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Is it worth editing, idk if I want to continue it



Aedan was many things, but not a politician. The blight had ended no more then five years ago and Aedan was wishing for another adventure. The once young, silver tongued nobleman was now going on twenty five, and he was starting to feel the boredom of politics. Alistair was off doing Maker knows what while Aedan played Regeant. “Maker. I wish I made a run for the Anderfels.” Aedan in cursed his thoughts as a farmer complained about a wheat shortage in his Bann. “……..Or maybe Cumberland.” Aedan kept daydreaming as the farmer went on to another topic unworthy on Aedan’s attention.
The Chamber doors cracked drawing Aedan’s attention, Leliana poked her head through the chamber door, .giving Aedan a smile as she slowly slid through the door. Aedan blew her a kiss, and returned the smile. Leliana giggled as she pretended to catch the invisible kiss and held it next to her heart. “And here I used to tease Fergus.” Aedan thought.
“Sire. these matters are worth your attention, do you need me to repeat?” The farner grew annoyed with Aedan and his ignorant attitude.
“No, continue Pixley.” Aedan chuckled and looked at the farmer.
“Sire, it’s Bradley.”
“Right…..”
“And to continue, my workers………..” The farmer continue ignoring Aedan’s ignorance. Aedan turned his gaze over to Leliana who was laughing at him once more.
I wonder what Leliana would look like in a chainmail bikini.” He gave Leliana a devilish look, undressing her in his mind. “I doubt she would wear one, even if I asked nicely unless I agreed to……” Aedan thought. “No, I will not do that……………Maker, no.”