Hey everybody, as I mentioned in the running fanfiction thread. I am doing a rewrite of this story. I will be posting it on fanfiction as a chapter book but for right now I figured I would throw some of it on this thread. Just little pieces of it here and there. I hope that it will give people a better insight into the most spoiled grey warden to ever grace the dragon age world ahahah. Enjoy as this first tease sens us into Aonghas' past.
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Apprentices in the Circle of Magi
Fifteen year old Jowan stood just outside Enchanter Irving’s study watching for the upper tower door guard to return from the stock room. Jowan stiffened as he saw the templar guard and he whispered urgently, “Aonghas the guard is returning.” Aonghas didn’t answer right away and Jowan hissed louder, “Aonghas, the guard. I don’t want to get punished.”
Jowan heard a soft swearing and then a triumphant, “Got it. Go stand on the stairs like you are debating going up and quickly, Jowan.” Jowan hastily scurried across and down the hall to mount the stairs as the guard passed the chantry chapel.
Jowan shifted nervously as the guard looked at him with suspicion. “What are you doing here, boy?”
Jowan saw thirteen year old Aonghas pop his head out of the doorway and gaze his way. Jowan looked over his shoulder at the door behind him trying to keep the templar guard’s attention, “What’s up there?” The guard looked to the door and then back to Jowan. Jowan shivered in nervousness but was surprised at how well he was handling things. “I mean I know what I’ve been told but since I’m not allowed up there I can’t help but think there is more to it.”
As the guard began to speak Jowan could see Aonghas move swiftly down the hall and the younger boy stopped by the chantry chapel to make it look like he had come from within. Jowan didn’t really pay attention to what the guard told him but he was sure it was the same thing everybody else had told them, but at that moment Aonghas called out. “There you are, Jowan. I’m done in the chapel. Let’s go before we are late to class.”
The guard turned and gave Aonghas a hard look, “Keep your voice down, boy.” The templar turned back to Jowan and smiled, “Best get a move on.”
Jowan dashed down the stairs and joined Aonghas in a hurried walk for the stock room and the lower level stairs where the apprentices lived.
Ten minutes later the two were sitting on Aonghas’ bunk laughing as they reviewed the event when an older apprentice sauntered up to them with his friends crowding around. “So, love birds, did you get what I asked for?”
“I’ve told you before not to confuse mine and Jowan’s friendship with your perverted fantasies, Jason,” answered Aonghas in a snide tone and he glared fiercely at the older mage apprentice. As the older boy began to look dangerous Aonghas spoke again, “Of course we have it. Do you have the coin?”
The older boy grinned in pleasure and stretched out his hand to show the silver piece. Aonghas reached behind him and pulled out the scroll the older boy had requested he recover for him. The older boy snatched the scroll from him and then closed his hands over the silver before pocketing it.
“Hey, you better give us that coin,” shouted Jowan in anger.
“Watch your tone with me, Jowan, or I’ll give you a beating,” the older boy sneered.
Jowan flushed in anger as the group began to walk away and he was about to speak up when Aonghas spoke. “You will either pay us the agreed upon amount or I will destroy the scroll.” Jowan turned to look at Aonghas to find the younger boy sitting calmly with eyes blazing in fury.
Jowan felt himself pushed aside as Jason stormed over to stand towering over Aonghas. “What did you say to me? You would dare to threaten me?” Jason switched the scroll to his left hand and raised his right hand; preparing to hit Aonghas. Jowan was about to defend his friend despite the consequences when he saw Aonghas gesture and the scroll burst into flame. Jason cried out in pain and dropped the burning scroll. The older boy danced around shaking his hand while making pained noises.
“Nobody makes a deal with me and then breaks it.” Jowan was glad at that moment that he was Aonghas' friend and not his enemy, but he was afraid the older boys would ignore the danger they were in and attack Aonghas.
“What’s burning,” yelled the dormitory’s senior mage as he and the dormitory’s templar guard rushed into the dormitory? The senior mage took in the situation and then quickly moved to Jason and put a gentle freezing spell on his burned hand. “How did this happen?” Nobody answered the mage and he grunted and squatted next to the ashes of the scroll to inspect them.
The templar had already noted the ashes of the scroll and was busy looking closely at each apprentice with his piercing stare. Jowan felt himself shift uncomfortably as the templar stared him down, but the templar dismissed him and looked to Aonghas. Jowan glanced quickly at Aonghas as the templar continued to stare at the younger boy. The younger apprentice sat intently as he watched the senior mage poke at the ruins of the scroll and as the senior mage shrugged in frustration at the lack of evidence a smile of triumph graced Aonghas’ lips. Jowan then realized that Aonghas wasn’t aware of the templar watching him. Jowan moved to block the view of the templar but it was too late because the templar strode forward and moved Jowan gently out of his way before grabbing hold of Aonghas’ arm and hauling him to his feet. Aonghas looked up at the templar in surprised alarm as the templar spoke. “Let’s take the injured boy and this one to the first enchanter and get to the bottom of this.”
Senior Mage Aaron seemed surprised for a moment but then he nodded and gripping Jason’s uninjured arm he lead him out of the room ahead of the templar. Jowan watched Aonghas dig his heels in for a moment before a sharp yank by Templar Knight Mason had him moving out of the room. Jowan could hear Aonghas moments after the door closed, “Unhand me. You are not allowed to touch me.” Jowan heard the templar speak in a warning tone but he couldn’t hear what was said but whatever it was it silenced his friend.
Aonghas shuddered as the templar Mason threatened him, “Be silent or I’ll give you reason to cry out against my hands on you.” Aonghas wasn’t totally sure what the templar meant but he stopped resisting and instead moved his legs of his own free will. As they moved quickly through the halls Aonghas found himself hard pressed to keep up with the longer legged people and as a result he kept receiving yanks on his captured arm to keep him even with the others. Aonghas could feel his arm starting to ache as they drew closer to the study.
The four paused outside of the First Enchanters study as a shouting mage was dragged out of the room by two templars. “You can’t keep me here forever, Irving. I haven’t done anything wrong but take a short trip. Other mages get to travel!”
Aonghas watched the mage being dragged down the hall while fighting the grip of the templars the whole way. Aonghas flinched when the templar gripping his arm leaned over him to speak quietly so only he could hear, “Maybe you would like to join him in the cells beneath the tower?”
The Knight Commander exited the study and paused to speak to the templar holding onto Aonghas. “Is this something I need to be involved with?” The templar respectfully told him that he had it under control and the Knight Commander headed to the stairs and disappeared into the upper tower.
“Who is next,” questioned an exasperated sounding First Enchanter Irving. Aonghas found himself hustled into the office after the mage and apprentice. Senior Mage Aaron entered first and released the hold he had on Jason. Aonghas shook his arm thinking that the templar would let him go, but the templar gave him a warning look and tightened his grip slightly. “What have we here, Aaron?” Irving took in the sight of the injured mage apprentice, “A training injury?”
“This happened in the dormitory, First Enchanter.” Irving look surprised at what Aaron told him and he turned to give a stern look to Jason as Aaron continued. “This is a burn from Jason holding a scroll that was set on fire.
“There is no magic allowed in the dormitory. Tell me what happened, Jason.” Aonghas glared fiercely at the back of Jason’s head until a painful tightening of the grip on his arm made him yelp and squirm. Irving’s attention was immediately on him. “What does the child have to do with this,” Irving questioned the other two adults?
Knight Templar Mason cleared his throat before speaking in his deep rumbling tones, “It is my belief that ‘this child’ is the one who caused the scroll to burn. When Senior Mage Aaron was unable to find any discernable evidence on the scroll this one had a self-satisfied smirk on his face.”
Irving frowned and then turned to Jason, “Is Aonghas the one who burned the scroll.” Aonghas watched as Jason nodded and then hung his head. “I see. Aaron, please take Jason to the healer to get his hand seen to.” Aonghas watched intently and when Jason looked up at him as he passed by Aonghas gave him a threatening look. Mason gave Aonghas a harsh shake that pulled another yelp out of the thirteen year old. “That will do, Ser Mason. Please return to guarding the dormitory.”
Aonghas rubbed his aching arm as the templar left the room and then he looked up to find the First Enchanter watching him carefully. “I didn’t do it,” Aonghas declared raising his chin in defiance. “Why did you let that templar manhandle me?”
“The templar was doing his duty as he saw fit. I can tell you are not being honest with me and I am very disappointed. Whatever happened between you and Jason is not to happen again. There is no magic use allowed in the dormitory, but you know this.” Aonghas opened and closed his mouth a few times trying to think of something to say but First Enchanter Irving continued without waiting for his response. “You are only allowed on the first floor for the next two weeks and I will inform your instructors to give you extra work to keep you busy during the two weeks.” Aonghas managed to look put upon and defiant at the same time as he opened his mouth to speak, but Irving held up a hand silencing him. “Go back to your dormitory now before you get yourself in more trouble.”
Aonghas thought about speaking up and arguing with the First Enchanter but one look at the mages stern face; which seemed to threatened further punishment if the mage wasn’t obeyed, made Aonghas nearly run out of the room.
Modifié par DreGregoire, 10 janvier 2011 - 07:35 .