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Into the Tent

Wait, it’s not what you think! For this prompt, the Warden (or any other character!) has decided that the best way to learn what our favorite Antivan elf is all about is to observe his tent* and what he keeps in it while Zevran is away.  What does the character discover inside his tent? Something he/she likes? Something alarming? Zevran’s secret stash of [???]? It could be something very serious/shocking, that will alter the character’s perception of Zevran forever; it could be something sweet and touching; or it could just be something hilarious! And: Does the character get caught in the act?
(Alternatively, Zevran could be using this as a method of gathering information about the Warden or another character.)

* doesn’t necessarily have to be a tent, of course

Medium: Any!


Time: 50 mins

(I realised this story had no point in the end. Oh well! :D)

Surveillance

No one was watching, so he slunk into the tent.

The elf-man had attacked Mistress. Ferrix could not understand why Mistress had taken the elf-man with Her instead of he, but he didn't like it. Elf-man was like a cat who watched and purred while it pleased him, then swiped claws across your nose.

Ferrix sniffed the air. All the tents smelled different. Mistress's smelled like metal armour and leather, polish and oil. Sometimes it smelled faintly of rust, blood or sweat. Always it smelled like Home.

Elf-man's tent smelled more like wild-woman's, of plants and leather, but the leather was stronger and had different, interesting scents. This tent also smelled Male. Were elf-man a mabari he would be marking trees.

There was not much in this tent. Ferrix was hoping to find something he could present to Mistress to show the elf-man was a Bad Dog. The bed was made of blankets; nothing there. But padding across the gloomy interior he found a small backpack, and eagerly began mouthing at the buckles. People kept things in these. Wild-woman had kept plants. They had been very tasty, but she had known he'd eaten them! This time he would be careful.

The straps eventually gave to his patient pawing, and he stuck his nose inside. Definitely plants here, but he would not eat them. He shoved his muzzle further within and snuffled deeply.

Wait...Was that Meat?

Mouth starting to water, he gave a couple of items some curious licks. Not meat. He thrust his head in further and felt the leather creak around his neck. Items clinked together as he displacing them. A few more exploratory licks yielded only disappointment. There were Jars in here--he knew Jars. They contained Food but were hard to open, and sometimes didn't taste nice. He nosed half-heartedly at a lid for a few seconds before giving up and trying to pull his head out. When the leather caught around the new collar Mistress had given him for being a Good Dog, he lay carefully down and used his paws to tug at the leather. It took a little while, but he was Clever. Everyone said so. Ferrix is a Clever Boy!

His tail wagged and he panted happily at the bag. He had won! He was Clever!

But nothing to show Mistress. Elf-man had Food and Coins-That-Buy-Food. He had sharp things that Cut Food Up. There had been something soft...

Ferrix nosed around in the backpack again, which was now a little more moist that it had once been, and plucked the soft thing free with his jaws. He knew this thing! Mistress had these. Wild-woman had *lots* of these. Ferrix had left Prey in them once to show he was a Good Dog but she had scolded him.

Elf-man didn't have many toys. He only had one soft thing. It was sad. Soft things were good for chewing on.

He scooped it up and put it back in the bag. Then, because he was Clever, he manoeuvred it closed. He couldn't do up the buckles, but he could drag it back to where he'd found it.

There. He'd never figure it out.

Proud of himself, Ferrix crept to the tent door and peered outside, then trotted nonchalantly into the camp...

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Zevran: I noticed some dog drool in my pack this morning.
Dog: (Happy bark!)
Zevran: Not that I like to make accusations. And I even appreciate the artistry behind a good burgle when I see it, to tell the truth. But leaving all that drool as evidence? Sloppy.
Dog: (Happy bark!)
Zevran: I'll take that as an apology.
Dog: (Happy bark!)
Zevran: I'm so glad you're pleased. It really is quite something to find such enthusiasm in one's companions.
Dog: (Ecstatic bark!)
Zevran: I agree. Go, team. Hurrah.

Modifié par Shadow of Light Dragon, 15 janvier 2012 - 04:21 .


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All right! I'm back and just about to read/reread/comment/judge. X3 Hope to get my post up in the near future.

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Bitenomnom wrote...

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Into the Tent

Wait, it’s not what you think! For this prompt, the Warden (or any other character!) has decided that the best way to learn what our favorite Antivan elf is all about is to observe his tent* and what he keeps in it while Zevran is away.  What does the character discover inside his tent? Something he/she likes? Something alarming? Zevran’s secret stash of [???]? It could be something very serious/shocking, that will alter the character’s perception of Zevran forever; it could be something sweet and touching; or it could just be something hilarious! And: Does the character get caught in the act?
(Alternatively, Zevran could be using this as a method of gathering information about the Warden or another character.)

* doesn’t necessarily have to be a tent, of course


All right! This week there were, by my count, four ridiculously awesome entries. (Also it occurs to me how many prompts I’ve missed since school started getting me busy right before the holidays! Wow, there’s so much stuff everyone’s written that I haven’t caught up on…better make an effort to keep up this semester—while I can, anyway!)

First, we have Buried Treasure by Corker! While having an actual animated scene would certainly be really cool, your song/description definitely got the idea across—I feel like I had a pretty good vision of it as I read. (It would be neat to hear the song sometime! Unfortunately I can’t carry a tune, even in my head, so I’m sure there was a certain degree of underappreciation on my part, haha.) Very interesting discovery that Zevran makes! And I loved also having the description of his reaction to his find—the initial surprise and then subsequent shift into (as you put it) “no-strings-attached” mode. 

Next up: tklivory’s chilling Dark Desire. Jorath is certainly a striking character…I hope to read more about him in the future, especially since it seems like there’s a lot there…I thought Zevran’s going-into-town lie was very appropriate/well chosen/well done. The image of the mouse setting off the traps was particularly vivid for me, as was the description of Jorath’s usage of blood magic. Excellent stuff! I would love to see more of Jorath, particularly Jorath and Zevran! They seem to have a rather interesting relationship. Haha.
 
We also have RECONNOITRE by Tryynity. I thought the idea of another assassin showing up to try to finish the job Zevran started was intriguing, and starting it out with Zevran’s notes definitely piqued my interest. (Heh, I want to see what the others would be!) Oooh, now I want to know what happens next! Will there be more of this Kyora? She sounds…dangerous. *eyebrow-waggle*

Finally, we’ve got Shadow of Light Dragon’s Surveillance! I loved that it was from Dog’s point of view, and his perspective is fun to read (I thought the comparison to a cat was quite apt; his quest to find evidence that Zevran is a “Bad Dog” also made me giggle).The capitalization of various words also lent well to Ferrix’s point of view. (I love it when people do that. XD) And of course he would frame everything in terms of food, ha. “Soft things”…bahaha. Well done…even if Ferrix didn’t discover any “evidence” in the end. =p

So now for the tough part…argh. Well, I have to admit that I’m a sucker for humor…I’m going to have to pick “Surveillance” by Shadow of Light Dragon because it had me grinning the whole time I was reading it. Getting Dog’s perspective on Zevran was fun, especially with the comparisons to the other party members. Congrats! I will contact you about the art…and also want to make it known that I am painfully aware that I still haven’t finished Danijou’s prize from my last prompt forever ago. So I guess I should also warn you that while I fully intend to do so soon (hopefully tomorrow, but I feel like I'm jinxing myself saying that), I have to be fair and make sure to finish that one before finishing yours. >_> For which I apologize in advance. Profusely. Ahaha…hah. (Unless, of course, you for some odd reason wanted writing from me instead, in which case I might be able to get it done sooner because that just takes me a lot less time.) But anyway, yeah, congratulations, and thank you everybody! They were all great.

Who’s up next?

Modifié par Bitenomnom, 15 janvier 2012 - 05:23 .


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Congrats SOLD !!

Thank you Bite for a great comp and your nice comments. Possibly more Kyora at some point.

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@Tryynity: B'aww, no need to thank me. I feel bad because I ended up just commenting here instead of doing so on the individual pieces first as I'd intended...but now I'd feel silly going and doing that, since I'd prolly just babble about the same stuff. And hooray for possibly more Kyora! Seems like there are a lot of possibilities there... :3

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Also, I don't remember if I ever thanked everyone here who took the time to read and comment on the first chapter of "Camouflage" so I wanted to do that now in case I didn't. Thank you so much, you guys. X3 I put up the second chapter last week and hope to post the third tomorrow...it still feels really weird to be actually writing it, haha.

Modifié par Bitenomnom, 15 janvier 2012 - 07:39 .


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Oh great XD I get embarrassed when throwaway fics win, hehehe. Thank you!

(I'm on 4 prompts and I think Corker is the same, so Tryy or tkliv?)

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@SoLD: Whaaa, are you insulting my taste? =p Haha, but no, you're very welcome.

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FUNNY CAPTION
Find a picture/screenshot of Zevran that you think is funny - and caption it.
(If you dont know how ask me)
or

ZEVRAN MOTIVATIONAL

Turn a Zevran picture/screenshot into a funny motivational.
(LINK http://bighugelabs.com/motivator.php )

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Time: No more than 3hrs
Deadline: 22nd Jan 2011 @12pm GST

PS - Enter as many pictures as you like... if all completed within 3hr limit.



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Modifié par Tryynity, 23 janvier 2012 - 06:29 .


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great job guys!

shadow: what do you mean there's no point? of course there's a point! it's... to flesh out the party banter! and congrats on winning. i was thinking of something like this, but no way could i have done it in so much detail and with so much care. i'm glad you did!


tryyn: zomg... so many screencaps, so little time :X i like this one, it sounds easy and fun! and relaxing. i could use relaxing about now.

hey guys...
i'm going to start working again on zevran's poser head morph. i need a lot of feedback, because i get caught up in niggling around with it and it wanders south into left field. is it okay if i post the WIPs here? i dont want to spam the thread or nothin'. or i can post to my blog like i did with bannon's head.

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OMG Ferrix the Underwear Bandit! XD XD

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Yep - I chose this coz a lot of people seem inactive - thinking they might be too busy - or maybe they just playing all their new games for christmas.

I can add a story prompt in there if ppl prefer to write something. I forgot to add that last night.

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Tryynity wrote...

Yep - I chose this coz a lot of people seem inactive - thinking they might be too busy - or maybe they just playing all their new games for christmas.

I can add a story prompt in there if ppl prefer to write something. I forgot to add that last night.


No, I love it.  A nice change of pace, a different way to show the lurv for Zevran. :happy:

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I like the prompt even with me not participating active this time. It is nothing i'm good with. :)
And for the xmas games: i've got "witcher" and finished it friday evening, so i should have more time again now.

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Zaxarus wrote...

I like the prompt even with me not participating active this time. It is nothing i'm good with. :)
And for the xmas games: i've got "witcher" and finished it friday evening, so i should have more time again now.



It is easy to do - thats why I chose it.  I cannot do anything arty - but even I can do this.  If you want to have a go, I can show you how.

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FUNNY CAPTION
Find a picture/screenshot of Zevran that you think is funny - and caption it.
(If you dont know how ask me)
or

ZEVRAN MOTIVATIONAL

Turn a Zevran picture/screenshot into a funny motivational.
(LINK http://bighugelabs.com/motivator.php )

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MY NON - ENTRIES

If the assassination business in Antiva goes quiet, maybe they could go into the greeting business...

Its your birthday ? The ANTIVAN CROWS send their regards.....

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Modifié par Tryynity, 16 janvier 2012 - 01:16 .


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A repeat non-entry! I did this for the "voyeur" prompt a while back:

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I got the idea from reading the past prompts... it sounded fun and different and easy enough I can do it.

You dont have to even put the words on the screenshot for the funny caption one.

Plus, this thread need more viewage...

Modifié par Tryynity, 16 janvier 2012 - 01:19 .


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:ph34r:*sneaks in and drops off a long overdue story series update*

Once Upon a Time: Shale

*sneaks out again secure in the knowledge that everyone will have forgotten the series ever existed because it's been so long since an update...*:ph34r:

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Aaah, a new tale at last, juhu.
But your new avatar, gurgel, i don't like.

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Zaxarus wrote...

Aaah, a new tale at last, juhu.
But your new avatar, gurgel, i don't like.


That's Jorath.  He's a creepy guy.  Not sure how long I'll keep him, it is certainly a change-up from Dailana...

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THAT's jorath?? i didnt picture his scar so huge. innnnnteresting.

::falling outta chair laffing at tryyn's non-entries::

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Congrats, SOLD! That was great. Ferris sure is Clever. :lol:
"Were elf-man a mabari he would be marking trees." Bwahaha, now I have this mental image of Zev marking trees. :) 


I'm currently ill - inflammation of the sciatic nerve. Or as my cute two year old niece put it, my butt hurts. And my painkillers make me sleepy and unfocused, even if pain in ass really helps when writing angsty characters. Did you know that? :P

Anyway, this was supposed to be my entry for 'In the tent' challenge: Heavy Glow

This is my non-entry for caption challenge. I have one for the entry, I just currently can't come up with anything funny. 
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And this is neither entry nor non-entry, this is just a shameless plugin for my new Zev/femCousland story. Not a 'female version of FTF', there won't be much fluff there. And it's another slow romance. Ignis Internum

And now I'm off to read everyone's stories! :lol:

@Bloodsong - it's Zev, so I think it's quite ok to post it here.

Modifié par Klidi, 18 janvier 2012 - 12:52 .


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Tryynity wrote...

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FUNNY CAPTION

Deadline: 22nd Jan 2011 @12pm GST

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Title: um, i didn't think of one.  something flamey or fiery.
Time:  less than 10 min, so far
Prompts: 1

   oh, these aren't my screen caps.  they're a friend of a friend's that the friend posted to some forum.  i dont think i have any screen caps with zevran... hrm.  anyway... on with the show!

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Bannon:  All right, I didn't want to have to do this... but you leave me no choice!  I give you...


THE SMOULDER!

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Zevran: Pah!  I give you  Hot, Sexy, Assassin!

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Zevran:  HAH!  Assassin wins!!

Bannon:  What wins?  You set the place on fire!

Zevran:  I win because I am clearly hotter than you!

Bannon:  You're not going to get any women with that!  Unless they want to be burned to a crisp.

Zevran:  You are just jealous because I have a fully engorged flame, while you can't get it past a tiny wisp of smoke from your smoulder.

Bannon:  What!?!?  ::eyes flare::  WHY YOU SON OF A---!!  ::attacks!::

*****::FIGHT!!!::*****


Bloodsong (over the sound of crashing and breaking furniture in the background):  well, that will get them out of my hair for a while.

Bannon, yelling in the background:  You are SO not getting any tonight!

Zevran, yelling back:  Why?  Is your little smouldering ember going out?

Bannon, yelling in the background:  OH, you are not getting any FOR A WEEK!

Zevran, yelling and trying to stop laughing:  You have that much trouble?  My dear friend, perhaps I can show you how to rub two sticks together, no?

EVERYONE:  NO!!!

(more sounds of crashing and someone getting pummeled in the background)



   um... right, sorry.  i have another one that is funnier.  i'll work on that...  ::wanders off muttering about how i can't find anything in my brain in all the debris and clutter...::

Modifié par BloodsongVengeance, 18 janvier 2012 - 04:24 .


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Sorry for the absent-ness.  Work has been irritating of late.  But, K-Laine finished a commission for me and I had to share!

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@Klidi

I like your Ignis-story. Please go on. :)