The Arrangement- Loghain/ Cousland AU- Story Complete 10/4/11
#176
Posté 15 novembre 2010 - 06:31
#177
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Posté 15 novembre 2010 - 11:12
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Addai67 wrote...
Poor Cailan, he just wants to be loved...
Yes, but Ellie love is off limits to him. He really needs to realize that she only loves and wants Loghain now.
#178
Posté 15 novembre 2010 - 11:39
He definitely does! I think, if she had just broken up with him straight up, he might have been past it already. But politics intervened, and politics tests people's basic humanity. As I see Cailan and Anora, they've known nothing but politics from day one. Bound to be some issues there. Plus he just lost his father and had a kingdom put on his shoulders and was saddled with a wife he doesn't really want. So yep yep, issues. But that's what makes it a story!tgail73 wrote...
Addai67 wrote...
Poor Cailan, he just wants to be loved...
Yes, but Ellie love is off limits to him. He really needs to realize that she only loves and wants Loghain now.
Modifié par Addai67, 15 novembre 2010 - 11:40 .
#179
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 12:43
Addai67 wrote...
Poor Cailan, he just wants to be loved...
Mmmm, I could just be projecting, too. His mannerisms and apparent obsession with Ellie and/or trying to separate Ellie and Loghain just reminds me faaaaaar too much of a creepy, ex-boyfriend stalker I had back in my freshman year of college. *shudders*
Reader baggage. Apologies for that. But it still makes me want to backhand, pimp-smack Cailan. Just leave those two alone and move on with your life, damn you! Don't the bitter and creepy road walk, you!
#180
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 12:56
Iago was born from less.
#181
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Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 01:42
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@Dragon..I totally agree with you about smacking Cailan in a big way. He is being very creepy with his obsession.
#182
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 02:47
Not to mention that Loghain is/ was a father figure to him, too. Issues!!mousestalker wrote...
Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.
Iago was born from less.
I really feel for Cailan- he has no one who cares about him for him anymore, and Theirins don't do well with that.
Maybe it's guilt over beating up on him so much in my story

P.S. In saying I feel badly for him I am definitely not trying to justify any creepy stalking, either real or in fiction!!
Modifié par Addai67, 16 novembre 2010 - 03:56 .
#183
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 02:49
Muahaha.tgail73 wrote...
@Addai..I love how this story gets us all worked up, lol. You really have done a great job with these characters.
#184
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 05:26
Cool, he is doing that heart touching thing like the painting of Alistair from Maria's Dark Ritual story.Addai67 wrote...
Not to mention that Loghain is/ was a father figure to him, too. Issues!!mousestalker wrote...
Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.
Iago was born from less.
I really feel for Cailan- he has no one who cares about him for him anymore, and Theirins don't do well with that.
Maybe it's guilt over beating up on him so much in my story, but I'll post this fanart that I love of him by another Loghain fan, MaevesChild. It's called "His Father's Empty Grave."
P.S. In saying I feel badly for him I am definitely not trying to justify any creepy stalking, either real or in fiction!!
#185
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 05:44
Eep, you're right! I <3 Maria's stories so much.Esbatty wrote...
Cool, he is doing that heart touching thing like the painting of Alistair from Maria's Dark Ritual story.Addai67 wrote...
Not to mention that Loghain is/ was a father figure to him, too. Issues!!mousestalker wrote...
Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.
Iago was born from less.
I really feel for Cailan- he has no one who cares about him for him anymore, and Theirins don't do well with that.
Maybe it's guilt over beating up on him so much in my story, but I'll post this fanart that I love of him by another Loghain fan, MaevesChild. It's called "His Father's Empty Grave."
P.S. In saying I feel badly for him I am definitely not trying to justify any creepy stalking, either real or in fiction!!
P.S. It is also the gesture Cailan makes when Ellie tells him she doesn't have feelings for him.
Modifié par Addai67, 16 novembre 2010 - 06:06 .
#186
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 07:46
I remember that, and thinking, "thats kinda a girly thing to do" but then I remembered he IS a Theirin and seem to be swimming in women and something has got to rub off on them. (Innuendo intended). But I've just barely finished reading all of Maria's DR story and thus it was the first thing that came to mind.Addai67 wrote...
Eep, you're right! I <3 Maria's stories so much.Esbatty wrote...
Cool, he is doing that heart touching thing like the painting of Alistair from Maria's Dark Ritual story.Addai67 wrote...
Not to mention that Loghain is/ was a father figure to him, too. Issues!!mousestalker wrote...
Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.
Iago was born from less.
I really feel for Cailan- he has no one who cares about him for him anymore, and Theirins don't do well with that.
Maybe it's guilt over beating up on him so much in my story, but I'll post this fanart that I love of him by another Loghain fan, MaevesChild. It's called "His Father's Empty Grave."
P.S. In saying I feel badly for him I am definitely not trying to justify any creepy stalking, either real or in fiction!!
P.S. It is also the gesture Cailan makes when Ellie tells him she doesn't have feelings for him.
But I demand more Kissy-Face Loghain.
#187
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 07:53
LOL It's not girly. Well, I'm a chick, so I have my own ideas of what is girly. To me it's like saying that something hurts so much it takes your breath away.Esbatty wrote...
I remember that, and thinking, "thats kinda a girly thing to do" but then I remembered he IS a Theirin and seem to be swimming in women and something has got to rub off on them. (Innuendo intended). But I've just barely finished reading all of Maria's DR story and thus it was the first thing that came to mind.
But I demand more Kissy-Face Loghain.
Loghain is off being charles in charge, no kissyface for him.
Here's another screenie to tide you over.
#188
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 08:55
Okay now Scott Baio is dreamy. Loghain - is Loghain. That shall never change, lol.Addai67 wrote...
LOL It's not girly. Well, I'm a chick, so I have my own ideas of what is girly. To me it's like saying that something hurts so much it takes your breath away.Esbatty wrote...
I remember that, and thinking, "thats kinda a girly thing to do" but then I remembered he IS a Theirin and seem to be swimming in women and something has got to rub off on them. (Innuendo intended). But I've just barely finished reading all of Maria's DR story and thus it was the first thing that came to mind.
But I demand more Kissy-Face Loghain.
Loghain is off being charles in charge, no kissyface for him.
Here's another screenie to tide you over.
But yes yes you had to remind me he had to once again be parted from his darling new family. But still Fergus' "kissy-face" line will never cease to bring a smirk to my face.
And it is totally girly - okay fine, its Shakespearean. "You have wounded my soul... deeply." *hand to chest*
Damn handsome blonde bastard gets to be dramatic and pull it off. Cailan is still a trollop tho', I shan't forgive him for all the women before and after Ellie.
#189
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 03:51
Scott Baio?! Scott Baio?!! Only another child of the 80s could understand that statement. LOLEsbatty wrote...
Okay now Scott Baio is dreamy. Loghain - is Loghain. That shall never change, lol.
But yes yes you had to remind me he had to once again be parted from his darling new family. But still Fergus' "kissy-face" line will never cease to bring a smirk to my face.
And it is totally girly - okay fine, its Shakespearean. "You have wounded my soul... deeply." *hand to chest*
Damn handsome blonde bastard gets to be dramatic and pull it off. Cailan is still a trollop tho', I shan't forgive him for all the women before and after Ellie.
Actually there's a dynamic with Loghain that a couple reviewers have commented on, the older man who thinks he only has duty left to him. Very sexy. And yes, Cailan is a tramp, but he's sexy in his own way too.
Thanks again for all your feedback, it's fun!
#190
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 04:21
#191
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 04:33
#192
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 06:36
#193
Guest_tgail73_*
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 09:14
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Schratty wrote...
Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean
It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.
#194
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 09:16
#195
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 09:27
Addai67 wrote...
I'm not giving anything away, but suffice to say that there will be more on Cailan and Anora.
Woot?
#196
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 09:52
Then Cailan's gotten really very lucky/unlucky that none of his women on the side have gotten pregnant ever either.tgail73 wrote...
Schratty wrote...
Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean
It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.
#197
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 10:28
I assume they do have some sort of birth control in Thedas, but yes, some women would be angling for a royal heir I imagine. Ellie simply lacks ambition.Sarah1281 wrote...
Then Cailan's gotten really very lucky/unlucky that none of his women on the side have gotten pregnant ever either.tgail73 wrote...
Schratty wrote...
Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean
It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.
#198
Posté 16 novembre 2010 - 11:06
I would also hope that Cailan would try the royal bastard route before he went the 'selling out Ferelden to Orlais' route.Addai67 wrote...
I assume they do have some sort of birth control in Thedas, but yes, some women would be angling for a royal heir I imagine. Ellie simply lacks ambition.Sarah1281 wrote...
Then Cailan's gotten really very lucky/unlucky that none of his women on the side have gotten pregnant ever either.tgail73 wrote...
Schratty wrote...
Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean
It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.
Then again, that could just be the optimist in me who refused to believe that Cailan could be so stupid until it was confirmed a little while back...
Modifié par Sarah1281, 16 novembre 2010 - 11:07 .
#199
Posté 17 novembre 2010 - 12:38
Addai67 wrote...
I assume they do have some sort of birth control in Thedas, but yes, some women would be angling for a royal heir I imagine. Ellie simply lacks ambition.Sarah1281 wrote...
Then Cailan's gotten really very lucky/unlucky that none of his women on the side have gotten pregnant ever either.tgail73 wrote...
Schratty wrote...
Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean
It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.
Modifié par Schratty, 17 novembre 2010 - 12:38 .
#200
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Posté 17 novembre 2010 - 01:55
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