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[b09boy]

Alright.  Time's up, contenders.  Let's see who we've got.

AustrianAndI:  social.bioware.com/9506/albums/27025
b09boy: social.bioware.com/1906/albums/18174
DungeonHamster:  social.bioware.com/40255/albums/24980
fuelledbypassion:  social.bioware.com/42817/albums/31365
Fulgrim88: social.bioware.com/2903/albums/18603
IRICHARDI:  social.bioware.com/31393/albums/31272
Riot Inducer:  social.bioware.com/11737/albums/30492
Saurel:  social.bioware.com/1568/albums/23416
Saya Shuri:  social.bioware.com/22737/albums/31847

Nine entries.  Good competition.  But now it's time for the voting.  Remember, one vote and none for your own character. 

Here's the poll:  social.bioware.com/1906/polls/434/

[AustrianAndI]

Can we start critiques now?

[b09boy]

'course. Have at it.

[Fulgrim88]

Come on people, we need more votes

Have a cup of tea and spend a few minutes to read through the submissions. Many are really enjoyable

[AustrianAndI]

My critiques...

Myself - Although I have a lot of content, I feel as though I let the quality of my writing slip in an effort to finish quickly >_<

b09boy - I like your guys, but I really don't like that Davner and Aedan have the same facial tattoo. I would've liked to see more about some of the characters as well.

Dungeon Hamster - QUALITY. Well written, well created, and I liked that Donalbain has the same last name as me . the casual style was fun to read but it didn't offer insight deeper into the characters' personalities, with things like "For some reason..." Overall, very good though.

Fuelledbypassion - I would have like to see more from you, only 5 characters and only 3 portraits? I know it said "at least 9" chacters, but it just looks like you ran out of time, maybe? I enjoy what you did post though.

Fulgrimm88 - Only two of your characters DON'T have facial tattoos, I don't like that, 7 of the 9 having tats feels excessive. Fitz was one of my favorite characters in this whole competition though.

IRICHARDI - I like that you used a bard, he was a really nice touch, however, I felt once again your party was small. Maybe a small party is what you were going for? I'm just saying that personally I like the larger groups. Character designs were cool, but the whole party seems to have a shortage of hair. =P

Modifié par AustrianAndI, 02 novembre 2009 - 09:08 .

[Saurel]

AustrianAndI wrote...

My critiques...

IRICHARDI - I like that you used a bard, he was a really nice touch, however, I felt once again your party was small. Maybe a small party is what you were going for? I'm just saying that personally I like the larger groups. Character designs were cool, but the whole party seems to have a shortage of hair. =P

TBH I actually liked his lack of hair except on the dwarf female, it seemed to be going against the typical long haired heroes

sidenote: I like Tor Car and Jade alot, Riot Inducer.

Modifié par Saurel, 02 novembre 2009 - 10:32 .

[fuelledbypassion]

i've only just realised the pics are on windows explorer! not that it matters now anyway but here are Neria and Artemes:social.bioware.com/42817/albums/31365/5621

[AustrianAndI]

weird... I came back and made an edit adding my critiques of the last three and it didn't show up... oh well. If the contest is over it looks like Fulgrim won.



Gratz

[AustrianAndI]

huh... weird... I definitely edited that post to add in the last 3 names...



oh well! Looks like Fulgrim won then?

Gratz!

[Fulgrim88]

I did? Awesome Thanks for the votes, people!



However, it was pretty close and i feel like this competition deserved more winners.

Thanks to b09boy for a great idea and thanks to everyone for equally great submissions. Cookies for everyone!

[IRICHARDI]

Congrats Fulgrim! Thanks b09boy for the challenge, great submissions.