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[Raonar]

Chapter 67 (Myth Chase Arc 3: Balance Discarded) is now available for your reading pleasure, or lack thereof.

Modifié par Raonar, 27 août 2012 - 09:23 .

[Raonar]

So, after ages, Chapter 68: Ascent Through Snow and Stone is now ready, Alternative title: Myth Chase Arc 4: Ascent Through Snow and Stone.

[TEWR]

Crap... reading your first chapter alone puts my series to shame. Though thankfully, most of what I wrote before was written when I was... still inexperienced.

Hopefully I can get better at description -- alas, 'tis my weak point when writing.

EDIT: Not to mention I had tried too hard to make it a literal representation of the game as opposed to an alternate universe sort of thing. That probably hurt it as well.

Modifié par The Ethereal Writer Redux, 03 janvier 2013 - 01:21 .

[Raonar]

Glad to know you found it enjoyable. I hope that impression is maintained throughout the rest of the narrative.

[Albistein]

Awesome Story! Although I haven't read much of it yet, I have decided to play through Dragon Age as Raonar.
Thanks for the inspiration!

[Raonar]

@Albistein: I noticed that you tried to reproduce his face but failed. You probably ran into than snag where adding the beard resets the cheek depth and jaw line. To avoid making your dwarven prince look emaciated, finish all the details of the face and only THEN add the beard by clicking on the facial hair slider ONCE. Click only, do NOT drag, The beard style should be two thirds down the slider.

[Albistein]

Thanks for the tip. I remade it and hope the new character will be loaded up soon.

EDIT: I hope this one comes closer.

Modifié par Albistein, 08 janvier 2013 - 05:17 .

[Raonar]

About as close as it can get without aesthetic mods, yes.