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Poor Cailan, he just wants to be loved...

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Addai67 wrote...

Poor Cailan, he just wants to be loved...



Yes, but Ellie love is off limits to him. He really needs to realize that she only loves and wants Loghain now.

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tgail73 wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

Poor Cailan, he just wants to be loved...



Yes, but Ellie love is off limits to him. He really needs to realize that she only loves and wants Loghain now.

He definitely does!  I think, if she had just broken up with him straight up, he might have been past it already.  But politics intervened, and politics tests people's basic humanity.  As I see Cailan and Anora, they've known nothing but politics from day one.  Bound to be some issues there.  Plus he just lost his father and had a kingdom put on his shoulders and was saddled with a wife he doesn't really want.  So yep yep, issues.  But that's what makes it a story!

Modifié par Addai67, 15 novembre 2010 - 11:40 .


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Addai67 wrote...

Poor Cailan, he just wants to be loved...


Mmmm, I could just be projecting, too. His mannerisms and apparent obsession with Ellie and/or trying to separate Ellie and Loghain just reminds me faaaaaar too much of a creepy, ex-boyfriend stalker I had back in my freshman year of college. *shudders*

Reader baggage. Apologies for that. But it still makes me want to backhand, pimp-smack Cailan. Just leave those two alone and move on with your life, damn you! Don't the bitter and creepy road walk, you! Image IPB

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Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.



Iago was born from less.

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@Addai..I love how this story gets us all worked up, lol. You really have done a great job with these characters.



@Dragon..I totally agree with you about smacking Cailan in a big way. He is being very creepy with his obsession.




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mousestalker wrote...

Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.

Iago was born from less.

Not to mention that Loghain is/ was a father figure to him, too.  Issues!!

I really feel for Cailan- he has no one who cares about him for him anymore, and Theirins don't do well with that.

Maybe it's guilt over beating up on him so much in my story ^_^, but I'll post this fanart that I love of him by another Loghain fan, MaevesChild.  It's called "His Father's Empty Grave."

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P.S. In saying I feel badly for him I am definitely not trying to justify any creepy stalking, either real or in fiction!!

Modifié par Addai67, 16 novembre 2010 - 03:56 .


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@Addai..I love how this story gets us all worked up, lol. You really have done a great job with these characters.

Muahaha.  :devil::wizard:  Thank you thank you.

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Addai67 wrote...

mousestalker wrote...

Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.

Iago was born from less.

Not to mention that Loghain is/ was a father figure to him, too.  Issues!!

I really feel for Cailan- he has no one who cares about him for him anymore, and Theirins don't do well with that.

Maybe it's guilt over beating up on him so much in my story ^_^, but I'll post this fanart that I love of him by another Loghain fan, MaevesChild.  It's called "His Father's Empty Grave."

Image IPB


P.S. In saying I feel badly for him I am definitely not trying to justify any creepy stalking, either real or in fiction!!

Cool, he is doing that heart touching thing like the painting of Alistair from Maria's Dark Ritual story.Image IPB

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Esbatty wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

mousestalker wrote...

Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.

Iago was born from less.

Not to mention that Loghain is/ was a father figure to him, too.  Issues!!

I really feel for Cailan- he has no one who cares about him for him anymore, and Theirins don't do well with that.

Maybe it's guilt over beating up on him so much in my story ^_^, but I'll post this fanart that I love of him by another Loghain fan, MaevesChild.  It's called "His Father's Empty Grave."


P.S. In saying I feel badly for him I am definitely not trying to justify any creepy stalking, either real or in fiction!!

Cool, he is doing that heart touching thing like the painting of Alistair from Maria's Dark Ritual story.Image IPB

Eep, you're right!  I <3 Maria's stories so much.

P.S. It is also the gesture Cailan makes when Ellie tells him she doesn't have feelings for him.  ;)

Modifié par Addai67, 16 novembre 2010 - 06:06 .


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Addai67 wrote...

Esbatty wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

mousestalker wrote...

Cailan would also have adequacy issues. Loghain is the hero of River Dane. Cailan is the son of a great hero. He likely has problems with being the son of a much loved king. Then the greatest hero in recent Ferelden history walks off with his love interest.

Iago was born from less.

Not to mention that Loghain is/ was a father figure to him, too.  Issues!!

I really feel for Cailan- he has no one who cares about him for him anymore, and Theirins don't do well with that.

Maybe it's guilt over beating up on him so much in my story ^_^, but I'll post this fanart that I love of him by another Loghain fan, MaevesChild.  It's called "His Father's Empty Grave."


P.S. In saying I feel badly for him I am definitely not trying to justify any creepy stalking, either real or in fiction!!

Cool, he is doing that heart touching thing like the painting of Alistair from Maria's Dark Ritual story.Image IPB

Eep, you're right!  I <3 Maria's stories so much.

P.S. It is also the gesture Cailan makes when Ellie tells him she doesn't have feelings for him.  ;)

I remember that, and thinking, "thats kinda a girly thing to do" but then I remembered he IS a Theirin and seem to be swimming in women and something has got to rub off on them. (Innuendo intended). But I've just barely finished reading all of Maria's DR story and thus it was the first thing that came to mind.

But I demand more Kissy-Face Loghain.Image IPB

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Esbatty wrote...

I remember that, and thinking, "thats kinda a girly thing to do" but then I remembered he IS a Theirin and seem to be swimming in women and something has got to rub off on them. (Innuendo intended). But I've just barely finished reading all of Maria's DR story and thus it was the first thing that came to mind.

But I demand more Kissy-Face Loghain.Image IPB

LOL  It's not girly.  Well, I'm a chick, so I have my own ideas of what is girly.  To me it's like saying that something hurts so much it takes your breath away.

Loghain is off being charles in charge, no kissyface for him.

Here's another screenie to tide you over.

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Addai67 wrote...

Esbatty wrote...

I remember that, and thinking, "thats kinda a girly thing to do" but then I remembered he IS a Theirin and seem to be swimming in women and something has got to rub off on them. (Innuendo intended). But I've just barely finished reading all of Maria's DR story and thus it was the first thing that came to mind.

But I demand more Kissy-Face Loghain.Image IPB

LOL  It's not girly.  Well, I'm a chick, so I have my own ideas of what is girly.  To me it's like saying that something hurts so much it takes your breath away.

Loghain is off being charles in charge, no kissyface for him.

Here's another screenie to tide you over.

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Okay now Scott Baio is dreamy. Loghain - is Loghain. That shall never change, lol.

But yes yes you had to remind me he had to once again be parted from his darling new family. But still Fergus' "kissy-face" line will never cease to bring a smirk to my face.

And it is totally girly - okay fine, its Shakespearean. "You have wounded my soul... deeply." *hand to chest*

Damn handsome blonde bastard gets to be dramatic and pull it off. Cailan is still a trollop tho', I shan't forgive him for all the women before and after Ellie.Image IPB

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Esbatty wrote...

Okay now Scott Baio is dreamy. Loghain - is Loghain. That shall never change, lol.

But yes yes you had to remind me he had to once again be parted from his darling new family. But still Fergus' "kissy-face" line will never cease to bring a smirk to my face.

And it is totally girly - okay fine, its Shakespearean. "You have wounded my soul... deeply." *hand to chest*

Damn handsome blonde bastard gets to be dramatic and pull it off. Cailan is still a trollop tho', I shan't forgive him for all the women before and after Ellie.Image IPB

Scott Baio?!  Scott Baio?!!   Only another child of the 80s could understand that statement.  LOL

Actually there's a dynamic with Loghain that a couple reviewers have commented on, the older man who thinks he only has duty left to him.  Very sexy.  And yes, Cailan is a tramp, but he's sexy in his own way too.

Thanks again for all your feedback, it's fun!

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Cailan, sexy? Maybe when he stops acting like a petulant child...

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Oh yes, I'm talking in general, not when he's trying to be a homewrecker and take credit for Loghain's mojo.

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Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean ;)

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Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean ;)



It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.

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I'm not giving anything away, but suffice to say that there will be more on Cailan and Anora.  Image IPB

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Addai67 wrote...

I'm not giving anything away, but suffice to say that there will be more on Cailan and Anora.  Image IPB


Woot?

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tgail73 wrote...

Schratty wrote...

Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean ;)



It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.

Then Cailan's gotten really very lucky/unlucky that none of his women on the side have gotten pregnant ever either.

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Sarah1281 wrote...

tgail73 wrote...

Schratty wrote...

Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean ;)



It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.

Then Cailan's gotten really very lucky/unlucky that none of his women on the side have gotten pregnant ever either.

I assume they do have some sort of birth control in Thedas, but yes, some women would be angling for a royal heir I imagine.  Ellie simply lacks ambition.  Image IPB

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Addai67 wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

tgail73 wrote...

Schratty wrote...

Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean ;)



It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.

Then Cailan's gotten really very lucky/unlucky that none of his women on the side have gotten pregnant ever either.

I assume they do have some sort of birth control in Thedas, but yes, some women would be angling for a royal heir I imagine.  Ellie simply lacks ambition.  Image IPB

I would also hope that Cailan would try the royal bastard route before he went the 'selling out Ferelden to Orlais' route. Image IPB

Then again, that could just be the optimist in me who refused to believe that Cailan could be so stupid until it was confirmed a little while back...

Modifié par Sarah1281, 16 novembre 2010 - 11:07 .


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Addai67 wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

tgail73 wrote...

Schratty wrote...

Sometimes I like to think that Cailan and Anora's baby issues are the result of Cailan shooting blanks. But then I think Anora likely has a "hostile womb". I'm mean ;)



It would be just like Anora to have a "hostile womb". I don't think it's possible for the Theirin men to shoot blanks.

Then Cailan's gotten really very lucky/unlucky that none of his women on the side have gotten pregnant ever either.

I assume they do have some sort of birth control in Thedas, but yes, some women would be angling for a royal heir I imagine.  Ellie simply lacks ambition.  Image IPB


Maybe he's doing it wrong. Wait, what am I saying? He's a Theirin. ;)

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@Schratty..You made me totally lol at that comment. Thank you! :lol: