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KnightofPhoenix

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Addai67 wrote...

Chapter Nine of The Arrangement.

This was a tough one.


Addai, this is beautiful.
I've always wondered how Loghain would have reacted to Maric's dissapearance, and I think you've captured that beautifully (and thank the Maker for Ellie being there!).

And this:
"Then they are both waiting for you now. You will see them again, I believe that."

This made me teary eyed.

I think you've done the best job to demonstrate why Loghain is the deepest character in DA, imo. 

Modifié par KnightofPhoenix, 23 octobre 2010 - 08:50 .


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KnightofPhoenix wrote...

I think you've done the best job to demonstrate why Loghain is the deepest character in DA, imo. 


The irony in that statement is so delicious!

*refrains from commenting on the FF since she hasn't read it yet*

Modifié par Zjarcal, 23 octobre 2010 - 08:57 .


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Zjarcal wrote...

KnightofPhoenix wrote...

I think you've done the best job to demonstrate why Loghain is the deepest character in DA, imo. 


The irony in that statement is so delicious!


I know, right? It's like thousands of pages of Loghain debate pale in comparison to one beautifully written fic, written by an avid Alistairian. Image IPB

Color me jealous of your skillz. Image IPB

Modifié par phaonica, 23 octobre 2010 - 09:25 .


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KnightofPhoenix wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

Chapter Nine of The Arrangement.

This was a tough one.


Addai, this is beautiful.
I've always wondered how Loghain would have reacted to Maric's dissapearance, and I think you've captured that beautifully (and thank the Maker for Ellie being there!).

And this:
"Then they are both waiting for you now. You will see them again, I believe that."

This made me teary eyed.

I think you've done the best job to demonstrate why Loghain is the deepest character in DA, imo. 

Aww, thank you so much.  That means a lot, especially coming from a Loghain fan.  And that is exactly why this chapter had my head cracking.  I re-wrote the scene with Ellie several times, because I was having a hard time figuring out how Loghain would grieve.  He never says a word about his father's death to anyone.  Well, if he ever talks about it to Rowan, Gaider never says.  So I figure that he is intensely private, and also expresses love in action more than words.  For instance in TST he does go find his father's body after the war, and finds Mother Ailis.  Hence why I put the line in about him intending to find out what happened to Maric.

Anyway I'm glad you think I sort of got it right, after all that.  :)

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phaonica wrote...

I know, right? It's like thousands of pages of Loghain debate pale in comparison to one beautifully written fic, written by an avid Alistairian. Image IPB

Color me jealous of your skillz. Image IPB

LOL  Those wily Alistarians.  :lol:

Well, it's definitely the forum that provides a lot of ideas as well as lore knowledge I wouldn't otherwise have.  So you guys get a co-author credit.  I have your Defense of Loghain Mac Tir blog page bookmarked, for instance!

Modifié par Addai67, 23 octobre 2010 - 09:51 .


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Though I am nowhere near as talented as Addai, here is Chapter seven of my story:

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/7/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma

Enjoy! :happy:

Modifié par Persephone, 23 octobre 2010 - 09:56 .


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Persephone wrote...

Though I am nowhere near as talented as Addai, here is Chapter seven of my story:

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/7/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma

Enjoy! :happy:

One of the things I look forward to in finishing mine is that I get to read yours and others.  :)  Still trying to avoid other Loghain stuff for now.

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Addai67 wrote...

Persephone wrote...

Though I am nowhere near as talented as Addai, here is Chapter seven of my story:

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/7/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma

Enjoy! :happy:

One of the things I look forward to in finishing mine is that I get to read yours and others.  :)  Still trying to avoid other Loghain stuff for now.


Understandable. I applaud the idea of wanting to stick to canon. Because those Loghain fics are sneaky, they WILL influence you. :lol:

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KnightofPhoenix

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Persephone, I will definitely read yours when I have free time. I have to start from 0 because unfortunately for me, I've been too busy. And I can't focus on several FFs at the same time.

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KnightofPhoenix wrote...

Persephone, I will definitely read yours when I have free time. I have to start from 0 because unfortunately for me, I've been too busy. And I can't focus on several FFs at the same time.


*Honored* Do not expect Addai's brilliance. :happy::P:lol:

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Persephone wrote...

KnightofPhoenix wrote...

Persephone, I will definitely read yours when I have free time. I have to start from 0 because unfortunately for me, I've been too busy. And I can't focus on several FFs at the same time.


*Honored* Do not expect Addai's brilliance. :happy::P:lol:

Aw, stop that.  :blush: You bring a lot of passion to the subject I don't really.  Not that I can't say the story hasn't grabbed me.  Loghain has taken over my brain!

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Perfect chapter....but you will have to excuse me if I ain't a bit jealous of the attention your FF has gotten over mine.

Hmm....Loghain at Rowan's deathbed, I will do that!

Modifié par Costin_Razvan, 23 octobre 2010 - 11:46 .


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Costin_Razvan wrote...

Perfect chapter....but you will have to excuse me if I ain't a bit jealous of the attention your FF has gotten over mine.

Hmm....Loghain at Rowan's deathbed, I will do that!


*Is jealous too* But the attention is well deserved.

Hmmmmmmmm....interesting scenario. But the way I see Loghain, he'd not be there. He would say Goodbye, but not in a traditional way.

And Addai, you are clearly passionate about this....we will convert you yet. Come to the dark side. We have....er...cheese!:lol:

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Costin_Razvan wrote...

Perfect chapter....but you will have to excuse me if I ain't a bit jealous of the attention your FF has gotten over mine.

Hmm....Loghain at Rowan's deathbed, I will do that!

Don't be jealous, I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop and everyone to say "well that sucks."  LOL  Actually SurelyForth can attest that when I was first considering publishing, I really expected no one to even read it and fewer people to like it.  So even if everyone decides they hate it I figure I'm ahead of the game!

I look forward to reading yours too once I'm done!

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Addai67 wrote...

Loghain has taken over my brain!


Muhuhuhuhahahaha. . .:devil:

It happens.

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Wonderful, Addai, and so sad. You continue to write Loghain brilliantly.

I'm reading yours too, Persephone. Interested to see where you take this.


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Hmm. . .I just finished bringing Loghain back to Ostagar and I must say I'm a bit disappointed. Just as I think that the creators of this DLC went overboard in trying to evoke a sentimental reaction by suddenly making Alistair care deeply for Cailan --when actually he really didn't, according to a regular-game party banter-- I think that they also went out of their way to make Loghain look crabby, callous and spiteful. I understood when he asked my Mage to "keep the moralizing to a minimum" (though a little miffed that he thought it necessary to ask her that before she'd had a chance to say a word), and laughed when his first comment upon entering Ostagar was "This is a fool's errand! Do you know how many Darkspawn there are around here?!?" (Gee, I wonder when he'd last said that in this place. . .); but then he just kept griping and sniping the whole freakin' time. I thought that not having Wynne there would make him a little less sensitive about the whole thing and more prone to be reasonable, but no. Even the finding of Maric's sword, about which he'd been so concerned when talking to Elric, couldn't give him one positive note about the experience. Speaking of notes, I wasn't suprised, of course, when he started screaming about the correspondence he found in Cailan's chest. That made sense to me, and if his anger and bile had peaked at that point I would have gone along with him. Even if he had ridden that anger through the rest of the episode, making references to the contents of those letters when deciding what to do with Cailan's body etc., I would have understood. But he was the exact same level of nasty from beginning to end, and never made another reference to Cailan's dalliance with the Orlesians --just harped on his foolishness about the battle.

I don't know. I know why he was angry, and why he'd still be bitter. But everywhere else in the game, he's tempered that anger and bitterness with good sense. In Denerim, he condoles with the PC for the losses of her fellow Wardens at Ostagar. At the Landsmeet, he accuses Cailan of foolishly getting himself and his army killed but also expresses regret at the loss of Maric's son (and yes, he could have been playing to his audience, but that's more Anora's way, not his). He shows compassion towards Elric and while still pointing out that the battle was ill-conceived and doomed to fail, he understands that this is not Elric's fault. But the second he steps into Ostagar, he becomes this irrepressible ball of rage and takes a good deal of that rage out on the PC. I'm not sure if whoever wrote the script for RtO assumed that Loghain would be taken back there early in his career as a Warden, or by a PC who didn't like him and wanted to drag him back to every point of interest and wag their finger in his face, or what. But I waited until we were getting along pretty well --and until after I had dragged him all kinds of other places, including into mobs of Darkspawn, which had never before given him cause to complain-- so the sudden switch to high-voltage hate mode seemed really out of context.

[EDIT]: Okay, I just did something out of character for me --I looked at a YouTube video of someone else playing RtO. And it looks like I missed out --not only on a lot of Loghain's dialogue, but the bits of dialogue that display his reason-- by not bringing a fourth party member. The person who made the YouTube video had brought Wynne as well as Loghain, so naturally they sniped back and forth a lot, but Loghain's half of the sniping did involve a thought process instead of just a rain of hate. I not only did not bring Wynne, but the only other companion I brought besides Loghain was Dog, figuring that any fourth companion would probably start with the moralizing and/or finger-wagging. I preferred things to be nice and quiet and dignified, which they weren't. With no one to engage in a dialogue, all Loghain could do was snarl and scream to himself. So, I think I'm going to do something else out of character for me, which is go back and play that whole DLC again but bring a fourth party member this time.

Modifié par Morwen Eledhwen, 24 octobre 2010 - 08:50 .


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Only Wynne, Loghain and Alistair have signficant dialogue for RtO. Leliana says something about Maric's sword, but that's it. The other characters are mysteriously silent. (Dog makes sounds, but that didn't really require bringing in a voice actor...)

Having Loghain and Wynne together is quite entertaining, if only because he puts her in her place.

Bear in mind, though, that RtO was written by different writers and all the characters are a bit, well, out of character. Wynne's horrendously inappropriate flirt with Alistair (in a place where he'd be understandably emotional) is the worst of it.

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CalJones wrote...

Only Wynne, Loghain and Alistair have signficant dialogue for RtO. Leliana says something about Maric's sword, but that's it. The other characters are mysteriously silent. (Dog makes sounds, but that didn't really require bringing in a voice actor...)
Having Loghain and Wynne together is quite entertaining, if only because he puts her in her place.
Bear in mind, though, that RtO was written by different writers and all the characters are a bit, well, out of character. Wynne's horrendously inappropriate flirt with Alistair (in a place where he'd be understandably emotional) is the worst of it.


Hmm. That's unfortunate because I don't have Wynne with me; she sodded off when I defiled the Urn of Sacred Ashes. Well, I'm still going to try it again with Leliana as my fourth. Even if she doesn't have much to say for herself, at least maybe she'll allow Loghain to get off more of his dialogue. Plus I wasn't happy that Loghain KOed in the final battle; I was too concerned with disabling the Genlock Necromancer and didn't realize until too late that the Risen Ogre had picked him up and was pummeling him to death. I was going to leave it the way it was and just continue on, but now that I have an extra reason to replay it, I can hopefully right that wrong. B)

I was wondering if the writers were different --was just about to check the credits on that, actually. Thanks for saving me the trouble =]

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Yeah, you won't get any extra dialogue with Loghain. He has his banters with Wynne or his solo rants, which are really just cut down versions of the banters with Wynne, and that's it. Sorry to disappoint. Still that'll give you another chance to replay, so you can have them both in party.

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CalJones wrote...

Yeah, you won't get any extra dialogue with Loghain. He has his banters with Wynne or his solo rants, which are really just cut down versions of the banters with Wynne, and that's it. Sorry to disappoint. Still that'll give you another chance to replay, so you can have them both in party.


<_< Dang. I wish they could have written substitute dialogue for non-Wynne companions so that Loghain's lines could always be delivered in full. He really sounds like a nutter when he's just raving to himself.

Speaking of Wynne, I went back to the Circle of Magi with Loghain hoping that I'd encounter her there, so I could go "Hey, guess what?? You told me I was no better than the Darkspawn and you wanted nothing to do with me. Well, I got rid of Alistair too and look who's taken his place. AND, he's more warrior than Alistair will ever be and you'll have us to thank for saving your bony old butt from the Blight. Ta! :P" I couldn't find her, though.

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I wonder if she'll turn up in Awakening? I had one game where I refused to take her with me (obviously you have to take her through the Circle tower, but can refuse when she asks Irving if she can leave with you) and she showed up in Awakening anyway.

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@Morwen Eledhwen: I didn't feel Loghain was really out of character. Strictly speaking, you are wasting time by going to Ostagar. Still, if you feel that documents in a chest that you have the key for and the darkspawn won't be snooping around in and no one else would possibly be able to get to and break open the chest until the Blight is over is worth it then that's one thing. Finding all of Cailan's armor that the darkspawn stole and then dealing with Cailan's body wastes even more time and post-Landsmeet time is really running out.



Why ELRIC may not be to blame for the battle failing, Cailan was the one who insisted on the battle plan and Loghain - right or wrong and for whatever his reasons were - was the one who came up with the plan and didn't follow through. That puts the two of them as the potential responsible parties and Loghain, convinced that he was right on the matter, blames Cailan. Cailan getting himself killed also caused the civil war and left Ferelden in such a horrible position. Not to mention that as calm as he can be elsewhere, he's being brought back to the very same spot where everything fell apart which was probably one of his worst moments in years. Expecting him to be calm and rational about it is unreasonable, I think.

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@Sarah - could you please explain what you mean by "Cailan getting himself killed also caused the civil war and left Ferelden in such a horrible position"?



I don't want to jump to conclusions there, but it stood out to me,



I've never taken Loghain to Ostagar, personally, The one - and only - time I recruited him was because I wanted the Alistair drunk ending, and I'd already done RtO that game.



Are there dialogue points with him? Not party banter, but PC and Loghain dialogue? That MIGHT entice me to do it, just for the experience.

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If Cailan did not die there would not have been a civil war ostensibly over succession in the middle of a Blight. The civil war left Ferelden in pretty bad shape to deal with the Blight. You could also say that if they hadn't fought there the army wouldn't be wiped out and could have been used during the final battle. I don't really think that the army was able to do enough damage to the horde to make up for losing it regardless of what would have happened if Loghain had charged. That aside, Cailan could have easily survived if he had not been on the front lines but waited in safety like Loghain wanted. The civil war and all that followed not taking place happened because he didn't listen to Loghain. I can definitely see Loghain blaming Cailan for that.