AwesomeName wrote...
Okay, I already posted this in GD, but I figured it might be better appreciated here - it's just a story idea that's sort of tied in with how I want ME3 to end (see sig).
Important: listen to this - skip to 6:30 - and read:
Shepard is badly beaten, alone and naked in the dark - most of her companions are lost - the Reapers are whispering in her ear - she struggles as hard as any human possibly can to get to the light at the end of the tunnel - everything she's ever prepared for has been for this moment - the whispers are now screams - crawling forward, she desperately clings to the thought of all the people she's fighting for - the machines try relentlessly to crush her mind - she screams in pain - she almost doesn't make it - then one thought lances through the chaos: a figure standing in the void of her mind.. the figure turns to look at Shepard.. Shepard cries when she realises who it is.. and then the figure smiles at her - the Reapers make one final push - Shepard makes one final push back - she barely reaches the end of the tunnel - she nearly can't take it anymore - through the tears, she smiles, "I love you, Liara..." - she turns the failsafe key. (wait for 7:35**)
Oh I know... very cliched. But they could do it right.
**That should've taken a minute to read.
EDIT: just a note that there's plenty of room for a happy or sad epilogue afterwards. It doesn't necessarily end badly for Shep here.
DBL EDIT: inspiration taken from The Fountain, Desmond Hume in Lost and ME: Retribution
Congratulations. That song alone has returned my inspiration to work on my fic and the ensuing cross road I have in deciding which to do. Work on said fic or play through ME and ME2. Bah!
Beyond that, it is certainly an intriguing concept and even more unique. It would be nice if the final battle was not the immediate conclusion.
Oh and Happy New Year to everyone, as belated as this may be. I has no new pics of Keira though.
Modifié par Bourne Endeavor, 01 janvier 2011 - 09:43 .