cachx wrote...
I feel for whoever is the one that has to write the screenplay. Think about it for a second, I you were tasked to condense ME1 in a 2-3 hour movie, how would you do it? What would you cut? what would you change?
I would do:
Eden Prime - Citadel - Virmire -Ilos. Wich will need to rellocate Liara and Benezia, and cut the Thorian and the Rachni from the story.
Also, depending on how much detail you give to the Citadel part, minor parts like Tali,Garrus and Wrex will be very short or could even be written out.
The movie will follow a 3 act structure which means it will be split into three parts.
ACT 1 - SETUP
30 minutes long. Halfway through there will be an "inciting incident" which sets the story in motion. The end of Act 1 is called "Plot point 1" and it is the point at which the hero takes on the problem.
ACT 2 - CONFRONTATION
60 minutes long. Halfway through will be the "first culmination" where the hero seems about to solve the problem. He will be thwarted and will reach his lowest point (the "midpoint"). The end of Act 2 is called "plot point 2" and is when the story is thrust in a new direction.
ACT 3 - RESOLUTION
30 minutes long. The big ending.
Given that framework, here's my guess as to the outline:
0 minutes: movie begins
15 minutes (inciting incident): shep encounters the beacon
30 minutes (plot point 1): shep becomes a Spectre
55 minutes (first culmination): the fleet is going to Ilos!
60 minutes (midpoint): Normandy is grounded
90 minutes (plot point 2): on Ilos, Shep learns the Citadel is a relay
115 minutes: Sovereign is destroyed
Here's a way I might try and write it:
Battle of Eden Prime - 15 minutes
Citadel 1 (Shepard becomes a Spectre) - 15 minutes
Mission 1 (set on "Caleston" and is a combination of Therum & Virmire) - 45 minutes
Citadel 2 (Shepard is grounded and steals the Normandy) - 15 minutes
Ilos - 15 minutes
Battle of the Citadel and denouement - 30 minutes
How would you write it, if you were limited to using the 3 act structure?
Modifié par CaptainZaysh, 01 octobre 2010 - 01:44 .