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Dragon Age: The Kill (Fanfiction) (Updated 27 Dec 2011)


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Poor Dafen. :( It's a skilful dodge how you involved his story into your chapter. So I have the feeling to "know" him and his death appears more tragic.

But a "mage" fighting with blades? Hm... I'm curious how this will come out and go on in the next chapter. I hope Zev perseveres with his injury and Ciela won't panic. Kamator seems to be the only steady post in this setting, but I rate him as a type who would rather jump aside and look for an escape for himself than risking too much in a nearly hopeless situation...

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I'm a total sucker for a good metaphor. Loved Dafen's dream sequence.

ETA:
@maradeux, "But a "mage" fighting with blades? Hm..."

Never mind "what next?", I wanna hear the conversation after *that.*  Because it sure looks like Xai just lost his considerable self-control, and if Zevran continues to needle him as he's been doing... that's going to get savage, I think.  Icy cold but veryvery sharp.

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Fantastic work! The extended metaphor is bloody brilliant (no pun intended :x ). Poor Dafen.. but at least he's free. And his fall helped take out Ezio..

What's Phaedra's game, I wonder.... X3

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 I've been eagerly awaiting for the story to continue now that you've had a chance to see first hand the additions (or tweeks) to the Lore of Dragon Age. This was well worth the wait. The manner in which Ezio was able to maintain control over Dafen via an almost "Matrix" like dreamscape was fantastic. I admit, I was somewhat surprised to see the Magister come to an end so quickly, but it was fitting none the less.

Of couse, now begs the question of what happens in the aftermath? Xai has clearly exposed himself; however, if Phaedra intended to use the situation to bring her brother to an end from the start, there-in resides the possibility that she might permit Zevran and the escape party to flee, if only to have the time/resources to cover up what she has done. Despite how Cold-Blooded the Tevinter Circle is, I somehow doubt they will look favorably on such a black eye to the circle going unanswered. Questions, questions...

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I know what Corker is saying and I'm waiting for the next conversation too. I'll try to control my excitement. *giggles*

This chapter was amazing even though it took me a few reads because I don't have much tolerance for large bodies of italics, I skipped them the first time. LOL. Left me confused so I read carefully the next time, still I was a little confused, but I think I got it now. haha. I had to slow my reading down, that may sound simple to some but it's a hard thing for me to do. I look forward to more Xai and Zevran. Those two can get themselves in much trouble. Is it their training? LOL

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Sorry for the terrible delays >.< And thanks for the comments, they are always appreciated! :D

Part 21 - Breaking Points

In the Minrathous Circle Tower there was a growing silence.

The two Imperial Edges ripped from the thrall’s body with a sound like wet leather tearing then swooped up, around and down in two powerful overhand arcs as the elf dropped to his knees. The blades landed on either side of their victim’s unarmoured neck, metal shearing deep from shoulder to mid-chest. There was no outcry of pain, the slave simply jerked and went limp, his brands and eyes ceasing to glow, his face empty.

Xai Merras released the hilts and took two steps back; the dead elf slumped forwards, his head hanging, until the tips of the blades stopped him from falling any further and metal scraped softly against the floor. Blood poured from the wounds into an expanding crimson pool.

Zevran couldn’t see the Warden’s face but he could tell just by observing the stance, the rapid breathing, how he was staring down at the dead slave, that the human, the Crow Master, had been knocked badly off-balance. Before he could come to a decision on whether he should say or do something, Xai’s head lifted and he seemed to notice the surrounding mages for the first time. He retreated a third slow pace, turning a circle as though hunting for an avenue of escape, then froze to complete stillness when his eyes found Zevran’s…and stood waiting.

He was pale, though that could have been an after-effect of the blood control spell, and while his expression wasn’t exactly showing fear Zevran thought he could pick up a distinctly cornered feel, just as he had from Ciela on the floor above.

Zevran was the avenue of escape, and Xai knew it. Was counting on it. Had been counting on it all along.

The copper bit finally dropped.

“Say something,” Ciela breathed.

Of course…bring him back to himself, as he had perhaps done after that display with the templar upstairs, as he had tried to do for Ciela when walking down the mage-infested corridors…

The eyes of the two men remained locked a whisper of a second longer…

You need me. Hah, the Grey Warden, the Crow Assassin, the Craftmaster, always so confident and superior in your abilities over the fugitive elf…and what is this, hm? I would wager my boots you saved me upstairs for fear you could not make it out alone. I’d wager my gloves that the reason you gave for not being able to liberate me the first time Ezio took me to the tower was a complete lie…

…Xai’s gaze dropped to the floor.

“Say something!”

Hm. Something that would preserve the illusion of authority Xai had claimed while still giving them an excuse not to linger any longer than they had to...and something that would bring him back.

Ah…but of course.

“Master,” Zevran said, in a voice that sounded shockingly loud in the quiet that had descended. But he spoke it confidently, and as easily as if Xai had still been a Crow Master rather than disguised as a Magister.

It had been Xai’s idea, after all, that Zevran and Ciela pose as his apprentices.

The effects on Xai were minute but instantaneous. His shoulders twitched back at the word, his posture both straightening and relaxing. When he looked up his expression was one of annoyance, like some thought of immense importance had just been interrupted. His gaze was sharp. “Apprentice?” he replied, coldly.

Zevran’s response was smoother than it should have been considering Xai’s tone, borderline insolent in fact, but he couldn’t help himself. “Master, our enemy’s assassin lies dead and we have an appointment to keep, yes? Your colleagues will be waiting.”

The human shot him a flat look that Zevran knew, from this man, was as good as a glare, then pointed at Kamator and snapped, “You. Retrieve those swords and clean them.” As the Rivaini jumped at once to obey, Xai added to the room at large, “I didn’t acquire a pair of enchanted Edges for my thrall to learn the Arvale only to have them sullied by the blood of a coward’s slave. That,” he continued, indicating the corpse with a jerk of his chin, “can be returned to its owner. With my compliments.”

Zevran was aware of Ciela keeping very close to him as the spell of silence broke and the observers began to murmur amongst themselves, several drifting away now that the show was apparently over, but the majority and the guards were casting glances to Magistra Phaedra, who had been tight-lipped since the slaughter of Ezio’s thrall. Her thrall kept both eyes on Xai as he stepped around the corpse to retrieve his mage staff, but the magistra had her head cocked to listen to the words of another finely-dressed mage who had gone to her side.

“Is that another magister, mi ciela?” he murmured, trying to keep his lips from moving.

“Yes,” she replied softly.

Kamator, lacking anything more appropriate it would seem, had unhesitatingly cleaned Xai’s swords with his own robe. The blood left darker stains against the red cloth, but in a land where blood magic and rituals were the norm Zevran wondered whether such a thing on a slave’s attire would draw more than a passing glance. Xai himself had blood down his front but he didn’t bother calling for anything to clean himself up. He took the swords from Kamator when they were presented and, with barely a glance at them, as though it was unimaginable for the slave to have handed back anything but two perfectly spotless blades, returned them to the sheaths beneath his robe.

Phaedra was approaching Xai with a purposeful stride now, her thrall keeping protectively near, her magister associate hurrying away in the direction that led downstairs. “Brother,” she began, still in the King’s Tongue.

Xai spared her a glance and started towards Zevran and Ciela with the foot of his staff tapping impatiently against the floor. “My thanks for your timely aid, Sister, but I have no time for pleasantries. I am lodging at the Myan Irokh on Poplar Crescent if you require discourse. Good day.”

Phaedra’s eyes narrowed but she stopped and let him go on. Zevran kept half his attention on her and her thrall as Xai and Kamator reached them, the Rivaini’s lips moving in some inaudible prayer for deliverance.

“Let’s go,” Xai said tersely, looking at neither of them as he brushed past to lead the way, and no one moved to bar their path.

After a moment, when no call came for them to stop, Zevran muttered loudly enough for Xai to hear, “So is it me, or did we just get away with that?”

“It’s you.”

“Ah. Of course.” Zevran risked a quick glance back. Sure enough, Phaedra was conferring with some of the Circle Tower guards. After only a brief word to them, no fewer than seven soldiers and three mages were heading after the retreating group, accompanied by the magistra’s thrall. Phaedra herself departed in the opposite direction, heading back into the lofty heights of the tower.

“Well?”

“Seven soldiers, three casters and Phaedra’s thrall,” Zevran reported quietly. “Keeping their distance, or so it would seem. The magistra did not see fit to follow. I suspect she is going upstairs.”

Xai swore under his breath. “What’s her game?”

“Ah…” Zevran hesitated. “I spoke too soon, I fear. Some of our spectators are coming along after them…more mages. A fair number of them, in fact.”

Xai rubbed a hand over his eyes. “We have to get out of here fast.”

“Are you all right?” Ciela asked him. “You’re so pale,” she explained when he glanced her way, and Zevran hummed to himself. He would have expected the former master to have recovered his colour by now, but then Xai had been blood controlled by no fewer than three mages in under two hours, not to mention bound by that glyph, and they had barely paused to stop for a rest. If what had happened behind them was anything to go by, the damage and stress had to be stacking up behind that splintering mask.

“Not here,” was all Xai said.

“Later, yes?” Zevran practically purred, and the human was silent.

**

Shayle was beginning to feel uncomfortable fluttery sensations in the pit of her fleshy dwarven stomach. She’d decided it wasn’t hunger (although that, too, had been confusing when she’d first felt it), and she kept wanting to look in the direction of the stairs in the hopes of sighting the two assassins. Perhaps this was what they called ‘worry’? She hoped it wasn’t constipation; that didn’t sound nearly as pleasant.

The two golem-keeper mages were still talking, even though she was running out of things to harp about. They seemed more than content to argue the ethics of golem/dwarven slavery with each other as much as with her, which was something of a relief even if the sound of their prattle was driving her to distraction.

“It was a legal transaction made between the Tevinter and Dwarven Empires long ago! The dwarves themselves agreed to it, we have done nothing wrong!”

“Lady Cadash is right though…the dwarves were not forthright with what, exactly, the golems are.”

“Does that matter? The dwarves must have known, and I daresay we still would have purchased had they told us. Flesh or stone, slaves are slaves, and the control rods are even more effective than blood magic for keeping them in check.”

“Very true. Hah, can you imagine control rods for blood slaves? If someone figured out how to do that they’d make a fortune with the magisters.”

“I don’t know, I hear some of them enjoy the whole breaking in and training processes. The up close and personal touch. For the quarry gangs though…I can see that being useful. Rods instead of whips.”

Shayle’s fists itched. Her servitude to Wilhelm had been far from unbearable, no matter how much she liked to complain about it, and she’d heard and seen enough in the Imperium to know her situation had been, except for the chisel incident, pretty good. Indeed, until coming to Tevinter and becoming a dwarf again she hadn’t remembered what pain felt like. The first time she’d stubbed her toe or cut a finger she’d been so shocked it had been embarrassing, and oh, she carried around a giant hammer and wore armour like a warrior, but the truth was she hadn’t been in a scrap since her change, and she knew what kinds of injuries meat creatures could sustain. One good cut in the right place and the all the bits inside could just tumble out into a squidgy puddle to be picked at by birds. The very idea was horrifying.

Wait…what had she been thinking about?

Oh, yes. Slaves. Whips. Flesh wounds.

She’d been down to the auction blocks once or twice and seen what those cruelly pronged lashes could do. In fact, her new body had several long stripes scarring its back.

She had decided she didn’t like people who liked whips. It was worse than being crapped on, and that wasn’t a comparison she made lightly.

“It mentioned ‘breaking in’,” Shayle interrupted their verbal diarrhoea (that was a term she’d heard back in Ferelden. Once she’d learned what diarrhoea actually was, she’d decided it was a very good term), “but I thought breaking in was what one did to a house or shop. How does one ‘break in’ a person? Is a hammer applied to its skull?”

“Breaking in refers to the breaking of a slave’s will, or spirit, my lady, and the methods vary from person to person,” one of the mages replied. “If slaves not born in captivity or familiar with their new role in Tevinter society, they must learn what is expected of them. Many are resistant, especially if they’ve come from nations where slavery is not practised and they believe freedom is some kind of Maker-given right for all and sundry.”

“In most cities the breaking in of slave gangs begins with the psychological,” the other explained, “taking away their hope. Physical lessons or executions are carried out if slaves continue to resist, publicly, so the others can see where defiance leads. Slaves that are properly broken in are pliant, agreeable, do what they’re told and don’t cause trouble.”

Shayle considered this. “It also mentioned some prefer a personal touch? What did it mean by that?”

“Well, certain men just like beating animals with clubs, but I was talking about blood slaves there so naturally I meant blood magic, my lady. You can’t get any more personal than that. Spells like blood control can force a slave to obey whether they want to or not, and if they try to resist the pull of their own lifeblood it’s incredibly painful—or that’s what it looks like. The magister simply keeps making use of the spell for as long as it takes for the slave to stop fighting it. Eventually they just start obeying commands because they’ve become so used to their bodies being beyond their own control, and their minds have become conditioned to believing resistance is an exercise both hopeless and agonising.”

“Conditioning thralls is a personal effort in most cases,” the other mused. “Some magisters find the whole experience long and tedious—too many castings in too brief a time span can kill, but ultimately necessary if you want it done right. Others, I hear they find the training process satisfying. First Enchanter Lysander once said the longer a thrall resisted, the more piquant the victory.”

“Hmph. He sang a very different tune before they handed him his dead master’s Circle Staff.”

“Indeed. And the Aequitarians fell for it and supported his elevation. Idiots.”

Shayle was alternately relieved and troubled when, at that point, she recognised the Crow and the Treacherous Warden emerging from the passage that led upstairs, accompanied by a female elf dressed as a mage and a male elf dressed as a blood slave. Behind them, practically hot on their heels, came a tattooed and white-dressed (barely) thrall, several warriors and a number of mages. Had they been apprehended? The party’s escort had gained instant attention from the guards stationed around the mock-throne, and even the golem-mages glanced over to see what was afoot. Some of the mages tailing the guards who were following Zevran’s group sidetracked, heading straight for the throne room’s guard captain.

“Your First Enchanter succeeded its master?” Shayle asked quickly, trying to keep their attention on her even as she shot the assassins several furtive glances, waiting to see if they would signal her, but the Warden’s dark eyes were fixed on the sunlight streaming through the door and Zevran looked like he was sweating. There was a dark patch staining the right shoulder of his robe. “Is it true the previous one was assassinated by an Antivan Crow?”

That made both mages stare at her, then one snorted inelegantly while the other laughed. “Er…no? He was challenged by another magister for his seat in the senate. Both magisters were killed in the duel, as was the thrall of the would-be usurper. The First Enchanter’s thrall fled into the tower proper and was eventually hunted down by Lysander, as responsibility for his master’s slaves fell to him. If that was meant to be an assassination attempt, I can’t say it’s any different to the usual squabbles between the powerful.”

“That’s why it’s safer to be a guard,” his companion said wryly. “Important enough that you’re needed, but not so important that anyone wants to bother killing you.”

Shayle only listened with half an ear, the rest of her attention on the others as they headed for the huge front door of the tower. Behind them, the guard captain was pointing to where the golem-mages stood with Shayle near the threshold, and he suddenly yelled something in Arcanum. Shayle had heard the phrase a few times and knew what it meant:

“Identify! Mages or mundanes?”

One of the mages Shayle was with glanced to where the captain was indicating, Zevran’s robe-swathed party, then reached within his own garments to extract the Golem Control Rod. “Excuse me, Lady Cadash,” he said, and canted his head back to look up at where his golem towered far above.

Shayle looked at her companions; still no signal.

Zevran didn’t know Arcanum, but Xai should have reacted by now. Their thrall and guard escort were looking back though, in surprise, like this hadn’t been expected.

“Golem! Identify that group of four. Mages or mundanes?”

An enormous steel head swivelled to stare downwards.

Shayle decided not to wait any longer, and unshouldered her two-handed hammer. She’d been looking forward to this.

“Mundanes.” The golem’s leaden tone reverberated through the chamber.

This was followed by a sharp cry of surprise and pain, then a skidding noise as one of the golem-mages slid across the marble floor on his back, clutching at his crushed chest and gurgling.

Shayle picked up the control rod he’d dropped, weighed the runed blue crystal thoughtfully in one hand, then remembered the second golem-mage who was backing away with a slack-jawed expression while groping for her own rod.

“Golem! Crush that mage!”

“Argh, no! Golem, protect m—!”

CRUNCH.

**

People screamed and ran for it. Those who’d been heading into the tower fled back out into Minrathous’ central square, those who’d been heading for the door scrambled backwards and away, at first because of the red smear that had once been a mage, but then because the warrior guards were drawing their bows and the mage guards were beginning to weave the Fade into visible streamers of light. Zevran, Xai, Ciela and Kamator, on the other hand, roused by the sudden flurry of activity and shouts, broke into a mad dash for the exit. The thrall who’d been following them abruptly ditched his astonished guards and gave chase, desperation written across his face.

“Archers, take that dwarf down! Mages, apprehend those impersonators!”

Shayle ducked behind the solid steel leg of her golem as arrows pinged off or shattered against the metal. She gripped the rod tightly, wishing she could break it here and now, but spoke the command instead and hoped the spirit within the construct would forgive her once it was free: “Golem! Destroy my attackers!”

The golem reached both massive arms up, seized the stone masonry forming the arched top of the doorframe and hauled. With a great screech of metal joints and cracking of rock, the keystone and several feet of gold-veined granite was torn from the wall and, without pause, thrown effortlessly across the room at the archers. The ensuing crash and cloud of flying shrapnel killed or injured a third of them, threw more off their feet, and even struck some of the incanting mages, causing spells to fizzle.

But one caster got a spell off. The thrall chasing them got hit. An arcane bolt slammed into his back and he tripped, falling with a cry, “Wait! Mercy! Please, take me with you!”

“GO!” Xai roared when Ciela started to slow and look back. He shoved the girl and Zevran ahead of him, eliciting an agonised snarl from the Antivan and a protest from the Fereldan, then dropped his staff and drew his swords, cracking the hilts against each other to jolt the dweomer runes to life. He headed back for the thrall. “SHAYLE!”

“Golem! Protect my allies!”

Another section of wall took out half the remaining guards, then the golem lumbered from its post by the door. Shayle ducked and scampered across the entranceway before the remaining archers could recover and draw beads on her, diving for the corpse of the mashed golem-mage and retrieving the second control rod. It was intact. These things had been crafted, funnily enough, to withstand a golem’s strength.

“Golem!” she shouted, brandishing the device even as she darted behind the steel legs for cover. “Kill those mages!”

Zevran, Ciela and Kamator cleared the threshold of the Circle Tower, barely avoiding falling chunks of stone as they sprinted out into the afternoon sunlight. They ran for the crowd of spectators gawking at the golems’ rampage through the rising cloud of dust and were barely given a second glance, for they were no more than a lucky trio who had managed to slip safely past the madness. They weren’t left wondering for long before Xai and the thrall emerged at speed, the latter being propelled ahead by the Warden, whose gait was hampered by a limp. Finding Zevran in the crowd with his eyes, the former master made a single small Crow sign with one hand: Fly.

“We have somewhere to be,” Zevran said aloud, but quietly. He led the two other elves to the rear of the swelling crowd and then, after getting his bearings, towards the street he recognised would ultimately lead them to where Shianni waited with the horses. After a minute, somewhere behind them there was ghastly crescendo of crashing brickwork, accompanied by a chorus of shrieks.

Zevran glanced back a couple of times and saw Xai and the thrall following at a distance, but no sign of Shayle. The dwarf had arranged for an alternate way out of the city if it turned out the golems would be needed, and was paying for the passage with lyrium.

“This way, my friends,” the Antivan said, and led his companions deeper into the city.

Towards freedom.

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Yay! Great chapter. Look at Zevran getting all smug. LOL

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Love Shayle continuing to adapt to her new squishy body. XD Just hope all those ruminations over guts spilling out weren't foreshadowing. :o

Poor thrall. Talk, son. Talk fast and convincingly because I am pretty darn sure you were not taken along for mercy's sake.

but then Xai had been blood controlled by no fewer than three mages in under two hours, not to mention bound by that glyph, and they had barely paused to stop for a rest. If what had happened behind them was anything to go by, the damage and stress had to be stacking up behind that splintering mask.

You know how romance-angst stories are popular, where readers can wallow in big, cathartic emotions, and the author is encouraged to pour more and more and MORE angst into the situation? Which seems counter-intuitive at first, because if the readers love the characters, shouldn't they want to spare them pain?

I'm that way with seeing characters with heroic amounts of willpower get piled on til cracks start showing. Because what's the *point* of having an iron will if it's never really properly challenged?

Part of me wishes for a Xai's-eye view of all this, but too much awesome tension comes from keeping his POV opaque to the reader. So I will have to do my fangirling without it. ;)

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@DreGregoire: Thanks! ahaha, yep on Zev...that might get him into trouble. ;)

@Corker: re the rescued thrall: haha, I can't pull anything over you. ;D I'm glad of seeing your suspicions though, because I also got a review on FF.Net saying they were happy Xai was showing he can be a nice person by rescuing the thrall. *grin* Oh dear...

I *almost did* do a Xai's-eye for this chapter, but decided against it for that very reason. Too early just yet, when so much about him is still obscured. And I got a much better idea for an eventual reveal. :)

Thanks! :D

Modifié par Shadow of Light Dragon, 26 mai 2011 - 11:15 .


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^.-

Just letting you know I got done rereading and it was as good as the first few times or so I read it. hahaha *hugz*

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*considers herself prodded* ;)

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*prods you again*

I miss your stories!

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Part 22 - One Step Forward

Shianni waited, fidgeting in her Tevinter-style armour and staring anxiously down the paved avenue the others should be appearing at the other end of at any minute now.

She and three plain-clothed Fereldan soldiers were holding tight in an estate Xai had cased as being, to all intents and purposes, abandoned. The buildings stood empty, the gardens were overgrown, the fountain dry, the guard outposts all forsaken. It was located in a quiet district; no one had used this land for over a decade according to city records, and while they were all hoping it would go unnoticed that the estate's iron-wrought gates had been forced they were keeping the noise down as much as possible. So far, the horses were cooperating.

I have learned how to ride.

In the midst of her nervous state, a spark of true pride glowed. Her capacity for alcohol aside, which shouldn't really count, Shianni didn't have many skills she could claim to be proud of. What could someone hope to learn in an alienage? Letters and numbers and sometimes a trade if your parents knew one. Shianni could read, write given time, use her fingers to count, and cook a really good rat. She didn't know if horse riding and dagger fighting meant a brighter future when she finally returned home, but it had to offer more than being a shem's servant or a man’s housewife.

Still, it wasn't horses or daggers that had gotten her here but her usual stubbornness and habit for getting herself into trouble. How could she have known that trying to talk an assassin into killing Vaughan would lead her here? She'd rescued Fereldan elves she'd never met before, and had been shocked to discover many of them recognised her as "that red-headed girl who was shouting at the Tevinters outside the hospice."

"You were right. We should have listened to you. We're sorry! Please, can you get us home?"

She shook her head with an angry frown, and reached out to pat her horse's mane to soothe herself.

She was here, and all this had happened not because she was skilled, but because she was stubborn and hot-headed. Although Zevran called it being tenacious, which sounded nicer.

Where are they?

She wished she could have helped more than this, but knew everyone had been given the role best suited to them. Hers wasn’t pretending to be a mage, or acting as though the slavery that was everywhere in this place wasn’t affecting her. It wasn’t being able to seize control of golems or creeping carefully through shadows. It definitely wasn’t killing anyone, or coming to a heroic rescue like Soris and Nelaros had tried in Denerim…like Xai and Zevran were attempting this very moment. But it had to be more than waiting with the horses, ready for the escape from Minrathous.

“There,” a guard said suddenly, pointing, and Shianni looked up. Three figures had just come around the avenue’s bend and were hurrying towards the estate. Two were hooded and wearing robes, but the third was wearing a blood red slave robe, dark-skinned and clearly neither her cousin nor either of her Antivan companions.

“I don’t know if it’s them,” she started to say warningly, and cut herself off as the central figure doffed his hood. Zevran, even with his tattoos covered and his blond hair stained black, was still recognisable. That had to mean the second hooded individual, wearing the robes she belatedly recognised selecting for her cousin, was Ciela Tabris. Shianni found herself holding her breath in hope as she took a few steps towards the approaching party.

“Cousin?”

Ciela’s face lifted.

Shianni had known this woman all her life. They had grown up, gotten in trouble and been drunk together. They’d been taken by Vaughan and his cronies, survived, tried to pull each other through it, and sworn neither of them would ever again be so afraid as they had been that day. Shianni had always considered her older relative the stronger and more resilient woman, ever since Aunt Adaia had taught her how to fight with real weapons, daggers and swords, things not permitted in the alienage. She’d always been a bit in awe of Ciela’s fighting talents, even envious, as though being able to swing a forbidden blade was an automatic elevation to Elven Heroine. Vaughan had snatched some of her humour away, or rather sharpened it to a cutting edge, but he hadn’t made her weak or timid. Shianni had always been determined to emulate that lack of fear, or at least build a good mask so that people would never know, and she might even be able to trick herself...

But Ciela was afraid now. Shianni could see the blackness behind her glorious eyes, which were suddenly filling with tears. She found herself being hugged fiercely, with “Thank you,” being whispered into her ear, and could only hug back as tight as she could.

“All the way to the Tevinter Imperium,” Ciela said quietly, her tone practically one of disbelief. “I dreamed of rescue but I never…And Dad’s safe? You got everyone out?”

“Everyone I could,” Shianni assured her, because it hadn’t been everyone. Some hadn’t survived the voyage from Denerim, had perished in slavery or been taken to destinations she didn’t know or couldn’t reach. A small number, once released to the Fereldan embassy, had been so broken they hadn’t known they’d been saved. Others simply…died in the night. It had been heartbreaking, seeing them come so close to going home only to slip quietly away, never to awaken. “They’re on a ship, sailing back to Ferelden, and Uncle Cyrion’s on it too.”

“You’re amazing, Shianni.” Ciela let her go and, smiling, wiped her eyes with her sleeve. The motion smudged something that had been on her face, exposing a series of thin, shiny blue lines. Shianni frowned a little.

“What’re those?”

“What’re…?” Ciela seemed to realise what she was talking about. Her hand flew to cover her eye and she swore, whirling to face the unobtrusively attentive Zevran. “Damn! I need more of that cream!”

“After you change clothes,” he said, nodding towards the tiny gatehouse. “You will smudge more before you are done, no? There is some Tevinter armour in there similar to Shianni’s, and a sword, I believe. I will be donning much the same in a moment so that our merry band looks the part of a magister’s handsome entourage. We must move quickly,” he added to Shianni. “There was bloodshed, bodies, and a great deal of falling masonry once the golems got involved. If the gates are closed before we get through them we may be in store for a good old fashioned bloodbath in the streets. Hah! Just like in Antiva!”

“Are you feeling all right?” Shianni asked, peering at him.

“He is injured,” the unnamed elf in the red robe said. “Blood loss.”

“My good friend Xai bandaged it! Then your cousin punched it, then Xai shoved it, which did not help, I think.” Zevran swayed a tiny bit then frowned and shook his head firmly. “I should…see about getting it redressed while we have time. Shianni, my dear, if Ciela does not need your help then perhaps—?”

“Where is Xai?” Shianni interrupted. She gave Zevran a look of dismay. “He made it out, right?”

“He was right behind us,” Ciela said as both she and Zevran turned to look over their own shoulders, the latter muttering something unpleasant-sounding in Antivan. “He had another thrall with him.”

“I will go look—” Zevran began, but Shianni cut him off.

“We don’t have time! You both have to change clothes and Zevran, you can get the guards to help you with your injury then help Ciela cover that mark on her face. I’ll look for Xai.”

“Shianni—”

“Zev,” the red-head said, fixing him with a dire look. “I’ve been standing here doing nothing but stand around and agonise for ages. If you tell me to wait here while you go sort things out, I swear you’ll regret it!”

Zevran feigned a hurt expression. “My dear, I was merely going to suggest that you hurry. I do not wish to be out of sight of those flashing dark eyes for a moment longer than necessary.”

“Right,” she said brusquely, pushing past before he or her surprised cousin could see the heat stinging her cheeks. “Be right back.”

“Oh, and Shianni…” Zevran was suddenly at her elbow and speaking quite low so that no one else could overhear. “The slave Xai has with him…we acquired him under unusual circumstances. He may well be an unwitting spy and I suspect our friend is interrogating him as we speak, so be prepared for what you might see, hmm?”

“…torture?”

“Perhaps.” Zevran paused when she didn’t move, immobilised by a sudden flash of memory. “Have you changed your mind about going?”

“N-no.” She cursed herself for the hitch, but Zevran merely nodded and said with a suggestive smirk, “Then I will look forward to seeing you again shortly, no?”

Shianni imagined another naughty word, this time directed at Zevran, as she hurried away along the avenue. She’d thought the appearance of Ciela would distract him from his habitual flatteries. Her cousin was stronger, braver, more beautiful, and in the past had never failed to draw complete undivided attention. Surely she’d turn Zevran’s head in a day or two, whether or not she actually tried, and then Shianni could go back to being safely invisible.

She paused at the mouth of an alley from which voices were coming, readied herself as best she could then marched in.

Xai, in mage robes, had a dark-haired elf pinned to the wall by way of not one, but both of his swords scissored against the slave’s neck. Fortunately things didn’t seem to have escalated past intimidation, but the elf was wide-eyed and babbling in Arcanum, clearly terrified, and Shianni only hesitated long enough to recognise the thin blue tattoos around both of his eyes before striding over purposefully.

“Xai—” she said, and leapt back when one of the assassin’s swords hissed through the air towards her, followed shortly by the assassin’s eyes. “I—we—” Shianni took another step away, almost unconsciously. She didn’t like that look. “We have to go. Now. Before the alarm is raised and the gates shut.”

Xai continued to stare at her, then seemed to become aware of the fact his prisoner had fallen silent. The blade pressed to the elf’s throat twitched slightly. “I don’t recall telling you to shut up, thrall.”

“I swear by all the gods,” the elf said, his fingers curling against the wall at his back, “my mistress is not your enemy and I was not sent! She set me free!”

Both swords were suddenly whipped back into their previous scissor-grip. “Magisters do not free thralls,” Xai spat, hot and vicious and nothing like the Warden Shianni was used to. “It’s against Tevinter law!”

“She said I would have to escape and she would turn her head! She said—she said your group was my chance!” His eyes rolled to Shianni, begging. “You were already freeing one thrall, she thought you might take another!”

“Which is a fine story, up until she uses blood magic to have you kill us while we sleep, or uses your phylactery to follow us, catch us, then curry favour with the First Enchanter by handing us all in.” The blades pinched tighter around their victim’s throat. “She could have told you anything. She can make you do anything.”

“Please—you have one of his thralls. The First Enchanter is already going to follow you! I can be useful. I can help.”

“How?” Shianni asked, telling herself that Xai was only pretending to be scary. He didn’t mean it.

“I can…do this…” The elf brought one of his hands up around waist height, turning the palm upwards, and a bright bead of light sparked into being like a tiny blue star. It flared once, brilliantly, then guttered out when Xai’s weapons jerked, forcing him onto the tips of his toes and into a choked gasp.

“Don’t kill him!” Shianni grabbed at the human’s shoulder and felt him flinch violently from the touch a fraction of a second before he was rounding on her with a visceral snarl and slammed his elbow into her gut. She fell backwards onto the pavement, thanks to her armour more stunned than hurt, but the shock of his attack and indignity of landing on her arse was nothing compared to the heart-stopping, limb-freezing fear as he loomed over her with both swords glinting sunlight and his eyes full of shadow.

Maker, no. Get up. Get up! Were all those weeks of training for nothing? Andraste’s ass, Shianni, get back on your feet!

…but she huddled there like a coward, and couldn’t do anything else.

After a moment of mutual stillness, Xai stepped back and put up his swords. “I propose we give him some clothes and send him away,” he said, distantly, as though the last couple of minutes hadn’t happened. “He can escape on his own.”

Shianni swallowed, glancing towards the elf. He hadn’t moved either, but at her look he said, “Please…I just want to go home. To Nevarra.”

Her gaze returned to Xai. “He’s coming with us. He was a slave, same kind as Ciela. And a mage could be useful in the Imperium.”

“We don’t have provisions for five, let alone six.”

“I’ll eat less.”

“We only have four horses.”

“I’ll walk!” Trying to borrow strength from sheer infuriation, at him as well as herself, Shianni staggered upright. “Maker help me, Xai, I’m not leaving anyone in this place, all right? Not if I can help them!”

Xai rammed his swords into their sheaths. “And if he comes into your tent at night,” he said, meeting her glare coldly, “brands glowing with blood magic and ready to rape you with a dagger blade while the magister in his mind watches and laughs, will you be prepared to kill him?”

“Don’t you—don’t you dare joke about stuff like that.”

“And don’t you get too charitable or too close just because he’s a fellow elf or pitiful former slave.”

Shianni advanced an angry step, fists clenched. “Ciela was a thrall. So I should be ready to kill my own cousin too, huh?”

“If you’d rather she kill you instead, that’s your call.”

“And Zevran? Or you? If a mage makes you attack me you’d want me to kill y—” Shianni fell back, wide-eyed when he took a threatening pace towards her, one arm upraised and fist cocked to strike. He lowered it immediately afterwards, but there was an ugly sneer on his face.

“Somehow I doubt I have to worry about you killing me, Shianni. Even to save your own life.”

She stared at the ground as he turned aside to go back to the mage, and felt like a gaping hole had opened up within…right at the place where she’d been hoarding her little bits of pride at small successes and lessons learned. She wanted to be mad at him for speaking to her like and tearing down everything she’d been trying to build, but he was…he was right, wasn’t he? And so much of what she’d learned about defending herself and being able to withstand that sort of provocation, things she thought made her strong…he’d taught all that to her. Him and Zev. Had she let him down? Was that why he was so angry with her?

“I’m…sorry?” she tried.

He returned, one hand dragging the thrall by the arm. “Are you, now? What for?”

“I just thought…I mean, we practised. You helped. I thought if something like that happened to me again I’d…you know…” She wanted to face him, but was too afraid of how he might be looking at her. She sounded like she was practically whining. “I thought I’d handle myself better. I thought I’d be better. I really believed that—”

The air stirred as Xai stepped around her and strode away. Shianni bit her lip against tears at being so thoroughly brushed off, but jumped when a voice nearby said, very softly:

“Are you all right, Mistress?”

Shianni’s heart pounded. He’d left the slave behind. Why, when a moment ago he’d been grilling the poor elf for answers? Clearing her throat and straightening her armour, she tried to compose herself. “I’ll be all right.” Was there a hint of sympathy and I don’t believe you in his eyes? Her jaw hardened. If there was, she was going to ignore it. She could beat this. Sodding shem… “I’m Shianni, as you probably heard before. Your name is…?”

“I was…I am Enansal.”

She lifted her brows, but that question could wait. “Well, Enansal…what do you say we get out of here?”

“Yes.” He bowed his head in a nod, not fast enough to conceal the quick shimmer of tears. “Thank you..”

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No time to read before this afternoon (10 hours later), but... UPDATE! *yeah*  Posted Image

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WOOOOOOO

Total love, as usual. :D Love that Shianni's montage scene didn't make her an Instant Badass. Love that her recovery is a work in progress, neither stuck at the day after Vaughan's attack nor handwaved away. Love that Xai is too frayed to play sophisticated gentleman for her anymore. Love that it's so totally Shianni to sit there and argue with a Crow Master who's in full badass paranoid assassin mode (with bonus terrified former thrall thrown in, I'd guess).

And I'm most impressed with the courage/fear dichotomy. I usually have a very low tolerance for character who are X but can't see that they are X (where X is often "beautiful" but is occasionally "skilled"). Shianni has courage out the wazoo - except when faced with physical threat. But since that particular kind of 'courage under fire' is generally held to be the most superior kind, I can actually believe that she doesn't recognize her habit of standing up to unjust authority figures is itself a kind of courage. That's different, that's just being stubborn, not really brave, right?

Did she fight the darkspawn at the Alienage with... hurr-durr, let me go back to page one... yes, Zevran remembers her fighting darkspawn. I would wonder how that fits into her personal narrative? Of course, I guess if she still felt afraid while she was fighting, she wouldn't think that it counted?

I love Shianni as a character because she's one of *very* few NPCs in Dragon Age who is both a regular person (not a badass warrrior, rogue or mage) *and* takes an active role in trying to do good. (Brother Genitivi and mmmaybe Brother Burkel are the only other two I can bring to mind at the moment.) I'm very very happy to see that carrying over, and so well. It's got to be challenging to make a member of the adventuring squad not be an adventurer, and yet still be relevant.... AND not fall into kiddie TV "element of heart" ow-my-teeth sugarland.

Of course, you're not only doing it, you're making it look easy. Damn, I'm jealous! XD So glad you're writing again!

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Hm... to be honest - I was happy about "The Kill", because I thought it would be a story for Zevran and about Zevran. Now it seems it's more a story about Xai and Zevran is only a peripheral fígure. I guess it's the way stories go - sometimes they develope their own dynamics.I'm just a bit sad about it. :( Nevertheless I'll remain a faithful reader, because I just love the way you write. :)

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Thanks Mara! And don't worry, there's plenty of story left for Zevran. ;) I'm working with a larger cast than The Hunt had though, so a few other characters will have tales to tell along the way.

@Corker - How does one deal with so much <3 ? :o Thanks! ^_^ I'm really trying to keep Shianni realistic, since some stuff just doesn't go away in a hurry, and "Now you'll be awesone!" montages tend to irk me, hehe. Also:

That's different, that's just being stubborn, not really brave, right?


Right ;) And FWIW, when Shianni was fighting darkspawn it was with a bow. Distance probably helped :/ and she wouldn't be able to say if she successfully killed any either (Asleena called in the Dalish archers at the alienage).

We love Shianni for the same reasons, I see. :) I think I said somewhere once that I don't like giving characters superpowers and having them succeed at stuff by virtue of them being artifically elevated above everyone else. Another way of saying it is that I have a soft spot for normal people (or as normal as you can get in fantasy) trying to make a difference, and I definitely see Shianni as one of these. I can't say if she'll never get over her fear or master a sword in time, but I'm loving writing her. :) And if I ever do write her as sugarland 'cute', please hit me. XD

Part 23 - Escape Routes

With the help of Kamator and a handsome Fereldan soldier, Zevran’s shoulder had been redressed in a fresh poultice and he’d been re-armed in the Tevinter mail by the time he saw Xai Merras returning to the estate—by himself.

“My thanks,” the Crow murmured to the elven slave, gritting his teeth against a flinch as Kamator fastened his weapons harness and straightened the scabbards across his back. His shoulder needed stitches and more attention than a simple dressing, but he could hold out until they camped in the evening, of that he was grimly determined. He’d ingested a mild painkiller to make sure, but dressed or not his right arm would be useless for a time. Xai’s sword had done quite a bit of damage.

Just when he was about to call out a question as to where Shianni and the other one were, and what was Xai thinking leaving the girl on her own with an unknown, the two elves appeared some distance behind him. Zevran closed his mouth and gave the former master a quizzical look as he went for the horses without a glance or word for anyone, forsaking his blood-spattered mage robes for the grey leathers beneath. While Zevran watched, Xai slung the robes over a saddle, paused a moment with one arm braced against the animal’s side, then took a drink from a handy wineskin.

Zevran nodded to Kamator. He glanced at where Ciela Tabris stood a fair distance away, sword drawn and angled to catch her own reflection as she reconcealed her lyrium brand, shrugged to himself and headed towards Xai. The girl had rejected Shianni’s proposal that Zevran assist with the application, and who was he to argue?

“I don’t think she likes me,” he remarked conversationally to Xai, more for want of an opener than as a serious complaint.

But the Warden said: “Good. I’m tired of people liking you.”

Zevran hummed. “And here I was expecting a witty rejoinder, not something that sounded suspiciously like honesty, my friend.”

“Where’s the file you stole from the tower?”

“What f—?”

Xai moved suddenly. It was only a fraction of motion, a subtle shift of position that was nonetheless visible to a trained Crow. Zevran’s posture reacted automatically, but anyone who was watching the two of them from afar would have seen very little.

“Don’t play games with me, Zevran. I like games, and you won’t appreciate the stakes.”

“Truly? Are these stakes of yours lower or higher than fleeing the inner city before the magisters trap us here?”

Xai’s gaze flicked towards the dark silhouette of the mage tower jutting into the blue sky. Then, without saying anything further, he picked up his mage robe and strode across the courtyard towards Ciela, who had finished masking her face and was talking with Shianni and the new thrall. He got a mixed reception. The thrall backed away, Shianni straightened and gave him a defiant glare, and only Ciela seemed to welcome his presence. After a brief exchange Shianni nodded curtly and took the jar of make-up from Ciela, while the new thrall put Xai’s robe on. Zevran immediately guessed what that meant: the elf was a mage. Xai had been intending to bluff his way through the gates with his knowledge of Arcanum and Minrathous customs, and if necessary use of a few carnivale tricks to imitate magic, which of course had been the major weak point of their plan. They’d been gambling on Xai’s silver tongue to get them past that particular hurdle without having to actually jump it.

“I am not convinced it is a good idea,” he said to Shianni when she came over, leaving the three thralls standing together. “Your cousin and this new elf—”

“Enansal,” Shianni supplied.

“—they have only just been freed, and they are scared, I can see it. If the guards challenge him, that mage may well fall apart on us.”

“How’d you know he’s a mage?”

“Because I‘m as intelligent as I am ridiculously handsome?”

Shianni rolled her eyes a bit and folded her arms. “I didn’t even know mages could be slaves. I thought they were all powerful lords and ladies here.”

Zevran had not thought about it much himself, although he had asked a few questions for curiosity’s sake. “Shayle tells me only the strong rule, which makes the Imperium much the same as the rest of the world, yes? Not all mages are casters of mighty spells. Some are weak, or merely ordinary. So, my dear, what have you learned of this Enansal of yours?”

“I don’t know what sort of mage he is or if he’s any good, but he says his mistress sent him after you hoping he’d escape. You were already rescuing my cousin, see?”

“Did he say anything else?” Zevran asked, concealing his incredulity. No wonder Xai was in a foul mood. Shianni had brought a spy into their midst.

“I told him to tell me everything he told Xai. He said that magister Ezio—the one who attacked me and who Xai sold you to? He says Ezio is dead and Magistra Phaedra has made sure of it. And when Xai asked why she tried to stop you all from leaving—she wanted to talk to you or something? He said she knew you were there and wanted to hire you for an assassination job. Enansal doesn’t know who she wanted you to kill, but she’s in something called the Senate and he thinks it’s political. How’d she know you were there? I thought you were disguised.”

“Ezio used a phylactery to track my movements, and Phaedra was with him.” Far too late to wonder if getting into the magistra’s employ would have made escape an easier feat, and he wasn’t sure what to think of Ezio being dead except to hope it was true. There was no way Enansal could know for certain, was there, if he had been at Phaedra’s side while Ezio controlled his thrall from several storeys above? “Considering how we first met,” he added, “she clenching her fist and I being crushed by her magic, I am rather surprised she would consider me for a job.”

“That’s what I said. Sort of. Enansal didn’t know she’d attacked you, but he knew you’d killed Farian—that was the thrall’s name. Farian had been Phaedra’s lover.”

Zevran chuckled humourlessly. “Ah. So this is what they call a sex slave in the Imperium, eh?”

“Andraste’s ass, Zev,” Shianni went to gather the reins of two of the horses, “you don’t really believe that, do you? A woman forcing men into sex?”

“Why not? It is not only men who do unspeakable things to women, my dear. The strong do as they please while the rest of us must get by with our wits and, on occasion, a vial of deadly poison or strategically placed dagger.”

Shianni looked uncertain. “Enansal would have said something if Phaedra was…cruel to him.” she said at last. “Grab those two, will you? Thanks for the help,” she added to the guards, who nodded (one wished them luck). “Anyway, he comes from somewhere called Cumberland in Nevarra. I promised we’d help get him home.”

“Of course you did. And so we shall.”

Shianni gave him a suspicious glare. “That’s it? You’re not going to say it’s a bad idea, or to watch my back in case he tries something, or that we don’t have enough horses?”

“Why go over ground I am sure our friend Xai has already covered?” Zevran asked with a wry smile. He actually hadn’t considered the horses, and now that he was he found himself smirking. “You have not learned how to ride double yet, have you?”

**

That didn’t happen—at least, not yet.

Enansal rode in the lead with Xai and Kamator flanking him on foot and jogging to keep up. Xai had retained his leather armour, but thrown a Grey Wardens tunic over the top. The other elves, Zevran, Shianni and Ciela, were all mounted and following closely in their guard attire.

The south gate, at least, did not seem to have been closed, but those on watch were more alert than gate guards tended to be. Someone had tipped them off.

“Not something that happens every day,” one of the guards said, studying faces. “Slaves breaking out of the Circle Tower and golems running amok.”

“First I’ve heard of it,” Xai replied, handing his papers over. “The Grey Wardens are the last to hear about anything except darkspawn.”

“Right, right…” a second guard said, while her companion circled the party. Zevran noted two more dealing with entrants to the inner city. “And your compound is nowhere near the square, is it?”

Xai flashed her a small smile that indicated he was aware of the question’s purpose. “It’s on Verity Street, almost opposite The High Dragon tavern. We are headed for Weisshaupt, ser, on business. Mage Ansal here has volunteered his retinue to assist in a slight detour I had in mind, and I was briefing them all at the compound of what could be expected. We are also in something of a hurry to cross the Valarian Fields and get into the foothills before it grows dark.”

That was Zevran’s cue. He plucked a small pouch from his belt and tossed it to the other guard, distracting him from scrutinising the party too closely. Shayle might be escaping the city separately from them, but she’d left more than enough lyrium for bribes. As the contents were inspected and the guards remarked on how brave they all were assisting the Grey Wardens against the darkspawn, Zevran wondered how she was faring. The dwarf might never let him touch her, but at least she was an entertaining companion. His present company had to learn how to relax or take a joke once in a while.

**

"Move it, woman! By the Dragon's Chains, have you never had to run a single day in your life?"

Shayle, gasping and wincing as she staggered gamely after Gerta, nevertheless found enough breath to unleash a wheezing retort of, "If I was still a golem, I would leave it choking dust!"

"'If I was still a golem.'" The surface dwarf mimicked sneeringly as she jogged along ahead of her. "You whine about that so often I wonder why you bothered."

"I--don't--whine!" Shayle protested between panting breaths.

"You whine worse than any man I've ever met, and I've been around humans my entire life so that's saying something."

Shayle saved her breath this time, distracted by trying to figure out the cause of a stabbing pain low in her left side that jabbed agony with her every step. She was sure it wasn't her armour and she knew for a fact there was no injury there, so why was it hurting? Oh, what did it matter? Everything was hurting, her legs ached and felt like they wanted to drop off, and no matter how much air she tried to gulp her stupid body never seemed satisfied. Between injuries, disgusting bodily functions and absurd biological urges, how did people manage?

Honestly, the only benefit she'd derived from her transformation was that birds no longer tried to land on her. As wonderful as that was, it was hardly a substitution for all she'd given up: superior strength, unparalleled endurance, a body that weapons bounced off rather than sank into, and the ability to silence imbeciles with a single swing of her fist.

"If I was still a golem--"

"Old Gods! Will you shut up about being a rutting golem!"

Shayle glowered at the back of the dwarf's head but continued on without further comment.

Gerta was leading her, by the light of a strange blue lantern, down an underground passage the dwarves had dug out beneath Minrathous during a long-dead age when the Tevinter Imperium and Dwarven Kingdom had been allies. The tunnels were wide and high, large enough for a juggernaut to stride down, and Shayle had little doubt it must have been an old trade route the ancient dwarves and humans had used to deal with one another. Officially the tunnel opened up within the inner walls of Minrathous; the main entrance, the ones the magelords knew about, could be sealed via a huge dweomer-encrusted slab of metal and dwarven engineering, and was always guarded. But Gerta's group had known of at least one alternate access point via a dwarf-owned estate's larder. Shayle had no idea if dwarves or darkspawn had mined that smaller tunnel, but didn't care. All that mattered was that she'd paid good lyrium for safe passage out of the city so she could regroup with the others beyond the walls, and Gerta never asked many questions if the pay was good. Shayle hadn’t decided if she liked that about her or found it disturbing.

The main tunnel connected to a bustling thaig before long, fully lit and bustling with activity. Kolbrunar Thaig was built on the rubble of whatever had stood here before the First Blight had claimed it. Dwarves displaced from their homes after the Deep Roads had been claimed by the darkspawn, surfacers looking to move back below ground, casteless who thought they could do better, all had carved a living into the stone here. With lyrium deposits long ago mined to exhaustion or too perilous to reach, they survived by selling their talents as enchanters, runecrafters, stonemasons, gemcutters, guards, even as servants and slaves. The number of dwarves in the last two categories, Shayle had heard it whispered, was always growing. While the dwarven population in Orzammar declined, whether due to the constant proximity to that cursed lava, exposure to lyrium, or skirmishes with the darkspawn, here it steadily climbed. The more dwarves there were, the less room, the more hungry, the more crime, and the thaig had expanded as numbers swelled. Kolbrunar had its own Dust Town, its own caste system, and its own elite who thought the best way to get rid of gangue was to sell it to mages.

Or to golems looking for new bodies.

With a shiver, Shayle realised she didn’t like it down here. It must be the height of the ceiling that was causing this. Yes. It seemed much further up now that she was walking so much closer to the ground. And if it fell on her! Oh, it didn’t bear thinking about!

The source of her disquiet solved yet refusing to abate, she trundled after Gerta as she navigated the outer avenues of the thaig. Save the odd backward glance to check she was keeping up, and frequent eyerolls to show her disgust at Shayle’s slowness, the dwarf ignored her and made no attempt to talk. Though after a while Shayle swore the other woman picked up speed just to spite her. She panted her way after in the heavy mail she’d insisted on wearing, wincing with every pang of that dratted stabbing sensation in her side, weighed down further by the massive hammer strapped to her back, and just as she was getting so exhausted and wrung out her pride was about to crack for the sake of begging a minute’s rest, Gerta rounded the corner of a stone building into a shadowy recess and Shayle, with a heartfelt groan, staggered hastily after her lest she be left behind.

It was a very shadowy recess, she noted…but only after stepping within.

Pigeon cra--!

“Grab her!”

Four pairs of hands grappled her; she didn’t even have time to put her arms up before she was knocked to the ground and pinned. Her outraged roar was efficiently thwarted by a thick bundle of rags shoved so far into her mouth her eyes bulged and she gagged, but she also stopped struggling.

“Good girl.” Gerta stood over her, arms folded, a look of false solicitousness adorning her face. “Since you’re tired, how about my boys carry you the rest of the way? You’d like that, wouldn’t you?” Shayle let her expression of loathing do the talking but Gerta only laughed and snapped her fingers at the shady cretins holding her down.

Fortunately plate armour didn’t give much opportunity for groping, so she wasn’t forced to experience being pawed as she was frogmarched through the dank, be-puddled backstreets of Kolbrunar. It smelled disgusting in this part of the thaig, rancid with an odour that almost rivalled Minrathous’ slave pens down by the docks, and there was a constant dripping noise. Had she not heard someone say that there were sewers beneath the city, where all that—that waste was sent below ground?

She’d have given this horrific idea a great deal more thought if the dwarves holding her weren’t taking up most of her attention.

The ghastly aromas gave way after a couple more minutes of marching, as did the buildings and dim lights of Kolbrunar. They came to a huge metal door which was swung partially open to reveal a very long tunnel that stretched away into absolute blackness. The five dwarves loitering nearby with torches, tankards and a broached keg came to some semblance of attention when they saw they had company.

“This is the passage I told you about,” Gerta said to Shayle, motioning for one of her lackeys to remove the gag. “Follow the directions I gave and don’t get lost, and you’ll get to that exit point in the High Reaches. Now to discuss payment.”

“It was already paid!” Shayle spat as soon as she was able, enraged. “It has no right to demand more!”

“This is your safe conduct tax, Lady Cadash. Did you think you could sail that golem shell away without me hearing about it? Hand over the lyrium, or I’ll have you cut out of your armour and we’ll look for it ourselves.”

“I don’t have any!” Shayle struggled, strongly enough that the two dwarves holding her had to be helped by a third. “Why would it think I need lyrium down here?”

Gerta came closer to stand right in front of her. “I know you don’t have all of it, Shayle. You stashed it with your friends. But you do have some. Odar shaped a nugget for you to wear as a necklace. I don’t know what it’s worth to you, but to me, that much lyrium could see me and my friends here through some pretty hard times. Oh, and I’ll also be taking those golem control rods you boosted from the mages.”

“No!” The rods were slipped from her belt by one of her captors and tossed one by one to Gerta. “It promised it would take me to a forge so they could be destroyed. This is outrageous! Those are the spirits of dwarves you’re enslaving!”

“There’s no profit in just letting people go free,” Gerta said patiently, examining the etched blue cylinders with professional interest, “be they golems or dwarves. Honestly, Shayle, what right do you have to go judging me, or the magisters even?” She poked the former golem’s forehead with the tip of a rod. It felt cold against her skin. “That’s a slave’s body you’re walking around in. You killed her for it. You think Brenn wanted to die?”

Shayle’s mouth went dry. No one had ever come out and said it to her, until now. No one except the elder mage, Wynne, who had warned her against this path, then left her to tread it alone.

“Surely you can appreciate that this is wrong, Shayle. It’s blood magic for starters, and you’re stealing another woman’s body!”

“So I must be trapped in this golem shell forever? How else did you think I would be set free?”

“I don’t know. But I didn’t expect this. I urge you to consider more options before proceeding.”

“This will hardly be the first person I ever killed. Besides, it’s Tevinter. Slaves die here all the time. What is one more mortal death? Why do you fight so hard for a dwarf you do not know?”

Wynne looked up at her sadly and shook her head. “Perhaps I am fighting for the dwarf I thought I did know.”

“Out with the lyrium, Shayle.”

Moving woodenly as she was released, Shayle fished out the necklace. The chunk of processed lyrium had been taken from the heart of her golem and expertly polished into a flat disc. Etched into the surface was the ancestral design of House Cadash. Shayle had remembered seeing it when Asleena took her to her home thaig back in Ferelden, and wanted something solid to remind her both of the monument and the place she had come from so long ago.

Gerta took it, and handed her the blue lantern in return while gesturing to the tunnel. “Pleasure doing business with you.”

Shayle was shoved ungently into the yawning passage, feeling even smaller than before. She regained her balance a few staggering steps inside to glance back, just in time to see the seal swing shut with a resounding boom.

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DreGregoire

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Tsk... tsk... those two ex-crows just had to go at it again. Not that I mind of course. ahha. Nice addition. :)
Oddly enough I can totally picture in my mind that subtle movement. A glance, a slight movement, a twitching of a muscle all signs of danger *giggles*

Modifié par DreGregoire, 27 décembre 2011 - 12:35 .


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Okay so I totally jumped up and down and cheered when I got my email alert! SQUEEEE! Thanks Shadow!:wub:

Oh Shayle/Shale...

Modifié par erynnar, 27 janvier 2012 - 09:34 .


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It was time to speak about Shayles moral decision... And it's hard to see that she more regrets to have lost her Golem power than that another dwarf had to die for her. :( I could imagine that's the reason why Wynne had left her.

Nice interaction between Xai and Zevran in the first part. :)

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^.^ I'm feeling some serious Zevran and Xai withdrawal, so I reread some of this. Still loved every minute of it. Thanks for sharing. :)