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[Dark Lilith]

Maviarab wrote...

*cries*.....wonderful.

your replies always seem to drive me onward to create more.


Chocolate is the
Ultimate Drug,
Tis better than
A lover’s hug
 
Sweet of taste
And smooth as
Silk. when it
Melts on your
Tongue,

The waves of
Bliss tell you
The pleasure’s just
Begun
 
Round or flat
Or square in
 A Fondue
There’s no food
Quite like it
Nor the happiness
It brings unto
You.
 
Be it light
Or dark
Bitter or perhaps
Sweet
When spied upon
A shelf it
Beckons for you
To eat
 
Licking your fingers
Or your lovers
Chocolate kiss.
 
No matter the
Time, the place,
At home or
On the run
 
Chocolate oh chocolate
Sweet temptation here
I come.

Modifié par Dark Lilith, 03 juillet 2010 - 06:16 .

[Dark Lilith]

I sit here in
the darkness,
behind my closed
bedroom door

Tears like blood
flow freely,
and splash upon
the floor

I am torn between
my lovers,
my heart breaks,
and it rends

Misery, and turmoil
into my life,,
I send

I only want to
love you,
to hold you close
to me

Yet events beyond my
simple grasp,
Have dropped me to
my knees!

I pull my hair,
and beat the
floor
And cry to ease
the grief


You've crushed my
heart
and broken it,
and brought me
disbelief!

[Dark Lilith]

Maviarab wrote...

Ohh....gave me a shiver that one....

hmmm, perchance your a tad biased thanks

[Dark Lilith]

MessyPossum wrote...

I give you bonus points for continually sticking to form and meter. Very well designed as usual Ms. Lilith.

your words grace me.

[Dark Lilith]

Isabelle Mortello wrote...

I love the way you write your poems. Great!

you flatter me,me likey too much

[Dark Lilith]

Darth Jayder wrote...

Some pretty interesting and emotional poems Lilith.

Cheers.

thank you

[Dark Lilith]

Sad am I,
it's why I
cry

Sad am I
I'd rather die

Sad is life,
so full of
strife,
Sad that I'd
want to end
my life.

Sad is the
day,
so full of
tears
Sad and lonely
all of these
years

Sad to say
I love to
strong,
Sad to say
I don't belong

Sad to see
the setting sun
Sad to think
I'm the only
one.

Sad in the
morning,
and sad at
night
Is it time
to give up
the fight?

Sad for the
words that I've
said,
would I truly
be better off
dead?

Sad to think
of loves I've
lost,
Sad to think
of the hurt
I've caused

Sad because the
day is new
Sad to wonder
if my heart
is true.

Sad to think
that I lived
in chains,
but broke my
shackles and began
to live again.

Sad no more
and happy to
be,
the one, the
only
the very real
me.

Happy am I
so free and
so sure,
that you can
no longer hurt
me,
nor do I
fear you any
more.

Every day I'm
happy
every day I'm
glad
took someone like
you
to really make
me mad.

Mad enough to
stand up
and call you
out
Happy and joyous
just listen to
me shout

Your hold has
vanished
and so shall
you,
I'm free forever
and you still
haven't a clue!

Dark Lilith...free at last!

[darkshadow136]

Great work Lilith, self awareness and understanding does diect one to happiness.

[Dark Lilith]

 


and so it has happened.

Modifié par Dark Lilith, 07 juillet 2010 - 06:20 .

[Dark Lilith]

MessyPossum wrote...

^ See. And good write. Though I interpreted it as death at the end, "Free at last". With all the talk of better off not feeling and dead in the beginning. Sorry if that wasn't your intention.

Death is far from my mind, this poem I wrote a year ago when I was having a man problem,once I choose to walk away and say goodbye his hold on me vanished.

Modifié par Dark Lilith, 07 juillet 2010 - 06:28 .

[Dark Lilith]

See the children
How they play
They’re all so
Happy, alive and
Gay.
Skin color is
Not a concern
So how do
They learn?
 
They call one
Another friend
But oft too
Many times do
The friendships fade
Away and end.
 
Where does it
Begin?
This judgment of
A person by
The color of
His or her
Skin?
 
Is it from
The parents at
Home?
Is it from
Those with which
They roam?
 
Was it violence?
On another’s part
That tore these
Relationships all apart?
 
How do we
End it?
Do you think
We ever will?
Why do some
Spit and call
Names,
Why do others
Kill?
 
Are we intelligent?
To see the
Folly of it
All
Why must some
Always live with
Their backs against
A wall?
Are we just
Spectators to it
All?
 
Where does it
Begin?
And when will
It end?
How many must
Die at the
Hands of other
Men?
 
For me the
Answer is all
To clear, so simple,
So easy and
Yet I still
Fear.
 
Too many are
Greedy
Or so full
Of hate, so spiteful,
So mean and
Yet they dictate;
The actions of
The weak, the fearful
The blind, those seeking
Acknowledgement they’ll never
Find.
 
I watch and
Wait,
But I know
In my heart
Be afraid to
Go out into
The night for
The end will
Not come until
Eternal twilight.

[Dark Lilith]

MessyPossum wrote...

A sad realization that we will always be like this, isn't it?

all so true