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[Nihlus Kryik]

my fan made chronicles for nihlus is finally done, if you would like to read go for the links:
part 1:social.bioware.com/988946/blog/4939/
part 2:social.bioware.com/988946/blog/4988/
part 3:social.bioware.com/988946/blog/6725/

please leave a comment

[Spartas Husky]

will do after reading

[Nihlus Kryik]

ok

[LuxDragon]

Wow... Um...



Look, as interested as I am, I have a thing for proper grammer. As it stands, I really can't read past the first line without being really annoyed. Sorry.

[batman22]

Someone has way too much time on there hands. Nihlus chronicles?????

[Nihlus Kryik]

yes i like nihlus and yes i have veeery much time, its vacation u know?

[Nihlus Kryik]

have everybody read them yet?

(well at least many persons)

[Schneidend]

This is terrible. It looks like a transcription from a plane's black box or a 911 call. You've got a bunch of meaningless dialogue with no description of the setting or the action.



Please delete this and start over. It can't be fixed, just delete it. Read a novel or two, and then come back with a proper format.

[JowyXXV]

Ah, gotta love the mindless hatred and rudeness the faceless anonymity of the internet generates!

Fyi, constructive criticism is more effective than just flaming the **** out of someone.

Maybe he's just young or new to writing.... no need to take a dump on him, sheesh, it's not like he raped a prostitute or something.  You're like the Comic Book Guy in his underwear looking for people online much younger than him to flame to make his pitiful life feel more important.

Also, I find it rather appropo that your avatar looks like a complete douchebag in his picture.

Modifié par JowyXXV, 14 août 2010 - 04:20 .

[TheKillerAngel]

lol, when I think of fan fiction *that* is what comes to mind

[Granville8]

I shed a tear.

[Nihlus Kryik]

thank you for your comments