LuxDragon wrote...
I'm working it up as we speak. I should have it up in a week. Maybe.
You read it and didn't leave any reveiws though...?
Awesome. I've read your fic all the way through and I gotta say...it rules. Consider that my review
LuxDragon wrote...
I'm working it up as we speak. I should have it up in a week. Maybe.
You read it and didn't leave any reveiws though...?
zewuok wrote...
Hey there, I think you should watch it, just for laughs/horror:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=Clhodxs2wEQ
It's the polish version of the famous catfight scene, so you all know what they're saying.
Listen to Miranda's voice and tell me why oh why did they do this to her?
RevanMg wrote...
zewuok wrote...
Hey there, I think you should watch it, just for laughs/horror:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=Clhodxs2wEQ
It's the polish version of the famous catfight scene, so you all know what they're saying.
Listen to Miranda's voice and tell me why oh why did they do this to her?
What is funny, Yvonne can speak Polish quite well, sadly they hired her only for eng version.
LuxDragon wrote...
I'm working it up as we speak. I should have it up in a week. Maybe.
You read it and didn't leave any reveiws though...?
In his defense, a romance story can become boring if the romance itself becomes overbearing.Arijharn wrote...
LuxDragon wrote...
I'm working it up as we speak. I should have it up in a week. Maybe.
You read it and didn't leave any reveiws though...?
You know I love it! You also know what issues I have with it (namely; the whole correspondence chapters rhargh!)
Honestly though; for a Miranda Shephard romance story though, there isn't that much Miranda and Shephard in it
Arijharn wrote...
Oh I don't want them to be all over each other all the time, just the last chapter for example didn't have anything to do with her for example, no sort of awkward glances at each other, and neither Tali nor Jack seem to be cottoning in on the fact that Miranda and John are an item (okay, I can understand why Jack wouldn't, she lurks in the bowels of the ship, but Tali is a busy body!)
Modifié par LuxDragon, 24 janvier 2011 - 04:53 .
LuxDragon wrote...
Arijharn wrote...
Oh I don't want them to be all over each other all the time, just the last chapter for example didn't have anything to do with her for example, no sort of awkward glances at each other, and neither Tali nor Jack seem to be cottoning in on the fact that Miranda and John are an item (okay, I can understand why Jack wouldn't, she lurks in the bowels of the ship, but Tali is a busy body!)
Aww... Give a guy a break. That last chapter was all about Garrus. It's hard to put in Miranda to begin with. I love her and all, but I gotta make it realistic.
I suppose you should like this next chapter though. I have it set up kinda like what you want.
JeanLuc's stuff is right here:
http://social.biowar...ndex/5314761/12
Arijharn wrote...
LuxDragon, I can never seem to log in, but in regards to your poll, you sorta have to have someone (*cough* Miranda *cough*) address him by his first name eventually. It's just not natural to refer to someone intimately by addressing them by their surname or their rank.
And I'm personally okay with John because well, A) that's his default name anyway, andbecause it happens to be my actual name
Modifié par Ieldra2, 24 janvier 2011 - 02:38 .
Melrache wrote...
RevanMg wrote...
zewuok wrote...
Hey there, I think you should watch it, just for laughs/horror:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=Clhodxs2wEQ
It's the polish version of the famous catfight scene, so you all know what they're saying.
Listen to Miranda's voice and tell me why oh why did they do this to her?
What is funny, Yvonne can speak Polish quite well, sadly they hired her only for eng version.
Polish is her first language, so it's really weird.. Maybe it was just, that it would've become too costly when thinking about the audience, who'd play it with Polish on.
*shrugs*
Modifié par ViperVenom117, 24 janvier 2011 - 04:07 .
Elyvern wrote...
I'd always use the default "John Shepard" and Sheploo's facial description in fanfic. Everyone has different opinions of how and what their Shepards look like. Going for the default sets a baseline no one can complain about.
ViperVenom117 wrote...
Meh, I kept the default first name. mainly because of stargate atlantis, as I thought it was sweet that the names were the same.
I also think using the default name makes it easier to interchange it with your own.
enayasoul wrote...
ViperVenom117 wrote...
Meh, I kept the default first name. mainly because of stargate atlantis, as I thought it was sweet that the names were the same.
I also think using the default name makes it easier to interchange it with your own.
Here, I thought I was the only one that thought that way, from Stargate Atlantis.He's pretty handsome! My fan fic Male Shep first name is Jon and not "John" short for Jonathan. I have Miranda call him Jon later in the story but not in the beginning. She used to calling him Commander or Shepard.
Haha nope you're not alone! I loved his character... miss the show though
Thats a good way to go about it too.