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[Bitenomnom]

Zaxarus wrote...


Your so beautiful for me

Time Limit: 3 hours

Deadline: 8am GMT Monday 17th October

Mine is more than the 8-12 line guideline cited in the prompt, since I made the whole thing into sort-of a poem (ish) -- so if that's breaking a rule, feel free to consider it a non-entry.

Elfroot is Bitter
Time: 1 hr 30 min
Prompts: 1

If it's a quarter as much fun to read as it was to write, I'll be happy. XD


EDIT: Ooh, I actually have a halfway reasonable ToP image:

Modifié par Bitenomnom, 12 octobre 2011 - 11:47 .

[Tryynity]

*squeals and faints* 


if the camera angle was just a bit lower... 

He has the best legs Ive ever seen on a guy.... seriously....


TYVM Bite !!!! hahaha


EDIT :  We know the writer... we know the voice.... do we know the model ???   anyone?? *snickers*

Modifié par Tryynity, 13 octobre 2011 - 02:44 .

[Zaxarus]

@Tryynity
There goes the misbelief women don't leer as men would. 

@Bite

I like it. It contents
- scene
- poetry
- reaction.
All i wanted to see.

Zaxarus

Edit: Bite, you just now gave me my first humorous moment this day. I wondered about your name and had to google the nomnom-part. Like it.

Modifié par Zaxarus, 13 octobre 2011 - 06:52 .

[Bitenomnom]

 @Trynnity: I know, right? I can't remember if I just couldn't get that angle, or if it (for whatever reason) didn't occur to me...ah well. Zev sure does have some nice legs...

@Zaxarus: Yay, thanks! Glad you like it.
As for the name thing -- I do wonder what you found when you googled the "nomnom" bit! It's just supposed to be a silly variation on the "om nom nom" phrase that's associated with eating. So hopefully you didn't find anything too outrageous or traumatizing in the process of searching for that.
(Heh, I think almost everybody leers. Some of us are just less ashamed about it. XD I myself am an equal-opportunity leerer, so to speak, so I suppose I get more opportunities than some. )

Modifié par Bitenomnom, 13 octobre 2011 - 08:02 .

[Tryynity]

lol

Zev is good at any angle

I will oneday prove this theory hahaha

I did a Surana begining - what is the rating for BIOWARE blogs/forums?
 
-  lots of swearing and sexually explicit suggestions directed at certain ppls - I can bleep it but I think that would spoil it somewhat...  Im thinkin MA (18+) is that allowed or will I have to take it to FanFic  or further away perhaps -  haha

Modifié par Tryynity, 13 octobre 2011 - 08:38 .

[Zaxarus]

Tryynity wrote...

I did a Surana begining - what is the rating for BIOWARE blogs/forums?
 
-  lots of swearing and sexually explicit suggestions directed at certain ppls - I can bleep it but I think that would spoil it somewhat...  Im thinkin MA (18+) is that allowed or will I have to take it to FanFic  or further away perhaps -  haha

Sorry, but surely not MA. I've seen here more than one declaration of a mod in this direction. Anyone can read here, so i would think it's more a T-rating. About fanfic: as i only yesterday had to confirm (i started my own page there this week and plan to transfer my diary), fanfiction.net (if you mean that site) has a M rating. For MA+ you have to use the site Corker mentioned (dragonage-kink). A very nice site, but i better be quiet about which stories i like there the most.

Zaxarus
Appetite you may get on the street, but eating is at home (don't know the the right english phrase, this would be a more word by word translation)


Edit@Corker
Nono, right that (eating noise) i found. But in my language you use something other and so i didnt recognize the syllables.

Edit 2:
How do i see the number of my postings here in the forum? I have the feeling to be here too much already.

Modifié par Zaxarus, 13 octobre 2011 - 09:13 .

[Aroihkin]

There's also AO3 ( http://archiveofourown.org/ ) which allows any rating. I have one invitation I can give out, although their waiting list isn't bad. The waiting list is how I got in.

Modifié par Aroihkin, 13 octobre 2011 - 09:55 .

[Tryynity]

Its not really bad - Ive seen worse on FanFic - Im more concerned about here but yes I would guess at T
 
hmmm - Im thinking maybe not to be safe.

Ratings confuse me... I let my kids watch some M rated where I wont let them watch some PG stuff its crazy...

Modifié par Tryynity, 13 octobre 2011 - 10:13 .

[Sialater]

I hope this is new.  By: Mavrosh

[Sushifer]

Writing haiku, huh?
Not something I’ve ever tried
Oh wait, I just did.

So now I’m thinking
Why stop at one? This is fun!
Nothing could go wrong.



So, I’m still drawing
Zevran, naturally, who else?
Here, look, if you like.



Practice makes perfect
I’d say I’m getting the knack
What do you guys think?

I’ll keep on grappling
With Zevran’s difficult face
Because hey, he’s hot.



First it’s limericks
You think, sure, where’s the harm?
But you can’t stop there.

I’m trapped, no way out
Forever five seven five
Stuck in poetry

Hope you’re all happy
My speech is now entirely
Reduced to haiku.

[Sialater]

Laughing my ass off
An entire post written with
Short, intact poems

[Bitenomnom]

@Sushifer:
I thought I would speak in haiku,
To come off just as clever as you,
But I'm stuck once I stick
To writing limerick
So I guess this will just have to do:

Your Zev sketch, I see, is quite pretty;
That there's only the one is a pity.
That devious smirk
Would sure set me to work
To map a path to Antiva City

You'll probably think it's in jest
When I say that his nose is the best
But his nostril is lovely
Makes me over-bubbly
And a thwump-a-wump sound in my chest

Finally I must say that his chin
Is the first thing that did draw me in
And the shape of his cheeks
And the slight widow's-peak
Make one hot elven assassin 

For the record and to say it quickly,
I know my comments weren't picky,
So, for future reviews,
If it's okay with you
My words will be less limericky. 

Modifié par Bitenomnom, 13 octobre 2011 - 09:52 .

[Hilde]

Zaxarus wrote...



Your so beautiful for me

Describe a scene wherein Zevran recites a poem or song about your character. May be to seduce him/her, to thank for a wonderful night or for her/his friendship (Zevran not being a LI), something humorous about a flaw/spleen of your character or a requiem after a martyr ending.
Should include a (short, around 8-12 lines as an indication) poem/songtext.

Time Limit: 3 hours

Zaxarus

Lions of the Horizon

Time: 2 1/2 hours
Prompts: 3

My poem ended up at only 7 lines, hope that is ok!

Must say, I am in awe of the conversations here via poetry and limerick! Very cool.

[Tryynity]

Sialater wrote...



I hope this is new.  By: Mavrosh

*NOSEBLEED*

... thats one of my all time favourites....

/grabs a new tissue

[Zaxarus]

Reading all this poetry i'm down-and-out. What have i started?

@Tryynity
Yes, a very nice picture. Reminds me of a sentence in "The whole nine Yards" (with Bruce Willis). Amanda Peet is standing in an open door, light behind her, she fully naked with a gun in her hand.
Michael Clarque Duncan: "There's nothing so sexy as a naked woman with a gun".
Or Zevran with a knife.

Oh, yesterday i started a Nemain 2nd PT (to make screenshots i forgot). In the first scene Gorim says something similar about the heroine rushing into battle, naked with blazing axes in her hands.

Edit: mmm, i really have to make a screenshot. I need a respec mod (for dualwielding axes), 2 nice axes and flaminge runes. *add to the to-do-list*

Modifié par Zaxarus, 14 octobre 2011 - 06:32 .

[Sresla]

In case anyone missed it - although I think SoLD has done a good job at getting the word out - the Bioware Mark of the Assassin contest is now also accepting fan fiction (1000 words or less) entries. And *cough* who better to write about assassins than Zevran's fans? It was a contest we were all made to enter!

I urge everyone to try and scribble something (art, writing, maybe sami jo can felt a Tallis or payroo will write a song!) and send it in... after making time for the weekly prompts, that is.

Zevran struggled to write a haiku,
Asked Leliana, "What should I do?
"I cannot say what I feel,
but it feels very real,
and Wynne wants me to bid him adieu."

The bard made a sound of disgust,
"Wynne thinks what you feel is lust,
but I've seen how you stare,
and it wouldn't be fair,
to stay, I believe that you must."

The poem, it started off fine,
It had meter, it even rhymed!
Veiled, yet clear
about all he held dear,
"I am yours and I hope you are mine."

(I really need to go to bed)

Modifié par Sresla, 14 octobre 2011 - 09:38 .

[Tryynity]

Oooo that sounds great -  I dont have DA2 or Mark of Assassin - I have seen the trailers though - I swear the Tallis character is almost a carbon copy of my Elven Acrobat Rogue Character - red hair and blue eyes and drop dead freakin beautiful ....

I should tweet them this picture of Kyora - she is the one at the back...

I wonder if I could write about her but call her Tallis ?






Game look awesome though - looking more and more forward to getting into it...

Modifié par Tryynity, 14 octobre 2011 - 09:38 .

[Klidi]

all of you - you, are ridiculously awesome. I still struggle with my poem attempt for the challenge, so I won't even try to write limericks hrere.
@Sushifer - I love that drawing, that smirk is perfect.

[Sushifer]

Bite, I bow to you
Counting syllables? Easy!
In rhyme, true skill lies.

Bite and Kild, for those
Kind words, my thanks, I’m flattered
And glad you enjoyed.

Fanfiction allowed?
How unusual! How great!
I’ll have to enter.

Glorious to see
Verse from all: Sresla joins in
Sialater too.

Sushifer has learnt:
Haiku are easy to write
Less so to escape.

[Sialater]

What is the topic?
What is the prompt? For if there
are none, "Not Enough" I will send.

[tklivory]

Zaxarus wrote...



Your so beautiful for me

Describe a scene wherein Zevran recites a poem or song about your character. May be to seduce him/her, to thank for a wonderful night or for her/his friendship (Zevran not being a LI), something humorous about a flaw/spleen of your character or a requiem after a martyr ending.
Should include a (short, around 8-12 lines as an indication) poem/songtext.

Time Limit: 3 hours

Zaxarus

Then It Was Over

Time: 1.5 hours

Hopefully I did this right.  I've never done a prompt for this thread before, so please correct me if I'm doing it wrong.  Thanks!

I wish I could write limericks...  Harrumph.   Thanks for the laughs, peoples!

Edit: fixed.  Thanks!

Modifié par tklivory, 15 octobre 2011 - 06:32 .

[Tryynity]

Hello and welcome to the thread tklivory - you did it more right than I did the first time I think.... going to read it now

[Zaxarus]

Welcome Tklivory,
it was (almost) correct as far as i see. As i learned myself only a few days ago the "prompt x" means how many prompts you have started (as i did with this one), not how many you have written. So presumably it is "prompt 0" for you?

@All
do you know a map of Ferelden with distance informations / scale? In my second story i want to give calendar notes and wonder how long a journey would take par example from Denerim to Redcliffe. I only remember the statement "redcliffe-circle tower 1 day" and "redcliffe-denerim more than 2 days". In my opinion the scale is way to small for a country with 2 Arls and half a dozen Banns.

Modifié par Zaxarus, 15 octobre 2011 - 12:34 .

[Sresla]

SidheKate & Miliat did a write-up on distances:

http://social.biowar...ssion/6818/&p=1

[Zaxarus]

Thank you, Sresla, exactly what i searched for.