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Lilith's Poetic Outlook


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Dark Lilith

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When I gaze
At her I
Picture style and
Grace
 
A witty mind
And a beautiful
Face.
 
A sense of
Humor
And true loyalty,

She has always
Been a friend
To me
 
She listens when
I hurt inside;
 She comforts me
And instills in
Me a true sense
Of pride
 
My feelings for
Her I cannot
Deny
A trusted friend
Until the day
I die. 
 
©Dark Lilith 2010

Modifié par Dark Lilith, 28 juin 2010 - 09:28 .


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*clap*

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Beautiful!!!!!!

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Swordfishtrombone approves +10 ^_^

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Dark Lilith

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thank you all,I am humbled by your approval

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also nice. Peotry seems to floating around these forums today.

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Norskatt Approves +12 :)

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Well done that poem really turns me on! :P

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I'm glad your all enjoying it.*smiles*

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Very nice Lilith.

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Maviarab wrote...

Very nice Lilith.

thank you kind SerPosted Image

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Who was you muse?

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Celrath wrote...

Who was you muse?

your poetry needs work Celrath.

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Ghost Lightning

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Daawwwwwwww. I like it!!!

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*claps hands* you did well!

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Dark Lilith

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Ecstacy, excitement, momentum
and pure joy,
use my body as
you like,
Make of me your
toy!

Hold me, then release
me,
Turn me round and
down
Push me to the
limit,
My senses have no
bounds!

Spank me once, or
spank me twice,
or three times if,
your sure
Will I beg for
mercy?
Or loudly scream
for more!

I am the enigma,
My spirit does
reflect,
Submissive for you
one time,
An animal the
next!

Can you tame
my hunger?
Or do I your
emotions vex?

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.....Quite provocative.

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Cleopatra II wrote...

.....Quite provocative.

I write from experience or on things that have an interest for me.Your compliments are always welcomed.Posted Image

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So sensual... brb.

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Dark Lilith

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The candle light casts
shadows, upon your
sleeping form.

Passion left unbridled
makes me yearn for more

Slowly do I cross the room
and gaze upon your face,
hearts that beat as one
left a pleasant taste.

Tenderly does my hand
caress your warm and
supple skin,

I lean down to kiss
you,
Yes, it's time again!

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MessyPossum wrote...

So sensual... brb.

*raises eyebrow*

I like that one too, lilith. :P

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I think im your #1 fan and I will fight cleo and messy for the title if need be!

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I missed you even though I would have to disagree.

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Dark Lilith

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your compliments please me, thank you :)

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silver_sparrow wrote...

I think im your #1 fan and I will fight cleo and messy for the title if need be!

You only have to fight Cleo.:unsure: