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The Edge Of The Grey Enigma - Chapter four is here


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Persephone

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Category: DAO/eventually DAA - Romance/Fantasy/Angst/Tragedy
Characters: Loghain/Cousland
Chapters done: 4

Third time is the charm, right? Posted Image
Here we are at last, the rewrite of the tale once known just as "The
Edge Of The Grey Enigma". Rereading my earlier chapters, I realized that
not only is the writing quality severely limited due to my original
plan to write it as a One Shot and, let's face it, it just needed lots
of improvement. But there is far more going on now. The plan is: The
story will be divided into several books, each focusing on individual
arcs and characters. The main characters and pairings remain unchanged.
Many thanks must go to my awesome beta & partner in crime,
MLoreley85 for not only letting me borrow Evelyn Amell and other
fantastic people but for being an endless source of ideas, suggestions
and brilliance. Her stories are a must read AND they now feature
Rhiannon in a main role! This delights me more than I could ever say.
Enjoy! Reviews and feedback would make the authoress very happy. Posted Image

Summary:
"Our family always does our duty first." Her father's dying words still
haunting her every moment, Rhiannon Cousland survived her forceful
conscription, a battle already lost and odds distinctly not in her
favor. On her way, she found love, companions and a new reason to fight.
But will it be enough to quell the Blight and live on beyond that
singular purpose? Only time will tell.

http://www.fanfictio...The-Grey-Enigma

Reviews, suggestions, criticism etc. are welcome.<3

Modifié par Persephone, 16 mai 2013 - 09:43 .


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Persephone

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Chapter four is online. Enjoy!

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I am interested to read this, but am restricting myself against reading anything Loghain (other than David Gaider Loghain!) until my own story is done. Just don't want to be influenced except by the Maker and my own fetid brain. Will catch you on the flip side, though!!

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Very well done! You paint some good imagery in Chapter 4. I especially love the description of your Warden tearfully cutting off her long, beautiful hair.

Can't wait to see what happens next now that Loghain's been caught watching. Posted Image

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Addai67 wrote...

I am interested to read this, but am restricting myself against reading anything Loghain (other than David Gaider Loghain!) until my own story is done. Just don't want to be influenced except by the Maker and my own fetid brain. Will catch you on the flip side, though!!


Understandable. And your story is awesome, Addai. Today's update was brilliant as usual.:wub:

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DragonRacer13 wrote...

Very well done! You paint some good imagery in Chapter 4. I especially love the description of your Warden tearfully cutting off her long, beautiful hair.

Can't wait to see what happens next now that Loghain's been caught watching. Posted Image


Heh. The hacking at her hair was part excorcism (Alistair, the past) and in part due to Loghain's rather callous warning. :crying:

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Chapter five can be read here: www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/5/

Enjoy!:happy:

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Chapter six is online! Smut alert!

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/6/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma Enjoy!

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Chapter seven has arrived! :o

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/7/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma

Enjoy! Reviews are appreciated!<3

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Chapter 19 has arrived, Whew, haven't upddated my thread in a LONG time.

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/19/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma

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Persephone

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Psssssssssssst..........lookie......

Chapter twenty of "The Edge Of The Grey Enigma" can be read here: www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/20/

Don't
click the link!! Horrible things happen to those that do. And I heard
that those who review end up disappearing forever.....[smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/tongue.png[/smilie]

#12
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What's THIS? Why, it's an UPDATE!

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/21/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma

Enjoy! Reviewers get cookies![smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/love.png[/smilie]

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Persephone

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Pssssssssst, don't look now but:

It is my delight to announce yet another update!!

Chapter 22 of "The Edge Of The Grey Enigma" can be found here: http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6087280/22/

Reviews are most welcome, especially on this chapter, as it was VERY hard to write. *Hugs* :happy:

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*Psssssssssst*

Don't look now but....

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/23/ Chapter 23 of "The Edge Of The Grey Enigma" may be perused here. Reviewers get cookies, sugar and stuff.
:devil:

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Thanks Persephone. :)

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A story update may be found here. Enjoy! www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/24/

Modifié par Persephone, 08 octobre 2011 - 08:27 .


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Chapter twenty-five of "The Edge Of The Grey Enigma" may be read here. http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6087280/25/ Warnings: Angst, violence of several kinds and...tragedy all around.

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A long new chapter of "The Edge Of The Grey Enigma" may be read here: http://www.fanfictio...The_Grey_Enigma

More sadness, more angst and some unexpected levity. Enjoy!^_^

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An....update? Why YES!

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/28/

Enjoy! XD

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Pssssssst.........I want to show you something....

Tis...a NEW chapter, oh my!

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/29/

Enjoy and please review! [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/smile.png[/smilie]

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Updates are coming faster now.....

Is it the end of the world?

We'll see....

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/30/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma

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You may find the newest update to this tale here:

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/31/

Enjoy and please review!:)

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A new chapter of "The Edge Of The Grey Enigma" may be read here.

http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6087280/32/

Enjoy. Reviewers get a basket full of kittens. Posted Image

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The muse has been kind to me as of late.

A new, gloriously smutty chapter of "The Edge Of The Grey Enigma" may be read here:

http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6087280/33/

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Modifié par Persephone, 11 juillet 2012 - 09:25 .


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Another update, oh dear, will this never be over?

Nope.

Chapter 34 may be read here:

www.fanfiction.net/s/6087280/34/The_Edge_Of_The_Grey_Enigma

Enjoy!