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[FutileSine]

Holy crap dude. Thats amazing looking! Is the little baby in the upper left hand corner suppose to be Morrigan's OBG?  

Just one thing - where are we suppose to leave feedback? Here or is there somewhere else you would prefer. I don't have the time to read it right now - but I definitely will!

Just from briefly looking it over, its incredibly professional looking - I love the pictures you have on the left side of the screen, and the way one has to scroll is unique too. May I ask how long it took you to set it up? 

ETA:  P.S.  Lack of Zev reference on first page made me a saaaad panda. 

Modifié par FutileSine, 26 octobre 2010 - 04:57 .

[inquartata02]

1. That is a creepy, creepy baby in the upper left-hand corner!



2. In the background image, did you anti-alias the text Dragon Age: Retribution? It doesn't look like it, and it detracts from what is an otherwise great background image.



3. Getting the story itself into some sort of plain-html or PDF download option sooner rather than later would be better. Mostly as an alternative for people who don't have the minimum screen resolution, For example, I'm on a 13" macbook that has a 1280x800 screen resolution, so the text box is quite short, especially for a fast reader. And if people want to take it mobile, like reading it off a smartphone or tablet or netbook, another way of viewing it would make it much easier. I tend to use Instapaper to read web-based stories, as it presents it in a nice ebook-like format. That, and I can sync between my laptop and ipad. I can't do that with your story currently, and that makes me sad. But that's me.

[Morrigans God son]

Me likey. Good job.