My critiques...
Myself - Although I have a lot of content, I feel as though I let the quality of my writing slip in an effort to finish quickly >_<
b09boy - I like your guys, but I really don't like that Davner and Aedan have the same facial tattoo. I would've liked to see more about some of the characters as well.
Dungeon Hamster - QUALITY. Well written, well created, and I liked that Donalbain has the same last name as me

. the casual style was fun to read but it didn't offer insight deeper into the characters' personalities, with things like "For some reason..." Overall, very good though.
Fuelledbypassion - I would have like to see more from you, only 5 characters and only 3 portraits? I know it said "at least 9" chacters, but it just looks like you ran out of time, maybe? I enjoy what you did post though.
Fulgrimm88 - Only two of your characters DON'T have facial tattoos, I don't like that, 7 of the 9 having tats feels excessive. Fitz was one of my favorite characters in this whole competition though.
IRICHARDI - I like that you used a bard, he was a really nice touch, however, I felt once again your party was small. Maybe a small party is what you were going for? I'm just saying that personally I like the larger groups. Character designs were cool, but the whole party seems to have a shortage of hair. =P
Modifié par AustrianAndI, 02 novembre 2009 - 09:08 .