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[metalcraze33]

oh no not all all my hair is brown I just wondered if other ppl were seeing it differently but his haircut needs to be more unique

[tuppence95]

metalcraze33 wrote...

oh no not all all my hair is brown I just wondered if other ppl were seeing it differently but his haircut needs to be more unique

Why?  

*edit - no, nevermind.  You still can't be bothered to use grammar and punctuation, and I'm too tired to decipher your words. 

Modifié par tuppence95, 06 novembre 2010 - 04:53 .

[metalcraze33]

I could never bring myself to like anything about Howe but his voice because tim curry is made of awesome

[metalcraze33]

sigh you know i am really trying to use proper grammar why do you post that so many times?

I really don't see how my grammar or sentence structure is that bad. but I confess I am not that great at it

[Merilsell]

metalcraze33 wrote...

oh no not all all my hair is brown I just wondered if other ppl were seeing it differently but his haircut needs to be more unique

Oh. I have resisted so long. Well...no longer:

[metalcraze33]

Ok to clarify sometime tones and colors show up differently on people's computers and all my friend's said he looked blond on their computers. how could you not understand that? I really think you are just being difficult.
And they use the same generic haircuts for so many character I thought he might look better with a more unique one.

Modifié par metalcraze33, 06 novembre 2010 - 05:02 .

[Lord_Anthonior]

I'm still enjoying the e-popcorn and the thread and I'm not judging any grammar at all, I'm just having a good time.

[metalcraze33]

lol well thanks for that
one wonders how the people who obsess about grammar don't have nervous breakdowns trying to converse on the Internet. o.0
Anyway I am going to see if there are new ways to ****** off alistair I haven't tried in the game.
Nice talking to most of you

Modifié par metalcraze33, 06 novembre 2010 - 05:08 .

[leggywillow]

metalcraze33 wrote...

alistair: OMG IF YOU DO I am not going to play grey warden with you AnY MORE!

I adore Alistair and personally think the Landsmeet adds a lot of depth to his character, but the entire reason I'm posting is because someone needs to draw this!  I want to see a picture of a chibi Alistair kicking over a chibi PC's Grey Warden action figures.

[metalcraze33]

rotfl

[Annie_Dear]

[Wulfram]

Alistair isn't that fat

[Corker]

metalcraze33 wrote...

sigh you know i am really trying to use proper grammar why do you post that so many times?
I really don't see how my grammar or sentence structure is that bad. but I confess I am not that great at it

Mostly, you lack punctuation.  Your word order generally does seem to make sense.

A good starting rule is a period after every full, complete thought (aka sentence). 

So, rewriting the above, what have we got?

*sigh*

Any gesture or sound you write out on the Internet that you'd just do in real life is generally set apart from the rest of your text.  Some folks use asterisks, some don't use anything, but asterisks are a bit clearer.  It makes it clear that you are expressing a sigh, rather that writing the word sigh for some other purpose.

You know, I am really trying to use proper grammar.

"You know" is an aside, so it gets set off with a comma.  "I am really trying to use proper grammar." is a full sentence: A subject ("I") is doing something ("really trying") and there's a clause to tell us "what is I trying?" ("to use proper grammar."

Why do you post that so many times?

This question is a separate thought from the fact that you're trying to write with good grammar.  So it starts with a capital letter and ends with a question mark (which you used).

So all in all, your first line should be:

*sigh* You know, I am really trying to use proper grammar.  Why do you post that so many times?

Your second line is actually okay!  The "but" of the second sentence should be capitalized, but that could be a typo.

When you don't use punctuation, all your words run together for the people reading them.  What sound like clear, separate sentences in your head sound like a rambling confused mess in ours.  Commas, periods and question marks, along with proper captialization, tell us how to group your words into larger units of meaning. Without them, we have to read the words a few times, and - like solving  puzzle - figure out where it makes the most sense to put the punctuation. 

Also, poor punctuation and run-on sentences are frequently the hallmark of trolls.  When you're starting a hate thread for a popular character, if you're serious about it and not trolling, you'll want to not have your posts look just like troll posts.  (Or even if you *are* trolling, you'll do a better job of it if you don't *look* like you're trolling, savvy?)

Modifié par Corker, 06 novembre 2010 - 12:42 .

[Kornichon]

leggywillow wrote...

metalcraze33 wrote...

alistair: OMG IF YOU DO I am not going to play grey warden with you AnY MORE!

I adore Alistair and personally think the Landsmeet adds a lot of depth to his character, but the entire reason I'm posting is because someone needs to draw this!  I want to see a picture of a chibi Alistair kicking over a chibi PC's Grey Warden action figures.

here you are


I like Alistair a lot, even if sometime I just want to kick him in the butt...
"c'mon I'm a poor little elf from alienage, I know nothing of outside life and about these ****in' grey wardens..... and he let me make all the choices? O__o "

but he is a very good friend despite that ^^

[Sarah1281]

metalcraze33 wrote...



oh no not all all my hair is brown I just wondered if other ppl were seeing it differently but his haircut needs to be more unique

People do agree with you, you know. Where do you think Maricstair came from? I suggest you get a mod for him if it bothers you that much.



@Kornichon: Oh that is just great! The Warden is probably crying, too.

[CalJones]

Ha ha that's awesome.

[metalcraze33]

lol that made my day
chibi loghain is cute

Modifié par metalcraze33, 06 novembre 2010 - 03:15 .

[sylvanaerie]

Kornichon wrote...

leggywillow wrote...

metalcraze33 wrote...

alistair: OMG IF YOU DO I am not going to play grey warden with you AnY MORE!

I adore Alistair and personally think the Landsmeet adds a lot of depth to his character, but the entire reason I'm posting is because someone needs to draw this!  I want to see a picture of a chibi Alistair kicking over a chibi PC's Grey Warden action figures.

here you are


I like Alistair a lot, even if sometime I just want to kick him in the butt...
"c'mon I'm a poor little elf from alienage, I know nothing of outside life and about these ****in' grey wardens..... and he let me make all the choices? O__o "

but he is a very good friend despite that ^^

This is adorable...kind of like DA meets 'the Peanuts' gang... Alistair reminds me of Linus.  Just need to add Snoopy as Dog in the background and it would be great!

[Jon Jern_]

>My face when grieving about someone you cared about is whining.

[Skadi_the_Evil_Elf]

sylvanaerie wrote...This is adorable...kind of like DA meets 'the Peanuts' gang... Alistair reminds me of Linus.  Just need to add Snoopy as Dog in the background and it would be great!

Someone needs to design Red Baron gear for Dog. Srsly.

[Addai]

Kornichon wrote...

here you are


I like Alistair a lot, even if sometime I just want to kick him in the butt...
"c'mon I'm a poor little elf from alienage, I know nothing of outside life and about these ****in' grey wardens..... and he let me make all the choices? O__o "

but he is a very good friend despite that ^^

I love that! 

[metalcraze33]

If chibi alistair was in the game it would be alot cuter I love his little splintmail

[DragonRacer13]

Definitely want to hug crying chibi-Loghain...

[ejoslin]

 I'm surprised no one's linked this already.  Artist is eisu.  Linkie is the Deviant Art page.



Edit: I post this because someone said peanuts!  I  Kornichon's Alistair temper tantrum above!

Modifié par ejoslin, 07 novembre 2010 - 01:29 .

[rhautanen]

Darn it all. Just when I was getting ready to rip this thread as being nearly worthless, that awesome peanuts parody appears. The only other good thing in 11 pages is the link to that Gaider thread.