the same reaction if she's known for twenty years versus just finding out. Secondly, think about when this is taking place. She's in the middle of trying to resurrect Shepard and knows that the Reapers are coming. Even if did want a child, having one now would border on criminal negligence. I am actually considering giving them kids, but it would be in the very far future (decades), assuming Miranda even wants kids at that point.

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Because no woman is gonna accept that she can't have a baby. For example, my older cousin always said she never wanted a baby, and a few months ago, she discovered she was infertile due to defective ovum. Now she's actually depressed. Because of a condition she shouldn't have cared about. If I ever find out that I'm infertile(god forbid), I'd probably sell my soul to the devil just to get fertile again.

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Honestly speaking, I think that her infertility was accidentally discovered during a routine medical by Cerberus. Given that Cerberus is paramilitary, they'd have medicals every year or so, right?



Right?

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It is absolutly clear that miranda tried to get pregnant. If she didn't want to get pregnant then she would never have gone to the prenatal in the first place. So don't come up with b*llsh*t that she just wanted to see what her options where in the future because your not going to the prenatal for that!

No, but it is one option for regular checkups. I know a woman who has them there in RL. 

Why is it so difficult to accept that she wanted a child!

Because the sequence of transcripts suggests that this was within the timeline of ME2. Trying to get pregnant with a mission upcoming where she can expect her abilitites and endurance taxed to the limit is stupid. Add that it's a suicide mission....

No, nothing surrounding her LotSB dossier is "absolutely clear". It's a conglomerate of ambiguous and inconsistent details. Perhaps deliberately so, perhaps accidentally.

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Well I know my opinion and I will keep it. To me its obviouse she wants children and thats great. I also believe it happend before ME 2 dispite her stupid username. And because she is not the kind of women would do such a thing during an importend mission as this one.

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(1) It would, but I'd find it hard to justify given that I've already establish Miranda doesn't flash back without conscious choice.

I forgot. Of course that would prevent it.

(3) What do you mean? The antisocial personality disorder is something Ellison cooked up. That said, she can "turn off" her emotions more easily because of how the greybox affected her.

I see. That came across wrongly. May be just me, though - I recall we having discussed if this applied to Miranda before.

As for the infertility; There was nothing out of order, really. It just hits me every time it's mentioned how much I don't want this to be permanent.

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MsSihaKatieKrios wrote...
Honestly speaking, I think that her infertility was accidentally discovered during a routine medical by Cerberus. Given that Cerberus is paramilitary, they'd have medicals every year or so, right?

Right?

Yes. But that raises the question of why this was done in the Illium Medical Center. As I said, nothing is really clear here.

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Ieldra, I was responding primarily to MsSihaKatieKrios saying Miranda should be more despondent. You get used to living with medical conditions. And Oriana is fine for what that's worth.

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MsSihaKatieKrios wrote...
Because no woman is gonna accept that she can't have a baby. For example, my older cousin always said she never wanted a baby, and a few months ago, she discovered she was infertile due to defective ovum. Now she's actually depressed. Because of a condition she shouldn't have cared about. If I ever find out that I'm infertile(god forbid), I'd probably sell my soul to the devil just to get fertile again.

I can see there's a difference. Discovering that you're infertile seems to be an insult of fate, even if you never wanted children. That would make it rare for a woman not to care about it. But "No woman is going to accept it", that's going too far. Add that in jtav's story, Miranda has long known about it. If she never wanted children - I don't say it is so, I only say it is possible - her rational mind would have told her it is unreasonable to make a big thing of it. And so she didn't.

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Revan92 wrote...

It is absolutly clear that miranda tried to get pregnant. If she didn't want to get pregnant then she would never have gone to the prenatal in the first place. So don't come up with b*llsh*t that she just wanted to see what her options where in the future because your not going to the prenatal for that!

Why is it so difficult to accept that she wanted a child!


Her problem may have arised from a regular check up which discovers discrepancies. The docter in charge could then direct her to a pre-natal clinic for a specialist consultant. That's a regular procedure. So it is entirely plausible that she wasn't trying to get pregnant.

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@jtav:
I noticed Oriana is fine. That's good, but reading about Miranda's condition remains painful nonetheless. I wonder how I'll deal with it when the time comes to write my version.

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Even if she wanted children, she found out about her infertility (technically, it's marginal fertility) at age sixteen. She's thirty-three now, Really, you learn to cope with these things. I have cerebral palsy. I assure you I don't go into a tailspin every time it's mentioned. Same with a medical condition I acquired years ago. You cope or you snap.