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[Hedera]

 We shall see.  And I do approve the Freezepop reference 

Edit: TOP Femshep! 

Modifié par cgrimm54, 04 décembre 2010 - 03:25 .

[Skyline_Stanza]

As I'm curious to see what people think, anyone mind taking a peek at my shortfic "Cold Sad and Restless?" Links in my sig. Feedback's appreciated!

[Hedera]

Skyline_Stanza wrote...

As I'm curious to see what people think, anyone mind taking a peek at my shortfic "Cold Sad and Restless?" Links in my sig. Feedback's appreciated!

I read this yesterday, last time you posted it, and I really liked it.  It's very well done! 

[Skyline_Stanza]

cgrimm54 wrote...

Skyline_Stanza wrote...

As I'm curious to see what people think, anyone mind taking a peek at my shortfic "Cold Sad and Restless?" Links in my sig. Feedback's appreciated!

I read this yesterday, last time you posted it, and I really liked it.  It's very well done! 

 
Thanks, Grim. Means a lot.
 
I've gotten positive feedback on it, and it's really upping my confidence in my writing. Anything you think I need to improve upon?

[mellifera]

thompsmt wrote...
I like.

Paragon infiltrators can convince you those long range victims just committed suicide.

Hahaha, yes xD


This time he actually committed suicide though


"Every time I talk to you, I get a sunburn."

[Hedera]

Skyline_Stanza wrote...

cgrimm54 wrote...

Skyline_Stanza wrote...

As I'm curious to see what people think, anyone mind taking a peek at my shortfic "Cold Sad and Restless?" Links in my sig. Feedback's appreciated!

I read this yesterday, last time you posted it, and I really liked it.  It's very well done! 

 
Thanks, Grim. Means a lot.
 
I've gotten positive feedback on it, and it's really upping my confidence in my writing. Anything you think I need to improve upon?

Uh, well maybe if there are any grammatical errors?  I like your style.  It's very descriptive.  

[thompsmt]

An interesting item Skyline. The other question: did Shepard see the one who didn't make it in those two years?

[Skyline_Stanza]

thompsmt wrote...

 The other question: did Shepard see the one who didn't make it in those two years?

Hahaha...I don't think I quite follow? What is it that you're trying to ask?

If you've read the short, then Cam's disscussion should make the answer obvious.
 
@Grim: Thanks. I always tend to think I could do better when I try and describe things like emotions, places and people. Apparently, I'm doing better than I thought! But there's always room for improvement!

Modifié par Skyline_Stanza, 04 décembre 2010 - 03:53 .

[thompsmt]

Hmm. Good point. If I was one of The Powers That Be here, I'd leave that as an open area for the players to decide.



I'm not sure I'll ever make up my mind on what happened during that period.

[Hedera]

thompsmt wrote...

An interesting item Skyline. The other question: did Shepard see the one who didn't make it in those two years?

thompsmt is wondering whether Femshep saw the one who died on Virmire while she was, well, deceased.  
I think that's less a question of canon and more of personal interpretations of death and such.  (That in turn leads to religion, which is a touchy subject that would not be on topic or resolvable.)  But an interesting question nonetheless.  I think it's up to the player.

[kaimanaMM]

Love Ninja!  <3

[mellifera]

I took Thane with me on Mordin's loyalty mission wearing that outfit. It took every fibre in my body not to yell "YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH" when they were standing over the dead human body. Damn CSI meme...

[JamieCOTC]

Skyline_Stanza wrote...

As I'm curious to see what people think, anyone mind taking a peek at my shortfic "Cold Sad and Restless?" Links in my sig. Feedback's appreciated!

That was very well done.  I liked it.  Very sweet.  It's nice to read fics like this, to see Shep being human. 

Ironically, I've been outlining a Kaiden/Shep story w/ similar tones.  It won't be as heartwarming as this one, though. 

Modifié par JamieCOTC, 04 décembre 2010 - 04:31 .

[Ponyoyo]

Awww. I really liked it, Skyline. (: I liked the emotion you got across.

[Cyansomnia]

yukidama wrote...

I took Thane with me on Mordin's loyalty mission wearing that outfit. It took every fibre in my body not to yell "YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH" when they were standing over the dead human body. Damn CSI meme...

Hahaha.  The outfit is cool, but I'm not big on the glasses.  Same with Jack's alternate.  I like to see their eyes.

[mellifera]

Yeah, I don't like the glasses either >.< They don't spend much time in those outfits.

[Skyline_Stanza]

yukidama wrote...

Yeah, I don't like the glasses either >.< They don't spend much time in those outfits.

I would love the outfits more if there wasn't glasses. Jack's outfit suits her WAAAAAY better than the other two. Her concept art on DA is actually pretty interesing. They messed with the concept of her having dyed hair, and some of the outfits were really neatly designed. I may even consider having Jack wear something like that in my fic. 

We'll see, however.  

And to those who've read Cold, sad and restless: thank you for the wonderful compliments. They mean the world to me.

[ADLegend21]

Sad femshepis sad.


Jacob: Talking to Williams on Horizon...
Garrus: Heavy risk...
Shep: I'll kill you both.
G&J: *silence*

Modifié par ADLegend21, 04 décembre 2010 - 06:09 .

[Hedera]

 Double that...

[thompsmt]

Seems like every FemShep likes her Turian best friend to be around when she's going to meet another old friend.

[ADLegend21]

thompsmt wrote...

Seems like every FemShep likes her Turian best friend to be around when she's going to meet another old friend.

it's sorta a meta-game. you'd think an old crew member wouldbe enough to talk VS into beleiving you. sadly, no dice.

[syllogi]

Aislinn Trista wrote...

yukidama wrote...

I took Thane with me on Mordin's loyalty mission wearing that outfit. It took every fibre in my body not to yell "YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH" when they were standing over the dead human body. Damn CSI meme...

Hahaha.  The outfit is cool, but I'm not big on the glasses.  Same with Jack's alternate.  I like to see their eyes.

Haha, I must admit that I find drell eyes slightly creepy, but Jack's eyes are gorgeous and should not be covered.  That was the main reason I didn't want the appearance pack.  

And since we are sharing sad Sheps...


"We couldn't even exchange cell numbers?"  

Edit:  and yeah, I always bring Garrus for the extra bit of dialogue.  It's a shame we couldn't have Tali on Horizon, too...

Modifié par TeenZombie, 04 décembre 2010 - 05:44 .

[Cyansomnia]

 I love Drell eyes.  



Poor Trista.  She misses her Kaidan.  

[ELE08]

thompsmt wrote...

Seems like every FemShep likes her Turian best friend to be around when she's going to meet another old friend.

It's true.





Hmmm.  Drell eyes.  I do find them a little creepy...but I like Thane, so I don't mind them so much.

Currently taking Lena though ME1, since she deserves her own import save.
Horizon, Cerberus?  Ah, the good old days.

Modifié par ELE08, 04 décembre 2010 - 06:08 .

[leggywillow]

yukidama wrote...

I took Thane with me on Mordin's loyalty mission wearing that outfit. It took every fibre in my body not to yell "YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH" when they were standing over the dead human body. Damn CSI meme...

Meme?!  It's a way of life!  A very corny, overused way of life that is probably going to cause my husband to divorce me...

And something on-topic... does anyone have any non-battle stories for Shepard's ME1 face scars?  I was trying to think up a story for one of the tiny eyebrow scars one of my Shep's has, and of course I keep referring back to Elysium/Mindoir/Akuze/Torfan.  But I actually have a chicken pox scar that looks a lot like it (not as long) IRL, which got me to thinking:

Does anyone have any mundane stories behind your Shepard's scars?  Falling off a bicycle?  Alien chicken pox?