@ Briiel & Zjarcal: Thanks so much
@ KoP: I contemplated that scenario as well, but ultimately, I fell back on the old saying, "If I can't have you, no one can." Haha
@ tuppence: Haha, hey, I've got no qualms with some Banhammering :B
Comments:@ Sarah: I love the build-up to that pivotal line before Loghain's execution. I think few (if any) Alistair moments are anywhere near as dark as that one scene.
@ Tigress M: A good plot point to write on, for sure. I think you did an excellent job describing his inner struggle and reasoning with the whole Dark Ritual situation.
RagingCyclone: Wow, Alistair is almost unrecognizable O: But, I think his unfortunate fate is well-represented on his face. Poor AliBear
@ bleetman: A concise, yet powerful description of Alistair and the Warden's Calling. I'm now going to have to Google pictures of cute, frolicking puppies...
@ Lady Damodred: I really liked the final part where Alistair confronts Kalea. It was very heartwarming and heart wrenching all at the same time. I also appreciated the fact that the story ended on a somewhat darker note, despite Alistair having "won" Kalea's heart.
@ Lady Jess: Protective Alistair is so dashing. I can completely see him being a little overprotective of his sister warden in a romance with Zev.
@ Persephone: A poetically written confrontation between two betrayed parties. Very emotive
@ Yankee23: I ♥ your picture. The cheese junkie is getting his fix
@ Melca36: I always thought a more dynamic cut scene for the Cousland PC killing Howe would have been nice. In lieu of that, I think you provided a nice substitute
Reika: Possibly one of the darker submissions I've read thus far, but very powerful in that respect. I couldn't help but be reminded of the following exchange: PC: I would never hurt you. Alistair: Nor I you.
@ ErrantKnight: Alistair does seem slightly fanatical when it comes to blood magic and its practitioners.
@ Gilsa: A nice drawing (as I've come to expect from you

). He's definitely stuck between a rock and a hard place, the poor guy
@ Merilsell: Somewhat reminiscent of the CE Origin (one of my favs, btw) toward the end. Maybe I'm just a sucker, but I really like stories where the Knight in Shining Armor rescues the Damsel in Distress. A good read, for sure
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