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[Water Dumple]

Wait...why is that a bad thing?
I mean, yeah, Garrus should have asked before using Shepard's cabin, but otherwise, it's not much different than Quarian/Human.

Top:  Been a few days since I've posted this, so it's worth putting up again.

Modifié par Water Dumple, 09 août 2010 - 08:02 .

[Phil725]

Kira Shepard wrote...

Tali shook her head. "You're lying."
Shepard smirked. "I am not."
"I don't beleive you."
Shepard sighed and stood up stretching. "Tali there are quite a few things I'm good at, political speaking, matchmaking, negociating, criminal lawyer, killing sentient starships who want to harvest all organic life. But the talent of which I am the very best," He extended his hand to her, a wild look in his eyes. "Is ballroom dancing."
"Shepard," She smiled, barely keeping the laughter out of her voice as she lounged on the couch. "I've seen you dance. You have all the grace of a drunken elcor."
"You've seen me dance in clubs, Tali. You haven't seen me in a proper ballroom dancing setting." He rolled his wrist and made a playful bow refore rextending the hand. "Might I have this dance, milady?."
Tali rolled her eyes and accepted the hand intending to pull herself to a standing position. Instead shepard nearly yanked her into him and wrapped a hand around her waist as it's twin held her arm straight out. She stared at him, the devilish gleam in his eye and the rogue grin on his face as he whispered.
"I'll lead."
xxx
not quite finished but I thought I'd post this.

Shep being good at dancing?  Plot twist

[Collider]

Phil725 wrote...
Shep being good at dancing?  Plot twist

Yea this is no Shepard I know of.

[Kira Shepard]

Phil725 wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

Tali shook her head. "You're lying."
Shepard smirked. "I am not."
"I don't beleive you."
Shepard sighed and stood up stretching. "Tali there are quite a few things I'm good at, political speaking, matchmaking, negociating, criminal lawyer, killing sentient starships who want to harvest all organic life. But the talent of which I am the very best," He extended his hand to her, a wild look in his eyes. "Is ballroom dancing."
"Shepard," She smiled, barely keeping the laughter out of her voice as she lounged on the couch. "I've seen you dance. You have all the grace of a drunken elcor."
"You've seen me dance in clubs, Tali. You haven't[/i] seen me in a proper ballroom dancing setting." He rolled his wrist and made a playful bow refore rextending the hand. "Might I have this dance, milady?."
Tali rolled her eyes and accepted the hand intending to pull herself to a standing position. Instead shepard nearly yanked her into him and wrapped a hand around her waist as it's twin held her arm straight out. She stared at him, the devilish gleam in his eye and the rogue grin on his face as he whispered.
"I'll lead."
xxx
not quite finished but I thought I'd post this.

Shep being good at dancing?  Plot twist

not just good. The BEST.

[Kira Shepard]

Collider wrote...

Phil725 wrote...
Shep being good at dancing?  Plot twist

Yea this is no Shepard I know of.

I took ballroom dancing courses when I was younger. I figure if shepard is me but more badass he would be the best whilst I am competant.

[Homebound]

MMkay, its nice to get back into Mass Effect world instead of Dragon Age. L8rz all. May Tali turn her gaze on you.

[Lividity Jones]

*Tali and Shepard walk hand-in-hand through the empty streets of a once-glorious quarian city, the winds of Rannoch howling through the canyons of steel and glass. Storefronts are left bare, as though waiting for their owners to return and re-stock their shelves. Nightclub doors are left wide open, inviting it's future guests into their halls. Public parks are eerily still, water left placid and without life. The faint silver glint of tears can be seen forming under Tali's eyes, visible even through the opaque violet.*

Tali: It's so... beautiful... I never imagined...


More to come in a few...

Modifié par Lividity Jones, 09 août 2010 - 08:17 .

[Phil725]

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

*Tali and Shepard walk hand-in-hand through the empty streets of a once-glorious quarian city, the winds of Rannoch howling through the canyons of steel and glass. Storefronts are left bare, as though waiting for their owners to return and re-stock their shelves. Nightclub doors are left wide open, inviting it's future guests into their halls. Public parks are eerily still, water left placid and without life. The faint silver glint of tears can be seen forming under Tali's eyes, visible even through the opaque violet.*

Tali: It's so... beautiful... I never imagined...


More to come in a few...

This deserves to be expanded upon. It has weight.

Agreed

[Lividity Jones]

*Shepard looks to his love, his hand still holding hers, always and forever there for her. His brow furrows beneath his helmet at the sight of her tears.*

Shepard: Are you alright?

*Tali's silver eyes stare out at the vast cityscape, feeling the warm water of her tears sliding down the soft flesh of her cheeks. A strange amalgam of confusion and joy showed in her tone as the words spilled forth from her voice modulator as freely as her tears.*

Tali: I-I... I can't believe it... It's been so restored... It's like nothing ever happened... Three hundred years and nobody... nobody has been here...

[Gust4v]

I want to see a Quarian city.
Damn.

[solazz]

I like where this is going, Lividity. Please, continue to feed my hunger for delicious Tali mini fics.

[Phil725]

Lividity Jones wrote...

*Shepard looks to his love, his hand still holding hers, always and forever there for her. His brow furrows beneath his helmet at the sight of her tears.*

Shepard: Are you alright?

*Tali's silver eyes stare out at the vast cityscape, feeling the warm water of her tears sliding down the soft flesh of her cheeks. A strange amalgam of confusion and joy showed in her tone as the words spilled forth from her voice modulator as freely as her tears.*

Tali: I-I... I can't believe it... It's been so restored... It's like nothing ever happened... Three hundred years and nobody... nobody has been here...

Dat walk through Rannoch holding hands

[Lividity Jones]

*Shepard looks out at the metal and glass spires of the city, as though noticing them for the first time. The woman beside him had occupied every thought process in his body since they had arrived, his armored hand idly thumbing the velvet-covered box hiding in one of his ammo-packs. He could think of no better a time or place to do this.*

Shepard: Do you think you... your people could have a home here?

Modifié par Lividity Jones, 09 août 2010 - 08:37 .

[NuclearBuddha]

Collider wrote...

Phil725 wrote...
Shep being good at dancing?  Plot twist

Yea this is no Shepard I know of.

Maybe Shep is just jerking around with the terrible dancing, like that one cutscene in FF8.

Edit:  Ah yes, just how I remember it.

Modifié par NuclearBuddha, 09 août 2010 - 08:34 .

[Lividity Jones]

*Tali blinks away at the tears in her eyes, the brilliant silver stars of her eyes vanishing for only a heartbreaking second beneath the opaque glass before turning those beautiful pieces of starlight to meet Shepard's gaze. Her three fingers grip his five ever so slightly tighter as her heart races.*

Tali: Yes... I think we can.

*Tali breaks her gaze, looking out at the setting orange sun in the distance, the light catching in the curve of her visor's surface, illuminating a soft, smiling face.*

Tali: I think I'd like to see it without my mask... While I still have a chance...

[Gust4v]

I like the Shuffle.

[Lividity Jones]

*Shepard feels her fingers slip from his, watching as her fingers move to the small switch concealed beneath the edges of her visor. A shoft chime sings out into the passing breeze before Tali slowly removes the visor. The wind caresses her silken smooth skin, opening her starry eyes to see her first sunset unobstructed by the burden her people endured. Her lips curl into a soft smile before turning back to Shepard and taking a deep breath of her home's air.*

Tali: I never thought I would live to see this... To be standing here...

[Lividity Jones]

...Anybody still here?

[Phil725]

Just a few hours for Tali and Shep to walk through Rannoch together, examining the scenery, no enviro suits or masks involved, is all I want.  Complete re-acclimation will happen in time, but just being able to hold hands, smell the flowers and watch the sun set, I'm sure it would mean everything to Tali, even if it does mean dealing with a fever later.

[Phil725]

Lividity Jones wrote...

*Shepard feels her fingers slip from his, watching as her fingers move to the small switch concealed beneath the edges of her visor. A shoft chime sings out into the passing breeze before Tali slowly removes the visor. The wind caresses her silken smooth skin, opening her starry eyes to see her first sunset unobstructed by the burden her people endured. Her lips curl into a soft smile before turning back to Shepard and taking a deep breath of her home's air.*

Tali: I never thought I would live to see this... To be standing here...

I actually typed my last post before seeing this one.  I guess that would be a d'awww ninja

[solazz]

@Lividity

I'm still sorta here. Going back and forth between this, playing mass effect, and writing.



Like I said before, I like where you're going, it's making me d'aaawww.