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PROMPT: 'A great many things were assumed that have not held true.'



Alistair paced around the room trying desperately to quell the regret , hat was eating at him. They had broken up due to the heir issue. His true regret was handling the breakup the way he did. He humiliated her in front of the Landsmeet when he should have handled it better and while she held her head up high their relationship was never the same. He went on to rule Ferelden and she went on rebuild the Wardens.
He had last seen her nearly four years ago when he went to Vigil’s Keep to welcome the Wardens. Elissa was assigned to deal with the last vestiges of the Blight and in their few awkward moments of their meeting told her she was also going to be responsible for the security of Ferelden. Before leaving, he told her he had faith that she would get the job done and she did. She saved Amaranthine and from the reports she sent, dealt with various horrors he could not begin to imagine.
Elissa stayed with the Wardens for about six months but mysteriously disappeared after a new Warden Commander from Orlais took over.
Nobody knew what happened to her until Eamon told him three years ago that she married Teagan and was living very quietly at Redcliffe. While Alistair was shocked about that revelation, what shook him to his core even more was when it revealed Elissa had twins a year ago. Wynne had left the palace a couple of months earlier but she didn’t tell him it was to help care for Elissa and to deliver the twins. She had a boy and a girl Phillip Bryce Guerrin and Rowan Eleanor Guerrin and miraculously they were free of the taint.
When the Wardens from Weisshaupt had learned she had given birth, they had sent representatives out to see her and the children.
It was assumed that female Wardens could not conceive and they were full of questions regarding her and the children.
He had to formally call Teagan and Elissa to Ferelden and from what he heard, both she and Teagan were angry at this invasion of privacy. One of the Wardens was an elven mage named Fiona and she was the most cordial of the three and was examining Elissa and the children.
“Hello Alistair.”
Elissa stood in the doorway and he gasped at the sight of her for it was the first time he had ever seen her in a dress.
She was wearing a simple dress in dark green velvet that made her auburn hair stand out. Her hair hung loose around her shoulder and framed her face. Elissa looked as beautiful as ever but her vibrant green eyes conveyed a polite coolness that clearly indicated she wanted to be somewhere else.
“Hello Elissa. You look… beautiful. Motherhood has obviously been good to you.”
“Thank you,” Elissa said as she looked at him.
“I just….want to say I am sorry for calling you here. The Wardens insisted on it.”
“I know. My giving birth had shattered their assumptions. My children are a freak of nature to them as am I but that one elven mage assured Teagan and me they had no intention of taking our children.”
“Are they still being examined?”
“Yes, Teagan and Wynne are with them. I needed to get out of there.”
“I have to admit I wasn’t expecting….”
“Let me guess,” Elissa interrupted. “You never expected to hear that a man would actually agree to marry me despite the knowledge that I might never be able to give him children. And I bet it shocked you when you were told I had children.”
“Yes,” Alistair looked down. “Had I known this was possible we’d be….”
“Married?” Elissa laughed.
“Yes,” Alistair admitted.
“Well I guess that’s what you get for assuming all things you learned about the Wardens to be true because I have another revelation for you. Fiona took a sample of my blood and compared it to a sample of blood from one of the other Wardens that are with her. The taint is still in my blood but she suspects that being pregnant altered it in some way that it got diluted. My children have given me an extra five to ten years.”
“That’s wonderful news. I am happy for you Elissa.” Alistair looked away briefly before turning back to her. “Why did you and Teagan keep everything a secret?”
“Alistair, considering what we endured during the Blight and what I had to go through in Amaranthine, can you understand that I wanted some privacy?”
“But how did you…..”
“Oh I know what this is about. You want to know how Teagan and I got together.” Elissa laughed. “Teagan visited the Keep with supplies from Redcliffe and Rainesfere when it was under reconstruction. He told me whenever I needed to get away that I was more than welcome to come to Redcliffe. I took him up on his offer when I retired from the Wardens. Our friendship grew to love. When Teagan told me it didn’t matter whether or not I could have children, I knew I wanted to spend what time I had with him. We had even made plans to adopt when Teagan learned one of his uncles was an orphan his grandfather took in and adopted.”
“And you didn’t want me to know.”
“No I didn’t and neither did Teagan. Considering what you said to me at the Landsmeet I felt it was for the best.”
“I am so sorry for that. I swear Elissa I wish I could take back those things. Things would be different.”
“I can see you are sorry but something tells me that your lack of faith and ardent belief over every tenant of the Wardens would have come out eventually.”
“Elissa?”
Teagan and Wynne were standing in the doorway each holding a baby.
“How are they?” Elissa asked as went to them.
“They are both healthy,” Fiona echoed behind them.
“That’s wonderful,” Elissa smiled as she took the baby from Wynne.
“Hello your Majesty,” Teagan said politely. “If you don’t need us for anything else, I’d like to take my family home. We’re leaving early in the morning to visit Fergus and his family.”
“Of course.”
“Goodbye your Majesty,” Elissa gave him a polite smiled as Teagan put his free arm around her.
He watched as they left with Wynne.
“It’s not fair.” Alistair sighed.
“You loved her,” Fiona said gently.
“I still love her,” Alistair lamented. “And she hates me! Why did I have to be so stupid? Why did I assume that every I learned about the Wardens was true? We could have married. Those children she had could have been mine.”
“Yes, this was not expected. What I did not tell Elissa is that now women who survive the Joining might be forced to make another decision if the First Warden has his way. And I don’t think she hates you. She’s just moved on.”
“And I am alone.”
“You are not alone your Majesty. And just so you know Maric made a lot of mistakes as well.”
“You knew my father?” Alistair looked surprised.
“I knew Duncan as well.”
Alistair stared at the woman and was amazed at how at ease she made him.
“Can you tell me about them?”
“Of course but how about we go somewhere private?”
“Don’t you have to go with the other Wardens?”
“They don’t command me and they’re probably at the compound by now. I have all the time in the world.”
“Let’s go to my study.” Alistair held out his arm and she took it.

Modifié par Melca36, 06 février 2011 - 10:26 .


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@Melca: Oh, poor Alistair. Of course, had he and Elissa married then they couldn't have children as two Wardens can't reproduce together but I doubt they really have any way of knowing that so he thinks that he really could have had it both ways. I'm glad to see that Elissa having children somehow increased her lifespan. The only other case we know of of a female Warden giving birth is Fiona and she was already taint-free at the time.

Though I do have to wonder why the Wardens are so shocked that Elissa gave birth since Fiona did the same. Did they assume the fact that she wasn't tainted at the time allowed her to get pregnant and safely deliver a child? 

Modifié par Sarah1281, 06 février 2011 - 10:37 .


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Poor Alistair and Elissa, that breakup scene was one of the most painful I've seen in a game.

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Sarah1281 wrote...

@Melca: Oh, poor Alistair. Of course, had he and Elissa married then they couldn't have children as two Wardens can't reproduce together but I doubt they really have any way of knowing that so he thinks that he really could have had it both ways. I'm glad to see that Elissa having children somehow increased her lifespan. The only other case we know of of a female Warden giving birth is Fiona and she was already taint-free at the time.

Though I do have to wonder why the Wardens are so shocked that Elissa gave birth since Fiona did the same. Did they assume the fact that she wasn't tainted at the time allowed her to get pregnant and safely deliver a child? 



My aunt is a doctor and she is a HUGE DA fan. She actually gave me the idea that the reason its so rare for female wardens to concieve that if one does get pregnant, it somehow alters their body chemistry thus diluting the taint. And that in turn makes them weaker Wardens.

And yes....I wrote this with the assumption that the Wardens were not surprised by Fiona's pregnancy.

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Reika wrote...

Poor Alistair and Elissa, that breakup scene was one of the most painful I've seen in a game.


It is. Hated it so much.

Its probably why I only make Alistair king when I play Male characters. Yes I am a sap. LOL

My male characters also do the bad endings too. :devil:

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Melca36 wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

@Melca: Oh, poor Alistair. Of course, had he and Elissa married then they couldn't have children as two Wardens can't reproduce together but I doubt they really have any way of knowing that so he thinks that he really could have had it both ways. I'm glad to see that Elissa having children somehow increased her lifespan. The only other case we know of of a female Warden giving birth is Fiona and she was already taint-free at the time.

Though I do have to wonder why the Wardens are so shocked that Elissa gave birth since Fiona did the same. Did they assume the fact that she wasn't tainted at the time allowed her to get pregnant and safely deliver a child? 



My aunt is a doctor and she is a HUGE DA fan. She actually gave me the idea that the reason its so rare for female wardens to concieve that if one does get pregnant, it somehow alters their body chemistry thus diluting the taint. And that in turn makes them weaker Wardens.

And yes....I wrote this with the assumption that the Wardens were not surprised by Fiona's pregnancy.

I always wonder about that in regards to Fiona. She's taint-free and so won't have to deal with the Calling but will have to deal with being studied by Weisshaupt (for what, I don't know. There's nothing there to study since she's not tainted). Is she still even a Warden if the taint is what makes you a Warden? Could she be retainted? What would happen if they put her through the Joining again? 

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I imagine she'd survive the joining, Sarah. She's proven to already have the quality to deal with the Taint. Hm, unless she now has a resistance high enough to keep the Taint from affecting her.

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[quote]Sarah1281 wrote...



[/quote] I always wonder about that in regards to Fiona. She's taint-free and so won't have to deal with the Calling but will have to deal with being studied by Weisshaupt (for what, I don't know. There's nothing there to study since she's not tainted). Is she still even a Warden if the taint is what makes you a Warden? Could she be retainted? What would happen if they put her through the Joining again? 
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Those are some interesting questions.   And when I wrote they compared Elissa's blood to another Wardens, I wrote it with the implication that magic is used to compare the blood.

If Alistair is indeed Fiona's is he immune or will he live longer than the 30 years?

Another thing I wondered is when a woman becomes a Warden....does her menstrual cycle stop?

I read a fan fiction where the writer basically gave her character an early menopause.   I actually thing she would still get her cycle but two wardens just can't concieve because the taint alters their body chemistry.

For men, it probably lowers sperm count.

I probably should have went into more detail on how the delivery nearly killed Elissa but I can explore that in another fan fiction.

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@Reika: I know she'd survive the Joining. I was wondering if she'd be immune to the taint or become a real Warden once more.



@Melca: Early menopause makes sense given that Morrigan claims that Riordan physically can't have the child with her as he's been tainted too long (though she might just be making things up as she knows Riordan would never go along with this so he shouldn't be told). It might take a few years but then it stops as that would certainly prevent a Warden who has been a Warden for awhile from having kids as far as the women went.



Would Fiona's blood look identical to non-Wardens or would the fact that she had been tainted leave traces? Alistair can't be immune to the taint or he wouldn't be able to sense darkspawn and kill the Archdemon but since his mother was cured of the taint while she was pregnant that may give him some sort of extra resistance allowing him to go longer without his Calling.

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I think the affect of the Taint on menstruation is going to vary from woman to woman. Some might go through early menopause, some might have even more unpleasant cycles, some might "catch" and have miscarriages.

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Melca that was very good.

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Back.
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RagingCyclone wrote...

Melca that was very good.


Thank you. :happy:

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Reika wrote...

I think the affect of the Taint on menstruation is going to vary from woman to woman. Some might go through early menopause, some might have even more unpleasant cycles, some might "catch" and have miscarriages.


As someone who has mild endometriosis and the occasional period where I am bedridden from the pain, I think I would prefer the menopause.  :?

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Melca36 wrote...

As someone who has mild endometriosis and the occasional period where I am bedridden from the pain, I think I would prefer the menopause.  :?


I don't have the endometriosis, but having had my set of issues, I agree on the menopause.

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@Melca - Very good. I really like rubbing Alistair's face in it with Teagan (I've even done it once in a previous fill) -- that just seems so appropriate after he's dumped you in such a rude fashion.

And here's some Ali since we don't have any on this page yet. lol

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Thank you Tigress,

My next prompt will be nicer for Alistair. :wizard:

Modifié par Melca36, 07 février 2011 - 02:52 .


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I come back from a mini-vacation from the internet to find the Alistair thread has been taken over by talks of periods and menstrual cycles O.O Only on the internet...



In other news, Ive actually sat down and nearly written the first chapter of my current all encompassing-killing my ability to write anything else idea: Dalish Elf Circle Magi origin. Drama! Suspense! Sword and Staff! Blood! And of course, everyones favorite stuttering apostate, Jowan!!



Help me ..... :-(

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(Edit: Shortened this down, because I ramble too much.) 

So, I got an idea this evening for a possible Dragon Age fan music video thingy that (because I am extraordinarily compulsive) I am now considering making, and I was wondering if I could get anybody's thoughts and/or ideas, especially since it probably would involve, I hope, I think, lots of Alistair. The song I'm thinking of using is pretty much about a zombie apocalypse. I won't say it fits exactly, because it doesn't, obviously, but, listen to it if you'd like, and tell me what you think. Maybe I'm crazy, but I definitely experienced a decent-sized handful of "oh my god, it's perfect!" moments. You'll see what I mean, I think.
Here's the song, if you'd like to give it a listen: Save Our City by Ludo.

Should I try it? It might be fun...imagine the montages of things dying during the instrumental sections!
(And, by the way, I'm no music video master, by a long shot. I've just made some before, for fun, for another fandom -- but never a video game. Buuuut, on the other side of the "it'd be fun!" coin, I know it'd be ridiculously time consuming, so I don't want to bother if it's actually a really bad idea and I am merely drunk on excitement at present. Like I said. Extraordinarily compulsive. At least I have the good sense to give others a chance to stop me before I do something stupid?)

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It could be interesting Bitenomnom, certainly fitting for the Blight.

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Glorfindel709 wrote...

Dalish Elf Circle Magi origin. Drama! Suspense! Sword and Staff! Blood! And of course, everyones favorite stuttering apostate, Jowan!!


Bwahaha this made me LOL :lol: Also, sounds enthralling :o
What help do you need?


Bitenomnom wrote...

Should I try it? It might be fun...imagine the montages of things dying during the instrumental sections!
(And, by the way, I'm no music video master, by a long shot. I've just made some before, for fun, for another fandom -- but never a video game. Buuuut, on the other side of the "it'd be fun!" coin, I know it'd be ridiculously time consuming, so I don't want to bother if it's actually a really bad idea and I am merely drunk on excitement at present. Like I said. Extraordinarily compulsive. At least I have the good sense to give others a chance to stop me before I do something stupid?) 

It's going to a very long process but video making is amazingly fun. So arm yourself with patience!:wizard:

As for the song, it's very long, so perhaps you could only use part of it (like cut out the begining because the mayer/zombie lyrics just wouldn't really fit), also I find, and this is personal, that the best videos are the short ones. But the rest of the song sounds pretty good for a Blight video!

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Elysis, I need moral support, test readers, and someone with access to a liquor store!

To quote my creative writing professor- "Write Drunk, Revise Sober. That is the Writers' Motto." I however am much too poor to live up to this glorious standard.

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Glorfindel709 wrote...

Elysis, I need moral support, test readers, and someone with access to a liquor store!

To quote my creative writing professor- "Write Drunk, Revise Sober. That is the Writers' Motto." I however am much too poor to live up to this glorious standard.


ROFL! Glor! :D:D
Can help with all three (not a store, persay, but I do have a ridiculously well stocked bar in my house). The distance may prove a bit of a challenge, though, so I'll just have to send you virtual shots.:P
Oops! Forgot to add that I can easily help with the first two. *virtual vodka toast*

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Thanks, guys! You're right, it is quite long; I don't think I could make it all the way through it (my previous experience has, at the very least, taught me that much). Maybe I should see first how smoothly I could cut it down, and only then worry about making the video, if that works out, haha. It was one of those ideas where I could already see in my head some stuff that I'd use, but Elysis, yeah, those were the two parts I was majorly iffy about.
Now I think I'mma creep back into my corner for now. (Which is to say, I'll be around, as per always, but I'll shut up. Heh.)

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Melca36 wrote...

Reika wrote...

I think the affect of the Taint on menstruation is going to vary from woman to woman. Some might go through early menopause, some might have even more unpleasant cycles, some might "catch" and have miscarriages.


As someone who has mild endometriosis and the occasional period where I am bedridden from the pain, I think I would prefer the menopause.  :?


I don't want to be nasty, Melca, but have you heard of night sweats?