Xeranx wrote...
AmstradHero wrote...
smudboy wrote...
When the narrative doesn't focus on a plot, we have problems. Or streams-of-consciousness. Same thing really.
Countless critically acclaimed and classic pieces of literature disagree with you. Sorry.
Can people who make claims like this please list at least one source. I asked the same of Killjoy and he said nothing. Each request was just that, a request.
If there are stories that don't involve story structure as we know it now I would like to read those stories if for nothing else than to broaden my view beyond contemporary literature. Likewise for the above.

I'd like to know, too.
I'm sure there are plenty of avant garde forms of storytelling, or creative attempts at "doing something different." But if they don't give us a reason as to why things and people are behaving in a certain way, we're left shaking our head and trying to figure out why things are going on.
I remember one of my first classes in creative fiction, and our prof being a serious grammar ****. Everyone was "well gee, there goes creativity" due to his rigid structure and desire for clarity. Regardless, he also accepted prose that bent the rules, and created it's own poetic style of prose: so long as it was consistent. So really, the rules of grammar, of language and storytelling clarity, need to constantly be present.
Look at a story which is told in a normal fashion, where a bunch of random events are strewn together, and the audience is left shaking their head as to what this group of useless threads are trying to represent.
A stream of consciousness is where the writer, supposedly in a drunken or drug haze, tells a tale in first person about what they experience. There's no plot, aside from what they describe, and hopefully gives us some insight into how a seemingly normal event is experienced through the eyes of someone with a completely off kilter perspective.
Since my love of crime fiction, it is part of the job of the audience to figure out whodunit, essentially trying to figure out which plot is real, and thus, by whom. Now that's the point of crime fiction.
Now ME2 is not crime fiction, or stream of consciousness, or is doing anything different in the narrative. It has a quest-style plot, which is a very simple classic hero/villain struggle. But ME2 is also frame story, which by itself, I'd consider avant garde due to the complexity and level of content. The frame (the main plot) still has to connect everything together. It fails hard on almost every account.