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Lilith's Poetic Outlook

Débuté par Dark Lilith , juin 28 2010 07:12

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Posté 09 juillet 2010 - 08:38

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Dark Lilith wrote...

MessyPossum wrote...

A sad realization that we will always be like this, isn't it?

all so true
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But you're here so smiles all around :D

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Dark Lilith
Posté 09 juillet 2010 - 08:43

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MessyPossum wrote...

Dark Lilith wrote...

MessyPossum wrote...

A sad realization that we will always be like this, isn't it?

all so true
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But you're here so smiles all around :D

thats true!Image IPB

#78
Dark Lilith
Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 07:35

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He walks into
the room,
all leather and
shiny chains

His dark eyes
aglow,
for he knows
he controls my
reins!

Slowly does he
caress my skin,
a leather collar
for my neck,
yes! It is
play time once
again!

He taunts and
excites me,
brings me too
a peak,

He knows my
bodily desires,
his skill and
handling leave me
weak.

Passions ebb and
passions flow,
we two share
a bond that
many will never
know!

Keeper of my
body,
keeper of my
heart,
my unbridled need
for you,
will never keep
us apart!

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 07:46

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Dark Lilith wrote...

I sit here in
the darkness,
behind my closed
bedroom door

Tears like blood
flow freely,
and splash upon
the floor

I am torn between
my lovers,
my heart breaks,
and it rends

Misery, and turmoil
into my life,,
I send

I only want to
love you,
to hold you close
to me

Yet events beyond my
simple grasp,
Have dropped me to
my knees!

I pull my hair,
and beat the
floor
And cry to ease
the grief


You've crushed my
heart
and broken it,
and brought me
disbelief!


You are breaking my heart.......*hugs*

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Dark Lilith
Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 07:49

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Cartims wrote...

Dark Lilith wrote...

I sit here in
the darkness,
behind my closed
bedroom door

Tears like blood
flow freely,
and splash upon
the floor

I am torn between
my lovers,
my heart breaks,
and it rends

Misery, and turmoil
into my life,,
I send

I only want to
love you,
to hold you close
to me

Yet events beyond my
simple grasp,
Have dropped me to
my knees!

I pull my hair,
and beat the
floor
And cry to ease
the grief


You've crushed my
heart
and broken it,
and brought me
disbelief!


You are breaking my heart.......*hugs*


so sweet!

#81
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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 09:32

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Never been much of a guy for poetry, but it's nice.

#82
Dark Lilith
Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 09:36

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Tirannos Rex wrote...

Never been much of a guy for poetry, but it's nice.

well thank you very much, as long as I can elicit an emotion then my poetry worksImage IPB

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 09:38

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Dark Lilith wrote...

Tirannos Rex wrote...

Never been much of a guy for poetry, but it's nice.

well thank you very much, as long as I can elicit an emotion then my poetry worksImage IPB

Don't misunderstand me now, but it doesn't invoke anything in me, I just find it to be well written and good use of words.

#84
Dark Lilith
Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 09:42

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then it invoked words of praise,did it not? *wink*

#85
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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 09:47

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Dark Lilith wrote...

then it invoked words of praise,did it not? *wink*

Nice play on words, yes it did. But as far as emotions; no. But, I will say this, you seem to have a nice little talent with those poems of yours. Although I must admit, the last one I read was a bit too dramatic for me. Why not something more... sunny?

#86
Dark Lilith
Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 09:50

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I deal with life on life's terms and reality.Is that not what our world is, Reality. Why write sunny and happy when I can make a point or perhaps open anothers eyes? Go back and read all what I've left here.Reality can be harsh and cruel or what one likes and cares not what others think!

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 09:52

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Heh, you sound like me. Trying to make a point is all that it matters about, but even I know that there are some good in this world, although that good doesn't really come from people, I'd say.

#88
Dark Lilith
Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 09:56

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theres nice writings in this post also hun.I am me and therfore deal with things that matter to me and my world and as long as I'm allowed to write here then I'm happy,if my works offend then is it not the ones offend that need to look into themselves rather than at what I write?

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:01

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I'm not saying it's offending, all I mean is that variety is good. But of course, I'm very simple myself when it comes to my writings. But in the end, all that matters isn't what I say, but what you think of your work, and that is what's truly important.

#90
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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:05

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I know you did not find it offending,else you'd not have praised it. I care little what people think of my work but then they're the ones crying out the loudest, are they not?

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:06

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Yeah, they are. But it's easy to judge, that is something I truly know.

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:12

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Tirannos Rex wrote...

Yeah, they are. But it's easy to judge, that is something I truly know.

as do I my friend all to much in my life so far.Image IPB

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:15

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Indeed, it's always easier to be on your high horse and look down on others. But those poems of yours, they are personal experiences then?

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Dark Lilith
Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:22

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many are yes,some are just what I see in the world,its ways,its hurts and how people treat one another.

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:25

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Ah, that's very deep. But don't let me now bother you.

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:27

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Tirannos Rex wrote...

Ah, that's very deep. But don't let me now bother you.

your no bother hun,I enjoy talking with someone who understands more than others see with their jaundiced viewpoints.Image IPB

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:37

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Oh well, it just felt like the conversation was begining to become a little strained, that's all.

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:38

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you can go if you wish and thank you for the kind words.

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Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:46

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You're welcome. And keep up the good work.

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Dark Lilith
Posté 11 juillet 2010 - 10:53

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Seek not the
Angel,
Seek not the
Bride,
For in my
Hungry world do
I hide.

Seek not to
Be the only
One,
Seek not because
For me there
Can never be
only one.

Seek not to
Take me, enshrine
Me nor worship
Me,
For I am
What I am
And happy to
Be me.

Seek not to
Entice me
Nor put Gold
Upon my hand
For I am
The Banshee, the
Screamer upon loves
Demand.

Seek only to
Enjoy me, to
Be happy in
That time as
One
For to roam
Is my personal
Hell, for I
Answer to none

Seek not to
Free me for
I am a
Slave to my
Emotions, my needs
And shall take
Them to my
Grave

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