Upsettingshorts wrote...
slimgrin wrote...
Joker's lines were some of my favorite. The banter between him and EDI was priceless.
I fell out of my seat laughing during the whole exchange in the AI core. The artists deserve a bunch of credit too, Joker's eyebrow raise couldn't have been better timed.
Yep, a very good example of what I was talking about. Props must be given to Chris L'Etoile for the actual punchline (he was EDI's primary writer). I took the much longer early conversation we both worked on, got feedback from tech design about how the mechanics of the mission would flow, and to fit the speed and tone I cut the dialogue down to it's base elements so it wouldn't be too long and drag the energy down. Then the actors nailed it and cine built an amazing moment, and audio punctuated the heck out of it. No one person can claim that scene.
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Modifié par Lukas Kristjanson, 06 novembre 2010 - 07:15 .