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*sidles in*

Art WIP! Doing some DA2-era Silver and Scarlet art, and thus Fenris/Zevran/Tannu. Giggety.

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As usual, no tattoos for Zevran until later. The little scrap I did of Fenris' brands will probably get erased until around that point as well. I also never draw the long bits of Tannu's hair right off -- and Zev has a fistful of it so that's why that looks the way it does right now, lolol. Erm, and I should remember to note that Fenris will have his gauntlets on in all their spiky-fingertipped-glory.

...Yeah, I haven't even started writing in that decade yet and I'm drawing it. Amorius started it!

<_<:unsure::?:whistle: (The comic nearly killed my art mojo completely. My counter? Shirtless men. Lots of them.)

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Prompt: "What would Zevran say... I think you know." 

This is what Morrigan says during her dark ritual offer.  When she gives your Warden reasons why he/she should take her offer this is one of the things she mentions.   What would Zev say if your Warden could ask him?
Time Limit: 3 hours
Deadline: Tuesday midnight (EST)  April 19th
Prize:  Give me any screenshot from your game and I'll do a Artrage outline (possible colored)  sfw or nsfw i don't care.

Just a reminder that this is due tonight at midnight so anyone that has some last minute entries now is the time. :)


ETA:  Aro it looks really good already. :) You amaze me as always. :D

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I feel bad that I never participate in the prompts. They're always so awesome, too. XD

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Prompt: "What would Zevran say... I think you know." 

This is what Morrigan says during her dark ritual offer.  When she gives your Warden reasons why he/she should take her offer this is one of the things she mentions.   What would Zev say if your Warden could ask him?
Time Limit: 3 hours
Deadline: Tuesday midnight (EST)  April 19th
Prize:  Give me any screenshot from your game and I'll do a Artrage outline (possible colored)  sfw or nsfw i don't care.



Its results time. sorry this is so late.  I had the urge to draw and I could get myself to leave it until it was done.

this week we had three entries. :)  This is my first time judging so it was hard!

Corker wrote:

All my Wardens save one either accepted the DR without much thought
or rejected it out of hand.  (The exception was an Ali-mancing Cousland
who'd have no reason to talk it over with Zevran.)  However, at least
one felt awful about it afterwards, and I could see her rehashing the
decision with Zev.

Still Life with Woodpecker
(So titled because it immediately follows Even Cowgirls Get the Blues, a nsfw fill on the kink meme, and my title-maker is broken today)
Time: 45 min
Prompts: 3

They’d
made up, finally, this eve of the great battle. The pain in her
earlobe had dwindled to a dull thobbing, a minor nuisance compared to
the joy of hearing him admit his affection. Obliquely, of course, but
still.

There was another shadow over Kallian’s heart. “I’m
such a coward, Zev.” She admitted it aloud, speaking into his
encircling arm.

He chuckled. “A coward would be running for
Jader, my dear Warden. There is no shame in a little nervousness before
such a fight. Even a little fear, no?”

“Not what I meant,” she
sighed. There was a long pause, and then: “I made a deal with Morrigan,
so me and Alistair won’t die tomorrow. Well, sort of. We could still
die, but... one of the Wardens was guaranteed to die, see, killing the Archdemon. She says she can fix it so that won’t happen.”

He
was quiet for a moment. “This is what she was biding her time for,
yes?” Kallian knew that he’d long suspected the witch’s motives.

“Yep. Flemeth’s plan from the get-go.”

He shifted, rubbing her arm lightly. “Is that so bad? Perhaps Flemeth had a soft spot for Grey Wardens, no?”

“No,” Kallian said flatly. “Morrigan does, though, and Alistair’s filling it up right now.”

The strangled choking sound behind her almost made her smile. “You... you do not mean to say that Alistair and Morrigan are -- ?”

“It’s
some sex magic thing,” Kallian said, feeling her face warm in shame.
“The poor guy... I think he’d honestly have rather died in battle, Zev.
But I talked him into it. Because I’m a coward. I can’t believe... I
can’t believe I did that. I made him -- ”

“You did not, amora,” he chided her softly. “Unless you dragged him to her room and held him down for her.”

“You didn’t see his face, Zev. He trusts me and when I said it had to be done, he -- ”

“He
knew you were right,” Zevran finished firmly. “There will be regrets
and shame, yes, but he will be alive to have them. That is always the
better path.”

“But - ”

“No ‘buts’, amora. I know whereof I speak.”

“I... oh. Oh.”
And she turned in the compass of his arms to hold him. “I’m doing
everything wrong tonight, Zev, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean...”

“Hush, my Warden.” He did not look upset. “From the sound of it, you have done many things right,
and given hope where there was none. As an agent of inescapable death
myself,” he said with a self-deprecating grin, “I know too well what my
victims would have given for such a reprieve. Alistair, if he has any
sense at all - which is not at all certain, of course - will thank you
one day for this.”

“You think?”

“I know.”

She smiled, tentatively. Perhaps she was not so unforgivable, after all.

I really like this.  I get the feeling of her feeling like she was taking the cowards way out by talking Alistair into the ritual (I've had a few that have felt the same way....and others that were just so glad that there was an alternitive that they didn't give it a seconds though, after all, they didn't know they signed up for death. )  And I like that Zev understood her, and understood why it was the right decision.


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Zevran Weekly Prompt: "What would Zevran say... I think you know."

This
is what Morrigan says during her dark ritual offer. When she gives your
Warden reasons why he/she should take her offer this is one of the
things she mentions. What would Zev say if your Warden could ask him?

Prompts: 2
Time: 2 Hours or so - ish

With
DA2 I have found little time to continue Elam's story but thankfully
the prompts keep approaching subjects that work out in his larger story
and adventure....so Yay! Not so much as what Zevran would say sbout the
ritual and the baby (Elam did tell him) but how he helps Elam to cope
with a decision already made.

Ritual...


“All right. I agree. I’ll do it.”

Morrigan smiled weakly as she rose to approach Elam. “Come to me then.”

Elam stepped away nervously, his hands flying up as if to guard from an incoming attack.

“I…I need a moment, Morrigan. I will come to your room once I am ready.” Elam suddenly found it hard to look her in the eye.

They had spent the blight building a friendship, a friendship he had thought to be true.

While
he did not doubt her when she expressed her desire for him to be saved,
he struggled with the secret she had kept for so long. She must have
been certain he would concede for all these months.

All she had to do was mutter a few choice words and his path became clear.

The words haunted him as he stood close to Morrigan in the dim chamber. “What of Zevran?”

His
world had started to spin upon hearing his lover’s name. He had fought
so hard for a future over the course of the past few months; a future he
felt reluctant to give away to anyone, especially to the Arch demon.

“The ritual must…” Morrigan started as she moved to take Elam’s hand.

Spinning away from her touch her finally met her gaze. “Morrigan, please allow me this. I will come to you shortly.”

“Very well, Warden” She whispered as she turned to exit Elam’s room.

There
was a chance the ritual would fail, even against Morrigan’s assurances
that it would not. Elam felt a sense of dread. There were precious hours
left before the battle came to a head, precious hours to spend in
Zevran’s arms.

“Zevran” The name invoked a sudden, intense
desire in Elam and within moments, he had made his way across the castle
to Zevran’s room.

Elam found Zevran sitting by the fire,
diligently sharpening his blades as the firelight dances off the strands
of his golden hair and skin.

Elam fought a desperate need to
bury his face in Zevran’s neck to ward off the fear that plagued him, to
forget the ritual and even the blight, if only for a moment.

“Ah!
The secret Grey Warden meeting is over?” Zevran chuckled as he set his
daggers from his lap as he rose to greet Elam with a kiss.

“Zevran…” Elam stuttered struggling to look his lover in the eye.

“My warden, what troubles you?” Zevran grabbed Elam’s chin in hand forcing contact.

The
contents of the meeting with Riordan and Morrigan’s plan came out in a
rush as Elam struggled to explain the true fate of the Wardens against
the Arch Demon. Zevran kept his hands on Elam’s Jaw and neck, gently
rubbing to soothe as he spoke.

“Oh ho! That is why our lovely Morrigan wanted. I see.” Zevran’s brow furrowed. “Have you come to seek my permission?”

Elam took a deep breath before responding. “No. I have already agreed to the ritual”

“Then why have you come?” Zevran asked, his hands falling away from Elam as he studied the elf’s face.

“I
just…I needed to know….” Elam stopped short. What he needed from Zevran
was so simple but he struggled to find the courage to ask it of him.

“I
need to know if after this I will be welcome in your bed.” His voice
cracking, betraying his fear yet again, Elam continued, “I…there are
only a few hours that we may be together before the battle. I do not
know if the ritual will succeed or not. I just want to be with…I want to
know if you will still have me if I do this.”

Elam closed his eyes with the last words; the weight on his shoulders had never felt heavier.

Zevran’s
arms wrapped slowly about Elam’s waist pulling him close, their
foreheads meeting in familiar and calming ritual. A ritual that meant
everything to Elam.

“My Warden...” Zevran soothed. “I am yours.”

Elam
ignored his own desire to yell in relief and pulled Zevran in for a
long, slow kiss. Finally parting, he steadied himself before speaking
again.

“I must go.” Elam whispered, his lips slowly grazing Zevran’s warm, full lips again, savoring the taste and feel.

“Hmm.
Yes, I know.” Zevran studied Elam’s serious face before a familiar
smirk played across his golden features. “I will head to our rooms and
have the maids draw a warm bath for us…you will want one, no?”

Elam
turned to leave, looking over his shoulder for continued reassurances
from Zevran as he left. The weight was lighter near him and he was
determined to finish this nights ritual and return to his arms.

“I will be waiting for you My Warden.” Zevran whispered after him.

I really loved this. I felt  so bad for poor Elam. we know that Zev has done far worse then what Elam was doing and had no reason not to be there for him, but our characters don't always see that.  silly them. 




Halae Dral wrote:

Time: 1 hour, 46 minutes
Prompts: 0

I expect I'd've been
better off drawing something on this one, but I felt like trying to
write... (and I couldn't really figure out what to draw). Ah well; at
least it's something.

- - -

The halls of Castle
Redcliffe seemed silent and deserted, the darkness oppressive. Zemariel
leaned against the wal, pressing the side of his face to the cool stone
and staring out the window. It all looked so peaceful out there. He
could hear footsteps in the hall - Morrigan returning to her room, he
guessed. He almost turned to look, but reconsidered - he didn't really
want to talk to her just now. The whole thing had been very awkward.

It
had been the right thing to do. He was sure it had - how could making
sure nobody had to die be wrong? - and he did trust her, but it felt wrong, and he still had doubts. What if she was lying, or if it simply didn't work after all? And then... I should've talked to Zev, he thought. There had been no time to do so - it had to be right then, she had said. He sighed.

Footsteps in the hall again. She's coming back?
Zemariel braced himself and turned to face Morrigan. To his surprise,
it was not the witch who was coming down the hall, but Zevran.

"Ah, so I have finally found you, my Warden!" Zevran looked quite cheerful, if perhaps slightly worried around the edges. Of course, Zemariel thought, he has no reason not to be cheerful - he doesn't know.
"Zev..." he began, but couldn't manage to think how to put it. He
folded his arms and kept looking out the window, half hoping Zevran
would simply move on, having found him. A thought occured to him. "Did
someone send you to look for me?"

Zevran paused. "No, nobody has sent me. I was simply wondering where you had gotten to."

"And
here I am!" Zemariel was quite aware that the grin he was trying to
give wasn't quite working, but he hoped that against all odds Zevran
wouldn't pick up on it. Of course, he did.

"Something is
bothering you, I see." Zevran came to stand beside him at the window.
"You are not worried about the coming fight?"

"I guess I am.
It's not that, though, not exactly, it's... well." Zemariel sighed in
frustration. It would've been a convenient excuse - and it wasn't as if
lying didn't come easily to him normally - but he didn't want to lie to
Zevran. He didn't want to think about the implications of that
considering how he expected the news of the ritual to be recieved.

"What, then?" Zevran shrugged. "Would it help to speak of it, perhaps?"

Just get it out of the way now,
Zemariel told himself. He closed his eyes. That was harder than it
sounded. He had always hated letting people down, and he was sure that
was what he had just done. "Zev, do you know what happens to the Warden
who deals the killing blow to the Archdemon?"

There was a pause.
He opened his eyes again, watching Zevran's face. "To some extent, yes.
I know that he dies." A momentary expression flickering across Zevran's
features, but it was gone before Zemariel could be sure what it was.
"You are not planning on doing it yourself, are you?"

Zemariel looked down at the ground. Maybe I should be.
He tried to banish that thought. "It's not just dying. It's worse than
that. The... soul of the Archdemon has to go somewhere, and it goes for
the closest tainted target. It tries for another Darkspawn, I guess, so
it can keep leading the horde, but if it's a Grey Warden it finds
instead then the Archdemon's soul is destroyed. And so is the Grey
Warden's."

"I see." Zevran made no indication of how he felt; he was obviously waiting for Zemariel to finish.

"I
don't know what happens after we die. I guess you go to the Fade, or
something. I've never really thought about it much. Whatever it is, it's
got to be better than nothing. I don't know that I could strike the
killing blow, knowing  what would happen. I don't think I could let
Alistair do it. If Riordan fails, that is... and what are the odds we'll
get it right the first time?"

"And yet you have no choice in
that situation. One of you must do it, or the Blight will not be ended."
Zevran put a hand one Zemariel's shoulder. It would normally have been a
comforting gesture, but Zemariel felt worse. It seemed that Zevran was
getting the wrong idea entirely about what he was trying to tell him. He
opened his mouth to say something, but couldn't think how to put it. Apparently I only know the right things to say if I'm not being honest,
he thought with some chagrin. "It is not a decision to be made lightly,
I am sure," Zevran continued, "but if I may make a suggestion...
Riordan is the more senior Warden than you, is he not? It seems that
that honour should fall to him. Perhaps you could simply try to ensure
his success, although I do admit to having certain selfish reasons to
encourage you to do so."

"There was a choice," Zemariel finally
blurted out, unable to bear the awkwardness of the conversation any
longer. "Morrigan had a plan, a ritual, that would make it so nobody had
to die from it. I couldn't turn that down! You can understand, can't
you?"

"Of course." Zevran took Zemariel by the shoulders,
forcing the Warden to look at him. "My dear Warden, it is not as if this
were the first time we have employed blood magic to solve our probelsm -
I assume that is your worry? They use a sort of blood magic in the
Crows, you know. It does have its uses, and it seems this is one of
them."

"Zev... no, that's not it - well, it probably was blood
magic, but - damn it." Zemariel bit his lip and looked out the window.
"I slept with her. The ritual is for... she said it needed a child, it
had to be a Warden, and I couldn't ask Alistair to do that..." he
trailed off, and finally made himself look back at Zevran. To his
surprise, it seemed the other elf was holding back a laugh. "What's
funny?"

"You slept with her?" Zevran shook his head. "That was
all it was? The way you were carrying on, my Warden, I thought that you
had agreed to be the one to sacrifice yourself to end this Blight and
hadn't thought how to tell me! I could wish that you had spoken to me
first, of course, but I am rather relieved."

"You don't mind?" Zemariel supposed his expression must have been rather comical, judging from the look on Zevran's face.

"I
do admit to some amount of jealousy." Zevran chuckled. "Yet how could I
mind, knowing that I do not have to worry about losing you to your
nobly self-sacrificing ways?"

"I didn't say I was going to..."
Zemariel decided he didn't really need to admit now that he had been
prepared to do it if it had come down to it. Zevran had probably guessed
as much anyhow.

"I could see that grim look in your eye when
you left the meeting with Riordan," Zevran told him, confirming his
suspicions. "I was contemplating knocking you out before the battle so
you would not have been able to carry through with it, but I suppose I
would have let you if you felt that it was what you had to do. I am,
however, very glad that I needn't worry about it."

"I wanted to
ask you first, but she said there wasn't any time." Zemariel hugged
Zevran, leaning his head on the other assassin's shoulder. "I'm sorry. I
should've insisted I ask you first. I'm glad you're not angry about
it."

Zevran put his arms around Zemariel, holding him tightly.
"I may become rather disgruntled, should it happen again, but I am far
too relieved to be upset now, I assure you." After a moment, he leaned
his head down to whisper in Zemariel's ear, a mischevious smile on his
lips. "So then, tell me - how was it? I believe you owe me a story, at
least."

Zemariel laughed. "Well, it was all rather awkward, really..." he began.

This was really sweet. I understood Zemariel's worry about what Zev would think of all of this.  (after all that's why I thought of the prompt)  I've had a few characters that *would* have made the killing blow if they had to, but most of my characters are rouge's that have no want to die and are thrilled with having an  "out".    I have yet to play a game where my character actually dies.    I like that Zev asked for details. lol, that is soo "Zev"  Very good job. :)


and here comes the hard part. after much thinking and much rereading..

the winner is Hilde    send me a message with what screenshot you'd like me to redo as a digtal painting and I'll get to you. :)

our next prompter  with 0 prompts is Halae Dral

 

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Congrats, Hilde!  :wizard:

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Aye, congratulations! 

@Corker - Thanks! Yeah, if you stop to think about it then it seems likely Zevran would at least understand that, but it can be hard to think about things logically when you're worrying about them. Zemariel was also somewhat dense at times; I can easily see that meaning of the stories going in one ear and out the other.

@Jenovan - Thanks! His usual response to difficult social situations in game was lying or fast-talking through them, but lying to solve your problems doesn't tend to work so well with people you care about.

@Hilde - Thank you! I'm glad to hear that - I always tend to think I'm not very good at dealing with emotions.

@Verly - Thanks! I haven't had anyone actually do the sacrifice yet, either. They've all had too many self-preservation instincts, I guess.

I'll try and come up with something good for the next prompt! I won't be able to use my computer again until the evening, so hopefully that'll be soon enough. 

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Thank you Verly, Corker and Halae Dral! Yay! Posted Image

Looking forward to the next prompt!

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Well, my last time estimate was a bit over-optimistic, but it's only a little past being the same day! :?


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Prompt: Temptation

Could be anything from what you think a demon would be most likely to offer Zevran in the Fade (or does, in the case of Sloth) to an intense urge to play a practical joke on someone - or something else entirely that I haven't thought of. Funny, serious, resisting it or giving in, what have you.

Time Limit: 3 hours
Deadline: Tuesday midnight (EST)  April 26th
Prize:  I can draw something for you. Whatever you want, within reason (by 'reason' I mean mostly 'my ability to do so'). I can also try and write something, if you prefer, but expect that to take at least twice as long.

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Grats, Hilde! :D

@Halae Dral, oooh, innnteresting prompt!  :D  Here's hoping for a good turnout, seems like there'd be a lot of ways to interpret this one :)

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I did this as a very very scribbly sketch as a pressie for jenovan and minaleth, but Danijou has transformed it!!

Note how Zev has managed to get himself into the middle. This was entirely accidental and my subconcious at work, I feel.

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Awwww, the colored version is very awesome!
I liked also your sketch, this pairing (tripling?) must have happened :3

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I can't believe I just found this thread... a warning to lore purists... my Zevran is slightly modded..
anyways my Dalish mage Tempest just found the love of her life..
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...at least he honors the ancient Dalish tradition of midrift-baring armor. ;) And so... completely!

(I do like the addition of the earring, though!)

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do you have a link to that zev mod?

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Those boots...!

That earring...!

By Zevran's fashion accessories combined... <3

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I've been trying to write fanfiction, but I think my writing style is booring.  I don't know if I'm just being completely anal retentive or not, but I feel like I just write pages and pages of conversation... I feel like it's lacking something, but I can't figure out how to break up all the dialogue.

Here's a sample, if anyone here is willing to critique, I'll be imensely grateful. 

_______________________________
(Prologue explanation:  King Davend Couseland doesn't like loose ends, lucky for him he has a loyal assassin in his court who is more than willing to take care of their problem.  Zevran was eager to move on, as they decided  for the sake of Davend's duty to the throne, their love can not be.  Zevran is on a last mission for the throne, to find Alistair and ether bring him back to the Order of the Grey, or execute him.  I intend to write some stuff fleshing out the nature of the party members' relationships, mind you.  Basicly, Davend was not the kindest lover or most sympathetic friend.)

Zevran watched Alistair from the shadows outside the small inn tavern and waited for him to turn in for the night.  He’d been trailing him for awhile, assessing the situation.  Alistair as it seems had become quite sloppy.  Wandering aimlessly, spending more time at inn taverns than on the road anymore.  Zevran had expected him to pick up on the fact that he was being followed… more and more closely.  He was never the sharpest or most insightful of Zevran’s past traveling companions, but he’d never seemed this much a fool.  He had always seemed shy, awkward, and lacking confidence, but there had also been a pride in his training and sense of principal that seemed to be the only thing he lived for.  Sad, Zevran mused, that he may have given up even that to the drink.

One hour, two hours, enough time for the man in the tiny inn room to have sobered up a little.  As the man entered deep sleep, Zevran eased himself through the window, and silently sat down his bag before leaning over the slumbering drunk to look at his face, peaceful, lit dimly by the soft moon light.  Then he found himself on the other side of the little room, sliding down the wall.  It was only when he hit the floor, limbs sprawled, that he came to his senses and looked up to see Alistair sitting… no, crouched… at the edge of the bed, shield in hand.  Sword near enough by.

“He sent you, didn’t he?!  Or was it the ****?” Alistair hissed the words at him, trying not to make any more noise than was already made.  No need getting helpless Inn keepers involved.

Zevran could only manage a startled look for the moment as he checked his head for injury and tried to collect himself.

“If they wish me dead, I’ll duel to the death, gladly!  Preferably with him, but you will do.”  Alistair was in a rambling rage now, hardly able to keep his voice low.  “After the time we spent fighting side by side, the least you could do is let me go out fighting...”

His voice was tinged with hurt, and it made Zevran wince slightly, remembering the Landsmeet… remembering Alistair’s expression as Lohgain was spared and Anora ordered the execution.  The humiliation of the bastard prince’s life being in the hands of the new king… the man who stole the throne from Alistair right when he was finally ready to accept it… suddenly thinking it merciful to spare him.  It had been strange to the Antivan.  Strange to see a cu not end in bloodshed.  Stranger still to actually find himself letting out a breath he’d not known he’d been holding.  Fate is a tricky **** indeed!

“I suppose that would seem impractical to a Crow, to let some poor bastard prince die with some dignity, but I guess I thought we were friends…” Alistair sneered.
 
Zevran eyed the enraged Alistair wearily.  Zevran couldn’t help but feel as glad as startled at the turn of events.  A bit of a relief to see the fire still alight in his… friend.

“None of the above, my friend.  I was only sent to talk.  This I swear.”

“At midnight while I’m unconscious?  Why do I doubt that?  What, you couldn’t join an ‘old friend’ at the bar for a drink?”

“Perhaps some old habits  do die hard.  I wished to corner you while you were vulnerable and alone, yes.  Maybe it is my flair for the dramatic.” Zevran elaborated with a flourish of a hand.  “Maybe it was to avoid a public confrontation.  …  You ARE a dangerous and difficult man…  A man who has lost much… who has been, in his mind, badly betrayed.  Such volatile circumstances!  Naturally I would wish to have privacy… and the upper hand, you see.”

“Yeah… that worked out really well for you.” Alistair said sardonically, as his stance eased, and arms crossed.

“Mmmmn… Not…my proudest moment… to be certain. *smirk*  It’s good to see such fire in you, my friend.”

Alistair looked defeated then, casting his gaze down and saying sorrowfully, “Well…  I’d like to at least have some dignity in death… that’s all.  My honor has been stripped of me, and yet… I’m not yet forgotten.”

“So…. You wish to drink until the memory fades away…” Zevran filled in, finding his feet and hoisting himself into the lone chair wedged between the foot of the bed and the wall of the tiny room.

“What else is there?” Alistair sat down on the edge of the bed looking dejected, "I…. I failed… I failed at being the heir to the throne.  I was never a true templar…  And then… then I failed at ending the blight.” Alistair spoke with a cracking voice full of despair,  “Failed at being the one thing that ever gave me meaning in life!  I walked out.  I… I don’t even deserve a noble end…”

A sly smile stretched Zevran‘s lips, “My dear Alistair… why do you wish to give yourself to the drink?  Surely… there are faster ways to die… if that is what you wish…”

Softly, grimly, obliviously Alistair countered “Hmph… Yeah… maybe I’m not as quick to fall upon my blade as I think I should be.  But that’s irrelevant.  I’ll die someday”

Zevran‘s eyes lit up,  “I could always make sweet love to you until you no longer have your wits about you, lost as you would be to the throws of passion, and then sink my… blade… deep … into your heart….” Zevran grinned wickedly.

“I think I’ll pass.  Just because I don’t deserve a noble end doesn’t mean I don‘t want one.”

*blinking in comical mock bemusement at Alistair’s statement* “In Antiva, they say the story of a noble who wins the affections of a Crow, has… a happy ending…”

“Or so the saying goes” Alistair interjected flatly.

Zevran chuckled “I’ve given many a noble mark a happy ending, my friend.  I’m quite the generous and affectionate character, you know.”

“Yeeeaaah…. That thought is… disturbing…”  Alistair drawled awkwardly.  As much as the familiarity was a relief, he’d never gotten over it…  Over the idea of someone… even thinking… that there was such pleasure in death… that sex could…. Alistair shuttered involuntarily and gave up on that train of thought.

Zevran was eyeing him silently now.  Intently.  Alistair shifted uncomfortably realizing the comic effect it must have, the way his shield is positioned on his lap.

Zevran finally spoke up, tapping his chin thoughtfully, “Ah, of course, you know, I would not need to end it, in your case.”

“Hm… All of the happy and none of the ending?  How could I say no to that?” Alistair said with a sarcastic smirk.

He was pleased at the sincere laugh he won from Zevran.  Something he’d always been good for… a laugh, he thought.

“Well, maybe I can give you a different kind of happy?”  Zevran said with an amicable smile  “What I was sent here for…”

Alistair stiffened at the reminder that there was business to attend to, the reminder of the past that looms over them, jarring in his drunken haze.  It surprised him a little… he realized he’d actually been having something like fun bull****ting with the Assassin. 

 “Right…”

Alistair watched as Zevran reached over to a bag and pulled out a large kite shield.  A very familiar shield, for he had once seen one much like it.  But this one was different, he noticed.  Was that Dragon bone or Silverite?  What he COULD see was that this shield was much higher quality… This one had the crest of the Grey Wardens engraved and blackened deep into it’s surface, which gleamed white metallic.

“A gift from the king.”  Zevran stated simply, handing it to him with much circumstance, as though it were some ancient relic or delicate treasure.

“Why?”  Alistair uttered, stunned, as he stared down at the handsome shield.

“He’s not truly a cruel man, Alistair… at least not intentionally.”  Zevran said staring down at Alistair with a wistful look in his eyes.  “It was all merely a practical matter.  You were a victim of circumstance.  That is over now.”

Alistair eyed Zevran skeptically.  “You always did see more in him than I could…”

“And visa versa” Zevran replied with a crooked smirk.

“Truly?  I thought he treated you terribly.”  Alistair said with a look of disapproval.

Zevran laughed “It’s good to know you still care, my dear Alistair, but… mmmm… I suppose you could say he and I learned much from each other during our adventure.  And the sex, well, that was sex.  Used or not there was pleasure to be had. …Oh, what pleasures to be had!”  Zevran grinned broadly.

Alistair looked troubled “Yeah… well… I could never see using someone like that.”

Zevran laughed flippantly and waved it off  “We had made a bargain, at the time, he and I.  I got to live, and I served him.  Over all he was a fine master, compared to most.”

Alistair grimaced.  There was much he disapproved of about the elf, but he couldn’t help but to… care.  The more he learned of Zevran, the more he had to respect him.  Even like him, some of the time.

“That was really enough…?” Alistair asked softly, his voice betraying his feelings.

Zevran smiled at this “There is much hidden beneath the façade of cold calculation.  There was a… familiarity I suppose.  I am used to people like him.”

“So he wasn’t just… you know…?”

Zevran looked like he had more to say, but hesitated.  “He said…  well… no…”

“What?  No really, I’m… fascinated”

“Ah… it is very… personal…”  Zevran was noticeably flustered.

“You’re … EMBARESED.  And now I’m even MORE fascinated.”  Alistair said playfully.

Zevran groaned “Alright… since it is pertinent to your understanding…  He said… “

Alistair was resting his elbows on knees now, hands cupping ether side of his face.  In a sing-song voice he interupted  “…do tell…”

“You are such a CHILD sometimes.”  Zevran shook his head in one part frustration, and one part amusement.

“He said…”  Zevran’s face became quite serious, and he averted his eyes from Alistair’s mocking “… He told me that I…”  Zevran’s expression softened now, emotion in his eyes…a very new sight for Alistair, who dropped all pretence of mockery. 

“He told me that my kindness was his saving grace”, Zevran said quietly. “He said that had I not been at his side, had I not spoken my mind, that he surely would have become the tyrant that Loghain became.…He… only saw that after having acquired him…  Much alike, the two.” 

Alistair simply stared, stunned.. 

“He… actually said that?”  Alistair stammered in shock.

“Indeed…” Zevran replied, smiling softly “…it is… a very personal thing…”

“Yeah”  Alistair responded, as the weight of it sank in.

Zevran turned to face him then, and spoke seriously. “He will be a good king, and will not be bullied by Annora.  Of this I am certain.  Likewise, do not believe you no longer hold clout, my friend.  On the contrary.  He sent me to stop you from doing anything foolish… from making a fool of yourself… “

“Yeah… NOW THAT last bit sounds more like him.” Alistair interrupted.

Zevran smiled “But it’s true!  The king would like for you to head to Soldier’s Peek and take the mantel of Ferelden’s Commander of the Grey Wardens.  No small honor, yes?”

Alistair gawked at him in disbelief “Seriously?  But… how… after the way I was shamed… and how I ran off like some coward afterward… “

“You are not a man who believes in redemption, are you?”  Zevran sneered mockingly. 

Alistair gave him a quizical little half smile, then replied softly “So…. What do I need to do… ?”

Zevran became all business once more, pacing slightly in that small space between the bed and the wall as he recounted the briefing “It will be no easy task, but if you are willing, there is work to be done.  Orzamar is still struggling to hold back the darkspawn in the Deep Roads.  With the Legion of the Dead fighting the Blight topside, much of the ground we captured there was left open for the Darkspawn to reclaim.  They press dangerously close to Orzamar.  The miners can not even enter the tunnels as they have been temporarily sealed.  As you can imagine, they will blame the King for this if Ferelden does not return the favor that the Dwarves did us, and if the trade with Orzamar dries up, not only will Ferelden be out some of her top importers of produce, but will be without the fine material exports so needed to secure this land from foreign hands.  The threat is so dire that it is even straining relations between the Chantry of Ferelden and that of Orlais, and I do not think I need elaborate on the warfare that could be waged in the name of religious fervor.   But of course, The king can not do this himself, Grey warden or no, from the throne.”

Alistair stared blankly, completely caught off guard by all this.  Zevran eyed him for a moment, wondering if a word of it was sinking in or if the poor fool is in shock.

“You… do understand the task at hand, yes?”

Alistair blinked and stammered like a kid caught daydreaming by his instructor. “I… ar…yeaaa… I think so…but… wow… I mean… I hadn‘t even thought about…”

“If you can put together a small company of wardens and other likeminded darkspawn hunting individuals, and reclaim even one of the old thaiges, that alone would earn you great respect as a commander of the Grey, yes?  The king certainly can not carry the mantel of the Wardens himself…  And besides…  He knew this was what mattered to you.”

“Do you mean to tell me he thought he was doing it for my good?”  Alistair looked taken aback.

“Yes… and no.” Zevran settled against the wall, leaning nonchalantly,  “It was not JUST for you, naturally.”  Zevran smiled “But you ran off before they could tell you why a Grey Warden is needed to stop a blight.“  Zevran’s tone had become grave “Reordan explained it to him, after you left.  A Grey Warden must strike the final blow or else the tainted old god’s soul will simply jump to a new host.  Only a Grey Warden can kill an Archdemon, because the Warden must die as well.“  He paused to let Alistair take all this in.

“How did he know…?!”

“When Reordan urged you two to spare Loghain so that you might make him a Warden, Davend thought it strange… so he played it safe.  He’d known you’d be unhappy but did not expect you to leave like you did.  But of course, when Reordan explained himself, Davend did not regret it.  You had not wished to be king initially, so why shouldn’t Davend take the throne? …and to see you die fighting the Archdemon would be such a waste!  A pointless loss of a great warrior, yes?”

“*sigh*  I guess I can’t argue with… wait, did he really call me a great warrior?”

“Mmmnn.. I do not remember exactly… those may be my words.” Zevran quirked an eyebrow at him.

“In that case…”  Alistair responded sheepishly “…thank you.”

“Nothing of it, my dear warden.”

Something about that last line gave him pause, but Alistair was quick to move on.  So much of this news having his head spinning as it was.

Alistair cleared his throat “I… I don’t know how I can face the world, after running off like I did.  And to lead the Wardens after Loghain was made their hero… “  Alistair shook his head bitterly.

“Surely there are more important matters in this world than symbolic gestures and past embarrassments.”  Zevran argued.

“I… I know that all makes sense…but…”

Zevran stopped him then, looking tired.  “No doubt.  Maybe you should sleep on it?  And… I could help you with that…” Zevran gave his flirtiest smile knowing the reaction he would get.

“Yeah.  I mean no!  I mean whaaat?”  The hung over Alistair sputtered.

 “I know a massage that is sure to leave you relaxed.” Zevran purred, leaning forward and grinning at the hapless drunk.

“No… just… just… no…” Alistair blushed so furiously even the cold light of the moon couldn’t wash the color from his face.

“HaHa!  Still the same old Alistair, I see!”  Zevran gloated gleefully.

“Still the same pervert elf, I see!”  Alistair sighed exasperatedly but still smirked back at him.  There really was something about the familiarity that put him at ease.  ‘Maybe some things don’t change, no matter how bad things go wrong‘, Alistair mused.

“I suppose I should go check in downstairs, and let you get your sleep.” Zevran finally asserted after a moment of awkward silence.

“Don’t bother.  Hate to say it but this was the last room.  Too many people are still out of doors from the marauding Darkspawn.”

“…Ah… A shame.” Zevran looked hesitant despite himself “…I should go set camp…”

Alistair hated this.  He really did.  “No.  You can stay here.  I’m not going to put you out in the cold at… Maker only knows what ungodly time of the morning this is.”

“Thank you.” Zevran was sincerely surprised.  Floor space was nearly non existent, but he’d slept in smaller spaces before.

“I…. “  Alistair looked unnerved “I know there’s no room… just… promise you won’t… you know… try anything…”  Alistair scooted over to let Zevran into the bed.  At least it was a double-size bed.

Zevran was careful to hide his utter shock at this latest twist in the plot.  Of course!  Bastard he may be, but Alistair probably couldn’t imagine sleeping in a space the size of a wardrobe…. Much less forcing any one else to.  ‘Ah, my lady luck still smiles upon me’ Zevran thought.  “I won’t take advantage.  …Are you quite sure you‘ll be able to sleep?”  Zevran could see that Alistair looked tense, laying prone and stiff as a board, despite his efforts to be casual about the situation.

“Maybe it’s the alchahol talking but… yeah… I mean… You’re a man… what’s there to get… well…you know… about…”

“Oh… plenty… if you wanted me to…”

“Oh… see…that’s the point right there… I don’t want you to.”

Zevran chuckled “Then I assure you I will not where out my welcome, my friend.”

Zevran carefully slid into the bed, on  the side against the wall farthest from the door.  Leaving an easy escape rout for Alistair, of course.

Five minutes, ten minutes, and Zevran was soon loosing track as he lay facing the chill of the thin inn wall, listened for the other man’s breathing to change, trying to seem asleep himself.  Alistair finally seemed satisfied that the assassin was not going to try anything  funny.  Zevran could feel him shifting to get comfortable next to him, breathing pattern deepening and slowing.  It was a good general rule when sharing a bed never to be the one who lets his guard down first.  Not that he felt threatened by the other man, but he doubted his Crow training would ever fully leave him. 

Zevran shifted onto his stomach, sleep finally clawing at the edge of his concousness, only to be caught off guard by a great weight hitting him in the back, trapping him against the lumpy mattress.  Zevran tensed instinctively, immediately fully awake once more, only to hear emanating from above him a loud strangled… snore.  Of course it was only his companion half sprawled atop him in his sleep, his body instinctively seeking warmth.  Zevran couldn’t help chuckling at the irony of his predicament as the strong limbs of the warrior curled and tightened around him in an embrace, and Zevran relaxed against him, surrendering to  a restful sleep at last.

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Zeleen

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frostajulie wrote...

do you have a link to that zev mod?

I don't he's a personal mod and I haven't (don't know how to) posted anything that I've done.

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Aroihkin

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@ES, I like your dialogue, but if you're looking for critique the main things I'd say right off are to stick to italics for emphasis -- capslock is just jarring in fic, and to leave any *describes what's going on* out entirely. Mixing multiple styles of narration just knocks a person straight out of what's going on. :33

I also like that your Warden in this one was an as*hole! Hooray not-fluffy "heroes". XDD

WIP update since it's been a few days,

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I naturally have to start the coloring with Zevran, because he is ridiculously awesome. And so is his skin tone.

Tattoos and such come later in my process, etc etc.

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@ Aro ~ Posted Image The gloves/gauntlets. Oh my. I really, really like the gloves.  Posted Image  It is amazing so far!

Modifié par Hilde, 22 avril 2011 - 07:59 .


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@Aro - you press a lot of buttons with this one :blink:
Let's see... Elves - not just any elves at that, but these thrPosted Imageee especially!And gauntlets! And Tannublood! 

I especially like that each has their own distinctive skin colour, just makes the whole thing just that much nicer.

Have you given thought to the background yet? 

Made of win! you are :)  

Modifié par elenilote, 23 avril 2011 - 05:40 .


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@EccentricSage
I like what you've written, really. It's interesting, and I'd love to see more! You have good dialog. The only things that need removal are the explanations, and sound effects in the speech (like "sigh"). And kill some adjectives, this can do no harm. :)

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This glorious art just appeared in my watchlist

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I think I'm going to sleep after this.

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frostajulie

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oh my! stunning is such a trite word but there it is.

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I'm trying to figure out if that's a scrape on Zev's belly, or lipstick marks ;)

*keeps appraising the abs...*

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Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...

I'm trying to figure out if that's a scrape on Zev's belly, or lipstick marks ;)


My first thought was lipstick marks: it would be so delightfully appropriate.

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