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[TheRevanchist]

otaku4ever wrote...

kylecouch wrote...

Ah but is that not a good story telling tactic?

It is, indeed. Can't wait for the next part

heh heh heh ... you'll have to wait for me to get another idea I'm afraid...Jedi made that off handed comment that sparked the entire idea. Alas...no clue for ending the cliffhanger yet lmao.

[Shiro_the_Gambler]

Inspiration is a fickle b****, unfortunately.

[TheRevanchist]

Indeed it is Shiro...indeed it is...

[TheRevanchist]

Of course I hope I don't need to explain that the Qunari who kicked their A** is the Arishok right? I described his Destiny apperence quite well I thought lol.

[Shiro_the_Gambler]

Came across quite nicely.

[TheRevanchist]

Btw...otaku...Shiro...did you get to read part 1? :3

[Shiro_the_Gambler]

Yes, I did. I enjoyed it, as well. Guess I am going to have to give up the title of Mister Negativity... damn.

[TheRevanchist]

muhahahaaaaaaa....your in luck...I got the main idea for part 3...if I can just figure out how to strech it out to actually make a story out of it...it'll be out before the days done. (depending on geographical locations)

[Shiro_the_Gambler]

Looking forward to it.

[otaku4ever]

kylecouch wrote...

Btw...otaku...Shiro...did you get to read part 1? :3

I did, and enjoyed it very much:D
*remembers the Fox News comment* I still think its funny...

[Matt 2108]

New to this thread... are there any clips floating around with Aveline's voice? Haven't heard it yet.

[Shiro_the_Gambler]

Only a tiny bit.  Can be found here.

[TheRevanchist]

Oomagh wrote...

kylecouch wrote...

Ladies and gents...the new fan-fic is done... http://lamppost25.de...all-2-197172734 ... -quietly leaves the room before people finish-

that was excellently done! the Battle was awsomely depicted!
.. and you will continue? 

Yep...Part 3 is being writtin as we speak! I very much doubt it will top that last one...but who knows....check out Part 1 if you haven't yet!

[TheRevanchist]

http://lamppost25.de...all-3-197204520 Part 3 away! ... although I feel I did rather poorly on this one...but if you like it...Fantastic! (sorry it's shorter...but if it's good then don't matter I suppose lol)

[Shiro_the_Gambler]

Awesome, yet again.

[TheRevanchist]

Shiro_the_Gambler wrote...

Awesome, yet again.

Thank you sir...although I can promise right now Part 4 probably won't be out until I can find a brand new idea. Which is harder then expanding on an exsisting one lmao.

[Uhh.. Jonah]

Threeparts wrote...

Aveline has become Deputy Commander of the City Guard.

This is a translation from a new preview. Looks like our guardian has becomes the Deputy Commander of the City Guard...

[otaku4ever]

Uhh.. Jonah wrote...

Threeparts wrote...

Aveline has become Deputy Commander of the City Guard.

This is a translation from a new preview. Looks like our guardian has becomes the Deputy Commander of the City Guard...

Awesome!
If we do something not so legal, this might lead to some interesting banter

Modifié par otaku4ever, 13 février 2011 - 08:53 .

[JediHealerCosmin]

otaku4ever wrote...

Uhh.. Jonah wrote...

Threeparts wrote...

Aveline has become Deputy Commander of the City Guard.

This is a translation from a new preview. Looks like our guardian has becomes the Deputy Commander of the City Guard...

Awesome!
If we do something not so legal, this might lead to some interesting banter

Pure win! All of it 

[TheRevanchist]

Very interesting...makes my fan-fic even MORE bad **** since she was ordering people around

[Minxie]

otaku4ever wrote...

Uhh.. Jonah wrote...

Threeparts wrote...

Aveline has become Deputy Commander of the City Guard.

This is a translation from a new preview. Looks like our guardian has becomes the Deputy Commander of the City Guard...

Awesome!
If we do something not so legal, this might lead to some interesting banter

That is really interesting. :happy: I wonder if there's a point where Aveline simply won't put up with Hawke if he/she keeps up with criminal activity.

[TheRevanchist]

Oomagh wrote...

kylecouch wrote...

http://lamppost25.de...all-3-197204520 Part 3 away! ... although I feel I did rather poorly on this one...but if you like it...Fantastic! (sorry it's shorter...but if it's good then don't matter I suppose lol)

ah yes, Kyle the storyteller in the making 
you really think she will be that unyielding?... I have a feeling she may succumb in the end....

I feel she will be that unyielding throughout most of the game yes...however like I've said...I feel at most we'll get the Aveline equivilent of Samara by the end of the game.

And I'm already writing a novelBut sadly I can't get anyone to read the damn thing to tell me what they think of it...I need some form of input on it because I'm having self esteem issues with it lol.

[TheRevanchist]

Minxie18 wrote...

otaku4ever wrote...

Uhh.. Jonah wrote...

Threeparts wrote...

Aveline has become Deputy Commander of the City Guard.

This is a translation from a new preview. Looks like our guardian has becomes the Deputy Commander of the City Guard...

Awesome!
If we do something not so legal, this might lead to some interesting banter

That is really interesting. :happy: I wonder if there's a point where Aveline simply won't put up with Hawke if he/she keeps up with criminal activity.

That would be an interesting concept...like Wynne or Leli leaveing due to your actions...they have said companion's can still leave you so....