Lividity Jones wrote...
I never read it.
It t'was my return to fanfiction. I'd like to think I improved alot over its course.
Lividity Jones wrote....
I don't trust Tali's existence in a fic that lends such description towards a character like One-Shot.
Heh. The opening paragraph:
The alley was dark, the electricity for this district of Omega being long dead. A perfect place to hide. And it was in this alley, coated in a fine layer of trash and debris, that the fugitive chose to turn into. She was limping badly, her left leg unresponsive, broken bones grinding with every step. Her breathing also showed problems, with inhalation coming only after repeated fits of coughing. Not that the fugitive was unaware of this. Checking her omnitool, the array of flashing red lights told her what her body was quite obviously alluding to:
Tali'Zorah vas Normandy was dying.
Modifié par RedTracer7, 03 août 2010 - 04:23 .