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#8876
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SpatFieya wrote...

*Shepard turns on the old radio sitting on the table, it starts playing nothing but static as he messes with the tuning dial, but then a faint song could be heard, Shepard dials it in until it's almost perfectly clear*

Shepard: ...So, whatcha think? 

Tali: ...It's... beautiful...

*Shepard extends his right hand to Tali and smiles*

Shepard: May I have this dance?

Tali: ...of course.

*Shepard and Tali slowly dance embraced to the faded, old, but romantic song*

"For I can't help...

Falling in love...with you."


Did you just pull a Wall-E?

#8877
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Guys.. had a great time with you today.I'm going to sleep.

I hope you feel better Jones, sincerely. :)

See you tommorow!

Keelah Se'lai .

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Purification- wrote...

Guys.. had a great time with you today.I'm going to sleep.

I hope you feel better Jones, sincerely. :)

See you tommorow!

Keelah Se'lai .



I think this chapter of Reckoning is getting to him... :(

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Ahh, also, check this. :pinched:

#8880
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Lividity Jones wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

It's been a long day for Shepard. The Council is ignoring him. The Reapers are on the way. Bad **** done gone down up in here and the whole world world seems to be crashing down around the Normandy Crew. Cerberus are being dicks. The geth are achieving consensus about soda dispensers, and the krogan and still headbutting eachother back on Tuchanka. Just another day in the big bad universe.

But that's okay. The universe is a ****ed up place with ****ed up people and ****ed up **** happening to all the good guys. But it's not important. Not right now. Not to Shepard. Why?

Because right now, he's holding a small quarian finger between his index and thumb, gently playing with it and comparing the structure to his. Somewhere, under the sheets, a masked girl without an immune system, a family, or anything but the suit on her back to call her own giggles as her hand is accidentally tickled. Two people who have suffered, loved, and lost, share a brief moment of respite as the stars pass overhead, and human orbs stare into a violet visor that hides silver diamonds, and there is no more pain, no more suffering. There's no reaper fleet. There are no ignorant politicians. No loveless fathers or backstabbing officials. There's just two hearts, two completely seperate lines of evolution dictating the rate they pump at, how much blood is moved, and to what kinds of tissues and organs it flows into. Two aliens who decided it was worth the risk to light a small beacon amidst a sea of Darkness.

This, is Commander Shepard and Chief Engineer Zorah, and they are in love.


****...

I'm crying...


****. Just... ****.

Dammit, Rip. Why you grand theft my man cards so? 

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SpatFieya wrote...

****. Just... ****.

Dammit, Rip. Why you grand theft my man cards so? 


I know how to bring the love. ^_^

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RiptideX1090 wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

****. Just... ****.

Dammit, Rip. Why you grand theft my man cards so? 


I know how to bring the love. ^_^

*raises eyebrow*
I'm still ambivalent about the whole thing.
So I guess that makes me immune to your literary powers.

#8883
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RiptideX1090 wrote...
I think this chapter of Reckoning is getting to him... :(

You're telling me.

Last night I couldn't sleep. I seriously felt like a powerless douche bag for one of the few times in my life. To think that something like that could be happening in this galaxy, this universe... is heart breaking. I just wish I could make like, a goddamn machine that teleports me to wherever there's an innocent soul in need, so that I might be able to do something to help.

You two write powerful **** man. Damn.

EDIT: Like an intergalactic Batman/Punisher. 

That'd be BOSS

Modifié par SpatFieya, 04 août 2010 - 01:38 .


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Grand Admiral Cheesecake wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

****. Just... ****.

Dammit, Rip. Why you grand theft my man cards so? 


I know how to bring the love. ^_^

*raises eyebrow*
I'm still ambivalent about the whole thing.
So I guess that makes me immune to your literary powers.


Or you're just a jerk.

Either/Or.

#8885
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SpatFieya wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
I think this chapter of Reckoning is getting to him... :(

You're telling me.

Last night I couldn't sleep. I seriously felt like a powerless douche bag for one of the few times in my life. To think that something like that could be happening in this galaxy, this universe... is heart breaking. I just wish I could make like, a goddamn machine that teleports me to wherever there's an innocent soul in need, so that I might be able to do something to help.

You two write powerful **** man. Damn.

EDIT: Like an intergalactic Batman/Punisher. 

That'd be BOSS


It's going to get worse. :(

I'm actually doing some of the writing for chapter seven... because... well... :crying:

#8886
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RiptideX1090 wrote...

Grand Admiral Cheesecake wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

****. Just... ****.

Dammit, Rip. Why you grand theft my man cards so? 


I know how to bring the love. ^_^

*raises eyebrow*
I'm still ambivalent about the whole thing.
So I guess that makes me immune to your literary powers.


Or you're just a jerk.

Either/Or.

*laughs* Both!:wizard:

#8887
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Jeez I am trying to repost something I wrote and Google refuses to home in on the exact page.

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Titanium Man wrote...

Jeez I am trying to repost something I wrote and Google refuses to home in on the exact page.

I....feel your pain?

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RiptideX1090 wrote...
It's going to get worse. :(

I'm actually doing some of the writing for chapter seven... because... well... :crying:

I'd say be gentle with us, but I know that would be a wasted plea. 

Have you two considered writing something else to help counter balance this fic? 

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SpatFieya wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
It's going to get worse. :(

I'm actually doing some of the writing for chapter seven... because... well... :crying:

I'd say be gentle with us, but I know that would be a wasted plea. 

Have you two considered writing something else to help counter balance this fic? 


If I remember right, Riptide promised to do a Tali piece afterward. I don't know what will be in it, though. He kind of said he would wing it depending on how he felt.

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AH, THERE YOU ARE! /Wesker

Here is Shepard telling his mom to STFU.

***

"Tali," Hannah said. "May I speak alone with my son for a moment?"

"Yes, ma'am." The quarian rose from her chair and walked outside of the room. Mother and son sat together with the room's large view to the Citadel outside, to flickering traffic lights and speeding hovercars, artificial sunlight glinting from their metal hoods.

"She's very nice," Hannah said after a few countable moments. She took a sip of her tea, cup handled with both hands, eyes closed. "Didn't expect you would go for someone who isn't human, though."

"Don't do this," Shepard said.

"Do what?"

"You hate her."

"I do not." Hannah kept her eyes closed.

"Yes you do. I know you. You're mad because she's not human and won't be able to give you grandchildren."

Hannah set down the teacup on the glass desk reaching up just below her knees. "It's unfortunate."

"There you go," Shepard said, jabbing a finger at Hannah. "Now you're going to guilt trip me because I didn't do what you want."

"I'm not putting you on a guilt trip."

"Then what about my major?" Shepard spread his hands. "What about signing up for service? What about my other dates? What about Iltha?"

"You told me yourself that Iltha was a poor choice," Hannah said. Her skin always seemed faultless and smooth. Only when she was becoming angry like she was now could someone notice the creases, the weary lines. "You said she was in the wrong crowd and making bad choices."

"Even if she was clean, you would have hated her anyway because she was a turian. And now you're doing the same thing again. Just because Tali is a quarian." Shepard rose from his seat, and the sunlight dragged his shadow towards the wall. "What are you going to say? That she's a thief? A gypsy?"

"I want you to make the right choice, Joseph. That's the only thing I've wanted from you."

Shepard turned away from Hannah. "I've been making the right choices all my life. They just weren't the choices you liked."

He left with a thunder of bootfalls. Hannah brought the cup of tea to her mouth as her son left. The cup lingered before she turned it over, draining the tea onto a spot next to her chair that she had cleaned before.

Modifié par Titanium Man, 04 août 2010 - 01:48 .


#8892
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SpatFieya wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
It's going to get worse. :(

I'm actually doing some of the writing for chapter seven... because... well... :crying:

I'd say be gentle with us, but I know that would be a wasted plea. 

Have you two considered writing something else to help counter balance this fic? 



All of the short little D'aww stories I write... and Jones writes...

Don't have the time for a big story. Have this... work... studying for the ASVAB... plus family time and games when I get the chance.

#8893
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Titanium Man wrote...

AH, THERE YOU ARE! /Wesker

Here is Shepard telling his mom to STFU.

***

"Tali," Hannah said. "May I speak alone with my son for a moment?"

"Yes, ma'am." The quarian rose from her chair and walked outside of the room. Mother and son sat together with the room's large view to the Citadel outside, to flickering traffic lights and speeding hovercars, artificial sunlight glinting from their metal hoods.

"She's very nice," Hannah said after a few countable moments. She took a sip of her tea, cup handled with both hands, eyes closed. "Didn't expect you would go for someone who isn't human, though."

"Don't do this," Shepard said.

"Do what?"

"You hate her."

"I do not." Hannah kept her eyes closed.

"Yes you do. I know you. You're mad because she's not human and won't be able to give you grandchildren."

Hannah set down the teacup on the glass desk reaching up just below her knees. "It's unfortunate."

"There you go," Shepard said, jabbing a finger at Hannah. "Now you're going to guilt trip me because I didn't do what you want."

"I'm not putting you on a guilt trip."

"Then what about my major?" Shepard spread his hands. "What about signing up for service? What about my other dates? What about Iltha?"

"You told me yourself that Iltha was a poor choice," Hannah said. Her skin always seemed faultless and smooth. Only when she was becoming angry like she was now could someone notice the creases, the weary lines. "You said she was in the wrong crowd and making bad choices."

"Even if she was clean, you would have hated her anyway because she was a turian. And now you're doing the same thing again. Just because Tali is a quarian." Shepard rose from his seat, and the sunlight dragged his shadow towards the wall. "What are you going to say? That she's a thief? A gypsy?"

"I want you to make the right choice, Joseph. That's the only thing I've wanted from you."

Shepard turned away from Hannah. "I've been making the right choices all my life. They just weren't the choices you liked."

He left with a thunder of bootfalls. Hannah brought the cup of tea to her mouth as her son left. The cup lingered before she turned it over, draining the tea onto a spot next to her chair that she had cleaned before.


i like it

#8894
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Runescapeguy9 wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
It's going to get worse. :(

I'm actually doing some of the writing for chapter seven... because... well... :crying:

I'd say be gentle with us, but I know that would be a wasted plea. 

Have you two considered writing something else to help counter balance this fic? 


If I remember right, Riptide promised to do a Tali piece afterward. I don't know what will be in it, though. He kind of said he would wing it depending on how he felt.


Blood is involved.

Red blood.

#8895
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Runescapeguy9 wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
It's going to get worse. :(

I'm actually doing some of the writing for chapter seven... because... well... :crying:

I'd say be gentle with us, but I know that would be a wasted plea. 

Have you two considered writing something else to help counter balance this fic? 


If I remember right, Riptide promised to do a Tali piece afterward. I don't know what will be in it, though. He kind of said he would wing it depending on how he felt.

Yeah, God knows I could use a good Tali FF after reading Reckoning.

Rip's FF really makes me want to write something about an intergalactic 'Punisher'. Someone who ends **** like what's happening to Daro. I'm talking scorched earth, mother bosh'tet.

Modifié par SpatFieya, 04 août 2010 - 01:52 .


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RiptideX1090 wrote...

Blood is involved.

Red blood.

oh dear....

#8897
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SpatFieya wrote...

Rip's FF really makes me want to write something about an intergalactic 'Punisher'. Someone who ends **** like what's happening to Daro. I'm talking scorched earth, mother bosh'tet.


Apparently the Punisher during the slavers storyline is totally awesome in terms of revenge.

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Runescapeguy9 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Blood is involved.

Red blood.

oh dear....

BLOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!
*starts killing people with a chain axe and a lightsaber*

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SpatFieya wrote...

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
It's going to get worse. :(

I'm actually doing some of the writing for chapter seven... because... well... :crying:

I'd say be gentle with us, but I know that would be a wasted plea. 

Have you two considered writing something else to help counter balance this fic? 


If I remember right, Riptide promised to do a Tali piece afterward. I don't know what will be in it, though. He kind of said he would wing it depending on how he felt.

Yeah, God knows I could use a good Tali FF after reading Reckoning.

Rip's FF really makes me want to write something about an intergalactic 'Punisher'. Someone who ends **** like what's happening to Daro. I'm talking scorched earth, mother bosh'tet.


Remember that girl at the end of chapter five of Reckoning? The one left to die from disease?

For the longest time... I wanted to do a peice with a girl in a similar position... but her and a few others get rescued by Archangel's team. He takes them in, feeds them, get's them taken care of, and it gives you a new perspective on just what it was he was doing on Omega.

Then Reckoning started... haven't had the time for much else.

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Titanium Man wrote...

AH, THERE YOU ARE! /Wesker

Here is Shepard telling his mom to STFU.


Your Grand Escapades are outstanding...I really like them.

But with all due respect, I like my Hannah/Shep story better.

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