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Maybe it will end with the Warden walking off with their LI if they have one. It would be the easiest thing in the world to have Leliana, Zevran, or Alistair show up but not have any lines and just walk away together.


Honestly, that is what I'm hoping for.  It would be easy, inexpensive, and make many people happy.  So my guess is, it won't be done!


That would be a reason to buy it. :wub: (I've become so very modest after all these experiences since Awakening...)

Edit: Page top - I still like this picture which Payroo made for Jenovan
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Prompt: Zevran, the Instrument of Fate

 


I swear, I used to color in the lines and RTFM and everything. 

The idea that grabbed me is AU, so it probably shouldn't qualify for the competition (as it arguably isn't really Zevran).  Credit to the kmeme anon who requested dalish!Zevran and especially to Jenovan, who realized it so wonderfully.

This isn't Jenovan's dalish!Zev, but it is a dalish!Zev.

Falon'Din's Reach

"It burns!  Please... kill me..."

Morwen Amell stared at the werewolf.  "But... I'm a healer.  I can help - "

"No!  There is no help!"  Danyla shook her massive head.  "The pain... I cannot..."  She growled, claws flexing, seeking something to tear into, something that might ease the blood frenzy.  "Please, I beg you..."

The guide Zathrian had sent with them stepped silently past her, within the compass of those too-long, furred arms.  She had gone down to one knee, so he had to problem embracing her, his head resting near her ears, flat against her head in pain.  "Danyla."

"Zevran!  Zevran, you... you will..."  Her arms curled around him and Morwen tensed.  The razor-sharp claws skittered lightly over his hardened leather armor, but she yet held herself back from violence.

"Ssh.  I will stay with you, as you go to the Fade, and then Beyond.  Go in peace, sister."

Morwen saw his left arm jerk suddenly, and the werewolf howled.  Her claws dug furrows in his armor, but he clung to her determinedly.  Within the space of a breath, she was halfway to dying, limbs going slack with shock.  "Thank... you..."  She breathed her last words and slumped forward, and he staggered under the weight of her dead body.

Morwen stood, rooted in shock, but Alistair had the good sense to hurry forward to help Zevran lower the dead werewolf to the ground.  He, drenched in her blood, stayed kneeling beside her once she was laid out.  "She was my clan sister," he said quietly.  "I would sit vigil with her until the moon rises.  We no longer have Falon'Din to show our dead the way Beyond, and I do not wish to leave her spirit alone."

"I... I suppose..."  Morwen stammered.  "We could... camp here."

"Will you burn the body?" Morrigan asked, uncharacteristically quiet.

Zevran bowed his head.  "That is not our way.  But..."

"The Veil is thin here," the witch finished for him.  He nodded.  "And her form is... corrupted."  He paused and, reluctantly, nodded.

"I'll start collecting wood," Alistair volunteered.

"I'll go with you," Morwen said hastily, suddenly greatly preferring the company of the near-templar to the strange and fey tableau here. 

They were not far, perhaps only dozens of feet into the forest past the clearing where the ambush had been, when from behind them came the sound of a song, ancient and eerie, music speaking of sadness and peace: a voyaging song to bid the fallen hunter farewell.

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Ponderings:
I initially thought about doing some sort of dialogue between a Dalish Warden and Zevran, comparing his "instrument of Fate" ideas against the role of Falon'Din, but... it seemed to be much better, if not canon, to combine the ideas into a dalish!Zevran. Hope it worked. :)

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Corker wrote...

Credit to the kmeme anon who requested dalish!Zevran and especially to Jenovan, who realized it so wonderfully.


That's right, give me credit for stuff I didn't put any effort into.  I'll just kick back and reap the rewards. 

Nicely done, BTW.  Very solemn, and personally I find it appropriate to the theme.

Edit: Tremble before the long silence, for I have come, Tellervo, destroyer of threads!

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Prompt: Zevran, the Instrument of Fate


A Fortuitous Fall

Zevran had only recently become a full assassin. As it happened, this mission to assassinate the nubile mage Carlotta was only his second and the first he had gone on alone. Carlotta was…not what he had expected, to say the least. He had always imagined, perhaps self-indulgently, that the marks were terrible people who thoroughly – or at least kind of – deserved their fate, not blushing beauties like the woman dressing in front of him. Carlotta had dark glossy hair, long and thick, with plush, full lips innocent chocolate eyes. Her skin was a lovely bronze color, her legs were long and divine, and the bright green dress she had just slipped back into left very little to the imagination. Was it really any wonder that he had stopped to take a moment to appreciate the beauty he was to destroy before actually doing it?
 
Of course, Carlotta had quickly shown that she wasn’t one to waste an opportunity. The moment she realized that her guard was dead, she had gotten done on her hands and knees. She had looked up at him with her large doe eyes and had apologized for whatever it was that she had done and whoever it was that she had offended so terribly as to deserve to die. She had asked who had put out the contract on her and Zevran had been forced to admit that he didn’t know which just seemed to distress her further. He had never been very good with a woman who was upset. She had begged him not to kill her and Zevran could hardly stand to look at her as he explained that he had no choice but to kill her and that if he did not do it then surely someone else would as the Crows didn’t accept failures.
 
She didn’t seem to be listening, though, as she slowly climbed to her feel and pulled him in for a kiss. “I don’t want to die,” she had whispered in between kisses. “Please…help me feel alive.
 
And so Zevran did what any conscientious assassin would do and slept with her. She was going to die and she didn’t want to. He could certainly respect that. If she wanted to spend her last few hours overcome with passion than who was he to deny her? He wasn’t heartless, after all. He knew that she was still very upset about it all when she tried to kill him in the middle of the act – twice – but he couldn’t hold it against her. Most people didn’t want to die and she was such a lovely young woman…
 
“Thank you,” Carlotta said softly, her voice trembling slightly. “Maker help me, I still do not know what it is that I have done to make whoever hired you hate me so much and I shall go to my grave not knowing.” She closed her eyes. “If only I knew…this is all just a big misunderstanding, I know it. Still, you don’t have the power to cancel the hit on me and so I must simply accept my fate and hope that you will let me die with some dignity.”
 
Zevran began to feel rather uncomfortable. Surely this charming creature didn’t really need to die. Perhaps a jealous ex-lover had gotten angry and entered one of those barbarian ‘if I can’t have her, no one can’ states of mind. Having had her himself, Zevran could certainly see why an ex-lover might feel that way. But Carlotta didn’t deserve to die over some brute’s bruised ego. If only there was something that he could do…
 
“I am ready,” Carlotta said bravely.
 
“I…” Zevran trailed off. “I can’t make any promises but…”
 
“But?” Carlotta’s eyes flew open and looked ever so surprised that she wasn’t being assassinated.
 
“You can come with me to Antiva City,” Zevran offered. “And you can find out who put a bounty on your head and why. It’s not much but at least you won’t die wondering.”
 
“You would do that for me?” Carlotta cried, touched. She placed her hand on her breast. “That is the sweetest, most amazing thing that anybody has ever…oh no…”
 
“What? What’s wrong?” Zevran asked, concerned.
 
“If any of the Crow leadership sees me then they will likely recognize me,” Carlotta explained. “And they will simply kill me and I will never know.”
 
There was really only one thing that Zevran could say to that. “Well…what if I were to approach them for you? I could explain that you don’t know what happened and see if they will tell me why you are condemned to die or even if they are willing to meet with you and discuss the matter in person.”
 
Carlotta’s eyes looked suspiciously shiny at this offer. “I…thank you. When I first met you yesterday I thought for sure that I would hate you but you’re so much kinder than I ever dreamed.” She laughed lightly. “You’re making me feel guilty for trying to kill you.”
 
“That’s always gratifying to hear,” Zevran said with a smile. “I will go ahead and you will follow me, yes?”
 
“Of course,” Carlotta nodded earnestly. “I really can’t thank you enough for this.”
 
Zevran stood up to get out of the carriage and get on his way and Carlotta stood as well to kiss him one last time. Knowing exactly how dangerous this could end up being, Zevran allowed himself to become lost in the kiss. When she pulled back he didn’t open his eyes but when she began to scream he did. Carlotta was nowhere to be found. He glanced outside the carriage and found her lying on her back, not moving.
 
Zevran jumped out of the carriage to examine her. “Carlotta, are you alright?” he asked urgently. There was no answer. He gently brushed her hair back and saw her head bent at an unnatural angle. It would appear that s he’d broken her neck.
 
That was…that was odd. Zevran couldn’t even say it was sad as he had barely known her but it seemed a waste for her to die now that he had just agreed to plead her case before the Crows and she might have gotten a chance to live after all.
 
The driver of the carriage stepped outside to see what all the commotion was. “Carlotta!” he exclaimed upon seeing her. “By the Maker…you were so close to being safe! If we could have just made it to Genellan…”
 
Zevran started. “Genellan? But that’s in the provinces. I thought she was going to follow me back to Antiva City.”
 
“I…well, that is…” the driver spluttered.
 
Zevran laughed bitterly as he realized the truth. This woman, innocent or not – and likely not given her deception – was planning on sending him to face the Crows while she went into hiding. She had been playing him for a fool.
 
There was really only one thing he could do in this situation. He killed the driver and went back to Antiva City, resolved to never again let a pretty face go to his head lest his next beautiful mark not be considerate enough to get herself killed before she got him into trouble.

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My entry killed the thread for thirteen hours. Image IPB

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Ah it's because the Americans are all still in bed.

It's a nice piece - I enjoyed it.

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CalJones wrote...

Ah it's because the Americans are all still in bed.
It's a nice piece - I enjoyed it.

I'm an American as well but I suppose waking up before ten was kind of an aberration for me. I'm glad you liked it. Image IPB

@Corker: That Zevran was different, certainly, but it was still clearly him. Had he stayed with the Dalish clan he had found and had that clan happened to be Zathrian's then I could definitely see this happening. Nice job.

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Sarah1281 wrote...

My entry killed the thread for thirteen hours. Image IPB


I think, most writers don't like to read the other entries, before they have written and posted their own. So, reviews will come for sure - later. ;)

For me it is very difficult. Not enough that I have already written a short story about this topic - the story I'm writing at the moment has a lot to do with it again. That makes it difficult for me to read the stories of others (sorry :( ); and it is impossible for me to do something for the contest this week (I guess, everyone who writes, will understand, what I mean...) So - nobody has to fear another story in maradeux's bad English this time :D :blush:


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maradeux wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

My entry killed the thread for thirteen hours. Image IPB


I think, most writers don't like to read the other entries, before they have written and posted their own. So, reviews will come for sure - later. ;)

For me it is very difficult. Not enough that I have already written a short story about this topic - the story I'm writing at the moment has a lot to do with it again. That makes it difficult for me to read the stories of others (sorry :( ); and it is impossible for me to do something for the contest this week (I guess, everyone who writes, will understand, what I mean...) So - nobody has to fear another story in maradeux's bad English this time :D :blush:


Exactly what maradeux said.  I try not to read the other entries before mine is done (and so far I have no ideas). 

@maradeux - your story is great so far, very original and your english is excellent (unlike my Deutsch, which I have said before is nicht sehr gut).

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I swear, I used to color in the lines and RTFM and everything. 

The idea that grabbed me is AU, so it probably shouldn't qualify for the competition (as it arguably isn't really Zevran). 


The listing said "Anything goes" and that includes AUs in my book Image IPB


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My entry killed the thread for thirteen hours. Image IPB


Aww, no worries.  I'm thinking that thread traffic will be lighter than it usually is this weekend, given that Monday is a holiday in the US so some people may be out of town.  Plus, what maradeux said (I do the same thing on these contests *g*).

maradeux wrote...

I think, most writers don't like to read the other entries, before they have written and posted their own. So, reviews will come for sure - later. ;)

For me it is very difficult. Not enough that I have already written a short story about this topic - the story I'm writing at the moment has a lot to do with it again. That makes it difficult for me to read the stories of others (sorry :( ); and it is impossible for me to do something for the contest this week (I guess, everyone who writes, will understand, what I mean...) So - nobody has to fear another story in maradeux's bad English this time :D Image IPB


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I'm so sorry, maradeux.  I tried to make the topic broad enough (without being too broad), but I didn't realize you were already actively writing something on the same topic.  I understand you not being able to participate -- it definitely makes sense to this writer -- I'm just wishing I'd thought of a different prompt now.Image IPB

And your English is stellar compared to my "best" second language (Spanish).  I can ask how much something costs and how to get to the bathroom, but most of my active ability with Spanish went bye-bye after college *hugs*

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I'm just wishing I'd thought of a different prompt now.Image IPB


Nooooo, your topic is wonderful! :) It's great and important, and I'm sure, the entries will be great, too. I hope in the next days I will have the plot and the rough structure of my next story - a sketch of every chapter, then I will risk to read all stories about "fate". If I did before, I would be afraid of unwittingly "stealing" ideas. :(

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maradeux wrote...

ICevoL wrote...
I'm just wishing I'd thought of a different prompt now.Image IPB


Nooooo, your topic is wonderful! :) It's great and important, and I'm sure, the entries will be great, too. I hope in the next days I will have the plot and the rough structure of my next story - a sketch of every chapter, then I will risk to read all stories about "fate". If I did before, I would be afraid of unwittingly "stealing" ideas. :(

I always tend to read entries right after they come up. Usually there aren't many of them before mine as I try to get mine in as soon as possible but they're never very similar to mine. I think the closest it was was last week and there was another mention of Isabela but given that she's a pirate in-game who Zevran knows it was hardly surprising and they weren't that alike even if they had the same pirate.

Of course, I don't always respond to them right away but I do it later when I remember. Image IPB

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Sarah1281 wrote...

My entry killed the thread for thirteen hours. Image IPB


Hey, it's the weekend!..:wizard:

...I love it! You've really brought the Mage story to life,  I've alway's retained sympathy for her (until now)  The way that you portrayed her, I really get the feeling that she probably did have it coming now.

@corker

I love Dalish Zev, I love how it shows consistency of character, showing the same strength and compassion that he has retained as an assassin.  For me it is this that makes his character so compelling.

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Okay, here's my scribble in a bigger version.  



It's my depiction of the immediate aftermath of  Zevran's first hit.  time - 55mins


Modifié par wildannie, 30 juin 2014 - 05:41 .


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That just looks so sad...

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Well heres my first Zevran story.  It came from a wonder i had when i equipped my male CE with Talisens gloves after freeing Zevran from the crows. I felt a little disturbed about it and i had to think of how why Warden would do such a thing and how Zev would react to it .

It took me 2 weeks to try and fix the english so its definitly not an entry for our contest . You guys can tell me how understandable the whole thing is :?

It takes place right after the Talisen encounter but before the Alienage is open.
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Darriel left the Arl’s estate by the servants’ door, although he was well aware he could have used the main
entrance. The estate guards were rather polite with him. Or at least he never heard them comment on his elven origin. He cursed himself for dwelling on the thought.

 As he strolled through the market, he couldn’t help but wish their small group were still on the open road. Denerim had a way of putting him back in his old habits. The city had him turning his gaze down and stepping aside from well dressed humans once again. A little less then a year away from it didn’t do enough to curb the instincts that were beaten into him as he grew up in the alienage.

 He passed inevitably by the locked gate but quickly moved on before the thoughts of his father and cousins could overwhelm him once again. Hopefully the arl Eamon and Alistair would take care of whatever politics they were here to mingle about and they could be off fighting the Blight.

 And then what ? 

 Darriel threw his bag on the leather merchant stall and started sorting out the bits and pieces they had gathered from their last altercation. The bows could probably net him some silvers and he knew the merchant wouldn’t turn the leather armors away for a few blood stains as long as they weren’t torn. He stopped to consider a pair of worn but finely sewn gloves. The markings in the skin made for a good grip and would let him twist his daggers firmly. He finally decided to put them on and took his due from the merchant before heading back to the estate.

 From afar, he recognized the blond haired silhouette benched in the entrance garden and seemingly enjoying the midday sun. Zevran’s last dramatic envolee replayed in his mind.

 “That is what I want to know ! Do you want me to leave or do you need me here ?”

 “I… I want you to stay.” was all he managed to say at the time.

 “Well it is settled then. I am with you till the end. Provided you do not tire of me first. Or, I die. Or you die. But there you go.”

 Darriel was still unsure how to interpret this new oath. While they seem so simple on the surface, he had learned that things were always complicated with his lover. Why was he so promp to vow his life away, yet so afraid to commit to a single feeling ? Not that he wasn’t happy of their present arrangement. Taking one day at a time had leaded them to a pretty intimate relation, without the need of extensive explanation on either side. He was decidedly happy Zev had decided to stay with him.

 He sat on the bench by Zevran. The assassin opened a single eye, brushed a smile and proceeded to rest his head on the side of Darriel’s lap.

 “At least the sun is the same here as in Antiva.” mused the elven assassin.

 Passing swiftly his arm over his own head, Zevran took his friend’s hand and placed on his own shoulder. They stayed quiet a few moments before Zevran asked him in a surprisingly serious tone : “Those gloves are not from around here, are they ?”

 “I do not know. They were probably from the last bandits we fought. I decided not to sell them since they looked pretty and comfortable.” answered vaguely Darriel.

 “That’s what is usually said of what comes from Antiva.” said Zevran in an amused yet selfdepreciating tone Darriel knew only too well.

 Not knowing what to think of it, Darriel hazarded : “Well they are yours if you want them. Really, I don’t mind.”

 In the moments of silence that fallowed, the young rogue tried to recall where the gloves were from. Their last armed encounter… it could only have been Taliesen. Horrified, Darriel stood up, forcing Zevran to move at the same time. The gloves fell to the ground.

“Zev, I’m sorry!” said Darriel, unsure how he could manage to convince his hurt lover that nothing of it was intentional “I’m not the one who picked them up after the battle, I didn’t know, I swear !”

Zevran picked slowly the gloves up. He chuckled, leaned forward and took his friend’s hand. “Well you can keep them.” said the assassin as he closed Darriel’s hands over the gloves, “To the conqueror goes the spoils, or so we say in Antiva.” His tone was uplifting but Darriel could see the sadness behind his lover’s grin.

Too lost to answer and unwilling to risk angering Zevran by either accepting or declining the offering, Darrian sat back on the bench while his companion also assumed his precedent position. Nothing disturbed the dense atmosphere until the assassin left out a few chuckles. 
 
 “You do know you would make for a good assassin, my dear Warden? “ piped Zevran, “How
cruel of you, when I think of it. You really did take everything Taliesen ever had.”

 “What do you mean everything ?” asked tentatively Darriel, not certain he wanted to dwell on the subject.

 “His gloves to start with,” said Zevran with a smile. He continued more seriously “then his life, his honor as a Crow… and everything else”. He completed the sentence with the sound of an innuendo in his voice.

 “Everything else ?” asked Darriel, as his lover took is hand from his shoulder and kissed it slowly. What more could he have from Taliesen himself, wondered the young rogue as his free hand slipped slowly through Zevran’s hair.

“Oh do not doubt that…” was the only answer he got for that question. The hour passed slowly. Although they wanted to linger under the sun the whole day there was still much to do.

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@ caridounette: That was sad. I do wonder how he managed to just 'pick them up.' Was Taliesin not wearing them? Did they fall from his pack during the fight? The thought that he took everything Taliesin had is kind of a morbid thought but more for Zevran's sake than anything. I liked it.

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@Sarah Well i really had a hard time explaining how he got the gloves myself. I mean its a gameplay thing to loot all corpses... and those gloves are like +15% backstab damage. I equipped them on my Warden and then i felt bad.
I made it that in the story, hes not the one who looted Talisen's corpse... Lets say it was Leliana. :innocent: All loot ends up in the same bag after that. By that time in the storyline, i guess the Warden and the companions are used to taking everything off the hordes of bandits and mercenaries they meet.

I guess it can sound a bit morbid. But then the Warden really took everyting away from Talissen. He took Zevran ( tho our favorite assassin doesnt have the words to say it ), and then he took his life, so those gloves are just the smallest thing in the big picture. I decided Zev wouldnt want the Warden to worry about that after all.

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@carindounette: So sad, but well written. I'm with Sarah, the line "You really did take everything Taliesen ever had," was apt, but tragic from Zev's perspective.

@Hilde: You can see the struggle that young Zev is going through, that his life as an assasin means takeing life - frequently.  I think this is something that Zev would have struggled with - he has such passion for life, taking another's life, no matter how much conditioning the Crows had done, could not have been easy the first time.

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Prompt: Zevran, the Instrument of Fate




Consequences
 
Zevran lounged in the parlor of the Feathered Swan, a modest brothel whose chief claim to fame was its distance from the docks and the pervasive stench of dead fish. Kamina should be arriving soon. He smiled a bit recalling her lithe figure stalking a target on his House’s last combined mission with House Alanza. She was rumored to be as creative in bed as she was in dealing death; thus her invitation to meet him here had been more than welcome. The Feathered Swan, like most of the brothels in Antiva City, indeed in most of Antiva, kept a few rooms available to Crows for a slight fee. Zevran had already paid; this was personal business, not guild, so the coins came from his own pocket.
 
Kamina strode in, her bold steps and the slightly arrogant tilt of her jaw oozed a carnal appeal possible only in a confidant assassin. 
 
Zevran’s smile widened, “Kamina, my dear, you look positively delicious.” He sketched a bow and made a show of admiring her. “No innocent Chantry Miss tonight, perhaps we should play pirates.”
 
Her lips curved in an answering smile, remembering the disguise she had worn for their shared mission. “Hmm, I was thinking more Empress of Orlais.”
 
“I, your humble chevalier, shall guide you to the royal suite.”
 
“I do hope you brought something interesting to dine upon, my appetite won’t be satisfied with ordinary fare.”
 
“Only the finest Antivan delicacies,” Zevran purred.
 
Later, perhaps a full turn of an hourglass, Zevran slid a tiny dagger between two vertebrae just below the base of her skull. Kamina’s expression of ecstasy turned to one of surprise, her lips shaping a silent “Oh.”
 
Zevran lifted her limp body from the bed and set her gently on the floor (always best not to make more of a mess than needed – it kept one in the good graces of the madams). 
 
With her fading strength Kamina managed to ask, “Why?”
 
“I’m sorry my dear, Grandmaster’s orders.” He gave her a final, gentle kiss before gathering his things and departing.
 
In the front parlor he slipped a scrap of paper out of his leathers and presented it to Madam Gitana. “The room will need a bit of clean-up, I’m afraid.”
 
Her lips pursed for a moment as she unfolded the missive, then her expression turned to wary appraisal as she handed his coins back. The seal indicated his mission was from the Crow Grandmaster himself.

“Thank you, Madam.” He sketched a bow and left, his steps casual and confident as he strode toward the docks. His nerves tingled as he contemplated the rest of the day’s work.
 
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Crouched next to Taliesen he watched the lazy flap of a curtain from their third-story perch. A fishwife called below, perhaps a block away, “Oysters, get your fresh oysters, ten coppers a dozen.” 
 
Zevran reached for his usual calm, this was no ordinary mission, these no ordinary targets. Taliesen shifted next to him with uncharacteristic impatience.
 
“Oysters, get your fresh oysters, ten coppers a dozen.” The fishwife in the red shawl was almost to the front door of the house across the narrow alley. 
 
The signal given, Zevran leapt, his body twisting to avoid the trap he knew lay on the floor below the curtained window. He landed and rolled, clearing the way for Taliesen to follow him. Zevran’s daggers were out before he even stood, taking a slender elf lad through the throat, cutting off his cry of alarm. No time to be neat here, speed was all that mattered, they must strike before the House’s defenses could be raised. Through the thin walls he could hear the muffled thumps as others of his own House entered and found their targets. 
 
Zevran and Taliesen worked their way from room to room leaving a trail of death and blood behind them. It was not easy; their adversaries had the same training, the same tricks. Breathing heavily and both sporting minor wounds, they cleared their assigned section and proceeded to help clear the rest of the house.
 
Master Jerold was waiting in the front parlor when his house members had completed their sweep. “Well done, the Grandmaster will be satisfied. Let this be a lesson, each cell autonomous, but is finally subject to the Grandmaster’s orders. Disobedience is not tolerated.” He waved Zevran and Taliesen over. “Your work today was adequate, you completed more than your task. Take first choice of our new apprentices.”
 
Zevran regarded the ragged group of children, separated from another group of their brethren under the charge of Master Lucero of house Nekana. A ragged human boy, perhaps ten years of age, caught his eye. There was intelligence there, and still a bit of defiance, unusual in a Crow apprentice of his age. He waited while Taliesen made his choice, a slender dark-haired elf girl, her youthful figure already displaying a wiry strength. 
 
When his turn came he signaled the human boy to follow him and they left the stench of blood and sundered bowels, the reek of a House Alanza’s destruction, to return to House Arainai’s headquarters.

edited for formating

Modifié par TanithAeyrs, 05 septembre 2010 - 05:49 .


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@Tanith: That seemed like a sad but typical kind of thing to go on with the Crows. I'm not entirely sure why what happened happened but, then again, I doubt Zevran has all the details, either. Orders are just orders.

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No, Zev doesn't have the details. I'll probably explain it in my later in my fic but here's a quick summary. The violation of the Grandmaster's orders was what led to the attempted coup Zev was involved in. The Grandmaster was NOT interested in seeing Antiva nearly bankrupted, thus his orders. House Alanza was a powerful house who thought they could disobey and challenge the Grandmaster's power.

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ICevoL wrote...

Prompt time!  Once again, many thanks to Minaleth for the Banner!

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Prompt: Zevran, the Instrument of Fate
 


55 Minutes

The Humor of the Fates


“Just get it done” Growled Loghain.

With the contract settled Zevran bowed out of the room followed closely by Howe. As the two exited Loghain’s study, Howe turned to speak and was interrupted by a dark haired elven maid.

“Arl Howe, Her Majesty desires a word” announced the maid. A well dressed maid with an Orlesian accent Zevran immediately noted.

Howe turned abruptly to Zevran, “I trust you can see yourself out of the palace? And elf...Do not fail me.”

Arl Howe stalked down the hall with the elven maid following close after him. To Zevran this presented an opportunity. He doubted he would again gain access to the Fereldan Royal Palace or its secrets again, not if his attempt to assassinate the Wardens failed, which he intended… if he was honest with himself… to see that it did.

Secreting through the halls, avoiding the sight of all the guards and sniveling secretive nobles he encountered he soon happened upon what he assumed were the royal quarters by their lush furnishings. He heard Arl Howe before he found him. The man had carried himself as a rogue through the palace and by reputation, and had even bragged to Zevran previously his prowess.

“The man has no true skill” muttered Zevran under his breath as he neared the Queens Room.

“Is it true that there were Wardens who survived” hissed the queen. “And that the ones rumored to have survived are Alistair and that Cousland tramp? You do realize that they both present obstacles to our plans. ”

“Anora, calm yourself!” replied Howe, grabbing her by the elbow. Leaning his face into hers he pushed her onto the chair situated behind her. “I have arranged a…solution, they will not survive.”

Zevran mused to himself the fury that would engulf Arl Howe if he knew the true intentions of his hired assassin.

“Be that as it may, they both have a legitimate claim to my throne. I did not let Cailin get in my way, I am not about to bow to these two pathetic Wardens, regardless of their birth!” She spat out “or my father.”

“Just see to it that you remember the terms of our deal, my dear Anora” smirked Howe grabbing her chin in his calloused hands. “I eliminated all other obstacles; I do not intend to fail. All of Fereldan will show me the respect I deserve as its king.”

Anora spun away from Howe’s touch, visibly disgusted. “So long as you do still not expect to bed me or limit my rule, our…agreement stands. Just see that these two do not live!” growled Anora.

With that Zevran watched the queen turn and saunter off through a set of hidden doors followed closely by her maid. As Zevran retreated back through the palace he recounted this new information. Politics in Fereldan were not any different than those in Antiva, he mused, with the exception that more of players in the Antivan game met gruesome ends.

Zevran wondered what information such as this would be worth if he succeeded in his charge. This thought stopped Zevran dead in his tracks. He rested his head on the cool stone just outside of the royal palace, calming the visions that plagued him since leaving Antiva City. He had always considered himself an instrument of fate, but the fates had been cruel and he truly wished to no longer play their game. Rinna, the name brought pain still after so many months, the fates had laughed at his incompetence in that matter, of that he was certain. He would no longer do their bidding. That is what had brought him to Fereldan, to an impossible task. He wanted an end if he was honest with himself. This information would no doubt enter the fade along with his blackened soul.

“Enough” He admonished himself as he made his way to a cheap inn, an inn where he was certain the bedbugs had their own flees, to finish his planning and to recruit the rest of his team. It would all be finished soon.

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The battle had been short. The rumors of Grey Warden’s skill in combat had not been exaggerated. As he fell to the ground the sigh of relief that he thought would come was replaced by an immediate desire to live. “Funny” he thought as he lost consciousness “perhaps in the next life, the fates will be kinder.”

He woke to the pain of a boot edging into his stomach. The Wardens had not killed him after all. Through all the charm he could muster he asked to join them, to be of use, to have a second chance.

As his beautiful redheaded captor argued with the second warden, she turned and smiled at him, her green eyes sparkling. His return smile brought a blush to her cheeks and she bit her bottom lip before returning her attentions to the protesting Warden in front of her.

“Perhaps” thought Zevran with a small smile as his gazed traveled the length of the woman before him and then to her blond, bumbling companion, two threats to the Queen and the throne of Fereldan. “Perhaps, the fates are truly not done with me or the information I hold after all.”

**Edit for formatting..always bunches up.

Modifié par Hilde, 05 septembre 2010 - 06:05 .


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@Sarah: your entry was fantastic. I can see her using all her charms on Zev, who is still quite naive at this point.



@Hilde: Nice twist on Anora's scheming. I'm sure Zev's knowledge will be put to good use.

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@ Hilde: I think Anora must have inherited Loghain's overly paranoid streak. Without metagaming knowledge, Alistiar MIGHT be considered a threat IF he had proper political support and at this point Eamon can't possibly have been revived yet so there's been no talk of that but random Cousland girl? Just the fact that her father was a teyrn doesn't give her a claim to the throne and she certainly doesn't have stronger backing than Anora does. I also think that she'd have more decorum than to refer to her as a 'tramp' no matter how much she may hate her (have they met and are they enemies?).

I did like how you wrote this piece and Zevran's spying even if I disagree about Anora's characterization and the thought that the Warden is in any way a threat to Anora as far as the throne goes.

Edit: I really hope that didn't come off as too harsh as I did like it, I just have can't stand the 'OMG, the Cousland Warden definitely should have been able to take the throne by themselves as everybody is in love with their bloodline!' argument.

Modifié par Sarah1281, 05 septembre 2010 - 06:12 .