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I have no idea where else to post little tidbit, so I thought I'd share it with ya'll:

So I'm revising an ooooooold novella of FF (Star Trek:TNG, yup that old) that I wrote back in the mid- to late 90s. While I was going through it, I came across this sentence:

"Yet two blights tainted his optimism." (emphasis added)

I blinked, re-read it, and then started laughing myself silly.
Not important, just thought I'd share. Just Image IPB eerily prophetic?

EDIT:

ToP?  For that?  Really?  *grumble, grumble*

All right, ladies, this one's for you!  (the only ones I have for Rage haven't been edited yet. Image IPB)

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EDIT EDIT:

Prompt for this week is at the bottom of the previous page.  Just sayin' Image IPB

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For Shades of Grey: This takes place just after the Broken Circle quest and the group has saved Connor.

Aftermath…
The Circle Tower was cleansed and freed. The abominations were eradicated, and Uldred, or more to the point what used to be Uldred, was slain. Only one blood mage was left alive, and she was captured by the Templars while still within the tower. Her fate was decided as soon as she was found, and a magical ward placed to imprison her until the Rite of Tranquility could be performed. Greagoir and Irving had both wanted her killed, but the wardens had convinced the two tower leaders that tranquility was the best option as she could still help serve the Circle in the rebuilding process. Unfortunately later that first evening she was found dead of an apparent suicide, she feared tranquility over death. Irving himself was angered at the turn of events, but surprisingly Greagoir appeared sympathetic saying she was yet another wayward mage lost in a tragedy that should never have happened. He placed the blame for it solely on Uldred and his few followers, and praised those mages left alive for their fortitude and resilience in the face of extreme circumstances. The man was actually proud of them. Dan had requested a special recommendation posthumously for Niall. His actions had been vital in the success of recovering the tower and saving the mages. Irving and Greagoir agreed and mentioned a statue might be placed in the library honoring Niall’s memory.
Dan and his companions had caught the ship that was returning to Redcliffe. After their previous experience with the storms, he was glad to have smoother sailing all of the way across Lake Calenhad. Several mages had accompanied them including Irving. With their help along with Morrigan’s the boy Connor had been saved. The mages had returned to the Circle leaving on the ship the day before, and Dan watched the waters of the Lake around Redcliffe from the balcony of his room in the castle. Isolde was staying by Eamon’s side, and she had tasked them with finding the Urn of Sacred Ashes. She believed it was the only way to wake the Arl, and before Irving had left he agreed. Neither he nor any of his accompanying mages could wake Eamon using magic.
The water was calm from Dan’s vantage, and a slight morning breeze blew up from it. He closed his eyes and let it wash over his face and bald head. He had seen more horrendous things in the past few months than he thought he would ever see. From the murder of his family, the darkspawn in the Korcari Wilds, the defeat of the army at Ostagar, the torn veil and demons at Soldier’s Peak, the walking dead in Redcliffe, and then the Tower, he didn’t know what was yet to come. Alistair and Sten had been insistent they head for Denerim right away, but Dan wanted another day in Redcliffe to rest in some semblance of comfort before hitting the road again. It took some persuading to get Alistair to agree, and then the two a lot more to convince Sten as well. Today was the day they had decided to leave.
His darkspawn nightmares were less frequent or vivid as they had been right after the joining, but that didn’t stop ones like the one he had just woken up from. He was back in the Circle Tower fighting demons, abominations, and blood mages bent on either killing him or subjugating him to their will. It was not those that had caused him to wake in a cold sweat, but what he saw before encountering them. The bodies in the apprentice and mage quarters along the first and second floors of the tower were the images that haunted him in his dreams. Children were burned and broken, their faces contorted in looks of shock and fear. Some older ones showed signs of struggle as they had tried to fight whatever had attacked them. Worse was the second floor where the bodies showed even more signs of surprise. Dan suspected these more experienced mages had been caught unawares. Injuries to the back or side of the head were a common sight amongst the bodies. There were even two sets of couples that apparently were in the middle of sexual fervor when they were killed. Leliana had found the first couple in one of the more private corners of a smaller library. Their bodies were still intertwined, and faces expressing bliss. Hopefully they never knew what had happened to them or anything around them when they had died. The second couple was found in one of the quarters. He had been killed trying to protect her, both bodies burned enough one could not tell if they were elf or human. Still more had been killed in their sleep and never aware of any danger. He shuddered at the thought that reminded him of his home and the night Howe had murdered his family. Similar scenes of chaos and destruction though both stemming from different sources the results looked eerily the same. Death and destruction looked the same to him no matter where it came from.
He continued staring out at the water when he felt a hand touch his shoulder. He recognized her smell, and turned to see her standing behind him smiling. Leliana was still asleep when he had woken and snuck out trying to let her continue sleeping that morning. She was barefoot and wrapped in a blanket from their bed. He smiled back at her and brushed some of her hair from her eyes.
“Sleep well?” he asked.
“About as well as you,” she replied. “Were they bad this time?”
“Like usual,” Dan said and then turned to look over the lake again.
They had not been sleeping together long. It was only the ship ride to the Circle Tower when they finally announced to the rest of their group that they were a couple. But it had been long enough she could tell when he had nightmares, and enough to tell when they were especially bad. She came up behind him and wrapped her arms around his waist and laid her head on his back.
“Last night was worse than usual,” she remarked. “You were even talking in your sleep this time, about demons and not darkspawn.”
“I was back in the tower. I still can’t get those children out of my mind. They…they…” he trailed off.
“I see them sometimes in my dreams too,” she replied. “They ask me to help them, but I can’t because they are already gone. Sometimes I wake up crying in the middle of the night.”
He turned around and wrapped one arm around her, and held her head with the other hand as she laid it on his shoulder.
“I thought my vision was about the Blight,” she continued. “But everywhere we go is the darkness and chaos. And we haven’t even gone anywhere to fight darkspawn yet.” She looked up into his eyes. “Do you think this will ever end?”
“I don’t know,” he replied. “But I intend to keep fighting it until it’s over or it takes me.”
“And I’ll be there at your side, always.”
They held their embrace watching over the lake and the calm waters. Neither knew how long they held that embrace until Dan’s stomach growled. They both chuckled at the sound enjoying a light moment amongst the dark mood of the morning. The time hers growled they parted. She started towards the bed to replace the blanket, and he towards the door.
“I think I’ll head down to the kitchens and find us something to break our fast. Anything in particular you want?”
“Let me get dressed and I’ll join you,” she answered.
“Nonsense. This morning I will bring it up here for us to enjoy together, just the two of us.”
“Ooooh…in that case see if there are any sugary cakes,” she smiled.
“As you wish, my love,” he replied and blew her a kiss as he went out the door.
He walked down to the kitchens to find what the cooks had made so far that morning. He found some bacon and ham, boiled eggs, and some freshly baked bread. He also grabbed two goblets and some wine. There were no cakes or anything sugary that he could take back to Leliana. He found a serving tray to carry it all and began his trek back to room. He was happy to not come across any of his other companions but also surprised none of them had woken up yet. He got back to find Leliana sitting in bed wearing the same gown.
“I thought you said you were getting dressed,” he said smiling as he closed the door behind him.
“No sugary cakes?” she said frowning. He shook his head no. She lowered her head and pouted at him. She couldn’t hold it long, however, and soon was smiling at him. They shared their meal playfully feeding each other and drinking from each other’s goblets. They were almost finished when the knock came at the door. Dan cracked the door when he answered since her gown was lighter and more revealing than what she normally wore when travelling. Alistair was standing in the hallway.
“Morning,” the former Templar said. “You two sleep in this morning?”
“We’ve been up for some time,” Dan replied.
“Have you two…you know?” Alistair grinned.
“No…not that I would tell you if we had,” Dan answered.
“Well, I was getting ready to head to the kitchens. Want to come along?”
“We actually just finished out morning meal,” Dan replied. “I brought it up here so we could eat alone.”
“And you didn’t invite me?”
“I said so we could be ‘alone,’” Dan grinned.
“But…wait…is that bacon I smell? Maybe I could join you now?” Alistair started to push on the door when Dan stopped him with his hand and shook his head smiling. “Oh…alright…good morning, Leliana,” he said. Dan began pushing him out of the door. “Ok…ok…come down and join me later?” he asked as Dan closed the door on him.
Leliana smiled at him as he walked back over to their table. They cleaned up the empty plates and goblets, and he left her to get cleaned up and dressed as he took them back down to the kitchens. He met Alistair in the dining hall, and he was alone with a plate of bacon, bread, and cheese.
“There wasn’t any cheese when I came down earlier,” Dan said as he sat across the table from his friend.
“There isn’t now either,” Alistair said grinning, and then he took a bite of the cheese.
“An old stash of yours?”
“Nope, but I know where Teagan kept his.” He laughed as Dan just shook his head grinning.
“Can I ask you something?” he said looking at his friend who nodded back. “You still think about what happened back at the tower? I mean with the demons and abominations?”
Alistair finished the piece of cheese he was chewing on, and then washed it down with some wine. “A little. When I was in the chantry they told us about what we could expect to see, but none of that prepared me for what we saw in the tower.”
“Kind of like when you first saw darkspawn?”
“Yes, exactly,” replied Alistair. “But…we got out alive and mostly in one piece. I feel sorry for the mages, though. They have a lot of rebuilding to do.”
“I’ve been having some nightmares about it,” Dan said looking down at the table.
“About the demons and abominations? I found them scary too.”
“I mean the dead we found,” Dan said looking back up. “Especially the children. And some of those we found on the second floor…the way we found some of them…some even…” he trailed off as Alistair nodded.
“I guess that is one good thing going for the Templar training I got. They trained us to look at mages as potential threats to people more than people themselves. I never believed in that, myself, but I guess part of it must have stuck with me. It bothers me how we found them, but not enough to have any nightmares.”
“I envy you on that,” Dan said quietly.
“Don’t,” Alistair started. “I wish I did have nightmares, actually. Especially about the children.”
“How do you think that Templar we found is handling this? Cullen I think his name was.”
“He’ll probably get sent off to Greenfell,” Alistair replied.
“He saw the worst of it, I think. He saw fellow Templars slaughtered or enthralled, mages killed and tortured by other mages, and others messing around with his own thoughts. He thought we were visions when we first found him.”
“I don’t think I would have lasted as long as he did.”
“No?” Dan asked.
“Not like he did. I can understand his hatred of mages after what he went through. I hope what feelings and compassion he might have had for mages returns to him wherever he gets sent to.”
“Did you agree with him? I mean about killing all of the mages?”
“Why ask me that?”
“Because of that Templar training you had. It almost sounds like they try to desensitize you to them.”
“I think they try, although most of the recruits I knew didn’t agree with it. I know I didn’t. Not all mages will become blood mages or abominations. I mean, it’s not their fault they were born with magic. And that harrowing thing they have to endure is much like our joining. I actually have a lot of respect for harrowed mages. They go through a lot just to live a life even if it never will be what you or I would call a normal one.”
“Well, I hope that Cullen comes through ok,” Dan said. “I mean…I’m having nightmares after only seeing the aftermath of the whole thing. I imagine he must be living a waking nightmare having lived it and seen it all happen firsthand.”
“So do it, but only time will tell,” Alistair replied as he began to stand up. “I doubt we’ll ever find out. Have you talked to Leliana about this at all?”
“We talked some this morning,” Dan replied standing up as well. “Though the thing about Cullen I’ve been meaning to ask you about since you had the Templar background.”
“I get the impression that Greagoir will make sure he’s taken care of. Not only does he seem to care about his men, but cares about the mages under his care. He talked about how painful it would have been to find no mages left alive. That I think is rare in a Knight Commander. But then again, I didn’t know a lot of Knight Commanders.”
The two men walked out not saying more, and then parted to begin packing their things for their trip to Denerim. The plan was to begin after they and their companions were all awake and ready to leave. No matter what they felt about the remaining mages and Templars at the Circle Tower, their priority was to end the Blight, and to do that they needed to find the Urn and cure Eamon. But Dan still thought about those children as he packed his things along with Leliana. If only they had gotten there sooner, and how many times would he be saying that again before it was all over.

Modifié par RagingCyclone, 05 novembre 2011 - 09:16 .


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Hello Alistairians.... long time no see :D

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Glor! Yay, you're back! *does happy dance* School keepin' you hopping?

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I wish :/ I have to drop out after this semester due to money issues. Also just got removed from my apartment because my roommate broke the lease agreement about pets and the owner threw us both out for breach of contract so I've been busy aptment searching and moving in.

Plus I'm searching for a second/new job since Gamestop = suck

But otherwise I'm fine :D How're you madam?

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Glorfindel709 wrote...

I wish :/ I have to drop out after this semester due to money issues. Also just got removed from my apartment because my roommate broke the lease agreement about pets and the owner threw us both out for breach of contract so I've been busy aptment searching and moving in.

Plus I'm searching for a second/new job since Gamestop = suck

But otherwise I'm fine :D How're you madam?


Image IPB I'm so sorry to hear about your woes!  Stupid roommate...  Did you slap him silly yet? Image IPB

It feels kind of like, "But other than that, Mrs. Lincoln, how was the play?"

I hope you get back on your feet soon.  Keep us posted!  We miss you!

And yes, from what i've heard from friends who also work at Gamestop, it is teh suck.

One quick question. though: are you the Glorfindel of Imladris or the Glorfindel of Gondolin?  Inquiring minds want to know...Image IPB

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I left a bag of my dog's crap under his car seat.... so yes :D

"The play was fantastic, it ended with a real bang."

I'll keep y'all informed, and yeah Gamestop is a hellhole to which dreams go to die.

Depends ;) My main mage is definitely Glorfindel of Gondolin - Bold, daring, willing to give it all for the safety of his companions, his lord, and his home.

But my Mahariel Mage for my fic (that is actually kind of happening... I plan on posting the little introduction thing shortly) isnt like Glorfindel - he takes an approach of "whatever it takes" to return to the clan he was stolen from.

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So revenge is a dish best served...smelly? Image IPB


Hmmm, so Balrog=Archdemon? Balrog and Archdemon slayers unite! (Wait, does that mean Garahel=Glorfindel? Hmmmmm... Another moment in DA:O brought to you by Tolkien?)

And I'm looking forward to reading your fic. Not enough Mahariels 'round here... *cough, cough, looks at her avatar*

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Basic premise is that Glorfindel Mahariel's mage abilities awaken at the worst possible time and he is taken by the Templars to the Circle of Magi. He vows to Endure and follow any means necessary to escape his prison and rejoin his clan.

The interesting conflict will be how a Chantry/Human raised young Dalish elf with human friends (jowan will receive some love) who knows enough of his culture to stay true to it, but not enough to grow into a real Dalish will be received upon his eventual return (which may not even happen in the first fic...)

It's going to be a big departure from the Canon though... Glorfindel Mahariel is going to be about 33 years old (putting his date of birth at 98 Blessed), been in the circle for more than two decades
becoming a powerful battlemage, trusted by Greigor for his willingness to work with the Templars (at one point he is going to trade allowing himself to be smitted on multiple occasions to allow the Templars training against an actual mage in order to facilitate physical training/weapons [as alluded to in several codex entries found in the Circle Tower]) until he feels he's ready to make an escape, only to be stopped and put into confinement for two years. His punishment is halved when the Darkspawn Incursion begins and King Cailan/Loghain demand any capable Battle Mages and Healers for the war effort... enter Glorfindel into the early stages of Ostagar :D

As you can see I'm a Blood Mage and Tolkien fan, so expect Staff/Sword fighting a la Gandalf and some wicked applications of blood into magical combat ;)

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Hey guys!

Sorry I've been so quiet lately. I decided to just plug into my ff and get that written and I wanted to let you all know that the first chapter is up! Let me know what you guys think! :lol: Love the new prompt *puts on thinking cap* I will definitely have to fill this weeks!

Also, no proof reader or anything so if you catch something weird feel free to let me know.

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I wish Alistair had more lines for Warden's Keep. There should be something about being happy to keep Duncan's promise for him.

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tklivory wrote...

@ Meri -

*whip crack* Return to writing Lenya, woman!  You *have no other purpose in life* (this is my hypnotizing stare, right here, ya know Image IPB)


Lol, as much time I sometimes spend with ma FF and have in the end about 500 words written the day (boo), that might be awfully close to the truth at times. :P But then again, my Dalish will nagging me until I have finished her story, so don't worry. 

I want my first Lenya/Alistair kiss before the New Year! Image IPB  So get to writing!

*ahem*

I lurv you, you know that, right?


Heh. That wish isn't unrealistic. At all. And will come true. :wizard: You say that now, but I'm sure you'll hate me for my next chap, lol.  

And don't leave!  How else will I get to bug you about Lenya updates? Image IPB

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And I love, love, love your new Avi Image IPB


Thanks, I love DA STROLL too, lol. :devil: And I won't leave, I just find it a pity that my brain is uncapable to produce anything in writing than OEaH atm. I used to be good at that prompt thingie. *sadpanda* 

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tklivory wrote...

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Prompt:

Shades of Grey


Ehh, I have written a whole chapter about that, lately. Even named it like that xD Shall I post the part of it? Though it isn't so Alistair focused as it should be for an Alistair prompt. :?

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Merilsell wrote...

Ehh, I have written a whole chapter about that, lately. Even named it like that xD Shall I post the part of it? Though it isn't so Alistair focused as it should be for an Alistair prompt. :?


@ Meri - there is no shame in taking advantage of coincidence if it means I get to read more Lenya fic get to read your stuff.  Besides, I love Rage's prompts, and they can involve as much Dan or Leliana as Alistair.  This is an Alistair thread, but Alistair's actions are also very much informed and influenced by his companions and the events of the game.  So I say, go for it!

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Okay, then I'll do it. To explain the scene to the many people who are not reading my story (from which this is directly taken but it is way too long to post the whole thing) The group had returned to a very destroyed Lothering. It wasn't planned, but due to their way to the wilds and chasing some darkspawn, they ended up there. Seeing all the decayed corpses Lenya was already regretting it, but then under one pile of corpses a very disturbed Leliana is finding one alive: Elric (the guy of the RtO- DLC) who tells them about the kings key that he hid in a hut here, nearby...and dies.

So while the companions already moved on to the bridge leading out of the destroyed town, Lenya and Alistair are going to search for the key inside the hut...and find more than they have bargained for.

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The shack was more spacious than it looked from the outside, the furniture covered with dirt and dust, but surprisingly whole. The stink of decay was less intense inside, but still apparent. Wanting to spend no longer time here than needed, both Wardens started to search for the key in the shelves and the drawers underneath. It seemed as if a family had lived here once, their personal belongings littered everywhere on the ground. Lenya first found a book about gardening, then cookware, and even a doll. Everything was partly burned or soiled with filth. Somehow, it was a depressing sight to her to see whole existences left behind just like that. They apparently had not even time to pack their few belongings before fleeing from the darkspawn.

Considering the bodies remaining within the destroyed village, Lenya wasn't even sure if they managed that.

Arai followed a trail he had discovered, and appeared agitated as he sniffed on the ground. Only a few seconds later, the Mabari stopped and started to scratch repeatedly on the wooden planks in the middle of the grimy floor. Lenya halted her search, confused at her dog's reaction. The animal turned to her with a plaintive whine and she finally gave in to check what Arai found so interesting.

"I think," Alistair stopped to observe the object in his hand: a golden ornamented, metal key, "I have found it."

Lenya didn't listen to him. She was kneeling in front of the place Arai had scratched at and tilted her head to the side.

Alistair frowned and walked over to her, stashing the key in the pouch at his belt. "What is it?"

"There is someone crying. Underneath the floor."

"I don't hear anything." Despite his words, he bent over, his gloved hands brushing aside the dust on the floor. The outline of a little trap door became visible on the ground, the handle still hidden underneath a half-burned rug. Lenya looked, confused, at her fellow Warden, having never seen anything like this before. "It's a root cellar," he explained and begun to pull at the handle. It came loose with some effort, the trap door creaking loudly at the movement.

The hole was dark, the air within humid and still bearing traces of vegetables. The crying—now audible even to Alistair—stopped, replaced by a sharp intake of air. Lenya frowned. She had almost forgotten the existence of this feeling after entering, but now where the door was open, the slight pull of taint within her blood had returned. One that was different from the soothing humming of her fellow Warden or the drowning feel of it outside in the destroyed village.

There was someone down there, and whoever it was, was likely sick with the taint. She exchanged a quick glance with Alistair, more to check that she didn't imagine this feeling than anything else. His gaze remained unreadable within the second that their eyes met; he was too concentrated on finding out who this person down there was.

"Hello? Is anyone there?"

No answer except the sound of hesitating, tiny steps coming closer. Arai whined and cocked his head, and the hound seemed equally as worried as his mistress.

"A-are the bad monsters gone now?"

A girl's voice. It sounded young. Too young.

Alistair gave in to the urge to blink, needing a moment to process the words. "Y-yes. We're Grey Wardens. You can come out."

Lenya wasn't even sure if she still wanted that to happen. Her hand clawed into the dirty fur of her Mabari as she continued to stare at the dark hole, waiting. For a long moment, there was agonizing silence, only disrupted by the coughing of the girl.

Lenya startled as she suddenly appeared right next to her. "You are Grey Wardens?" Red-rimmed blue eyes peered distrustfully into the grimy and bloodstained faces of elven and human Warden alike. "Have you seen my mommy? She will be angry that I ran away, but I was afraid, so afraid." The girl was on the verge of tears again, clutching the doll in her arms to her chest, and whimpering.

Lenya couldn't do anything but to stare at her.

No...

She was no older than six, maybe seven, her once white woolen dress dark from soot and dirt. Underneath the filth that covered her far-too-gaunt face, her skin was sallow and sweat dampened the long, dark red hair. The child wiped her upwelling tears with the back of her hands and shuddered involuntarily. Arai looked at the girl and whined, licking over her cheek with his tongue to comfort her.

"Doggy." For a moment, she forgot her distress, even smiled a little as she impulsively threw her arms around Arai's thick neck. Lenya awoke out of her state of shock and glanced over to Alistair, his appalled expression telling her that he was feeling it too.

The girl was tainted.

His brows creasing to a painful frown, he shook his head and blinked, unwilling to accept what he was seeing and feeling.

And what it meant.

"No!" he whispered the word very quietly, yet loud enough for her elven ears. Lenya was about to answer when a childish voice stopped her.

"Is this your doggy? Do you have griffons, too?" The girl was looking at her now, eyes wide and curious. They were puffy from all her crying. "You are an elf," the girl said brightly, without contempt, and even approached closer to touch Lenya's pointed ears.

Normally, the Dalish would have already backed away and scowled or yelled at the child for daring to come so close, but now she simply let it happen. Her fingers were unnaturally hot on the sensitive skin of her ears. A feverish warmth emanated from the girl's presence, something Lenya knew all too well herself. This was how the taint always started, before it'd get worse. "Yes, this is my dog. He is a Mabari and his name is Arai." She avoided telling the girl her own name, as well as looking into her into the eyes.

The child turned to the dog and took one of his big paws to shake it. "Nice to meet you, Arai. I'm Nelia." Arai barked once and slobbered over Nelia's cheek, wagging his stumpy tail as she giggled.

"W-why are you still here? Where is your family?" Alistair had trouble speaking, as if a big lump was beginning to form itself in his throat. Much to his horror, the girl's face contorted into a crying expression and she started to sob again.

"Mommy." Nelia sniffled, and then hiccupped a few times before again wiping her tears away with the back of her hands. "Daddy was sick. So we stayed here in Lothering. And helped the others to make it nice here again. But then the... the bad monster came back. They... they..." She faltered and wept bitterly and only stopped when Arai whined. Then she leaned closer to the hound. "I ran and hid here. Mommy told me to. Have I done anything wrong?" Her tearful eyes peered up at Alistair. "I waited and waited, but Mommy didn't come back. I knew I wasn't allowed to drink the water or eat the vegetables in the cellar, but I was so hungry and thirsty. Is my mommy angry? Did she leave me alone because of that?"

Alistair swallowed hard. "N-no, of course not. I'm sure she is... waiting somewhere." Even Lenya knew that was a blatant lie, for her mother and family likely died when the darkspawn attacked a second time. He threw a glance over to his fellow Warden, then back at the child. "Can you stay here with Arai for a moment? I need... to discuss something with Lenya. We'll be back in a minute."

Nelia looked over to the elf and her face brightened, if only for a moment. "Okay, I'll wait, Mr. Warden."

Before the Dalish even had the chance to glare at Alistair for giving her name away, he dragged her out of the hut, voice hushed. "We should get Wynne!"

Lenya scowled, hating the futility of his request. "And what shall that be good for? You know there is no cure."

"She's a little girl, Lenya! We have to do something!"

She didn't say anything, but her eyes caught his, the meaning of her unspoken words clear and horrid at the same time. "No!" The word was more audible this time, had a more despaired edge. "I refuse to hear anything more of this. She's a little girl. No!"

"Then tell me I'm wrong in what I'm feeling." Lenya's expression grew hard and she struggled to keep her voice low. "Tell me I'm wrong when I say the girl is tainted and already showing the first signs of it. It will only get worse from here on." Her voice broke and she needed to swallow hard. "I know what I'm talking about."

Alistair didn't answer and lowered his gaze past Lenya and onto a corpse he had avoided looking at before. The body still wore the rags of a filthy and bloodied chantry robe. It was possibly one of the sisters they had met on their first visit here. He bit his lip, still staring at the ground. "I can't. Don't ask this of me. It's bad enough that I—we—couldn't do anything for these people, so... no, I can't ki—" He struggled with the word, refused to even say it. "She's just a little girl."

The wind howled in between the skeletons of once beautiful buildings and was, for a long moment, the only audible sound. Lenya felt herself shivering and she was aware that the cold was not the reason. "Then... I will do it."

"W-what?" His head snapped up, his gaze toward her furious. "How could you say that so easily, as if this is nothing?" He stared at her and trembled in anger, his gloved hands at his sides balled into fists. "Right," he said as he sneered, caught up in his ire. "I forgot this must be easy for you. You don't like humans, after all."

The ring of the slap reverberated loudly through the silence, momentarily drowning out every other sound. Lenya ignored his shocked expression and withdrew her stinging hand, only to get a grip on her dagger, unsheathing it. She placed the cool metal on his throat, her expression hurt and angry. "Leave. Or I swear I'll..." Lenya left the sentence hanging, the added pressure of the blade on his throat leaving a scratch, drawing blood.

For a moment, neither of them moved. Their eyes still remained locked on each other, their breath ragged at the raw emotions clouding them. Eventually, Alistair touched his hurting cheek, glanced over to the hut and wordlessly turned into the opposite direction, literally fleeing from there. Lenya looked down at the dagger in her hand, how the drops of blood shimmered on its surface in the light... his blood. She choked back a whimper, but couldn't stop her hand holding the blade from quavering. She knew what she had to do.

And she had never felt more alone.

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She is just a human girl... I don't even like kids, so why? Why do I feel so bad about it?


"Oh, hello!" As Lenya reopened the door to the shack and saw Nelia smiling, she knew why. She was just an innocent little girl thrown into this havoc. The Blight that raged over her home and village had taken everything from her, and still the girl smiled at her.

At the one person who was going to kill her for being tainted.

It is better this way... instead of letting her suffer. Instead of letting the taint change her...

"Where is Mr. Warden? Did you fight? You look so sad now. Mommy and Daddy fought sometimes, too."

Lenya blinked, jarred from her thoughts. "N-no. He is just... searching for your family. Maybe they are still outside." She took a deep breath, the lie heavy and bitter on her tongue.

Melava inan enansal. Ir su araval tu elvaral. U na emma abelas.

The old song of her people roamed unbidden through her mind. Maybe she sought comfort in the familiar sound of her tongue, maybe even forgiveness for what she was about to do. Lenya couldn't say for sure.

"Are we going to her?" Nelia gasped, excited. "I miss her. Do you have a mommy, Lenya?" The girl advanced closer to her, tilting her head. "Leeen...yaaaa. That is a pretty name."

"I needed to leave my family, my clan, to become a Grey Warden." Why was she even telling her this? It was only making it harder.

"You miss them, or?" Nelia nodded and looked up to her in wonder, before her blue eyes wandered to the griffon on her armored chest. "You know, my mommy told me stories about the Grey Wardens. How you drove the bad monsters away. You are heroes. When I'm a grown up, I want to be a Grey Warden, too."

Lenya choked back tears. Her mouth curved into a deep frown as she watched the girl's fingers trace the lines of the griffon stamped on the leather. There was nothing heroic about being a Grey Warden.

Nothing at all.

"You are going to see your family soon, Nelia," Lenya whispered in a trembling voice, kneeling down next to the girl. Her fingers clawed around the hilt of her dagger, struggling for a moment to draw it.

In elgar sa vir mana. In tu setheneran din emma na.

"Really?" The girl's face brightened. Oblivious to the unsheathed blade in the elf's hand, Nelia hugged her. "Thank you."

"Emma ir abalas. Abalas. Abalas!"


Lenya did not look at Nelia as she drove the blade through the girl's heart, paid no heed to Arai's agitated barking, just felt how the tiny arms around her went limp. How, with a last gasp, life escaped the little girl. Lenya didn't want to see all the blood that was now seeping everywhere: on the ground, on her hands, marking her. So she turned away, the bloodied dagger clattering on the floor when she suddenly felt too weak to hold it. She stared at her blood-soaked hands and felt sick, so very sick. Giving in to the urge to empty her stomach on the floor, she heaved until there was nothing left but one thought:

She was no hero.

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@ Merisell - So moving! I'm off to have a cry (and I mean that as sincere praise).

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Ahem... A question for the DA:O plot experts and lore folks... If the Warden recruits Loghain and places Alistair/Anora on the throne, Anora accompanies the armies to Redcliffe. Alistair, I presume, remains in Denerim... but when the Darkspawn descend on the city, Alistair is no-where to be seen. So, where does Alistair go? Is he hiding in a closet at the palace? Was he shuttled somewhere for his safety? Or is this one of the great mysteries, leaving me as free to speculate as the next person?

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Good one Meri. Very touching and highlights one of the horrors of war that we do not see in the game at all.  And as for using Lenya's stories that's what I have been doing. I had one that was closer to the prompt when Dan confronts Anders in Kirkwall, but Alistair was not in that at all so I chose a different one. :P

tsm--I think it's up to our imagination. Like she went to Redcliffe while he stayed in Denerim. I would suppose he didn't return to Redcliffe out of anger to Eamon for not stopping the actions regarding Loghain. And then once the fighting started in Denerim he is somewhere fighting in the city...a part we do not see in the game.

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RagingCyclone wrote...

tsm--I think it's up to our imagination. Like she went to Redcliffe while he stayed in Denerim. I would suppose he didn't return to Redcliffe out of anger to Eamon for not stopping the actions regarding Loghain. And then once the fighting started in Denerim he is somewhere fighting in the city...a part we do not see in the game.


Thanks for the response, Rage. Do we know that Alistair is fighting somewhere during the final battle, though? Or is it possible he's elsewhere... outside of the city?

Sorry for the stupid questions, but I don't know who else to ask. :-(

~tsm

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No, I think it's up to the imagination. That he is fighting where we don't see is my speculation.

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RagingCyclone wrote...

No, I think it's up to the imagination. That he is fighting where we don't see is my speculation.


Thanks for the clarification, Rage. I appreciate your thoughtful answers on this... I posted the same query on my blog and the best answer I got was "he went to Kirkwall". :huh:

And unless someone has something more definitive, being able to use my imagination on this works really well for my purposes.

pax~
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Okay, I swear I'll read everything I've missed, but in the meantime here's a drive-by Derp for Monday:

The classic Ishal derp:
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Thanks for the lovely feedback *hugsies*

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Not a derp, but a story update :D

Lenya: "Don't look at me like that, puppy. It wasn't me who wrote that chapter to let it end like THAT. "
Alistair: "Excuses, excuses" *pouts*

Modifié par Merilsell, 08 novembre 2011 - 02:31 .


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@ Meri - And once again, we get to blame Wynne for everything. *shakes tiny fist of rage* Image IPB  *grumble grumble wait til New Year grumble grumble*

Also, the Lothering story is still a great moment of storytelling.  The character growth of Lenya as she confronts what the taint actually might have done to her and what it means to see it in others is one aspect of the character that keeps me coming back for more (aside from the whole *when will they kiss, dammit!*, o' course).  This is definitely one of the underappreciated aspects of Dalish elves origin - the fact that they have the least amount of personal motivation to become a Grey Warden, but the greatest personal need to pursue the path.


All right, some catch up:

@ Rage - Very moving story.  I always felt that the carnage within the Tower as a result of Uldred's uprising was never adequately shown in the game, and your story brings to mind those parts that I felt should have been there but weren't.  The bonding of Alistair and Dan was well portrayed, especially in the sense of exploring what Templar training can accomplish in Alistair's perception of mages.  And dang it, now I want sugary cakes, too!  Image IPB


@ Ambra - I enjoyed reading your first chapter!  I love the family dynamics with the children and additional siblings.  It certainly establishes a greater sense of loss, and more poignancy as a result.  Having the main character be not the PC of the origin but the sibling of one is a very good move, as it will allow you (as you have already done) to explore different aspects of the story and the characters within the story as well.  I look forward to reading subsequent chapters!  (and to your prompt fill as well!)


@ Anni - I've also always felt that there are several missed opportunities for Alistair to have additional, meaningful dialogue.  in Soldier's Peak and Return to Ostagar, in particular, I've always felt that they could have put more references about Duncan in those areas.


@ Glor - *looks at watch* I'm waiting for my Glorfindel fic!  I want my Noldorin Thedas fix now, darnit! Image IPB  Canon be damned!


@ tsm - it is true that if you have an exile Alistair ending, he somehow ends up in Kirkwall (or Starkhaven, or whatever) by the time the events of DA2 occurs, but there is no 'canon' of what Alistair does after leaving the party and before ending up there.  I agree with Rage here - it's best left to the imagination of the player.

Maybe he took advantage of the confusion to raid the palace's cheese stores!

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As it should be, lol. But don't worry it wasn't the last foray/attempt into this that follows. There is still hope. Heh.