Addai67 wrote...
(husband posting)
Ok, serious question here. How would you word it? If you were playing
on the PC and wanted it modded, what would be the exact word choice?
For everyone who doesn't like it, what WOULD you like?
(husband)
There's a number of options -
"Allistair I love you (or "love you as a brother" for non-romance characters), but you got to toughen up! IF you don't there are some very bad people who would take advantage of you."
"Allistair I love your kindness, mercy, and generosity, but some people are crooks and not worthy of such things."
Those won't work, they're much too long. That's why I put in the suggestions I did earlier. They need to be around the same length (sorry, I am not sure of the exact character count).
But seriously, quoting myself, what about this -- or something similar, but also similar in LENGTH -- and keep in mind Alistiar's lines both before and after the warden's line.
I wrote...
Alistair: I... I guess I was expecting her to accept me without question. Isn't that what family is supposed to do? I... I feel like a complete idiot.
Warden: This is why you should take care of yourself first.
Alstiar: Yes. I suppose you're right. I should.
Edit: I have no problem putting in a softer line, but I really don't want to make this a major change to my Alistair file with recycled dialog and such because I don't think this will be wildly popular as it will conflict with other Alistair dialog mods. So what should the warden say in response to what Alistair just said and will fit with Alistair's response? Or is the one I wrote sufficient? I'm not crazy about it, but the length is good and it fits in with the conversation at least.
I am giving anyone who wants it that nicer line

I just want to make sure that the line added is one that actually is liked!
Edit: But if no one's really interested, I won't bother either! It won't ever be perfect given the restraints, and i can understand why people would be put off by them.
Modifié par ejoslin, 14 juin 2010 - 05:04 .